THE PAST & THE PRESENT – ISHQBAAZ FF -EPISODE 11– ISHQBAAZ FF -EPISODE 11– NEAR YET SO FAR

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Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB…I will deal with all the three pairs of IB ….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….

Recap : Sumo reveals about her contact with Shivaay through mails…..Sumo and Rudra’s misunderstandings get cleared…….Om asks about Anika’s champa……..Sumo let’s them know about it……..

————–IN FLAT NO. 603, RAINBOW APARTMENTS, VERSOVA

Sumo ‘’Om bhayya yesterday night I received a mail from Shivaay bhayya and he asked me to call the garage person and ask him to send the scooty to my apartments…he gave me all the details……when the garage person agrees to deliver ,he asked me to take the delivery and park it in my parking place and return to my house…if not delivered then he asked me to reply him back’’
Rudra ‘’But Sumo…Anika bhabhi’s scooty is not in your parking place anymore…we checked while coming…’’
Sumo ‘’duffer I know that…I waited there without returning home..when I saw a person coming and taking out the scooty and loading it into a van……..’’
Om ‘’did you ask him anything? ‘’

Sumo ‘’no bhayya I tried to ask him but he was speaking to someone over the phone in a language I don’t know ……and he drove away fast’’
Rudra ‘’How will we find now..the only option left is also gone’’
Om ‘’we cannot loose hope and we cannot loose this opportunity to find them, we have to bring them back or atleast meet them, it’s enough… from one year we had been away I can’t bear anymore..’’
Rudra ‘’bhayya what if we track the IP address of the mails sent?’’
Om ‘’Rudra you are forgetting the fact that you are dealing with Shivaay THE SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI…he will never leave any chance that you will track him through IP address…and moreover it will take much time too…because by now the driver might have informed about Saumya questioning him to Shivaay if at all the driver spoke to Shivaay…so this idea wouldn’t work’’
Rumya ‘’yes bhayya…you are right…but what will we do now?’’
Om thought for sometime and said ….
Om ‘’Saumya I know that you couldn’t understand in which language and what that driver was speaking about, but try to remember if you heard any words that you understood’’
Sumo started thinking and finally said ‘’bhayya I am not sure but I heard some ‘’SAMS Restaurant’’ while he was speaking and the Driver yes, he looked like he was from north eastern states of India’’..
Om ‘’that’s it Saumya…thank you…’’
Rudra ‘’but how will we find?’’
Om ‘’sumo get your laptop’’

Rudra ‘’but why Bhayya?’’
Om ‘’Duffer…we will google for SAMS Restaurant in north eastern states of India first’’
Rudra ‘’but with that name there can be many’’
Om ‘’off course , but if we find no clue we will go to each and every SAMS restaurant to find them…I cannot leave my hope though my thinking might sound stupid…….if the north eastern states search fails …I will ask all our dealers and partners and friends to search for SAMS restaurant in entire India…BUT I PROMISE I WILL FIND SHIVAAY’’

Sumo brought the laptop and they googled as per their plan and their faces turned happy because the first google search gave him the details from a local news paper of Meghalaya..which read as
‘’ THE S.A.M.S Restaurant-Our restaurant is located at the Police Bazar area in Shillong Meghalaya..the owner and CEO Mr.Shivaay has been awarded the prestigious BEST ENTERPRENEUR OF THE YEAR AWARD for all the seven Sister states of North-Eastern India on Sunday…Mr.Shivaay spoke about the hardships he faced when he an year ago entered Shillong, Meghalaya without even a penny and how he achieved Success with the help of his wife, brother and brother-in-law…however he did not forget to thank all his family members who laid foundation to achieve this……..he conversed that he dearly misses his Brothers Om and Rudra , his sister Priyanka and his dadi on this occassion……..His Wife Mrs. Anika , his brother Mahi and his younger Brother-In-law Sahil also graced the awards Ceremony to cheer up for Mr.Shivaay…Mr.Mahi is the financial head for chain of Restaurants and looks after the franchise section too…Mrs.Anika is one of the best Event manager in the north eastern states handling the events of bigwigs….Mr.Shivaay requested the CM of Meghalaya to take the award also from the hands of manager of a private bank who initially helped him in setting up the food business….when our reporters tried to know more about his sister, brothers and Dadi..he denied to say anything else about them as it was about his personal life…….scroll down for pictures from the award ceremony………’’
Om scrolled the page and saw all four of them in the pics , so did Rudra and Sumo……
They all jumped in happiness………
Om hugged Sumo and thanked her that it was all because of her that they could find their long lost family…their elder brother……
Sumo hugged back……….
Om called Khanna then
Om ‘’Khanna book tickets for the first flight to Shillong for me , Rudra and Soumya …also ensure that this information should not be known to anyone in Oberoi Mansion..it is confidential’’
Khanna ‘’Sir, can I ask you something if you permit’’
Om ‘’Khanna of course , you had done the best duty and you have right to ask, go ahead’’
Khanna ‘’thank you so much sir, but I was anxious to know did you find any information about Shivaay sir?’’
Om ‘’khanna trust me you will meet Shivaay in few days’’
Khanna ‘’I hope sir, thank you’’

Om ended the call….
Rudra turned towards Soumya and ‘’Sumo, pack your bags we will leave for Oberoi Mansion..tomorrow we have to take first flight to Shillong’’
Sumo ‘’no Rudra..i am not coming along with you’’
OmRu were shocked ‘’but why?’’
Sumo ‘’Rudra once Shivaay bhayya and Anika didi enter Oberoi Mansion I too will join them..till then let me stay here’’
Om pressed Rudra’s shoulder and Rudra smiled sadly…….
Sumo ‘’Bhayya why did you ask to book tickets to Shillong via flight…you could reach there through your chopper’’
Om ‘’saumya…I am sure Shivaay is trying to gift Anika Bhabhi her scooty and as far as I know Shivaay he would have kept it as surprise for her, so the driver would have by now loaded the scooty in Cargo flight to Shillong….as per the Aviation authority rules any vehicle will take atleast half day to be checked before it is delivered to the required address….my plan is to wait in Shillong airport and once the vehicle clearance is received we will deliver it to Shivaay bhayya..in short we will be the delivery boys for Anika bhabhi’s vehicle…..a surprise to Shivaay bhayya too along with Anika Bhabhi Sahil and Mahi bhayya’’
Rudra ‘’wow O ..you have become intelligent staying with me‘’

Om had tears of happiness in his eyes and so was sumo’s condition….Rudra looked at them confusingly……….
Rudra ‘’what happened..you din’t like the joke’’
Om hugged him tight and said ‘’now my baby brother is back to normal…didn’t you understand you called me O not Om bhayya…how I missed this way of calling me’’
Rudra hugged back Om again……
They left to Oberoi mansion waiting for the day to end and new day to start………Meanwhile Om contacted the Airport officials and spoke to them about Anika’s scooty details from Mumbai…his guess was right …the next morning it was scheduled to be delivered to Shillong…..Om requested them to hand over the scooty to him at Shillong airport only after they are satisfied with clearance…..the authorities obliged……..

Rudra went to Gauri’s room and held her hand bringing her out as Om was on call ………he updated Gauri about what all happened and Gauri cried out of happiness….while Rudra was about to go ….Gauri stopped him……
Rudra ‘’yes bhabhi’’
Gauri ‘’I wanted to..woh..woh…’’
Rudra held his Bhabhi by her shoulders and said ‘’bhabhi I understood…I will ask Khanna ji to book ticket for you too’’

Gauri had tears in her eyes…
Gauri ‘’you are the best devar I can have asked for……..thank you…thank you so much…but how will Om ji react…what will he say…he is already angry with me and if I accompany his anger will only double’’
Rudra ‘’bhabhi relax…why fear when Rudy is here…Om bhayya ko mein samjhadoonga’’
Gauri hugged Rudra and Rudra wiped her tears…..
Rudra ‘’bhabhi one day Om bhayya will definitely accept you……and I am sure this will happen very soon…I just want to say only one thing…please have some more patience….once Shivaay bhayya and Anika Bhabhi are back the happiness of this house will return…..’’
Gauri nodded her head in agreement…

Rudra ‘’tomorrow we have to get up early so let’s call the day off and I have to make a call to Khanna ji to book a ticket for you too’’
Omkara heard all the conversation between them standing behind the room door …he thought that his small brother has really grown up big…….but thinking about gauri made him angry…he went to his bed and slept………
Here Rudra texted Saumya and their romantic talks continued……..later they both slept in their respective houses
It was end of the day…………………..

The BIG MORNING ARRIVED………

Om, Rudra, Gauri started from Oberoi mansion and Soumya started from her apartments towards airport after completing formalities …they boarded flight to shilling…and after two and half hours flight they got down…they straight away moved towards Cargo department and met the officials to receive the scooty…….
Here Shivaay also started towards the airport ……

Precap : The much awaited moments

PLEASE NOTE : THE RULE ABOUT CIVIL AVIATION MINISTRY ABOUT DELIVERY OF VEHICLES THROUGH CARGO FLIGHTS IS TRULY FICTIONAL ..I JUST WROTE IT FOR THE FF…

So this was the Tenth part …please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad are welcome…I will try to respond as soon as possible…….

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69 Comments
  1. Awesome dear…. I am so excited for the next episode…. Pls post it soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sagithya ….even i am excited about next episode …i hope i would justify the emotional bonding…well i will post it in few hours from now……thanks a lot once again

  2. That was awesome. Hope Shivika sort out matter between GauriKara quickly…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Fffan1234….i have not yet planned how to clear their misunderstanding …but i am sure i will not forcefully include those scenes it must be something with the flow….thank you so much once again dear

  3. Ashwinee

    Hi di, as always all the 10 parts are just awesome. Waiting for the next one

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Ashwinee…i am gald you liked all the episodes till now..and i hope you will like the upcoming episodes too

  4. Omg omg?the exciting part yet to come.. Seriously cant wait..

    1. VHM

      OMG …OMG…How excited you are …i am like am i seripoiusly writing for a serial…thank you so much Shivika i am so happy reading your opinion

  5. Amazing episode…..
    I really cant wait for next part……..
    plz post next part as soon as possible…..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Aishwarya…even i cannot wait to read all your opinions after i post the next part…..will post it in some hours from now

  6. Awesome epic yaar…keep going like this ??

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much San…sure with all your support i hope i will come up with something better

  7. Dhar

    Another tym u made me speechless, there are some stories about which we can say something or praise but some stories are like that which makes us happy from inside , ur ff is one such story after Enid blyton which makes me happy

    1. VHM

      Hey Dhar …i cannot believe what i just read…you have out me along with a legendary writer and i cannot tell you the feeling i am experiencing…though i am not such a brilliant writer but …Thank you sooooooo much …right now i am short of words to thank you…thank you so much from the bottom of my heart

  8. Shrinidhi09

    Amazing. No words I do not know how to appreciate u

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shrinidhi09…thanks a lot…

  9. Ahaana

    o bete ki matlab omru raita phelane wale h … seriously yrr ek dum khidkitod episode tha

    1. VHM

      Hey Ahaana…haan ab OmRu raita phelakehi rahenge

  10. Wowwww its too interesting..its was awesome writing..???

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Arya….lots of kisses to you too dear

  11. No words akka simply simply awesome amazing interesting super many more toraga update chayye? akka where r u from if u don’t mind say me or else no

    1. VHM

      thank you chelli……thank you so much….i am from Hyderabad, Telangana and Guntur Andhra pradesh…right now residing in Belgium , Europe

  12. awesome update. I just loved it. I’m waiting for next update. pls post next part soon.

    1. VHM

      thank you so much Lincy Arnav…i will today itself probably in next few hours……

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much DS

  13. I am so excited for next episodes…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Anju….i too am excited to read reader’s reactions

  14. Mehakchalag

    Amazing…Finally woh moment jiska hume intezar tha.Plz post next part soon.

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Mehak…haan aaj woh moment le aaoongi ….

  15. Awesome dear, you rocked once again.Superb post next part ASAP can’t wait for next. I am sooooo excited. ..☺

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Arpita….thanks a lot…i will post next part in next few hours…it’s a promise

  16. Akka thondharaga post cheyi akka suspense ni thattukolekapothunnanu pls…. Akka post soon akka?????
    Love u akka
    Gn akka take care……….

    1. VHM

      hey Vishnusri..tvaraga ne post chesthanu…koncham opikapattali…inkonni ghantallo post chesthanu episode

  17. Nida

    ?????? i have to wait for a one day to read my obro moments ?? but no problem i really loved it ..it’s soooooooo great ? incredibly well written ???????????????????????

    1. VHM

      Hey Nida ….oooo.mmmm….yes dear few more hours and i will post it…my episode bank is over and i am still writing so it will take time….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…

  18. Soooooooo excited to see the next part
    Do post soon
    Expecting a lot of obro moments ..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much dear…i hope next part will keep up your excitement levels high too

  19. Amayaa

    Clapping clapping nd clapping ???
    Beautifully written di once again
    Whoa OMKARA is very smart ha
    But between all that
    U mentioned Shivay’s intelligence too with Omkara ‘s one statement
    Nd thank u for that
    U know na my love for Shivay bhaiya ( sisterly )
    Now again a wait for 24 hrs.
    Ab to mujhe ishqbaaz se zaada aapke ff ka wait karna hoga
    The most awaited moment for me for u for all of us
    Ayyo can’t wait more
    This episode is awesome too but de next one will shut my mouth like fevi quick which made me again speechless
    Karl ke liye aaj hi ????????
    Because tomorrow after reading ur ff
    My mouth will not gonna open
    Next part longgggggg longerrrrrrrr longestttttttttt hona chahiye
    Okkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

    1. VHM

      Hey my chirpy Amayaa….thank you so much darling…well now i will reveal something exclusively to you …shivaay and OmRu will not meet in next episode but………something else will happen and am i sure you will love it………..have to keep a bit suspense to you …….

  20. Navz

    Dii…i will be waiting tomorrow’s update.loved this part also dii.i think most emotional and interesting scenes are waiting for me.till then????.
    Repu night varuku wait cheyyala???.parledu entha waiting ayithe antha exciting ga untadi.
    Gn dii.by the way day by day the update is being posted early.??.
    Bye dii.with love ur chotii.

    1. VHM

      Hey Chtoiiii…love you so much darling…even i am waiting for the next shot…though Shivaay will not meet OmRu in the next episode but something exciting will happen and i promise it will be worth reading

  21. Yay Rumya are back together. And Om being SSO(Smart Singh Oberoi) here would surely get back Shivaay and his mini family 🙂 Rudra is too adorable as Gauri’s devar. Always wished for such a bond between O bros and their wives
    PS Sorry for not commenting yesterday due to network issues

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much for posting your opinion Nitika…am so glad you are liking this FF…just uploaded the next shot…hope it appears soon………no worries dear ..you posted today and i am so happy for that

  22. Anujohnson

    OMG so big imagination..my God…you are very talented di…Its my big request..pls write books…you will be a great writer..pls di think of it…pls pls di its my great wish that u start writing books and publish them…

    1. Navz

      Harika dii…i also agree with anu dii..plzz think of it.

      1. VHM

        Awee..thank you so much Chotiii

    2. VHM

      OMG…Such a sweet heart you are…thank you so much for those beautiful words…i donno about publishing books but i would like to write a book probably a muystery thriller….well that’s my long term dream……

      1. Anujohnson

        You have some connection with me..I think by telepathy you understood my thoughts..I am a pure mystery lover…I love famous five and Nancy drew…

    3. VHM

      Awee i usually read Agatha Christie and Irwing wallace books…….well Sherlock Holmes is my favourite of all time

  23. Wow!!!!! VHM it’s just Awesome,,Mindblowing….. Can’t wait more plzzz update soon…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Banita…thanks a lot..i have just uploaded the next shot…hope it appears soon in the portal

  24. Superb epi dear….eagerly waiting for next….

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Lilly…now a two sentence opinion..yuppiee…continue like this …it makes me feel awesome…thanks again dear

  25. Gayathri.visu

    Good morning diiii…..

    OMG!! Its Brilliant….
    Yes, u r right di. Om also very intelligent(but my didi only very intelligent)….
    And yeah now I got my answers about those photos. New rule for Civil aviation ministry…..wow di!!

    Precap!! After Shivaay’s part my most awaited part di.
    But the title NEAR YET SO FAR means……? Its just a title or more than that? This title suitable for only this part or next one also?

    Waiting for next part di….
    HAVE A NICE DAY N TAKE CARE DI…..

    1. VHM

      Good afternoon Gayathri….thanks a lot dear…i am not intelligent yaar…it’s just i am penning down my crazy logical thougts…

      yes i have uploaded the next shot just now…hope it appears soon in the portal….

      Thank you Gayathri and i will but you too take care

  26. Awesome….
    Om is really intelligent…
    Rudra is so understanding….
    Loved it…
    post soon… 🙂

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Shivika…they indeed are …just uploaded the next shot hope it appears soon in the portal

  27. Oh my god…..It’s really amazing……Your story writing is awesome….Plz post soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Ayissha…you r comments are also awesome dear…yeah uploaded next shot just now …it will probably appear in portal in sometime from now

  28. Niriha

    Awesome..fabulous dear I’m so excited eagerly waiting for next update soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Niriha….i too am excited to read all your opinions about the coming episodes………nervous too as if i am awaiting a result…

  29. Anu16

    Wow… it’s so exciting n amazing…shivaay being shivaay has won awards even after starting from scratch…without NKK… a slap on Tej’s face….hope rikara misunderstandings end soon…. post soon…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Anu…Shivaay is the hero of IB so had to make him such…a sure shot slap to Tej…as i said earlier…Gaurikara misunderstanding i have not planned yet how to clear them but i want to do it with the flow of the story not just forcefully placing them…like how i cleared Rumya’s misunderstanding in search of Shivaay………next shot just uploaded hope it appears soon in portal…

  30. Alekhika20

    Superb update

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Alekhika…thanks a lot

  31. Jerry_36

    Really sorry for late comment but Harika di its just awesome. Every time you leave me speechless and I dig hard to find words. This episode was worth it?

    1. VHM

      Hey Jerry …congratulations first for the OS competition……..then second …Thank you so much for the beautiful words that you laid for me…thanks a lot

  32. Nita D

    Episode 10
    i don’t know what to say di, u know how to make me speechless…..
    this Rudra na….pahali baar gussa aa raha hai is par…. now also he isnt ready to listen to her…..but i liked the way sumo stood up for herself…. and after the revelation, the love confession was awww…….????…..but atleast Rumya is back now….they are the cutest….
    oh bete ki……yeh shivaay toh humse bhi chalak nikla….(you were the mastermind of course),atlab pahale sumo ke yahan delivery karvai n then waha se meghalaya….maan gaye….shivaay aur apko dono ko…. it is a dead end now….well said, so near yet so far…

    Episode11
    At SAMS, wah re wah….doobte ko tinke ka sahara…”we will go to each and every SAMS restaurant to find them…I cannot leave my hope though my thinking might sound stupid” it clearly shows the desperation….
    Your description about the Aviation Dept Rules was wow….i almost thought they were real if u hadn’t mentioned in the note at the end…but still….just wow….and Om bhi Shivaay ka hi bhai hai…planning mein Om bhi koi kam nahi….
    Om bhaiya to O, even i didnt catch that. (But di i still wanted to know that why had Rudra started calling Om as Om bhaiya, i mean Shivika’s leaving didnt affect their relation na?)
    Plz sort out things b/w Gaurikara soon….(u must have already done that till now)

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