THE PAST & THE PRESENT – ISHQBAAZ FF -EPISODE 13– THE REUNION OF THE BROTHERS

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Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB…I will deal with all the three pairs of IB ….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

Recap : Om, Rudra , Saumya and Gauri pick Anika’s champa and reach S.A.M.S Restaurant…..Anika pesters Shivaay while driving…which delays him in reaching airport…Anika sees OmRu GauriYa and runs towards them form her cabin…all get emotional after meeting each other…they plan to surprise Shivaay…Shivaay comes and asks Anika to unveil her surprise…Anika gets happy meeting her Champa….Anika manages Shivaay to stop going to his cabin…She brings OmRu to Shivaay’s cabin while GauriYa decide not to disturb the brothers personal and valuable moments…

Anika messaged Mahi that everything was set and he can bring Shivaay to his cabin……..
—————–AT POOLSIDE S.A.M.S RESTAURANT

Mahi reads the message and smiles and goes to Shivaay
Mahi ‘’Shivaay, Anika Bhabhi has messaged me just now…she asked to inform you to reach your cabin…someone is awaiting to meet you?’’
Shivaay ‘’okay..but who has come? I have cancelled all appointments today’’
Mahi ‘’I don’t know Shivaay…may be someone important for you’’
Shivaay ‘’ok let’s go’’
Mahi ‘’Shivaay you go…I will stay here with Sahil’’
Shivaay nodded his head and walked towards his cabin

————–IN SHIVAAY’S CABIN

Anika bought OmRu and made them sit in chairs…they looked towards his room………..it was set the same way as his cabin was in Oberoi Office…….a wall was painted with the pic of Om and Rudra , the prestigious award he received recently decorated the glass shelf and the certificate that came along with the award was framed and it beautified the wall..he did not miss to place family pics of all of them on the wall..……it was simple elegant and matched up to Shivaay’s style……
Soon after they saw a wall with their pics painted their eyes got wet……they looked at each other and smiled ……..
While reaching his cabin, Shivaay’s heart was for some reason beating fast…infact very fast…….he opened his Cabin door in one go……..
Om Ru turned towards Shivaay and all the three stood there in shock , still, surprise and with heavy hearts…….
Shivaay ‘’Om…Rudra……’’he stood still with teary eyes while tears scared to come out of his eyes……
Rudra ran towards Shivaay and hugged him …Shivaay reciprocated the hug tightly…he brushed his little brothers face with lots of love…both their eyes were running with tears ……..he touched Rudra’s face with affection and made himself believe that they were really present before him and he was not dreaming…his dream to be with them was a reality now…….
While ShivRu hugged , Om stepped back and turned his face away and went to the window…….
Shivaay looked at Anika with Om’s act and Rudra looked at Shivaay and then towards the direction of Om………
Rudra walked towards Om and placed his hand on his shoulder ……
Rudra ‘’O we waited for this moment for an year and when this moment arrived you turned your face away…why O …why are you doing this?’’
Om ‘’Rudra …I came to see Shivaay and I saw him …now we should leave ……’’

—————————–PRESENT SITUATION—————–
Shivaay ‘’Om you are not going anywhere…I will not allow you to go anywhere’’ he cried while saying……
Om ‘’Rudra say your elder brother the great Shivaay that I am doing the same thing that he did an year ago with me……..i warned him and promised him that I will not speak to him if he leaves..yet he left me breaking our bond’’
Shivaay cried silently holding the chair and bending his head down and reminiscing the day he left from OM and what Om has said ……….he could bear anything but couldn’t bear the pain of rejection from his brothers……..and Om right now hit Shivaay with his words at the same point……
Anika held Om by his shoulders and spoke ‘’Om you can’t do this …look at me Om and say this……….don’t you want to meet your brother…don’t you want to hug him…don’t you want to cry your heart out before him…..’’
Om ‘’no..Anika Bhabhi…I don’t want to any of those you said…no’’
She stepped back in disbelief….’’You can’t be that Om whom I know…you can’t be’’
Om ‘’why can’t I be Bhabhi….what wrong am I doing? Didn’t you both leave us … we were longing to meet him…we were desperate to meet all of you …but … your husband The great Shivaay did he ever tried to look back at us….. did he ever understand what pain we were going through…the house broke after you all left…today Prinku…our sister…she doesn’t talk with me or Rudra…. only…only because we couldn’t get back her Shivaay bhayya back successfully…she left the house in anger and promised herself that she will be back only if you all would come back……..Dadi…Dadi stopped speaking with the same love…she is manually alive but from heart she is …she is ‘’ he couldn’t complete the sentence……
After sometime he continued
Om ‘’Bhabhi you were his wife so you had the privilege to go with him…we were brothers …brothers of that father who sent him away…and he held that anger …was his anger on that day justified ? answer me Bhabhi…just answer this…what was our fault in whatever happened? Will he or you give us back the one year that we stayed apart…can you ?’’
Anika ‘’I understand your anger …but you should also understand…’’
Om’’what should we understand Bhabhi that only he has right to get angry and leave us and we have no rights to get anger anytime…whether mistake is committed by us or not’’
Anika was much angered by Om’s words now……….Shivaay was silently crying as he was deeply hurt …true that he had no answers but he couldn’t explain what he went through after leaving them……Anika looked at Shivaay and understood that he was falling weak and she couldn’t see Shivaay like that……she spoke
Anika ‘’fine then if you had so much anger……..why did you take the pain of coming here…I am sure you would have put many efforts to trace where we are…why did you put so much effort…why did you insist me to call Shivaay as soon as possible sometime before…why did you shed tears after you saw him from the window…answer me Om …why did you do all this?…look at this wall Om…this is how he kept you both with him near him throughout this year….look at these photos ..and if you come to our home you can see how he dedicated something to you both…he never thought about anyone else than his siblings and you are blaming that he broke the bond between you…we were with him…we were happy too…but he was never complete here….’’
Om looked at Anika in surprise ……now it’s was Om’s turn to be silent…….he had no answer for the questions Anika posed……..Shivaay wiped his tears and tried to calm himself …after a lot of efforts he spoke…….
Shivaay ‘’no Anika …… don’t insist him anymore….don’t say anything else…he thinks I haven’t listened his words…but fact is I have always lived with his words ringing in my ears ….i always scared for this moment and my nightmare turned into reality……today I am feeling really helpless…I am saying truth ….when Bade papa kicked me out stamping as illegitimate I did not feel helpless because that day I thought my brothers were with me….but today my brother is rejecting me and now I am feeling the pain of being really illegitimate ……may be the heaviest price I am paying ‘’ his voice choked and he was continuously wiping the tears which were not in a mood to stop……..

Shivaay’s words hit Om very hard now…….his intention was never to hurt Shivaay but to show his anger …but it turned into something unexpected……….
Shivaay turned to go…….Anika tried to stop Shivaay when Om held her hand and stopped her ……
Om ‘’Shivaay…we waited for an year to meet you and I am sure so did you…and when the time came can’t you wait for a minute more…do you think your Om is so heartless that he will miss the opportunity to be with you…..do you know only this much about me? Will you leave us unattended once again ? will you not hug your brother ….will you not forgive your brother for hurting you unintentionally’’ with every passing sentence his voice choked deeply………
Shivaay turned towards Om and ran to him while Om took big leaps towards him….Anika held Rudra’s hand
Shivaay and Om hugged really tight and Om cried saying ‘’Sorry Shivaay…my intention was not to hurt you…’’ Shivaay nodded his head horizontally to stop him from saying sorry…words weren’t coming from his mouth…….he just hugged more tightly…….
Rudra couldn’t control anymore and ran and hugged them………they had a Obro moment after a year long and it was a long Obro moment……….
After sometime they parted from the hug and while om and Rudra wiped tears from each eye of Shivaay , shivaay wiped tears of Om and Rudra with both his hands……….
Anika stood there watching them teary eyed…….Mahi was also seeing all this from distance…….
Shivaay saw him and asked him to come to them…….Om hugged Mahi and Rudra too did the same
Shivaay ‘’ho jaaye ek group hug’’
ANIKA SHIVAAY MAHI OM RUDRA HUGGED TOGETHER………….
Later Anika said ‘’Shivaay aap log thodi der baat karo …I will meet Saumya and Gauri ‘’
Shivaay ‘’they too came ? where are they? I will also come to meet them…why didn’t you say this before’’
Anika ‘’Shivaay calm dowm ..they didn’t want to disturb your moments so they are in my cabin…I will meet them …you guys carry on and once you are done with your lovely moments come to my cabin’’
Saying this she left……..
Mahi also got up to leave
Shivaay ‘’Mahi where are you going? ‘’
Om ‘’yes bhai where are you going…stay back’’
Mahi ‘’Om, rudra….you three have been together for many years and this moment belongs to you…I know you have accepted me as your brother but still it will take time for both of us to be on same scale…so live this moment with your Shivaay bhayya…and I am here only…….. I can come anytime and meet you’’
He excused and left from there………
Shivaay ‘’so what’s up …..how is Dadi and prinku?’’
Om ‘’How do you think they will be without you?’’
Rudra ‘’Prinku left for Paris very next day after you left…she is not in talking terms with anyone in house ….she just left…..’’
Shivaay ‘’í know this Rudra…I was in contact with saumya’’
Om ‘’ we came to know about that yesterday that you were in contact with saumya ‘’
Shivaay ‘’wait a minute..first tell me how did you find we are here?’’
OmRu explained what all they did and Shivaay was shocked
Rudra ‘’what did you think bhayya we will not find you…’’
Shivaay nodded his saying ‘’ no..no…I too knew we cannot stay away longer from each other and this time it was very long…very’’ he again hugged them…and said ‘’I missed you both…I missed you very much…I never thought my life would take such a massive turn that I would had to go away from my life…my life…you both ..you both are my life and this is the only truth I will always want to believe’’
Om ‘’so do we and so we have decided we are going to stay with you leaving Oberoi Mansion forever’’
Shivaay was shocked listening to them
Shivaay stood up and said ‘’I am very happy that you both put so much of efforts to reach me…I will also be happy if you stay with me for some days…but it would be wrong if you stay here forever…..’’
Rudra ‘’you don’t want us to stay with you’’
Shivaay ‘’no..no..Rudra I am not saying so….try to understand you have a family there who have expectations from you and if you stay with me who will take care of them? This is wrong Rudra…how to explain you’’
Om ‘’Fine Shivaay I understood what you are trying to say , we will leave but you will also come with us then’’
Shivaay ‘’no Om this is not possible…we cannot come back with you…this is impossible’’
Rudra ‘’why bhayya?’’
Shivaay ‘’there are many reasons…first being I am still illegitimate …secondly bade papa will never accept me…thirdly my business is established here…we are settled here..and so on…..so I cannot come with you’’
Om ‘’but Shivaay’’
Shivaay ‘’om..let’s stop this discussion here..we have just met and till you are with me I want to live each and every moment as we used to be previously…come I need to meet my sisters’’

They all walked with Shivaay holding his brother’s hands on each side towards Anika’s Cabin……….

—————–IN ANIKA’S CABIN

Anika ‘’sorry Soumya and Gauri I am bit late’’
Saumya ‘’that’s ok Bhabhi…are all four fine there?’’
Anika ‘’not four only three..?’’
Saumya‘’but why three?’’
Anika ‘’Sumo…as you both wanted the brothers to have their moments…Mahi too wanted the same so he left early…and regarding your question about all three being fine…….well…if all three meet don’t you think there will not be any drama …this time also the drama had to take place’’
Gauri ‘’drama? What drama?’’
Anika ‘’Om was angry and denied to speak to Shivaay’’
Gauri ‘’what’’ she exclaimed and stood up..
Anika held her hand and made her sit giving a glass of water and smiled ‘’relax Gauri…now everything is settled and they are having their best moments …dadi aiwii says they are Ishqbaaz..in truth they all are dramebaaz’’
Sumo and Anika joked on Shivaay and Rudra while Gauri stayed silent……..after a while Anika looked at Gauri and said ‘’why are you calm? Why are you not cracking jokes on Om? That’s ok ? he is not here now…so you can crack jokes on him’’
Gauri smiled sadly ‘’I have no memories with him to crack jokes on him…..we are not made for each other…we are poles apart’’
Gauri had tears while saying and she cried silently……….Anika understood her pain and made her stand up…she wiped her tears and said
Anika ‘’dekho Gauri…I don’t know the exact reason of tussle between you both…since Sumo didn’t have complete idea of what’s the reason…so she couldn’t say us and in turn we couldn’t know… but trust me we know that Rudra is childish but Om …Om he is very mature and kind hearted….he will not deliberately trouble anyone…not even in his dreams…I know after Tej uncle’s extreme steps he changed but ……’’
Gauri ‘’but DIDI… he hates me……he literally hates me…I tried my level best to know the reason for his hating me…I knew …I knew I stayed as Chulbul but I had no other option…I never wanted to cheat him…he never gave a chance to explain myself…from the day we met in Bareiily he didn’t like me but now he doesn’t even like to see my face…he thinks …I am ..i am a burden in his life…….i know didi he is very kind hearted and I was patiently waiting for him to be atleast polite to me but I am not so lucky….’’ She cried her heart out infront of Anika……..
Anika hugged Gauri and said ‘’if you want we can talk to Om …but we will do this only if you reallyn think we should..…before you decide let me say you something…you both are husband and wife …your married life would be beautiful if a third person doesn’t interfere..not even us ..it will be good if both of you adjust according to each other’s needs….if you try to understand each other and all this is possible if you give time to each other…….my words have the solution to your problem …understand and identify them gauri…..don’t let your beautiful life slip away…’’’
Soumya ‘’Gauri Bhabhi…Anika didi is saying truth…when I left Rudra I thought everything ended but see now everything got fine…you have shown immense patience …now it’s time you show courage…and according to Physics Opposite poles attract’’

Gauri stood in thoughts and decided to be strong………..

Just when Sumo completed her sentence ShivOmRu entered Anika’s cabin……
Sumo ran towards herShivaay bhayya and Shivaay hugged Sumo tightly………
Shivaay ‘’thank you sumo…….you fulfilled my wishes’’
Sumo ‘’nahi Shivaay bhayya thank you…you brought me and Rudra back together’’
Shivaay smiled with her and hugged her again…and held her hand……he turned and looked at Gauri…….
Gauri smiled …….he went to her and placed his hand on her head and lovingly brushed her hair…..
Shivaay ‘’welcome Gauri into our family……I am happy Om was not after a boy…infact the boy was a girl….’’
Om face turned off again………Shivaay looked at him and then looked at Gauri…Gauri was by then looking at the turned off face of Om……
Shivaay cleared his throat and said ‘’Gauri as Prinku and Sumo are to me you will also be the same…since I have not known you much…it will take time for me but I will give you the same affection I give to sumo…I promise this’’
Gauri smiled and thought ‘’Sumo is so lucky….She had the privilege that Shivaay jiju hugged her with affection, an brotherly and friendly love that I am missing badly…..i am still a new comer even after a year and half of my marriage…Ohh Shiv ji why are you doing this with me……..why are you depriving me my rights’’
Anika came to her and spoke as if she read her thoughts ‘’Gauri…Shivaay …your Shivaay jiju will hug you very soon as he hugged Sumo…don’t worry …he is a late latief…he takes time but if he promises he will stand by……’’
Gauri smiled ……………
Shivaay looked at all of them and thought ‘’Wish Dadi and Prinku were also here…my family would have looked complete’’

Precap : good times ahead………..

So this was the thirteenth part …please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad are welcome…I will try to respond as soon as possible…….

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81 Comments
  1. Jerry_36

    Awesone one di…..this is just tooo good. Enjoyed it very much and thank you for posting soon??

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much jerry…….thanks a lot….i am so happy to know you liked it…….

  2. Niriha

    Awesome….fabulous part di loved it to the core eagerly waiting for next update soon
    love you ? ? ? ? ? ?

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Niriha…next update i will post soon dear…keep supporting me like this

  3. Superb update…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much fffan1234

  4. Awesome….
    The OBros Scene was really emotional….
    Anika handles every situation so maturely….
    Hope dat Omri solve their problems soon…
    waiting fr d nxt… 🙂

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shivika…am so happy you liked Obros scene….i will upload next part soon……

  5. Rasika

    Awsm.. ?

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Rasika

  6. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome and beautiful dii… You are doing superbbbbbb…
    With lots of love and care dii….
    Happy weekend…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Nikita…thank you for your awesome support , love and affection…loads of love and best wishes to you too…Happy weekend dear

  7. Haridhra

    Awsm di .. Its going in a Fabulous phase loving it so much..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Haridhra….am glad you are liking it…hope you would like the upcoming epsiodes too

  8. Mehakchalag

    Awesme as always.U fulfilled your promise.Upcoming parts are very intersting how shivaay will go back OM.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Mehak..i will try to keep my promise further too…yeah hope i will make the upcoming episodes interesting …….keep reading and posting your opinions……

  9. Mehakchalag

    Awesme dear as always.U fulfilled your promise.Upcoming parts are very intersting how shivaay will go back OM.

    1. VHM

      Thanks again Mehak……

  10. Awesome update. I just loved it. pls post next part soon. I’m waiting for next update.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Lincy Arnav…i am so happy that you liked this episode…i will post it in a short while

  11. Thank you so much di for posting today ?…
    Finally we got to witness the most awaited OBRO MOMENT… ????????…..
    Di its a small request to you… Can you please mend Gauri and Om’s relation a bit….
    Totally awesome update ? ?….
    Exited for the precap…
    Post soon…..
    ?

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sofita for the awesome opinion…well i will do what you asked for but a little wait is needed…i don’t want to fit the Omri’s relationship mending forcefully so planning to do it with flow of story

  12. U are an amazing fabulous writer.. I am speechless.. U bring out the emotions so well.. I literally had tears in my eyes reading this.. Too good..u knw this story will actually make out to be a good serial! ?. Eagerly waiting for the next part 🙂

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sam…i am also not finding words to thank you…i am just writing this FF based on my crazy thoughts..never ever thought that it can be a good serial …..thank you for the compliments………next part very soon …today itslef

  13. Awesome one ????… Waiting for ur next update ?

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Viji………………………….i will post it next episode today itself

  14. Nida

    U made me cry today .. i was having a great wish to see back my obro moments and u have full filled it … and writing soo flawlessly is a very difficult thing but u did it ??????????????????????????????????

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Nida…i am so sorry dear to made you cry…but i am happy reading your that i fulfilled your wish…..thanks a lot dear

  15. BAVATHARINI BABU

    No words to describe ur ff
    it’s just Amazing…. fabulous…… fantastic…….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Bavatharini babu…..thanks a lot

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much DS…hope you will equally like upcoming episodes

  16. Amazing akka it is great update as soon as possible

    1. Akka u r so sweet plz bring dadi and prinku also this my request hope u don’t mind akka if I ask u like this☺

      1. VHM

        Thank you for the compliment chelli…for your next request i would not answer anything right now…i will just wait for your response on the next shot…..and why will i mind anything..you have every right chelli to ask me anything

    2. VHM

      Thank you so much Sri…will update next very soon

  17. Awesome akka chala chala bagundi neeku oka good news akka ikkada WiFi undi so chedivanu nee ff….????

    1. VHM

      awee thank you so much Vishnu sri……nee good news vini nenu happy ippdu nee opinion neny chadavacchu aa prathi update meeda…..thank you talli so much

  18. Dhar

    Awesome fantastic fabulous amazing and what not , ??????????????? how can you do this, u r just awesome

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Dhar………thanks a lot……i hope i have done something good…….and you too are so very awesome dear

  19. Alekhika20

    Superb updt

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Alekhika20…from awesome to superb…i think i am progressing in your view am i right or am i right? …thanks a lot again

  20. Anu16

    Wow too good…loved it to the core… u made me literally visualize the oberoi moment..it is beautifully written… sorry i won’t be able to comment from tom as I’m going to my grandmother’s house… see u soon…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Anu…..i wanted my every reader to visualise the scenes and it is only you who said that you visualised……that made my day……no problem dear…enjoy your vacation at your grandmother’s house …see you …….

  21. Superbbb episode…..nd again I fell short of words….
    Nd also congratulations for the competition…

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Zaveesha….i too am short of words to thank you for the support and motivation…..your wishes always make my day…thank you for congratulating me for the competition result………

  22. Ashwinee

    Perfection overloaded. You just Nailed it di.
    Eagerly waiting for the next

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Ashwinee….thanks a lot…next shot very soon…today itself

  23. Navz

    Diii….loved d part as much i luv u??????.THE OBEROI BROTHERS LUV AND AFFECTION ARE ALWAYS TREAT TO READ OR SEE.truly dii its perfect..just perfect.
    All emotions are pefectly established and i am also missing dadi and prinku.
    Dii plzz unite omri also as soon as possible.
    Waiting for their confessions.dii will u unite aniri(anika and gauri) also..i mean will u show them as real sisters.??
    Lovely epi dii.
    Sending my luv and affection to u in tons….. chotii signing off.

    1. VHM

      awee Chtii…thank you so much…all your wishes will be fulfilled in upcoming two episodes …just keep reading ……

      Anika and Gauri union i have not thought yet…don’t you think this FF will take too many episodes for me to complete if i plan even that…..

      we will see chotii…if everything goes fine then i will definitely think about that though i cannot promise……..

      thank you for the love and affection darling and sending you loads of best wishes health , prosperity and happiness

  24. Haridhra

    Harika di… U nailed it , this is going in a amazing phase ???..

    1. Haridhra

      Sry di u know something in happiness I read it second time n thought I didn’t comment.. But I hope its fine becoz I’m in a way compensating 4 the epis not commented ??

      1. VHM

        Awee so sweet of you dear…your gesture was so sweet and made me so happy…you read it twice am so gald learning that…and no compensation required dear…i can understand that you might have got busy with your personal and professional life and it happens too…so that’s perfectly fine…….thanks a lot again

    2. VHM

      Thank you so much Haridhra…..thanks a lot………

      1. Haridhra

        Wlcm di… N Congo for the award ???

      2. VHM

        Thank you for congratulating me Haridhra

  25. Ahsana98

    Hai Harika Di sorry for not commenting your ff. Actually I don’t know that it was your ff. Finally you fulfills your promise to coming back with the story of three couple of IB. I’m going to leave TU for one and half month, because of my semester exams. So I thought to read your ff after my come back in TU. But I thought to inform you about my leave. Because you are my one of favorite IB writer. So I go back to the saved pages of my opera mini browser and read all parts. It was an awesome super duper ff. You gives equal importance to all couples .I like your story. Anyone could not think shivika story from meghalaya. You are an amazing writer Di. Your imagination is fantastic. You presented both past and present beautifully. Om bangai smart Singh oberio and finally find his brother shivay after an year. I like the new names of shivay, surprise Singh oberio, sorry Singh oberio. I’m happy that Roumya ‘s misunderstandings was cleared. Shivika are indirectly helped their reunion. I hope that shivika will also clear the misunderstandings between gaury and om.
    And about today ‘s episode it was an emotional episode dear. Oberio brothers meet after an year .The best part of this episode is shivomru hugs after an year. I really miss obros moment in real IB. You always fulfills our wishes to coming with oberio bros moments. I can’t able to read next episode of your ff. I will come back after my exams ends.

    ?✨✨✨
    ???????
    Congratulations!
    Di for winning the 5th position in the os competition.
    Bye Di I will surely read your ff after my come back in TU.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Ahsana for such a long and beautiful comment….don’t worry about this FF i will PM you all the links and you can find it in the message section…..
      Concentrate on the exams and all the best for your sem exams they are and should be your top priority…
      I am so gald you saved the previous ones in your mini browser …how sweet of you….thanks a lot dear …your comment made me feel overwhelmed …i will cherish this opinion of yours when ever i feel demotivated ……
      thank you for congratulating me……i know you will read the FF and i am sure you will perform very good in your exams…take care dear and all the best once again

  26. It’s really lovely….Very senti…..Loved ❤ this ff very much

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Ayissha…thanks a lot…

  27. Fantastic dear keep going…. Waiting for the next one… post it soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sagithya…little more wait and it would appear in the portal…i will also wait for your opinion on the next episode

  28. Perfectttttt???

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Aashiya….thanks a lot

  29. Again an Awesome epi VHM….. U nailed it dear

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Banita…….i am so happy that you liked it

  30. No words to appreciate the depth of emotions you portrayed today. Shivkara reconciliation was truly heartwarming. Eager for remaining misunderstandings (Omri) to clear

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Nitika……i wanted the emotions to be very clear and thoughtful …worked really hard to write those scenes and the response from all of you made me relaxed…i am gald most of you liked it…thanks again

  31. Gayathri.visu

    Good morning diii. How r u?

    Mind blowing di….
    OBRO MOMENT!!! I m really very happy….. Fully emotional!! This is part contains almost all expressions di! Happy, angry, sad, kind of jealous(RiYa), caring, understanding…….
    Its true di, missing Prinku n dadi! Ur description for Shivaay’s cabin n those paintings….awesome di!

    The day before I saw ur msg n Thanks di!
    Excitingly waiting for next part di…
    Have a nice day di!

    1. VHM

      Hey Gayathri…i am doing pretty okay dear…how are you ?

      Thank you so much Gayathri…..yeah Obro moments after long time should be emotional….ohh yeah so you got the message right ..that’s great to know….

      next part very soon dear and then i will wait for all your responses…

      Thank you for the wishes and you too have a nice day !!

      1. Gayathri.visu

        Yes di, I also fine n thanks.

        HAPPY MOTHER’S DAY DI…..

    2. VHM

      Good to know and stay always Happy and blessed…….Thank you for the mother’s day wishes Gayathri……

  32. Amayaa

    Here comes de most awaited moment de most awaited part de most awaited episode of THE PAST AND THE PRESENT -ISHQBAAZ FF
    The most awaited moment REUNION OF THE BROTHERS
    OBROS HUĢ FINALLY
    Di do u know one thing
    Why every TU ishqies who read ffs including me r de fan of u nd ur FFs
    I’ll tell u de reason
    nd de reason is UR UNIQUE WAY OF WRITING ND PERFECT ELABORATION OF EVERY CHARACTER ND THEIR FEELINGS
    It value much
    Nd the most important reason is ESSENCE OF NATURALISM
    Every scene is like naturally happening nd live playing before our eyes

    I m now gonna flattened
    ????????????????
    Di luuuuuvvvvvvvv uuuuuuuu nd luvvvvv ur beautiful creations toooo

    This episode is EPISODE BREAKING
    ALL THE PREVIOUS PARTS ARE MILLION TIMES AWESOME
    Nd THIS PART IS BILLION TIMES AWESOME

    U nd ur FFs r so powerful that it left AIR de buk buk girl speechless

    1 request to u
    My coaching classes r gonna start from tomorrow
    So I’ll not open TU PAGE
    Nd because of this I can’t able to comment too
    But please please please don’t stop sending links
    Whenever I got time during breaks or weekends I’ll surely respond
    Okkkkkkkkkkk
    ???

    1. VHM

      ohh God finally My chirpy Amayaa is back with her khidkitodh comment…..

      Thank you darling for those beautiful lines ……i am so happy you found this good….and i am feeling relaxed that i didn’t disappoint you…i never expected many to like this FF but you all are proving me wrong and this negation is giving me so much of happiness…

      No worry dear go ahead with your classes because education is very important …i will send you the links and whenever you have time and break read them..it’s absolutely fine even if you wouldn’t post your opinion because i now know the reason…..

      Take care and happy reading !!!

  33. VHM dear tumne toh mujhe senti.kar diya…….outstanding. ..post next part soon.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Arpita…mein khud hi senti ho gayi…hayee mein kya karoon…ye saare scenes likhne keliye bahut time laga…finally teen chaar versions likhne ke baad ye wala version upload kiya……..and see so many liked it…thank you so much once again Arpita…thanks a lot…next part very soon

  34. Arthi

    Didi……it was such an emotional part and finally obros are together and their hug and all.was superb and felt bad for Gauri and her longing for her husband’s love and now her Shivay jijus affection and superb di……

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Arthi…….i am gald my hardwork in writing those emotional parts brought it’s worth…so much of appreciation from each one who posted their valuable opinion made me very happy……Gauri’s good time and her wish will also come true…for that you have to read my upcoming episodes…i will wait for your response on the upcoming episodes too

  35. VHM

    Thank you so much Gene…thanks to your brother too…i am happy that you preferred to read my FF and post your opinion too…thanks a lot once again

  36. Nita D

    wow di….its awesome….this episode was totally an emotional roller-coaster ride…..
    even got teary eyed towards the end…..Om’s dialouge, then Anika’s and then Shivaay’s everything was so overwhelming……and then Gauri’s pain…..i really wish no woman has to face this in her real life….kudos to u di….really awesome….

    1. VHM

      Awee so sweet of you to write such beautiful lines dear…yes Gauri’s pain was immense…she needed someone to support and next part will give her the answers…

      Thanks a lot once again dear

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