THE PAST & THE PRESENT – ISHQBAAZ FF -EPISODE 14– THE GOOD TIMES

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Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB…I will deal with all the three pairs of IB ….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

Recap : Om gets angry on Shivaay for leaving him and coming here…Anika condemns Om’s actions…Shivaay feels hurt ….later all the three brothers unite…Gauri shares her pain with Anika infront of Sumo…Shivaay meets Sumo and gauri…Gauri wishes she could have got the brotherly love of Shivaay as Sumo got…Shivaay wishes Prinku and Dadi was there with them……

All of them started for their home leaving the S.A.M.S RESTAURANT which saw some beautiful moments……..
Anika turned towards Shivaay and said ‘’Shivaay let’s go in Champa…come…….’’
Shivaay ‘’what ? now…no…….no way’’
Anika pouted her mouth ‘’why ..sometime before you said we should go on a ride in my champa then why not now?’’
Shivaay ‘’oh …that…at that time I was kidding…just kidding…..’’
Anika ‘’kidding…ok fine…then fine I will take my partner in crime in Champa’’
She looked at Rudra…….Rudra smiled and came to her ‘’Bhabhi your wish my command…anyways I know by now you have got bored of Shivaay bhayya…I will accompany you…’’
They both took their tongues out and started irritating Shivaay ……..
Shivaay ‘’ok enough…….both of you……..’’
Om ‘’Rudra grow up now…stop being childish…….’’
Saumya ‘’yes Rudra…bade baal wala bhayya is right’’
AniRi together ‘’enough all of you…no one will say anything to my devar/my partner in crime…because…he is the best’’
Mahi too came and stood beside Anika and Gauri and said ‘’I too support my sisters and my younger brother…so no more words against them’’
ShivOmYa ‘’Mahi / Mahi bhai/ Mahi jiju …………you too with them …….noooooooooo’’
Finally Sahil came and said ‘’which team should I join ?’’
Before Shivaay and Anika tried to say something Sahil stopped both of them and said ‘’I Cannot take risk of joining either of your teams …so I will be referee’’
Everyone smiled and Om lifted him in his arms and said …’’Champ come on we will go home’’
Shivaay delegated restaurant duties to the manager and asked him not to disturb them today however urgent it might be, also said today he decided to give 50% discount on the bill to each and every customer ……Manager obliged and finally after a lot of nok jhok Shivaay sat in Champa and everyone laughed at Shivika’s cute cat fight……..
They all reached home ……..they saw the villa named ‘’KALYANI VILLA’’……Anika took everyone inside….she showed each couple their room…outside Om’s room his name was embellished beautifully……inside his room everything was set according to his taste…same was with Rudra’s room…Rudra room has additional gym arranged…….they both were so surprised and happy and felt that their brother never left them ……..

Except Gauri everyone got freshened up…but all gathered at the living room and sat down chatting…everything was seeming perfect……
Anika ‘’Shivaay bahut bhook lagi hain…’’
Sahil ‘’haan jiju…aaj in sab ke aane ke khushi mein ham khud bhooke reh gaye aur inko bhi bhooka rakha’’
Gauri ‘’You all sit back and chat while I prepare the food for everyone’’
Shivaay ‘’no…no..absolutely no….kitchen work is my duty…I am your brother/jiju/whatever so you don’t take away my duty…today I will prepare food and you all will eat’’
He turned towards OmRuHi and said ‘’coming with me to create magic?’’
OmRu ‘’off course our favourite place ‘’
Mahi ‘’today take help of them Shivaay’’
Rudra ‘’ohh hello, male version of Arundhati roy…
Sumo ‘’Arundhathi Roy nahi Nirupa roy’’
Rudra ‘’ha wahi ..I mean Mere poojya Mahi bhayya…please accompany us…who will clear the mess created by me? ‘’
ShivRu ‘’yes, you donno him …now you will know him completely…come come’’
All four left towards Kitchen………..
Anika ‘’Gauri come sit with us’’
Gauri ‘’Dii…I will get freshened up first ……then will come and enjoy with you’’
Anika ‘’ok…’’
Soumya and Anika started chatting while Gauri left to Om’s room …..

—————————IN KITCHEN, KALYANI VILLA

Shivaay was preparing Food and Om was helping him……Rudra sat on platform and was eating the veggies chopped by Om…..
Om ‘’Stop it Rudra…if you eat all these while I am chopping how will Shivaay complete cooking’’
Rudra ‘’you are so heartless O..you are asking me to stop eating………now you don’t care about my hunger…what if I die out of hunger’’
Shivaay looked at Om and Mahi and showed count on fingers 1…2…3.. and they all together said ‘’SHUT UP RUDRA’’
Rudra ‘’ha finally I heard the three golden words from my brother’s…now everything is fine’’
Mahi ‘’were you like this from birth or did you become while growing up?’’
Shivaay and Om started saying about all the naughty things Rudra did while growing up and simultaneously cooking………
Mahi was unable to control laugh……..Rudra too giggled and upped his collar feeling proud of his doings………
With all the splendid kitchen moments they finally cooked food and placed it on dining table………
Gauri too got freshened up and joined the dinner……….it was a glorious moment in Kalyani Villa……

After dinner they all sat down to chit chat for sometime……..Sahil got tired and went to sleep…..Anika went with him to ensure he sleeps……..
Sumo ‘’Bhayya you din’t let us know what did you do in this past one year…how you reached to this level?’’
Mahi ‘’Saumya I will tell you what all happened’’
He explained everything how Shivaay made them reach this position……….
Everyone looked Shivaay and Mahi with immense respect……….Anika came back and they had fun time ……..
Later everyone got readied for sleep……..
Shivaay asked everyone to sleep when Rudra said ‘’Bhayya please can I sleep in your room….?’’
Shivaay ‘’off course …come’’ he looked at Anika
Anika ‘’thank God Rudra else I am fed up of sleeping in Shivaay’s room bearing his snoring’’
Om ‘’Shivaay you snore?’’
Shivaay ‘’what…what the wuck…Om it’s not me…it’s her…Anika …my dear wife who snores…I have a proof’’
Anika ‘’no shivaay…don’t you dare’’
Shivaay ‘’ha ha ha very funny…’’
Rudra ‘’please show the proof na’’
Anika ‘’no…Shivaay…you will not’’
Shivaay ‘’I will’’
They both ran behind each other in the entire room…and everyone was laughing with their fight……Finally Shivaay showed Anika snoring and kick boxing on the bed……Anika felt embarrassed
Om looked at them and Mahi came to him and said ‘’This is how we enjoy the time here…. Shivaay could compose himself only because of Anika …after the disastrous time last year …she with her antics keeps the atmosphere lively at home and makes us happy…I know you all missed all these …so enjoy these moments to the fullest Om’’
Om smiled at him and nodded his head in agreement……he later hugged Mahi happily……..
ShivOmRuHi slept in Shivaay’s room while AniRiMya slept in Sumo’s room…….

—————-THE DAY ENDED WITH REUNIONS, SURPRISES, HAPPINESS, TEASINGS AND SMILES
Next day they visited places in Meghalaya…and enjoyed whole day……they came back home….
Gauri called Rudra to a side ‘’Rudra I have something to ask with you…promise me you will keep it as secret for sometime’’
Rudra ‘’Promise bhabhi’’
Gauri ‘’will you take me to Airport once ?’’
Rudra ‘’bhabhi ? airport ? are you trying to leave from here leaving us alone’’
Gauri ‘’Rudra…you will know soon…but now do something we need to rush to airport’’
Rudra ‘’ok….fine….wait here I am coming ..i will make an excuse and take you’’
Gauri smiled…….
Rudra went to everyone ‘’Shivaay bhayya …Gauri Bhabhi needs to shop something…so can we go to the market …I will drive her and come back’’
Shivaay ‘’but why You ?’’ He turned towards Om and said ‘’Om I think you must go’’
Rudra became tensed and looked at Gauri making puppy face…Gauri was shocked ……
Om ‘’No Shivaay …I am not interested to go anywhere now…I want to relax……..’’
Shivaay ‘’Om…listen…She is your wife whether you agree or disagree…so I am saying go with her’’
Om looked at Gauri angrily……..
Gauri ‘’it’s ok jiju…I will go alone …I will manage’’
Anika ‘’Gauri…Shivaay is right…….’’ She turned towards Om and said ‘’ Go with my sister and buy her whatever she wants………did you forget the past Om when you made Shivaay understand the importance of relationship with me , his wife’’

Om nodded angrily not to disappoint Shivaay and Bhabhi…….
He went to Gauri and said ‘’Come …I will take you for shopping’’
Gauri smiled as this was the first time Om spoke to her in a much polite way, but the very next moment she got scared as she need not to go to market and she had lied again…….
She left with him and while taking turn towards Market she said
Gauri ‘’om ji I don’t need to go to market’’
Om applied sudden brake and looked at her in disbelief ‘’What? What did you say?’’
Gauri ‘’I don’t need to go to shopping in the market’’
Om took the car side and parked and got down and said ‘’don’t you get tired lying ? if you din’t want to go to market why did you ask Rudra to take you to market?’’
Gauri ‘’listen to me Om ji…’’
Om ‘’no I don’t want to…this …this is the reason I hate you…you always say lies …just…just forget it …we are going back now…do you understand’’ he screamed at her
Gauri ‘’stop it …om ji…….we are going to airport and this is final …now you listen …I have heard enough of you..i respect you…but you don’t even try to listen what I am trying to say’’ this time she shouted at him……
Om was shocked to see this side of Gauri……..he came out of shock in a while and said
Om ‘’what did you say …we are going to Airport’’
Gauri ‘’yes….’’
Om ‘’but why?’’
Gauri ‘’you will understand when we go there…and if your questions are done please take me fast..else we will be late’’
Om didn’t utter a single word and drove her to airport…………
Gauri called someone and said she is coming towards them…….Om just followed her silently…..
They reached a point and there stood HIS SISTER PRIYANKA AND HIS DADI ………..
He ran towards Dadi and took blessings of her first then hugged Prinku….she smiled and he too did…she cupped her face and hugged her again…..
Om ‘’Dadi…Prinku….you both here…….how?’’
Dadi ‘’first take me to Billu …my eyes are waiting to see him…’’
Prinku ‘’yes bhayya please take us to Shivaay bhayya first…please’’
Om hugged Prinku ‘’please call me bhayya once again Prinku…it’s an year I heard you saying bhayya and speaking to us and saw you…’’
Prinku çried ‘’I am sorry bhayya…I got much angry on you and Rudra without any reason..i am really sorry’’ she hugged him……
Om’’it’s ok Prinku forget it…I saw you …you came here and now I am happy to get my dear ones back…….’’
Prinku went to Gauri ‘’Thank you so much Bhabhi…you made the impossible possible….’’
Dadi blessed Gauri and smiled ……..
Om looked at Gauri thankfully….Gauri smiled looking at them…….

All of them left towards Kalyani Villa………….

Hearing the Car horn…Rudra rushed outside just to ensure that his Gauri Bhabhi was fine…..
But then he saw Dadi and Prinku getting down the car first………….
Rudra shouted Dadi, Prinku and ran to her……………Shivika, MaSa heard Rudra shouting Dadi and Prinku and they ran outside…….
Rudra took blessings of Dadi and then hugged Prinku……..Shivaay, Anika, Mahi became emotional seeing them……
Rudra ‘’Prinku….are you okay? Where were you ? why did you leave us and go ? didn’t you remember you had brothers worrying about you?’’
Prinku ‘’I am sorry Rudra bhayya….i am really sorry…I have hurt all of you much …but without Shivaay bhayya that house didn’t seemed mine…and so I left…but I missed you all so much’’
Rudra ‘’don’t cry my pehelwaan …you came and see we are back together’’
Shivaay ran to Dadi while Dadi extended her hands wide to embrace him……he hugged her……..
Anika went to Prinku and hugged her……….
Dadi ‘’Billu…mera Shivaay…..how could you go away leaving your dadi…why didn’t you think about dadi before leaving ? If Tej has asked you to leave why did you not wait for my decision……you left…had you no respect and love for me…. and don’t you have confidence over my decision ?’’
Shivaay ‘’nahi Dadi…it’s not like that….i had no option then …that day so much happened that I left…but trust me Dadi I had no peace …..i was happy here but happiness was incomplete…today after seeing you and Prinku I am feeling my family complete’’
Shivaay looked at Prinku…..she stood teary eyed and nervous looking at Shivaay……..
Shivaay went near her ‘’Prinku….how are you? Why are you standing nervous…will you not come to your brother?’’
He extended his hands and Prinku nodded her head in agreement and hugged him……there were no words spoken but emotions spoke volume……..
Anika went till Dadi and folded her hands…Dadi held her hands and wiped her tears…they both hugged….they both cried……
Dadi ‘’Tune mere billu ko sambhal liya Anika puttar…’’
she continued speaking while looking at Om and still holding Anika
Dadi ‘’Mein theek kehthi thi Om ye dono bane hi ek dusre keliye hain…….aur inki ishqbaazi poori duniya keliye mizaaz hain’’
Shivika smiled tearfully…………
Mahi came and touched Dadi’s feet ………
Dadi ‘’Mahi puttar ….i have to ask for forgiveness from you…..because of my son’s mistake you had to face a lot……and then I have to thank you for being with my Billu and supporting him even after knowing that he was in difficult situation……’’
Mahi ‘’aap aise mat kahiye Da…’’
Dadi ‘’why did you stop …call me DADI…you have every right to call me so…….as ShivOmRu are… you are also the same for me and will hold the same place in my heart…….i cannot differentiate between my grandsons’’

Mahi was teary eyed and hugged her while thanking her and apologising her…….
Prinku came to him and said ‘’Mahi bhayya……I am Priyanka……as all my brothers call me Prinku…you can also call me…will you…will you allow me to be your sister?’’
Mahi smiled and hugged her nodding his head in agreement……….
Mahi POV ‘’For the first time I am feeling as if I am a part of this family…I have my Dadi, three brothers and a sister, all are my own….my own…the love I missed all through my life is being showered by these within few hours……..i wish this is not a dream…..and I wish this reality stays with me forever’’
Prinku ‘’Mahi bhayya where are you lost? Don’t worry this is all true’’
Everyone started to go inside…..Gauri stood back………….
Anika turned back and shouted
Anika ‘’Gauri ..what are you doing there…come in’’
Gauri ‘’you go Didi I will be come after a while’’
Anika ‘’but why? It is cold come inside’’
Gauri ‘’yes didi…I am enjoying this weather….we don’t find such weather in Mumbai so often’’
Anika shrugged her shoulders and went inside but Shivaay didn’t find her being proper………..he signalled Anika to keep a look on her …Anika nodded and hid herself behind the window facing the garden ………
Gauri POV ‘’when everything is perfect why am I not feeling really happy? What am I expecting? Am I expecting that as all couples here Om ji will come to me and take me in? no it can’t be? Why doesn’t he understand I LOVE HIM …I LOVE HIM MADLY…..his look towards me in airport…his one look made me feel so special…..why am I so unlucky…..how many more tests should I give……’’
Tears flew from her eyes while she was in thoughts….she didn’t realise…………
Anika and Shivaay came towards her………Anika shaked her to bring her from thoughts…..She came back and wiped her tears and smiled…
Shivika looked at her questioningly…Gauri looked at both of them and fake smiled
Anika held her hands by kneeling infront of her……..while Shivaay sat beside her
Gauri ‘’woh…woh…these are tears of happiness ….you all finally met…so I was just thinking about that’’ she stumbled……
Shivaay ‘’your answer doesn’t match with the answers your eyes are giving….so don’t try to lie…atleast not with us’’
Gauri couldn’t hold herself and she held Shivaay’s collar and hugging and cried……..cried till her heart felt light………..
Shivaay saw her holding his collars and crying …….Anika looked at her and then at Shivaay…she nodded her head then …Shivaay understood what Anika meant and Shivaay finally placed hands around her shoulder and brushed her hair ….waited till she completed crying……..
Anika smiled and left from there……….
Gauri after crying saw him , holding her with a brotherly affection and wiped her final tear and said ‘’Sorry jiju…I have unnecessarily disturbed you and spoiled your happy mood…I am really sorry’’
Shivaay ‘’it’s ok Gauri…..sometimes you must cry…cry to get your pain out…..i hope you are feeling lite now?’’
Gauri nodded…..
Shivaay ‘’come in first…it’s too cold…….and before that……….i promise you that before you leave from here your face will be filled with happiness,…. because you gave me , Anika, Mahi, Om and Rudra the best gift……’’
Gauri looked at him questioningly
Shivaay ‘’thank you for getting Prinku and Dadi here…you completed my family…….it’s time I pay you, your happiness in return….i don’t know what and how to do….. but onething is for sure I will not do anything forcefully …but trust me I will put my 100% effort…this is a promise from Shivaay’’
Gauri ‘’thank you jiju…..but you really need not to do anything…the way you pacified me today , I felt I have a brother ..i saw a friend and a brother in you …and regarding om ji and me…I have learned to adjust and bear….but how did you know I brought both of them here’’
Shivaay ‘’Prinku said everything while you were sitting alone in the garden……you treated me as your brother and friend , so give me a chance to try….i cannot see my family in pain …now let’s go in’’
Gauri nodded and Shivaay held her hands and brought her in…………

Precap : Gauri’s truth ………Mission OMKARA & GAURI……….

So this was the fourteenth part …please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad are welcome…I will try to respond as soon as possible…….

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65 Comments
  1. U be the best dii!! Dis is the bestesttttff i hv read till date.. The portrayal of the family bonding and the emotions is truly fabulous.. It Ws a beautiful epi showing the family bonding time.. Amazzzzzziiinnngg!!

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sam….thanks a lot…i am glad you are liking this FF

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much DS..thanks a lot

  2. Navz

    Dii..i was really teary eyed after completed reading. The best part was reunion of complete family with dadi and prinku and the most important shivaay and gauri’s heartout convo.i really felt every word and every sentence heart touching.finally fantastic.
    Its ok dii if u dont get anika and gauri’s relation out.u gave us such great part and ff..it will be my greed if i ask for more.
    Happy mother’s day dii and wish all the happiness health and wealth to my sweetest dii..luv u.

    1. VHM

      Hey Chotii…thank you so much dear..i am glad that this episode touched your heart….

      well you have a right to ask me anything …so don’t think that’s a greed…if time permits i would definitely write that one too and end the FF

  3. Awesome

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Kripa…

  4. Ashwinee

    One more update full of flawless imagination and skill. Looking forward for the next one ?

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Ashwinee…next part very soon

  5. Gayathri.visu

    Hi didi.
    Full happiness…. Even I can feel that happiness in my heart. You are fulfilled ur readers wish by brings Prinku n Dadi in that incomplete family to change into complete family with the help of Gauri! And that kitchen scene and my fav dialogue SHUT UP RUDRA are reasons for my double happiness di. Shivika’s nok-jhok….cute. ShivRi’s scene n Mahi’s P.O.V. makes me emotional di!
    Totally I loved it…..

    Yes di, I will take care myself n u too care. Good night di!

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Gayathri…..ia m happy to know that you felt the happiness….SHUT UP RUDRA dialogue is my favorite too….and i was dying to include from past 13 episodes and finally i got a chance to use it here…same pinch na…

      Thank you so much once again dear…i will and you too take care

  6. Wow dear… Awesome I was so touched in the family reunion lines… Great dear… Waiting for the next episode

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sagithya…thanks a lot…next part very soon

  7. Rasika

    Nice epi….. ?

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Rasika

  8. Niriha

    Awesome…..fabulous part loved it to the core ?????eagerly waiting for next update soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Niriha..next part very soon

  9. It was very emotional di…
    Don’t know but why I am feeling very happy after reading this…. Shivaay and gauri’s brother sister bond was really touching…
    Waiting for your next post….will you accept me as your crazy little sister…

    1. VHM

      Hey Aashi ..off course you are my sister and a crazy one too…what’s there to ask about this…..
      Thank you so much and happy to know that you felt happy after reading this……the next part will be very soon seen in the portal

  10. Awesome…..precap is interesting and glad to see obros masti after a long time ?

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much San…thanks a lot

  11. BAVATHARINI BABU

    Really no words to describe ff di, it’s out of world.
    First time, by reading a ff I got emotional……..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Bavatharini Babu….i don’t know how to react after reading your opinion…thank you for such awesome lines

  12. Haridhra

    That so sweet of Shivika in the last scene.. N waiting 4 the mission Omri…?

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Haridhra……yes Mission Omakara and Gauri very soon

  13. ???????????
    Thank you akka for bringing dadi and prinku I am so happy akka thank you so much coming to the episode it is amazing chala chala bagundi update next one soon ☺☺☺☺☺ shivri bonding is nice akka after a long time obro moment. I think I have talked too much now ok akka bye once again thank you????

    1. VHM

      Hey chelli….thanks enduku nuvvu adige kante munde nenu ee episode type chesanu…last episode lo nee comment chusi chala happy ga feel ayyanu..anduke rasanu nenu emi reply ivvanu nee response kosam wait chesthanu ani…….and ippudu nee response chusi naaku thanks ela cheppalo artham kavtam ledhu……

      thank you to you for writing such beautiful lines for me.

  14. Madhu.r

    loved it nothing more to say

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Madhu…..

  15. Hi di! ?
    You really made me speechless..
    I am in lack of words to describe the way you wrote today’s episode…
    Really loved to see the Picture Perfect Family together…
    When I was reading this chapter I was just imagining the whole scene with ‘Lafzon Ka Ye Rishta Nahi’ song playing in the background…
    Lovely…. Marvellous… Update
    You made me a big fan of yours di ?
    Post soon……
    ?

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sofiya …
      Awee such beautiful lines for me about this FF makes me feel so special….when i wrote i thought ‘LAFZON KA YEH RISHTHA NAHI ‘ song would make this scene beautiful and you exactly wrote the same……….
      Thank you so much once again Sofiya…thanks a lot…next part very soon

  16. Alekhika20

    Nice update

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Alekhika…….my graph regarding your opinion is like a sinusoidal wave …Awesome update to Superb update and then back to nice update……still more effort to put up to get few more words from you …will try and will keep trying

  17. I was busy so was unable to comment in ur last update
    It was heartfelt & emotional
    even this update was wonderful
    waiting for mission OmRi
    loved it
    thank u for updating on weekend,I was soooo bored

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Aashi…thanks a lot for those lines…Mission Omri coming very soon

  18. Dhar

    U have a gift diii ?????u r truly gifted, u can make ppl Haapppieeee by just using it words , u r theeeee besssssttttt

    1. VHM

      Awee that’s so nice of you Dhar to say such awesome line for me…thank you…thank you so much….you too are the best

  19. Hlw VHM di
    That was awesome ….its one of my fav ff’s
    And you always portray everything in such a beautiful manner……..
    Palez post soon didi

    1. VHM

      hey Aashiya…thank you so much dear…glad to know you are liking it…….next episode very soon in the portal dear

  20. Superb update. Loved it…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much fffan1234…..tahnks a lot

  21. Nice one di…so much emotional…just loved it…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shivikaloves……happy to read your opinion

  22. Wonderful epi VHM….. Again u nailed it dear… Luv it to d core….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Banita…your comments are always a pleasure to be read

  23. Nida

    No words ? how can u write each character qualities with so much grace u just made my heart ❤️ happy ?

    1. VHM

      Hey Nida…i too am short of words to thank you …thank you so much for your support and motivation…if you are happy then i too am happy …and if this Ff has made you happy then you cannot even imagine how am i feeling now

  24. Very nice.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much dwet

  25. Superb akka chala chala bagundi ???

    1. VHM

      Thank you Vishnusri…thanks nanna so much………

  26. Wow!!!! Awesome one!!!!! Loved it!!!
    Finally all the obros together after such long time,it was a treat to watch…
    Enjoyed it thoroughly!! Update nxt one soon!!

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Bhavana…i donno but when i read your line ”it was a treat to WATCH” i felt so happy that you were imagining the scenes while reading it…that makes me feel so awesome…….

  27. Awesome….
    Finally Dadi & Prinku have arrived….
    Gauri & Shivaay bonding is amazing….
    Shivika have come a long way they hv become so understanding…
    waiting fr d nxt.. 🙂

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Shivika…yes they arrived and they will stay with Shivaay too…next part very soon

  28. No words to describe it dear, so i don’t write anything about it. Bcoz you are khdkitod writter VHM dear,
    Waiting for next update.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Arpita…even i have no words tot hank you…you are a darwazathod person who always encourage people like us…….thank you for the support

  29. Arthi

    Di…….I was waiting for this…..I can’t see any misunderstanding btwn om and Gauri and I hope it will be cleared in ur next part……

    1. VHM

      Hey Arthi…you wait will finally end once the next part appears in portal…thank you so much for posting your opinion

    2. VHM

      Hey Arthi…your wait will finally end once the next part appears in portal…thank you so much for posting your opinion..it’s always a pleasure when your expectation meets my expectation

  30. Jerry_36

    Harika di !! This one is so full of happiness. I really enjoyed it. You nailed it. All the characters were Amazingly awesome?

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Jerry…i am glad you are liking it…whenever you log in and post your opinion…i quickly turn to pages to see if you have posted the next shot of your FF….

  31. Nita D

    Family moments in the beginning were awesome….and so were the famous Obro moments….Arundhati roy ???

    Arghhhh i will almost start hating Om now….is he the same Om who used to tell Shivaay what is wrong and what is right? Is he the same Om who used to make shivaay understand other’s viewpoint when he was in his own Tadi….

    Wow Prinku and dadi are also back in picture…..nice thought by gauri…..
    i felt so bad for gauri reading the last part….but loved shivaay-gauri bond and specially shivaay’s promise to make everything alright….truly like an elder brother….

    1. VHM

      Hey Nita…thank you so much once again…yeah Om in real IB is being so angry…i am not liking this version of Om but i am sure his tory will also be similar to Shivika’s tory…let’s see…
      Coming to this episode …your views make me feel s special,,,,thank you so much

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