THE PAST & THE PRESENT – ISHQBAAZ FF -EPISODE 16– THE DESTRUCTION

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Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB…I will deal with all the three pairs of IB ….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….
Recap : Misunderstandings cleared between Gauri and Om………

Everyone spent that evening happily…….everything seemed to be perfect…SHIVIKA, OmRi, RuMya were feeling happy with their partners… Mahi , Sahil and Dadi were enjoying chitchatting….While Anika was feeding Shivaay, as Shivaay was working on his laptop …. Om was silently romancing with his newly accepted life partner Gauri by holding her hands under the table or sliding his leg to her legs……..Rudra hugged Sumo and kissed her infront of everyone and Sumo was blushing……..While Mahi closed his and Shail’s eyes witnessing Rudra’s act, Prinku too did the same, Dadi was shocked…….
Dadi ‘’besharam Ru……what are you doing ?’’

Rudra ‘’what happened Dadi…I just kissed my wife…..can’t I kiss her…….? I mean see I can kiss Shivaay bhayya, O and you too…the same way I kissed my wife’’
Shivaay ‘’stop it Rudra..enough…stop it…you are becoming shameless day by day…….’’
Sumo ran from there embarrassed
Om ‘’Rudra I think you should learn what to do where’’

Rudra ‘’O ..i know what have you done just before ‘’
Shivaay ‘’Rudra……..nothing more you speak’’
Rudra made a puppy face and Prinku, Gauri and Anika came to him and hugged him…….
Anika ‘’that’s ok Rudra …don’t worry about those two……they can never dare to do what you did …you are best …haan’’
Shivaay and Om ‘’are you challenging us?’’

Dadi turned towards Mahi and Said ‘’Mahi , you and Sahil go to sleep’’
Then she asked Prinku to stay with her in her room…….all four left from there……….
Rudra smiled and ran towards Sumo………..
Shivaay came to Anika ‘’you are challenging me that I cannot publicly kiss you’’
Anika blushed and said ‘’no…I didn’t say so…I was just supporting my devar’’
Om went towards Gauri ‘’you too were supporting Anika Bhabhi? So were you challenging me?’’
Gauri ‘’no..no..i was also supporting Rudra and I didn’t say any such lines’’ gauri shied…….
Om lifted Gauri in his arms and left towards his room………….

Shivaay moved towards Anika and Anika ran away in pretext of cleaning the dining table………..
Shivaay smiled at Anika and left to his room……….Anika finished all the work of cleaning and checked the house before turning off the lights………..
While returning she saw Om’s mobile on the carpet under dining table near the chair where he sat….she thought it might have fallen down from his pocket…….

Anika went to Shivaay ………Shivaay hugged her from back as if he was waiting for her……
Anika released herself from his hug and said ‘’Shivaay ..Om’s mobile fell down at the dining table..might be that it would have slipped from his pocket…can you go and return it’’
Shivaay ‘’okay I will come back and win the challenge …’’

Anika smiled and laid on the bed…she soon went into sleep at it was a tiring and emotional day……..
Shivaay went near Om’s room and he was hearing both Om and Gauri laughing, though he didn’t understand anything about what they were talking…….he thought not to disturb them and to return the mobile next morning…………he came back to room and saw Anika sleeping peacefully……he smiled looking at her and kissed her forehead and brushed her hair…he set the duvet over her and slept cuddling her………..

————-IN Rumya’s room………

Sumo was looking at her laptop……….Rudra came…Sumo was angry
Rudra sat beside her and spoke ‘’why did you run like that…you could have waited for me , we would have come together’’
Sumo ‘’you are duffer and will stay like that’’
Rudra ‘’what did I do?’’

Sumo ‘’what was the need to kiss me infront of everyone? you know how embarrassed I felt?’’
Rudra ‘’ohh so you were ok with me kissing you but you had a problem that I kissed you before everyone..okay next time I will kiss you in a closed room’’
Saying this he kissed her again…..Sumo hit him with pillow…they fought with pillows and exhausted they lied on bed………
Rudra hugged her and said ‘’I LOVE YOU SUMO’’

Sumo ‘’I LOVE YOU TOO RUDRA’’
He came near her ……she felt shy……..he knew her from beginning but now she looked new to him…..
They spent some time with their romantic talks and slipped in to sleep

———————-Om’s Room
Om brought Gauri and laid her on bed…..she turned her head other side feeling a bit conscious ……
Om turned her towards him and said ‘’Gauri…I can understand what you might be thinking……but we will take time…..i have not known you…as I didn’t give you the time I should have…….so first I want to know you completely…..know what you want …how you think…what’s your expectation ..and when I am sure I completely know you then only we will start out married life ….’’
Gauri smiled listening to his words…she thought she was dreaming
Om ‘’are you okay with this or do you want me to consumm.’’
Gauri cupped his mouth and said ‘’I am okay with this’’

Om ‘’how unromantic..i thought you would ask for consummation?’’
Gauri ‘’dhatt…you are shameless Om…..’’ she smiled
He too laughed and said ‘’I am being romantic not shameless…’’
He hugged her and kissed her neck…….and said ‘’THANK YOU…Thank you once again for forgiving me and accepting me as I am ………and I am sorry once again’’
Gauri pulled his face towards him and said ‘’my first wish is to stop saying sorry to me…will you fulfil this wish of mine’’
Om nodded ……she smiled ……he pulled her face and drowned in each other until they were satisfied and soon slept cuddling …….

————–AT EARLY HOURS NEXT MORNING….IN SHIVAAY’S ROOM

Om’s mobile was ringing in Shivaay’s room……Shivaay suddenly with a jerk got up……he didn’t see whose call was it and picked up Om’s mobile………it was TEJ………

Tej ‘’Om where the hell are you? Have you read the news or watched the news? I am sure you might not have done………Do you have sense of responsibility? You disappeared along with Rudra…are you even aware in what crisis we are? We are ruined damn it…we will be on roads today or tomorrow………our business is ruined ……wake up and come back…else we will be left only with surname of Oberois and nothing else…….do you understand…come soon…….and if you don’t I promise to break the deal we formed between us involving your mother……you understand it as threatening or anything …just come back’’ he screamed without knowing who the other side was and disconnected the call……….

Shivaay was in shock listening to Tej’s words…he didn’t knew what was happening as he stopped reading or seeing the business news or business papers……..and after coming out from the shock he quickly switched on the business news…..the first time in last one year……

Anika woke up with the noise of the TV
Anika ‘’have you gone mad Shivaay? Does anyone watch TV at this time? ‘’ she shouted rubbing her eyes……
Shivaay didn’t speak anything then she observed he was watching business news…..Anika was even more surprised
Anika went to Shivaay and placed her hands on his shoulders and said ‘’Shivaay what happened you are watching business news that too at this hour…is everything fine’’
Shivaay switched off the TV stood up and hugged her tightly……Anika reciprocated and calmed him first………
Anika ‘’now tell me what happened’’

Shivaay ‘’they are ruined Anika…they are ruined’’
Anika ‘’don’t make my condition worse…tell me clearly who is ruined?’’
Shivaay ‘’Bade papa…Mr.Tej Singh Oberoi along with badi maa, Prinku, Om and Rudra are ruined…..’’
Anika ‘’what nonsense’’

Shivaay ‘’Bade papa called On Om’s mobile…he didn’t know I picked up…he screamed that their business is ruined and asked him to watch Business news or read business news …..so I switched on the business channel…….it’s true Anika…..their business has been in loss from past 7 months….and it slowly deteriorated……even bade papa’s experience couldn’t save …now they are in heavy debts…..stocks crashed…dealers, investors, shareholders, partners everyone backed off……plus bade papa has taken heavy loan from market to invest in Restaurant business…….now he has the loan too over his head…….’’
Anika ‘’what …is Om and rudra aware of this?’’

Shivaay ‘’they might be or might not be…I am not sure……’’
Anika ‘’how will they come out now?’’
Shivaay ‘’that’s what making me tensed…even if they sell all their property, jewellery it will be only sufficient to settle the amount to staff, dealers , partners and shareholders……..but the loan the loan will still be hanging on their head ……..’’

Anika ‘’if they sell all the properties where will they live………Shivaay you and I know very well that they are versed to comforts and rich lifestyle…how will they met their needs……’’
Shivaay ‘’I don’t know Anika…as of now I don’t understand anything…….’’
Anika ‘’why don’t you …’’

Shivaay looked at her before she could complete the sentence………
Shivaay ‘’I know what you are trying to say……..but I cannot help them ……..and I think I should not too……’’
Anika ‘’Shivaay you are saying this? How can you?’’
Shivaay ‘’Anika do you trust me?’’
Anika ‘’yes…more than myself’’

Shivaay ‘’then just keep belief in me …..but remember if I help them then bade papa might feel I have insulted him and I cannot insult him …….i knew he kicked me out ……..but whatever I achieved today is only because of him…I have studied business in Harward but I learnt to do business from him…he thought me the tricks to do business …he thought me how to handle everything…….it’s true we are in a position to help him financially but it will be wrong to do so…….’’
Anika ‘’I understand..but we can’t sit quietly……it’s the matter of our family’’
Shivaay ‘’Anika trust me I will handle this in my own way’’
Anika ‘’I trust you Shivaay but promise me you will let me know everything an don’t take too much of tension’’

Shivaay ‘’Pinky promise’’
They both sadly hugged……….

Shivaay called someone and asked to book 4 tickets to Mumbai for 8’0 clock flight……….
He got freshened up and so did Anika……
Shivaay knocked Rudra’s room, and Om’s room……….they saw the time and opened the doors
OmRu ‘’what happened Shivaay…..you at this time?’’
Shivaay ‘’all four of you get freshened up and come down …fast…also ask Gauri and Soumya to pack your bags…..’’
OmRu ‘’but what happened Shivaay’’

Shivaay ‘’ I will tell you everything …you are leaving to Mumbai by 8’o clock flight it’s still 5 now…before you go I will say everything…now do what I have asked you to’’
Saying that he left towards kitchen to help Anika in preparing breakfast……OmRu headed towards their respective rooms and asked gauri and Saumya to pack their bags while they get freshened up
Hearing the noise Mahi too came out……Shivaay asked him to get ready and drop OmRu , gauri and saumya to airport after breakfast…….mahi couldn’t understand but followed Shivaay’s instructions…….

Shivika prepared breakfast and placed on the table and waited for everyone…….
Everyone came ……..first Shivaay asked to relax and have breakfast…they did…after that……they all went towards living room and sat there……
Om’’Shivaay will you say why you are so tensed?’’
Shivaay handed over the mobile to Om and said what all Tej has screamed on Phone……..
OmRuHi stood up in shock….
Shivaay ‘’you were here so many days we spoke a lot then why didn’t you say about the problem in business…didn’t you feel you should share it’’

Om ‘’not like that Shivaay…we just didn’t want to trouble you’’
Shivaay ‘’trouble …what did you think I will be happy if you are in troubles….’’
Anika ‘’Shivaay this is not the time to fight…..it’s time to find solution’’

Shivaay relaxed ‘’you four are going back to Mumbai…Prinku and Dadi will stay with me here….and listen don’t divulge to bade papa that we met and Dadi and Prinku are staying with me……he might feel bad……..also don’t divulge it to my pare..’’ he couldn’t complete
He continued ‘’just behave as if we have not met and manage about Prinku and Dadi…….i don’t want to help you monetarily as it will hurt bade papa much more…..but I cannot even sit back and see my family in all the troubles…..try to handle the situation there and if you need any help in restoring the business call me…..’’
Rudra ‘’but why don’t you come with us?’’

Shivaay ‘’Rudra …I cannot …..bade papa will not like to see me…and if he sees me there… he will think that I came to make fun of him….i respect him Rudra and I cannot make him feel insulted…so you guys leave and handle’’
Om ‘’what rubbish Shivaay..you too know at this stage you can manage and handle all the crisis and why the hell are you thinking about Mr.Tej……….after what all he did with you he deserves this…….and why should we go …let him pay for his deeds…I made it very clear to him other day that with my art I will take care of mom, Rudra and Prinku, Dadi and now Gauri too…he will understand the value of family now…let him suffer Shivaay’’

Shivaay ‘’Om enough’’ he shouted
OmRu looked at him in shock……..later Shivaay composed himself
Shivaay ‘’who doesn’t commit mistakes…..did you not commit mistake in case of Gauri…did I not commit mistake in case of Anika, did Mahi not commit mistake with our family, Did Rudra not ask Sumo to go away, did Prinku not commit mistake of leaving away all of us… everyone of us did…then when we have forgiven each other ..why can’t you forgive your father and make peace with him? why do you still want to hate him and want him to suffer?’’

Om’’if that’s the case why can’t you forgive choti maa and chote papa’’
Shivaay ‘’that’s a different case and I promise after this matter is settled I will talk about this too’’
Shivaay continued ‘’listen Om and Rudra…it’s not about you both, badi maa and Prinku…it’s about Dadi too….she is old and needs both of her sons..and keeping in mind what all happened even if my dad will want to help bade papa his wife (he didn’t want to call Pinky his mother) wouldn’t allow him…this will make way for the division of brothers……we know how hard it is to stay away from each other….. don’t let bade papa and my dad go through the same way which ultimately will hurt dadi’’
Anika ‘’Shivaay is saying correct OmRu…this is time you stay with Tej uncle and help him come out of crisis…it’s also time to mend your relationship…who knows may be with your efforts the distance between Jhanvi aunty and Tej uncle will be closed and you will have a happy family too…you ultimately want this right?’’

Om was into thoughts
Gauri ‘’Om ji Shivaay jiju and Anika didi are right…let’s go back to support them…..’’
Sumo too asked Rudra the same

Rudra ‘’Sumo but you said you will’’
Sumo ‘’I remember I said that I will come to OM only when Shivaay bhayya and Anika Bhabhi are back….but it’s time to support my family Rudra and now I cannot leave you alone in this difficult time’’
Rudra held Sumo’s hand happily……..
Om ‘’Fine Shivaay…I will support Mr.Tej but I don’t know whether I will succeed or not…..but I will put my blood and sweat to restore the business……’’
Rudra ‘’even me Shivaay bhayya…I will act matured and will help Papa……but’’
Shivaay hugged both of them and said ‘’Rudra no if’s and But’s …I know you both will succeed…it’s getting late…Mahi drop them to airport and I will meet you at S.A.M.S’’
Everyone hugged each other and Mahi left with OmRi and RuMya……….
Shivaay broke into tears soon after they left………

Anika came towards him ‘’Shivaay please control yourself…..you cannot fall so weak’’
Shivaay ‘’Anika …I wished they stayed with me forever…until I met them I could console myself that wherever they are they are good…but now their financial condition is worse how will they manage…when Bade papa could not handle the pressure how will they take up this pressure…….they are still kids Anika …Rudra he is still my baby brother, how will he manage…I am tied and unable to help them…even though I am in a position to help’’

Precap : Turn of the tables

So this was the sixteenth part …please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad are welcome…I will try to respond as soon as possible……

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65 Comments
  1. I am waiting for it….It’s really wonderful story…..Keep on going I will support you till the end

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Ayissha…thanks a lot for the support you extended…

  2. Ashwinee

    My goodness what an update di, I was so keen on reading that I could feel the emotions they were going through. I’m l literally waiting for the next update

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Ashwinee ….i am so happy that you could feel the emotions while reading…this is such an …i donno how to say but it makes me feel so special…thanks again…next update very soon

  3. Loved your ff. You are a great writter.Your ff is unique.
    Please post soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Nandha…thanks a lot…next update very soon

  4. Arthi

    Didi…..no words to comment and this was fab……

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Arthi…thanks a lot

  5. Rasika

    It’s an awesome story, it’s nice..??

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Rasika…i am glad you are liking the story

  6. BAVATHARINI BABU

    I am eagerly waiting for the update… plz post ASAP di

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Bavatharini Babu…next update very soon

  7. Niriha

    Awesome fabulous mind blowing update di loved it amazing one eagerly waiting for next part update soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Niriha….thanks a lot for the awesome words…next update very soon

  8. Oh God!! It’s really great di.I hope you won’t mind me calling you di.But really I’m happy to read this work of your’s and trust me you have shown everyone’s emotions just perfectly and plz post next one soon eagerly waiting for it

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Madhuani…i have abosultely no objection if you call me di…thank you for such beautiful lines …next update very soon

  9. Superb epi…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Lilly…after a long time happy to see your opinion posted

  10. Alekhika20

    Wondetful updt

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Alekhika20…sinusoidal wave is turning into tangent ……

  11. Dhar

    I’m out of comments, what do i say now . I’m just speechless just speechless

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Dhar…yopur opinion always makes me feel motivated…thanks for that..thanks a lot

  12. Arwa Qutubuddin

    Oh my god what an update dear keep it up
    Waiting for nxt one

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Arwa Qutubuddin….thanks a lot…next update very soon

  13. Felt like reading your ff’s all day long
    Post soon VHM Di

    1. VHM

      awee so sweet of you aaahiya ….thank you so much dear…next update very soon

  14. Nida

    Made me speechless ? today ….it’s really beyond words …and the way om said only shivaay could help us to come out of the crisis.., I don’t why but this line touched my heart ❤️…. and I know my shivaay ❤️️❤️️❤️️ Is best in everything ??

    1. VHM

      OMG …YOUR shivaay again ???? i had to make YOUR shivaay superstar else you will feel bad …just kidding…he is big brother and he is doing the act of big brother unlike Tej what say? thank you for the beautiful opinion Nida…

  15. It’s really a awesome story…Keep it up ND keep going o???waiting for ur next update???

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Viji…thanks a lot…next update very soon

  16. Wow dear it s awesome…. Ur fabulous…. I am waiting for the next episode….. Om tej reunion….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so uch Sagithya…thanks a lot…next update very soon..yeah Om-tej patch up is on cards let us see how…i am just typing the episode in flow no preplanning

  17. Navz

    Dii…couples romance ??.the other part of d episode is ??.everyone r correct in their pov. Eagerly waiting for the next part.gn dii.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Chotii…i had to make my readers belive that everyone is right in their view and after reading your opinion i think i passed in this………next update very soon

  18. Awesome VHM dear,
    Waiting for next update.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Arpita…just saw your anger on Pinky in written updates page…..i too was angry on her…next update very soon

  19. Navz

    Dii..do u know this..there is news that neha us out of ib and dbo.soo rumya’s track gonna end..you know na dii how much iluv rudy and rumya..i always splly asked u for their scenes in ur story. I am feeling like..i cant express thinking there will be no rumya ??????.
    I know that this is not related to ur ff but i felt like saying this to u.sry dii.
    Gn .

    1. VHM

      Hey Chotii…yeah i rread the news too…i am also very disappointed …their love story was cute…….had they continued IB would have reached new heights…donno why they are doing this with RumYa…no worries you can post whatever you want in my FF page of TU updates..why sorry for that…you are free and open to do so right?

  20. shivanki mahendran

    Only in the recent past I started to read this ff this is simply Fab please continue asap.
    You are scripting the story very well.
    I love this ff
    Thank you for writing this ff

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shivanki Mahendran…i hope you would continue to support me throughout ….thank you for reading it and posting your opinion

  21. Awesome di….post the next part soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shivikaloves….next update very soon

  22. Awesome update VHM…. I’m in luv with ur ff yaar… U r such an amazing writer….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Banita…awee so sweet of you to write such awesome lines for the FF and me….thanks a lot

  23. Gayathri.visu

    Hello di. Good morning.

    First starting very happy scenes di. Shivika, Gaurikara, Rumya’s cute romance scenes are awesome. Di u told that my one guess is right hai na! So that guess is its time for destruction of Tej’s share in Oberoi empire!! After that Shivaay’s caring nature n words makes me emotional. At the same time I m very happy for Tej’s destruction, let him make suffer for some time di. Precap! I guess many scenes, but I can’t able to choose correct scene di. So I m waiting for next part.
    Have a nice day di….

    (ur last reply, that story….ha ha ha!)

    1. VHM

      Hey Gayathri,

      Good afternoon dear…yes your telepathy worked…… i said right….. your guess was bang on….If i show Tej’s suffering then readers would hit me with chameli’s and chamki’s …so will not be dragging to much …but the next episode is much a serious one…you guys have to bear with me for the next episode as it will lay foundation for coming up episodes………well i gave to much hints about upcoming episodes……..my mouth sealed …will be waiting for the next episode to be on poratl and then for your opinion too…

      thank you so much dear for posting your opinion so nicely…yeah long story ha ha ha ha…….

      Take care dear

  24. Superb ga undi akka epi waiting for the next..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much nanna…next episode very soon

  25. So sorry akka I could not comment as my school is going to reopen I have to complete my homeworks so may be i could not comment but plz send the links I will ? surely read them and episode is great akka

    1. VHM

      Hey Sri…no worries chelli…school and home work is important and priority number 1…read it when you have time …i will send you the links definitely but are you registered in TU is the question that’s bugging me in……..reply me when you have time so that i can PM you the links

  26. Awesome….
    It was so full of emotions….
    Anika supporting Shivaay….
    Beautifully Expressed….Loved it….
    waiting fr d nxt… 🙂

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shivika….glad to know that you liked the emotional portrayal ….next update very soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much dwet….thanks a lot

  27. Wow!!! Its so emotional… Loved it a lot!!!
    Its beautifully written, all are correct in their own way…Waiting to find out shivaay’s nxt move… Update soon!!

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Bhavana…i had to ensure the readers that everyone is right at their own places and as i said earlier i think i have passed………thanks a lot once again…next update very soon

  28. Jerry_36

    Ohh di !! So good. For this one I am trying to find the words that would describe the awesomeness of it. Speechless. Toooooo gooooood??

    1. VHM

      Awee thank you so much Jerry…….i too am finding words now…how to thank you……..thank you so much jerry…you being a finest author applauding my work is a great feeling…thanks again

      1. Jerry_36

        Love you very much di, you are so sweet❤

  29. Superb update. Please post next part soon.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much fffan1234…next shot very soon

  30. Awesome eagerly waiting for the next….. Plzz post ASAP..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Tahura…thanks a lot……next shot very soon

  31. beautiful……..I not having any words amazing didi……….and sorry for commenting sooooo late…….post as soon as possible

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Aashi…no problem dear, i am gald you have taken time to post your opinion…thank you so much…next shot very soon

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