THE PAST & THE PRESENT – ISHQBAAZ FF -EPISODE 15– MISSION GAURI & OMKARA

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Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB…I will deal with all the three pairs of IB ….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

Recap: All the members return to Shivaay’s house ‘’THE KALYANI VILLA’’ and spend some lovely time….next day Gauri asks Rudra to take her to Airport without informing anyone that they are going to airport…Rudra fails in managing the situation which leads om to take her….Om again blames Gauri for lying….They reach airport and Om gets surprised to see Dadi and Prinku at the airport…Shiv Om Ru Anika Mahi everyone meet dadi and Prinku………Gauri stays back without entering into house and cries thinking of her situation…Shivaay pacifies her and promises her that he will bring her happiness back by the time she leaves to Mumbai ……..

——————-KALYANI VILLA, SHILLONG, MEGHALAYA

Shivaay held Gauri’s hand and brought her in……Gauri’s face looked shrinked……Rudra ran to her and asked whether she was fine…Gauri smiled and said she was OK…Om got irritated with everyone’s concern for Gauri……..
Anika ‘’Gauri you go and take rest’’
Dadi ‘’today I want all my bahu’s to cook and serve me the food and my all three grandsons to feed me the food’’
AniRiMya started to head towards Kitchen to cook food……….
Shivaay naughtily ‘’Dadi…why are you taking risk by sending Anika to cook and serve food…you cannot imagine what sort of food she prepares….only I know because I am that bechara pati to face this violence’’
Anika was much angered ….OmRuHi jumped to defend their Bhabhi while Prinku, Sumo and Gauri moved towards Shivaay …….
Om ‘’not fair Shivaay…you cannot say so about Bhabhi ’’
Shivaay ‘’i am saying truth and if it’s truth it’s always fair’’
Sumo ‘’yes off course …’’
Anika ‘’ok fine today I will show how good I can cook and if I make it tasty then Shivaay you will do whatever I say’’
Gauri ‘’ok deal sealed from his side’’
Sahil ‘’waise Anika didi …don’t prepare the same Aloo poori…I am fed up eating that’’
Anika ‘’accha..Sahil ke bacche…from today even if you ask I will not prepare aloo poori anytime for you..’’
Rudra ‘’don’t worry Bhabhi I will eat aloo poori made by you…even if I have to give up my gym routine’’
Dadi ‘’ok enough now don’t fight…..Anika, Rudra and Om, Mahi one team……….Shivaay , Sumo and Gauri, Prinku in one team………I and Sahil will judge the food and whoever wins will win a prize’’
Ok Dadi they shouted in union
Kitchen was turned into battle ground…………
Anika was tensed , OmRuHi pacified her and said they will search net and prepare food accordingly…….
ShivSuRiKa were relaxed as their team was genuinely strong……..
They started preparing food when Shivaay signalled Anika, Rudra, Sumo, Prinku and Mahi to look towards towards Om and Gauri and crossed his hands …….everyone nodded their hands ……
Anika deliberately poked Shivaay and soon they started their fake fight …….Om and Gauri tried to interfere but Rudra and Sumo asked them to concentrate on cooking , soon they too joined the fight and were poking at each other……..Mahi and Prinku took them away……..
Om and Gauri were the only one working seriously…….
Everyone stood behind Kitchen door and saw them……….they were not even talking and were preparing food…..
Om saw them without their notice and understood what they were upto…….Gauri though didn’t notice…..Om left the kitchen in rage immediately……..Gauri cooked the food which her team stated and also completed that Om left……..
Om sat down in a huff ………rest all came to him…Dadi signalled asking what happened…Shivaay signalled that he will handle…Dadi smiled as she knew her Billu will do what he says…..
Shivaay sat beside Om and said
Shivaay ‘’Om what happened why did you leave cooking and come here angrily’’
Om fake smiled for a moment and spoke ‘’What do you think Shivaay I can’t understand what you all were trying to do ? why are you doing all this? Why don’t you understand that I am just bearing her for my mom else by now I would have ………’’
Shivaay ‘’else what would have you done Om?’’ he raised his voice
Hearing Shivaay’s loud voice Gauri came to living room turning stove off………Om looked at her
Om pointing his index finger towards her and looking at Shivaay said ‘’Had my mom not take swear I would have divorced this liar by now…and the divorce would have happened much before….’’
Gauri had tears in her eyes……Anika ran towards her and Held her ……..
Shivaay ‘’ you would have divorced her …are you saying this ? fine I will ask her to give divorce but I want the reason’’
Om ‘’what reason?’’
Shivaay ‘’reason why you hate her…there must some reason right…I want to know..i want to know what crime she has committed that you are punishing that pure soul…..Dadi, Sumo, Rudra , Prinku all these have said only onething about her……that she handled the entire house after we left…she supported everyone….she took the responsibility of everyone …then how can you blame her that she is liar…she is cheater …..’’
Om ‘’I don’t lie Shivaay, as she does… Shivaay understand the fact…in every step of her entry into my life either she spoke lie’s or she cheated ‘’
Shivaay smiled ‘’Om you are forgetting every coin has two faces…..you had your perception did you try to find out what was the other side? Did you even make a single try?’’
Om ’’why should I? ask her ? ask her did she not lie…did she not cheat me? Shivaay you knew how broken I was when Ishaana, Ridhhima cheated me….. then I lost trust….i started to believe that the one who comes into my life will have only one motive that is to cheat me……..and after she came the same happened……so I don’t need to know the other side of the story’’
Shivaay ‘’but we want to know both sides of the story………since you are putting allegations I will give you the first chance……..say me the truth why are you accusing her?’’
Om ‘’fine……you want to know the truth …then listen……’’
Om said how he met her in Bareilly till how he found out chulbul was Gauri……..
Everyone was shocked and stood still but Gauri shouted ‘’This is not the real truth’’
Everyone now turned towards Gauri ……..Gauri looked at Anika
Gauri trembled and spoke ‘’ Didi…He misunderstood me ….he doesn’t know the truth…he thought what he saw was truth but that’s not the case’’
She collapsed……..Rudra ran to her and brought her to the sofa and made her sit……
Om again fake smiled ‘’I knew she will say this…I misunderstood …I donno the truth…does she have any proofs to prove me that whatever I saw is not true…….but let me tell you this is the only truth I have seen and I have gone through’’
Gauri stood up and shouted ‘’NO..whatever you saw and gone through was lie….give me a chance and I will let you know the truth…….i will tell you what you couldn’t see and what you couldn’t understand……’’
Anika ‘’then what’s the truth Gauri?’’
Gauri ‘’I will say didi, you all may believe me but how will om ji believe…I cannot provide the proofs to him’’
Anika ‘’you don’t worry about that ‘’
Gauri wiped her tears and explained them how it started in Bareilly and what Kali Thakur did to her, why she danced on that day among Kali thakur’s men, what was she signalling om , why she ran away, why did thakurain die, what did her mother tell when Om left her alone after marrying her , how she met swethlana, How she didn’t knew about swethlana trapping her asking her to spy on Om, how she went against swethlana and helped Om being chulbul, how she thought of leaving Om when Jhanvi and Bua maa confronted her, why she revealed her truth of being om ji’s wife to jhanvi and bua maa, how kali thakur’s re-entry troubled Om, what she did to save Om ……..
Gauri said everything …………

Everyone was shocked to know the truth from Gauri………….Om too was shocked and recollected all the incidents………….his heart accepted that Gauri was saying truth and he misunderstood her but His brain was not accepting……..he had a battle between brain and heart then……….he sat silently………
Shivaay came towards him and said ‘’Om still you have doubts on her?’’
Om was silent
Shivaay ‘’I am asking you Om still you have doubts on her?’’
Om ‘’my heart wants to believe her Shivaay but based on my previous experiences my brain is not accepting …..’’
Rudra ‘’O ..Bhabhi is very good O……..think from her point of view ….how much she suffered…..accept her O ‘’
Prinku ‘’Om bhayya…I know I am too small to talk in your matter ..but I wanted to confess something today….after I left Oberoi mansion …Bhabhi called me regularly….i was adamant in not picking the calls…but she never gave up……she tried everyday for six months…after six months when I picked her call all she did was requesting me to come back as you and Rudra bhayya were missing me terribly…..and till yesterday all she did was requesting me……..when she kept her patience to unite me with all of you how can you think she can cheat you with any motive…how can you think she tried to break someother ladies house? This time you are wrong bhayya…Gauri Bhabhi can never think of doing bad to you or our family’’
Gauri ‘’Prinku, Rudra, Shivaay jiju………I just wanted to know why he hates me ….and today I got to know the reason……I also got to know that he misunderstood me so the guilt and pressure I had in my heart till today finally left me…….i request you all not to force him to accept me…because with force you may join our relation but the essence of that relation will never retain……..i know I cannot provide him any proofs to prove my truth …but I am happy today because I am feeling relieved….i have no qualms and no complaints’’
Saying this Gauri tried to leave…….Shivaay ‘’Gauri stay here…today I want to end this issue’’
Gauri stopped
Shivaay ‘’Om as far as I understood you hate her because she was the reason to destroy Mrs.Jhanvi Thakur’s house…..and she lied to you, she cheated you being Chulbul….let me be clear this is only your perspective ……..however we all and I feel she is saying truth …..I will prove you that she is inncoent’’
Om looked at him……….
Shivaay ‘’Om tell me in which prison is kali Thakur now?’’
Om ‘’Mumbai central jail’’
Shivaay ‘’call the authorities and tell them that you want to talk to him …use your position of being Oberoi’’
Om ‘’but I don’t want to talk to that bl**dy bugger’’
Shivaay ‘’relax Om…I will talk to him but you will take the permission that’s it’’
Om dialled the number and spoke to the jail authorities………they obliged and brought Kali Thakur and handed him over the phone and left from there……
Om handed over the phone to Shivaay……Shivaay put it on speaker……..
Kali Thakur ‘’Who is that, who wants to talk to me?’’
Shivaay ‘’this is Shivaay’’
Kali Thakur ‘’who Shivaay?’’
Shivaay ‘’brother of Omkara Singh Oberoi’’
Kali Thakur ‘’ohh you…the illegitimate son of Shakthi Oberoi …’’
Everyone in Kalyani villa were enraged to listen that…….Shivaay signalled everyone to relax…….
Shivaay ‘’yes the same one’’
Kali Thakur (KT/kt) ‘’why did you want to talk to me…what have you to do with me?’’
Shivaay ‘’friendship…I called you to do friendship with you’’
Kt ‘’what nonsense …why will you want to do friendship with me?’’
Shivaay ‘’relax…enemy of an enemy is a friend…don’t you know this’’
KT ‘’what do you mean’’
Shivaay ‘’listen…… Om has sent you to jail and his father has kicked me out…so we both have a motive to destroy both of them…since I cannot do it all alone..i need your help’’
KT ‘’but why should I help you?’’
Shivaay ‘’for two reasons I will arrange for bail so that you can be free…..and you can take back Gauri from clutches of OMKARA SINGH OBEROI’’
KT ‘’Seems a good deal….’’
Shivaay ‘’good so you are accepting for it’’
KT ‘’I am sensing something fishy’’
Shivaay ‘’you can trust me…I know you can do anything for Gauri ..isn’t it?’’
KT ‘’Yes…I can do anything for that bird….’’
Shivaay ‘’ya ya I know how you killed your wife to marry Gauri’’
KT ‘’Ha ha ha..YES YOU ARE RIGHT …I KILLED MY WIFE, THE THAKURAIN FOR HER….poor she …….She thought Gauri was the reason but I NEVER LIKED JHANVI THAKURAIN…I ALWAYS PREFERRED GAURI …SO ONE FINE DAY SHE SET HERSELF ABLAZE…….I ASKED THE DOCTOR TO NOT TO SAVE HER……….GAURI WAS AGAINST ME FROM BEGINNING …SHE NEVER LIKED ME ….I HAD TO CAPTURE HER TO MARRY HER …BUT THAT Omkara…He made Gauri run away and then married her…….i hate that Omkara’’
Om stood in shock listening to KT’s confession……..so were all others…..Gauri was into tears……….
Shivaay ‘’and then you planned with swethlana to destroy Omkara and take revenge’’
KT ‘’YES….’’ KT continued spilling the truth of whatever happened and finaalli spoke ‘’ I CANNOT FORGET THAT DAY WHEN BOTH SWETHLANA AND OMKARA BETRAYED ME …..AND I AM ALIVE ONLY TO TAKE REVENGE FROM THAT Omkara…and take back my GAURI’’

Shivaay smiled at the foolishness of KT and so did Anika and everyone………..
Shivaay ‘’thank you KT…You helped me a lot…now you can spend rest of your life in prison’’
KT ‘’what the hell? What about our deal’’
Shivaay ‘’what did you think I called you to get you bail…you forgot you were speaking to Shivaay and Shivaay can never betray his family even if he is not part of family…I just wanted to hear truth from you and you were stupid enough to blurt the truth forgetting that you are in a prison……..so I wish you have a nice time in prison’’
Shivaay disconnected the call and looked at Om……..
Om fell weak………he left to his room without uttering a word………everyone looked at him tensed……..
Rudra ‘’I will go to O and speak to him’’
Shivaay ‘’no…Rudra…not now….he is guilty now and he will take time……..so give him his time’’
Shivaay turned towards Gauri and went to her ……….he places his hand on her head and said ‘’Don’t worry , in sometime you will get your husband back ‘’
Gauri was in tears ‘’I don’t know whether to feel happy or sad…I cannot see him in such situation…because I have never seen him so ’’
Anika ‘’don’t worry Gauri…he will be alright…I think you should go inside now….he needs you…..’’
Anika looked at Shivaay and he smiled ……..so did RumYa and Mahi…….
Dadi ‘’Gauri puttar…..Anika is right……he is feeling so guilty that he will want to apologise but he doesn’t know how to ‘’
Gauri ‘’I don’t want any apologies Dadi…if anyone was in his position may be they would have also behaved as he did……I just want him to be happy…..i just want to accept me as I am with whatever I did…….’’
Dadi ‘’but he needs to apologise for his deeds puttar…he owes an apology to you……..go and assure him that everything can be made fine and everything is still fine …only then he will be back to normal…….go now’’
Gauri smiled………she hugged Shivika and thanked them……..Rudra and Soumya came and hugged her………Mahi also wished her good luck…………Gauri went to Om’s room………

—————————–Omkara’s room—————

Gauri Knocked the room door…there was no response……….
Gauri ‘’Om ji please open the door……..’’
Still no response………..
Gauri ‘’please Om ji…..please open the door……. please Om ji…I request you…….her voice was choking while she was requesting.’’
Om couldn’t anymore bear her crying…….that too for him ….he slowly walked towards the door and opened it…..but he couldn’t face her………she entered and locked the door…….Om sat on bed with his head bent down…….
Gauri went to him and kneeled before him …her hands were trembling to touch him……Om had tears in his eyes and they were falling on Gauri’s hand……
Gauri too was touched seeing him in that state……she finally picked confidence and lifted his head up…..their eyes met…..she tried to wipe his tears but he held her hand , pulled her and hugged her……….
Gauri smiled with tears and reciprocated his hug……she remembered his hugs while she was chulbul…..
He spoke ‘’I AM SORRY GAURI….I am really sorry….i couldn’t see the truth between these lie’s …I always misunderstood you….i am feeling so ashamed of myself that I don’t know how to ask for apology…….how can I forget whatever you did to me in disguise of Chulbul…I had become so heart;less to trouble you…how much hatred I showed towards you……and you…you had beared it all without a word against me….i kept on testing your patience and you kept in increasing your patience……had I tried for once to look from your end this situation wouldn’t have occurred……I am dying from inside in guilt………I am sorry Gauri……I am really sorry……will you please forgive me ?’’
Gauri broke the hug and looked into his eyes………
Gauri ‘’I don’t need your apologies om ji’’
Om became numb ….later he regained his sense and spoke ‘’I understand…I will wait till you forgive me….it was my mistake and I will bear the punishment…….’’
Gauri smiled………Om didn’t understand
Om ‘’why are you smiling?’’
Gauri ‘’because you are very good…you are kind hearted and you are my jatadhari Om ji……I was just kidding…..i am happy that our misunderstandings cleared….’’
Om ‘’that means you have forgiven me’’
Gauri ‘’you are my husband and I always believed that …and I can never accept apologies from my husband….because I never want him to apologise….. i always wanted you to accept me as your wife and that’s the only thing I have been waiting for all these days…

Om looked at her lovingly……..
Om ‘’Gauri you said you waited for me to accept you as my wife…now I ask you…will you accept me as your husband after whatever I have done with you?’’
Gauri was stunned with his question…she smiled happily with tears of happiness flowing through her eyes…….
Om wiped her tears and hugged her saying ‘’THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ACCEPTING ME AS IAM’’
Gauri hugged him tight and smiled saying ‘’THANK YOU Om ji…thank you very much…I am so happy today…..’’
They parted the hug and held each other……
Om ‘’no I must thank you for supporting me..for taking care of my family…for bringing back Prinku….for bearing my rudeness….for forgiving me…for being so selfless and for accepting me despite my behaviour as your husband…you are very good Gauri……you are really very good…..you wiped away all my fears of lies and cheatings…….i am sorry once again and thank you once again’’
Gauri looked into his eyes and hugged him and said ‘’I was waiting for this moment to be accepted by you as your wife and when this moment came I don’t know how to celebrate……I LOVE YOU Om ji …….I LOVE SO MUCH’’
Her eyes widened and she immediately broke the hug and ran towards the balcony reminiscing that she confessed her love in flow of emotions……
Om too was shocked by listening her confession and he smiled ……..
Gauri was standing there with her hairs open and shying………she was smiling …….Om went behind her and hugged her from waist……….Gauri closed her eyes…….om put his chin on her shoulders and whispered in her eyes ‘’what did you just say?’’
Gauri nodded her head still closing her eyes, said ‘’nothing’’
Om turned her towards him ‘’tell me once again what did you just say?’’
Gauri shied…he lifted her chin up…she looked into his eyes……his smile ….his looks everything was making her go awe head over heals……..She couldn’t speak anything…..
Om ‘’you said you love me…..really Gauri..after what all I did with you..after how I behaved with you…do you still love me?’’
Gauri ‘’I have always loved you Om ji….i loved you by the way you were…I knew you were somewhere miffed with me ..…but you saved me…your respect and love towards your family made me know and understand how good a person you are .. you are a real gem of a person……and then I couldn’t stop loving you….i didn’t dare to tell you all these days and today it came out of my mouth as I couldn’t stop myself revealing this truth….I LOVE YOU Om ji…I REALLY LOVE YOU….’’
Om ‘’not Om ji…call me Om…….just Om’’
Gauri shied…….
Om ‘’I am waiting Gauri …call me Om ..fast…this is the first order as your husband’’ he smiled……
Gauri ‘’Om ‘’ she smiled
Om ‘’yes Gauri’’
Gauri ‘’Om ji…I mean Om… can I ask you something’’
Om ‘’hmm’’
Gauri ‘’do you…do you…’’
Om ‘’do you what’’ he smirked
Gauri ‘’nothing’’ she tried to run but he held her hand and pulled her back…he again back hugged her and said
Om ‘’ I always loved my chulbul…BUT THE DIFFERENCE IS ……I LOVE YOU AS GAURI now’’
Gauri turned towards him teary eyed full of glow and happiness in her face and looked into his eyes…..they had an eyelock…….
Om hugged Gauri again and she too reciprocated……he kissed her at her forehead and she looked down…….he moved her hands towards her eyes and wiped her tears … she started blushing….she was trembling while his lips were brushing her nose and moving towards her lips….he held her tight and placed his lips on hers….she closed her eyes tight as she was unable to control……she reciprocated the kiss…. both their eyes were releasing tears while they kissed passionately……a feeling of apology, a feeling of forgiveness, a feeling of love, a feeling of acceptance , a feeling of trust, a feeling of friendship everything flowed in their emotional reunion….
They parted for the need of air and he smiled at her…….she sat on the bed and he placed his head in her lap while she brushed his hair……….
Om ‘’I never thought you would forgive me so easily’’
Gauri ‘’Om please forget the past…it will not let us live peacefully……I am happy everything is fine now…Shivaay jiju just sometime before promised me that he will give back my happiness and he kept his promise…I should thank him to return you to me’’
Om ‘’yes…..he made me realise my mistake…it’s good we traced him else I would have missed the most beautiful part of my life along with my brothers and family’’
They were talking while Rudra knocked the door………
Rudra ‘’O , gauri Bhabhi…are you all right? We are worried…please open the door’’
Om smiled and Gauri blushed
Om opened the door Shivaay and Rudra burst out into laughter while Anika, Sumo and Prinku smiled shyly…….
Om ‘’why are you laughing?’’
Rudra took him aside towards mirror and showed Om’s face………his lips had the marks of lipstick …he forgot to wipe ……..
Shivaay ‘’Om I think you need to check yourself before you open the door after romancing with your wife’’
Rudra smiled and gave Hifi to Shivaay……….Om felt embarrassed…..he quickly wiped the lipstick marks……
Here Anika, Sumo and Priyanka did not leave a chance to tease Gauri…….
Shivaay , Rudra and Om hugged each other and Shivaay ‘’I am so happy Om that you realised what you were missing…….i can see how happy you are today……..be like this always …my old Om is back and that too after a long time……….all thanks to Gauri for bringing the ISHQBAAZ Om back’’
Gauri listened Shivaay’s words and went near him , she hugged Shivaay with all rights and said ‘’Thank you so much Jiju, for keeping your promise and giving me my happiness back….thank you so much..hadn’t you initiated we would have still been the same not realising our feelings for each other’’
Om ‘’Yes Shivaay …thank you so much….and I am sorry for the behaviour of mine…infcat.’’….he turned towards everyone and said ‘’Infact I need to apologise all of you…I am realy sorry’’
Everyone hugged ..later Shivaay said ‘’I need to confess something …’’
Everyone looked at him ……….
Shivaay ‘’Om and Gauri..i am not the actual reason for your union…you have to thank ANIKA for this……it was Anika’s idea …….we didn’t know what happened between you two but Anika was sure that it might have all started from Bareilly…she asked me to speak to you…I denied but she was adamant as she wanted you both to be together…hadn’t she insisted me I would have not done anything….’’
OmRi hugged Anika tight and thanked her……..
Anika said ‘’Now all the family looks perfect’’
She moved towards Shivaay and said ‘’Thank you Shivaay…you made an impossible possible warna this Om would have acted stupid as you acted stupid ‘’
Shivaay ‘’what the wuck are you thanking me or taunting me?’’
Anika ‘’both…because you were also stupid in not realising your feelings for me’’
Shivaay ‘’ohh really as if you proposed me …I atleast tried to know your feelings but you didn’t trust me’’
Om Ru ‘’ok enough …………don’t start fighting again…….’’
Hearing their scream Mahi came up
Mahi ‘’what happened? Why were you shouting?’’
Rudra ‘’Ye Shivaay bhayya aur Anika Bhabhi ko aap ek saal se kaise jhel rahe ho?’’
Mahi ‘’kyun fir se ladayi kar rahe hain kya?’’
Rudra ‘’ yes…but how do you know they were fighting?’’
Mahi ‘’don’t worry they are normal then…if they don’t fight then it’s abnormal’’
Everyone smiled………Later Dadi blessed every couple and called Mahi………
Dadi ‘’Mahi tu mere liye bahu kab laa raha hain ?’’
Mahi ‘’Dadi…….after seeing your bahu’s I am happy to be single’’
Anika signalled Gauri and Soumya and they ran behind Mahi to hit him …….he ran and everyone burst out into laughter……..
Dadi smiled very happily that her Ishqbaaz grandsons were keeping up their Dada ji’s name………

Precap : The Destruction…….

So this was the fifteenth part …please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad are welcome…I will try to respond as soon as possible…….

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64 Comments
  1. no no no,pls no destruction VHM
    awesome update
    absolutly in love wid GauriKa
    kaash,they show the same in DBO

    1. VHM

      Hey Aashi……….the destruction is necessary to construct the further story and then to end this FF ………thank you so much for the lines you wrote…

  2. Madhu.r

    super sis

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Madhu …thanks a lot

  3. Love you so much for writing this emotional one ☺☺?

    1. VHM

      Thanks a lot Kripa…love you too for your awesome lines for me and for liking this FF

  4. Aam2000

    Awesome awesome awesome……

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Aam2000…thanks a lot

  5. Yay!! gaurikara United! ?mindblowing episode.. gaurikara confession amd conversation was so amazin! My fav part!! Fab episode altogether..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sam…thanks a lot and am glad you liked this episode and GauriKara’s conversation and confession

  6. Navz

    Omri’s confessions ???????.i am blushing even when i am typing..we never got to see romantic angle of om but now when i am reading…there are no limts of my imaginations….mein bahut khush hoon dii.?????.thank uuu.????.
    Ohh ab tak shivika ek doosre ko propose nahi kiya??!! Phir wooh saare romance??????.
    What d hell of destruction is waiting for us ???!!! Hope it is for a good cause.
    Really really really loved it to d core dii..thank u for such beautiful part. sending my luv to u..gn dii..bye.

    1. VHM

      Hey Chotiii…awee choo cute…blushing? …thank you so much dear…happy to know that you like it…and thank you for such awesome lines ………

      Haan maine iss FF mein abhi tak Shvika ka proposal nahi likha ..jagah tak mujhe yaad hain….but that’s a surprise and to know it you must wait………

      Destruction is some time s good otherwise how will i take my story forward ?

      Love you too loads Chotii..take care

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much dwet …thanks a lot

  7. Rithik

    Hii. Vhm this part is awesome you know when i start to read this part of your ff i want to request you that Gauri call om om not omji because i feel like om ji from big boss if you from india then you know him and your ff is awesome

    1. VHM

      Hey Rithik….thank you so much…yeah yaar i know Om ji from big boss ..such a crap he was (my personal opinion) …actually i wanted to type omkara ji but it takes additional effort so stopped it till om ji and then bought in that scene…am glad you liked it

  8. Oh my God.fir se you rocked… VHM dear, .wow.finally omri MU cleared…..
    And what destruction? ?? I am.confused about it……
    Waiting for next update.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Arpita…yeah finally no dragging in my FF as in real DBO…MU cleared in one episode……

      Destruction …don’t get worried …i like happy endings so destruction is necessary now

  9. Nithu

    di……….epi was awsm……………but precap….scaring…..jus now they got their happiness in the meanwhile their destruction……..omm

    1. VHM

      Hey Nithu…thank you so much dear…to retain their happiness i have planned destruction dear…you will know it very soon

  10. Amazing episode…..
    waiting for next part…..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Aishwarya….next update very soon dear

  11. AWESOME EXCELENT SUPERB BEAUTIFULL MIND BLOWING HEART TOUCHING FANTASTIC?????????

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much UF…Thanks a lot……very rarely i get to see your opinion posted on my FF …and may be this would have definitely made a mark for you……..thanks a lot UF

  12. Nida

    Awwwwwe my shivaay is perfect in everything….omri confession was something unbelievable ??????????????? ….. and the precap has driven me crazy ? … update soon

    1. VHM

      awee …yes Nida ”YOUR” shivaay is perfect…i am so happy you liked it…now i will jumpo with happiness too…..next update will be very soon dear…..thank you sooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhh

  13. Anujohnson

    Sorry for not commenting in the previous episodes..I was busy plus WiFi had some problem…episode was awesome like you..and no..you can’t do this to me…Destruction…nahiii….aap aisa nahi kar sakhti …..but I feel its the destruction of enemies .you are VHM…anything can happen…lol…

    1. VHM

      Hey Anu …that’s not a problem dear..it happens dear ….thank you so much…why me you too are awesome dear…destruction leads to construction remember…so mein aisaa hi kar rahi thi…..lol…i am VHM all crazy stupid things will happen

  14. It’s so pleasant.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Amrutha…

  15. Ur really awesome yaar… Every episode is mind blowing…. I loved it…. Waiting for the next episode… post it soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sagithya…thanks a lot…next episode very soon

  16. Awesome update VHM…. Finally everything is fine…. But destrution!!!!!! Eagerly waiting 4 nxt…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Banita…everything is not yet fine dear…so destructive episode was needed..next episode very soon

  17. Superb epi

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Lilly……

  18. Gayathri.visu

    Hiii di.
    Oh god! From where did u get that idea? Kaali Thakur-Shivaay’s convo….I didn’t expect this di! Brilliant idea!! ShivRi bonding is remembers me AniRu n OmYa bonding! O’bros are stands for their bhabhi n O’bahus n daughter are stands for their bhaiya! I m happy di, that u r finished Gaurikara’s story in one part! Finally u r makes Anika as a plan maker!

    Di, I m missing our telepathy game. So I wanna guess something. Precap- whose destruction di? It is Oberoi empire or can I say Tej’s share in oberoi empire?

    Eagerly waiting for next part di…
    Take care n have a nice day!!

    1. VHM

      Hey Gayathri…….

      Lol …i had no idea that i will write something like this…… while listening to some boring lecture i was deeply thinking about how to logically unite Gauri and Om …and then suddenly it passed my brain…long story haa…but it happened and you guys liked it to…..

      Yeahh…i can’t drag their love story too long…ha ha ha ha…Shivaay and Anika are superman and superwoman don’t you think so ?

      And your telepathy is working perfectly ….you are right but which one is correct you will know in next episode…..

      next update very soon dear…thank you again …take care and have a nice day

  19. Superb episode. Loved the way ShivIka cleared RiKara MU.

    A bit scared regarding the precap…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much ffffan1234 …..don’t worry ….everything will go on a happy note

  20. Haridhra

    Hari Akka I tnk so I can call u becoz I’m from TN n we call our elder sis like that .. If I’m ain’t wrong then ur lang is Telugu … Coming to the epi today after lots of emotional epi it was such a relief n in the latter part I had a Kidkitod smile on my face..

    1. VHM

      Hey Haridhra …yes dear you can call me Akka , we too call our elder sis as Akka and i am a Telugite…

      Thank you so much dear…glad to know you had a khidkitod smile by the end of episode…keep smiling …

  21. Niriha

    Awesome….fabulous part di omri’s confession ?????loved it to the core waiting for next part

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Niriha …thanks a lot…next episode very soon

  22. Awesome…
    Omri’s confession was superb….
    Shivika r adorable….
    Happy Family after a long time….
    Beautifully Written… 🙂

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shivika…thanks a lot ….

  23. Dhar

    Awesomemest, the bestest it’s toooooooo gooooooooood, plzzz plzzz post the next update ASAP ?? awesome episode ?

    1. VHM

      Awee…thank you so much Dhar…you too are bestesttttttt…next update very soon

  24. Ashwinee

    sorry for the late comment , and the update was just khidkitod!!!!!

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Ashwinee ….and no worries for the late comment…it happens as every one will be busy with their work and will post their opinion during their free time……so completely understandable

  25. Wow super part loved it but pls no destruction

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Tashpre….don’t worry destruction is needed for upcoming happiness

  26. Awesome akka….Waiting for the next

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Talli….next update very soon

  27. From yesterday only I started reading this and lemme tell u this is fantabulous n I’ll try to comment on every epi

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Madhuani…thanks for reading my FF and posting your opinion…i hope my story will make you post your opinion regularly…thanks again

  28. FINALLY…..misunderstandings cleared….omri united…just perfect………..today’s epi was just fabulous…..during omri scenes I had a wide smile plastered on my face……post as soon as possible di…..l am waiting eagerly……………

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much little one….yes what all you said happened ….and i am glad you have liked this episode …next part very soon in the portal

  29. Really awesome update….. Loved it…… Gaurika’s confession lobed it…… I hope the same happen in DBO………… Anyway loved ur ff really a die heart fan of ur ff………

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Tahura…am so happy to know that you like my FF’s …am so so so happy reading those amazing lines by …thank you lots

  30. Alekhika20

    Superb updt

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Alekhika…sinusoidal wave is getting back to superb …i hope it dpesn’t fall to nice update

  31. Jerry_36

    Hey Di ! This is a mind blowing episode. Thou I am not a die heart fan of rikara…..I loved the way you portrayed. Excellent but I am nervous about the precap?

    1. VHM

      The next shot is also up in the portal……so you need not be nervous …whatever happens, happens for the good……..

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