ME, YOU AND PASSION – Chapter 7

Hi guys! It’s me Anshita back with the seventh chapter of ME, YOU AND PASSION! I’m sooooo sorry for the delay! Had gotten hurt on my left thumb since I’d closed the door tightly on it! It was kinda bleeding and thus, my Mother tied a bandage round it. Since I’m a lefty, I wasn’t able to type much and due to this, I couldn’t write the next episode. Then, had been busy with my sister’s birthday party’s arrangements, shopping and stuff. Hope you all understand and please do forgive me for the delay causedπŸ™πŸ™πŸ™
This one’s dedicated to all my dear friends, sisters, readers, commenters and of course, loyal fans😊😊😊 I’d like to thank you all for your lovely comments on the last episode😊 The way you all had expressed your appreciation towards the episode and my writing skills made my heart melt!😍😍😍😍😍
So let us begin…..

‘I love you Sona!’
‘I love you too Dev!’
‘You won’t be able to believe how frightened I’d get thinking of not having you in my life!’
‘Dev! Shhh! This is just the beginning, we’ve yet gotten a lot to do!’
‘Yes, indeed! We’ve gotten an entire lifetime to spend together now! And we won’t spend a moment wasted on arguments and fights, will we?’
‘Nope, not at all! And that’s a promise,’ said Sonakshi as she entered Dev’s embrace. It was like heaven on earth for her. No, no, this wasn’t like any heaven but sure was her heaven!
‘There was a time when I’d never give a damn to any girl, but now, this girl’s all I can think about,’ thought Dev as he moved his fingers through Sonakshi’s silky and smooth hair.
‘I have changed! Of course I have! A hell lot indeed! And all thanks to this man,’ thought Sonakshi as she gently caressed Dev’s hair,’I learnt the true meaning of love. True love it is called!’

‘Sona! Sona! Sonaaaaaaa!’
‘Kya hua Elina? Abhi-abhi to Dev….’ (What happened Elina? Just now, Dev had….)
‘Oho,’ say Elina while she smirks at Sonakshi, making her go red,’To ab Dev jiju sapne mein bhi, huh?’ (Wow! So now Dev jiju is there in your dreams as well, huh?)
‘Elina! Wo koi jiju nahin hai tere! Aur vaise bhi, mein to Soorya Dev ki baat kar rahi thi!’ (Elina! He isn’t your jiju! And besides, I was talking about the sun!)
‘To ab humari ladli Sona jhoot bhi bolne lagi hai! Awwww! Vaise Sona, teri kal ki date kaisi rahi?’ (So now our dear Sona has started lieing as well! Awwww! Besides Sona, how did your date go yesterday?)
‘Elinaaaaaaaaa! Tu to gayi!’ (Elinaaaaaaaaa! You’re gone now!)

Elina goes running out of the room giggling to herself while Sonakshi is left sitting on the bed and smiling to herself as she recalled the moments she’d spent with Dev last night.

Sonakshi’s POV: Hey bhagwaan! Aamhi ki korcho? Kya main vakayi mein Dev ke baare mein sapna dekh rahi thi? Yeh ho kya gaya hai mujhe? Kya me vakayi mein Dev se pyaar karti hoon? Aur vo bhi itna pyaar? Hey Sona! Tumhi ki korcho, huh? Khud kuch samajh nahin aa raha to doosron ko kya samjhana?! (Oh god! What have I done? Was I really dreaming about Dev? What has happened to me? Do I really love Dev? And that to, this much? Oh Sona! What have you done, huh? How are you supposed to explain this to others when you yourself can’t understand?!)

Just then, interrupting her thoughts, Sonakshi heard her Mother calling out to her to get ready soon and have breakfast. Sonakshi obediently agreed and within a matter of time, she was ready. She’d worn a maroon kurta along with black leggings. She’d decided that from now on, she’d try to dress as simple as she could since she didn’t want to attract attention, especially from Rahul. He had started behaving really weird with her, and ended up making her uncomfortable at times. He’d flirt with her, promise to do whatever she’d tell him to without a reason and would keep on passing lines to her admiring her beauty and her thoughtful thoughts. He’d often offer her out for lunch but due to the incident that’d occurred during their last lunch together, Sonakshi thought of it to be better to rather refuse his proposal than take any further risks. And if at all matters ever seemed to be going out of control, Dev had always been there and would continue to do so, she hoped. He’d been a great help to Sonakshi so far and this irked Rahul. He simply couldn’t manage to see Sonakshi with any other guy, especially Dev. He’d been assuming that there was something going on between the two but always satisfied himself by remembering what Elina had said about Sonakshi, that she didn’t believe in love and was going to go ever-solo.

Soon after breakfast, Sonakshi and Elina left for their college. Meanwhile, Dev and Vicky were on their was to college as well. They’d been talking about the Bose sisters all this morning and were teasing each other.

Vicky: To bhai, aapki kal Sona bhabhi ke saath date kaisi rahi? (So bro, how did your date with Sona bhabhi go yesterday?)

Dev: (lost in Sonakshi’s thoughts) Teri Sona bhabhi ke saath to meri date bohot achchi gayi. (My date went wonderful with your Sona bhabhi) (smiles to himself)

Vicky: (murmurs to himself) Chalo iss bahaane thodi confirmation to mili! (I sure did get some confirmation this way!)

Vicky smiled to himself; partly because he was happy for his brother and partly as he too was busy thinking about a girl, Elina. He couldn’t help but smile when he thought about her, her talks, her voice, her looks, her attitude. He simply loved everything about her. Meanwhile, Dev still hadn’t realised that he’d just addressed Sonakshi as Vicky’s Sister-in-law, and most importantly, as his own Wife. He was to busy recalling last night that he couldn’t simply care less about anything else.

His thoughts were only disturbed when he bumped into a girl as soon as he’d entered the college campus. He decided to speak but simply couldn’t as the girl was way more furious than he was, which probably was the reason why he couldn’t manage to open his mouth. Dev tried, but couldn’t manage to see the girl’s face as it was all covered with her hair while she sat on the ground picking her books and yelling at Dev.

Girl: Uggggh! Tumi ekdom impossible! Pata nahin kahaan dekh kar chal rahe the! Aakhen hai ya button, mujhe nahin pata, lekin itna zaroor pata hai ki agar aakhen hai to vo kaam nahin karti aur agar button hai to….. (Uggggh! You’re completely impossible! Wonder where you’d been looking while walking! I don’t know whether you have eyes or buttons but I do know one thing: if you have eyes, they don’t seem to be working or if you have buttons…..)

Dev: Bas Sona bas! Aur kitna chilana baaki hai? (That’s it Sona! How much more are you going to yell?)

Yes, the girl indeed was our dear Sonakshi, who’d just been screaming at Dev without realising whom he really was. Dev had easily recognised her by her voice and her ‘Tumi ekdom impossible’ line. Sonkashi freezed at her position. She quickly looked up and the look of terror entered her face.

Sonakshi: (stands up) I’m so sorry Dev! Aamhi ki korcho? Mujhe nahin pataa tha ki tum ho varna main aise nahin bolti….(I’m so sorry Dev! What have I done? I hadn’t known it was you or else I would definitely not have said that….)

Dev: (interrupts Sonakshi) Sonaaa! Calm down yaar! Aur vaise bhi, achchi baat hai tum mujhe nahin pehchaan payi varna tumhari yeh pyaar daat khane ko kahaan milti? (Sonaaa! Calm down dude! Besides, I’m glad you didn’t recognise me or else how would I have gotten this lovely scolding of yours?)

Sonakshi passes a sweet smile to him while he reciprocates. Meanwhile, Vicky and Elina spot each other and leave for the class, leaving the two lovebirds behind.

Sonakshi: (looking at her watch) Dev, ab hume bhi chalna chahiye Varna class ke liye late ho jayenge! (Dev, I think we should leave now as well or else we’ll end up getting late for class!)

Dev: Haan, fir chaltein hai! (Yes, let’s go then!)

Both Sonakshi and Dev head towards their class talking about the time they’d spent together yesterday. They both absolutely loved it and simply didn’t understand why those three hours went running. Yet, they considered themselves to be fortunate enough to get an opportunity to spend those three hours, in such a loving and adorable manner. Just as they reached their classroom, well before time, Sonakshi spotted her friends Erina, Ayushi, Ria, Maria, Bhoomi, Azzuu and Yashfeen nearby. She waved to Dev and told him to reserve a seat for her, of course, right next to him as she went to her friends. Yes, those girls had surely become great friends. They sure did like Dev (which girl didn’t?) but they knew that Sonakshi was the ‘only’ one for Dev and nobody in the world could replace her. These friends of hers were kind, cheerful, lively and most importantly, understanding and supportive. Each of them possessed her own charms which made boys admire them.

Erina: Hey Sona! Kya baat hai, huh? Hume bataya bhi nahin ki best friend se kab boyfriend ban gaya! (Hey Sona! Wow, how great, huh? You didn’t even tell us about the transformation of best friend to boyfriend in him!)

Ayushi: Are Erina, choddo na! Vaise bhi, dekho bichari kitna sharma rahi hai! (Oh Erina, leave her dude! Besides, poor her since she’s already blushing so much!)

Ria: Awwwww…dekho-dekho! Aakhirkaar humari Sona sharma hi gayi! (Awwwww…look-look! Finally, our dear Sona has blushed!)

Maria: Haw Sona! Katti! Tune mujhe bataya bhi nahin! (Haw Sona! You didn’t even tell me!)

Bhoomi: Vohi to! Aur dekho ab bhi nahin bata rahi! (Exactly! And see, she yet isn’t telling!)

Azzuu: Are Sona yaar, bata na apni prem kaatha! (Sona, dude, do tell us about your love story atleast now!)

Yashfeen: Haan Sona! Aaj to mujhe bhi jawaab dena padega! Aaj kal love is in the air, huh? (Yes Sona! Even I want answers today! Seems like love is in the air these days!)

Sonakshi: Are yaar!!!! Pehli baat to yeh hai ki vo SIRF AUR SIRF mera dost hi hai…(Oh god! First of all, he thing is that the two of us are JUSR FRIENDS…)

Bhoomi: Sirf friends? (Just friends?)

Sonakshi: Haan-haan, theeke, we both aur best friends! Aur kuch? (Yes-yes, okay, we both are best friends! Anything else?)

Ria: Better!

Erina: Vaise Sona, tum dono saath mein to bohot hi zyaada achche lagte ho! (Sona, besides that, you to look great together!)

Yashfeen: Haan-haan, aur nahin to kya? (Yes, yes, or what else?)

Azzuu: Tumhari chemistry to bohot hi…. (Your chemistry is so….)

Maria: Bohot hi sizzling hai! Trust me Sona, you look glamorous together! (So damn sizzling! Trust me Sona, you look glamorous together!)

Ayushi: Haan! Maanaa Dev Ranbir Kapoor jitna hot aur handsome nahin hai, lekin duniya mein second number pe to aata hi hai! (Yes! I admit that Dev isn’t as hot and handsome as Ranbir Kapoor, but he sure stands second in the list!)

Aaru: (joining the group) Haan-Haan Sona! Aur vaise bhi, iss poore college me koi aisi ladki hai jisse Dev pasand karta ho sivaye tere! (Yes, yes Sona! Besides, there isn’t a single girl in the college whom Dev likes except you!)

Elina: (joining the group) Waah-Waah Sona! Love advice le rahi hai, huh? (Wow Sona! So you’re taking love advices, huh?)

Sonakshi was literally terrified seeing her friends teasing her that way. ‘Do they really know about me and Dev? Do they know whether he likes me? Shall I ask them? No, no Sona! That’ll be to risky! And if at all the answer is no, they’ll still get to know that I like him and then go on spreading the news until it finally riches Dev! I can’t take such a risk, no, I definitely can’t,’ thought Sonakshi while her friends looked at her keenly.

Sonakshi: Ahh…ahh…umm…Aisa kuch bhi nahin hai! Kuch bhi nahin! Na to vo mera boyfriend hai, na to vo mera hone vala pati hai aur na vo mera sizzling aur hot aur handsome partner hai! Aaru, duniya mein ladkiyon ki kami nahin hai jo Dev mujhe pasand karega! Aur Maria, aisa hai hi kya jo main tujhe nahin bataati? Aur jahaan tak baat humari chemistry ki hai, to vo zero hai zero! Azzuu, Yashfeen aur Bhoomi, mujhe maaf karna! Bohot badi galati ho gayi! Koi pyaar-vaar ka chakkar nahin hai! Aur Erina, tujhe to main keh-keh ke thak chali ki mere aur Dev ki beech mein kuch nahin hai magar tune to kabhi haar hi nahin maani!Aur tu Aayushi, jab dekho Ranbir-Ranbir karti rehti hai! Dekh, Dev ek taraf hai aur Ranbir ek taraf! (Ahh…ahh…There is nothing such as that! Nothing at all! Neither is he my boyfriend, my going-to-be-husband or my sizzling, hot and handsome partner! Aaru, the world isn’t facing the scarcity of girls that Dev will find me to love! And Maria, is there any such thing that I don’t tell you? And as far as it is about our chemistry, then it’s a zero, a big zero! Azzuu, Yashfeen and Bhoomi, kindly forgive me! I’ve committed a huge mistake! Of course, there is no topic of love around! And Erina, I’m tired of telling you that there isn’t anything between me and Dev but you never seem to be giving up! And you, Ayushi, you’re always seen stuck saying Ranbir-Ranbir! Look, Dev is on one side and Ranbir on the other!)

Elina: Haaaw! Dekho to! Ranbir ek taraf aur Dev ek taraf! Matlab Dev humari Sona ke liye Ranbir se to bohot hi zyaada zaroori hai! (Haaaw! Look at her! Ranbir on one side and Dev on the other! That means that Dev is way more important over Ranbir to our dear Sona!)

All the girls (except for Sonakshi) start giggling. They were having a lot of fun seeing Sonakshi’s expression while they teased her. They all knew a bit too well that Sonakshi definitely was boiling from the inside, but she wouldn’t protest much, after all, if not the whole, there still was something part of it true and she was well aware of it.

Sonakshi: Elinaaaaa! Tu to gayi! Tujhe chodoongi nahin ab main! Tujhe to apna Vicky bohot pyaara hai na? (Elinaaaaa! You’re gone! I won’t spare you now! Isn’t your Vicky dear to you?)

Elina: (blushes) Aaa..aa..Nahin! Aisa..aisa…ku..ku..kuch bhi..to nahin hai! Tu bhi na Sona Dev jiju se pyaar me kya hogayi ki ab har jagah pyaar hi dikhta hai! (Aaa..aa..No! There..there…is..is..is no..no such thing! After falling love with Dev jiju, you seem to be seeing love all around Sona!)

Sonakshi: Elina! Tujhe kitni baar bataao ki Dev tere….. (Elina! How may times do I have to tell you that Dev…..)

Sonakshi’s words were interrupted as someone hugged her from the back, making her blush. The expression on her face was worth a view and it could be seen by all present there. She was surprised by the sudden happenings. She didn’t know who it was at the back, yet the touch felt familiar to her, something known or rather desired. She turned back to see who it was and was shocked to see who stood in front of her, who’d been hugging her all these few seconds.

Sonakshi: D..D..D…Dev…tu..tumi..tumi ki..ki korcho? (D..D..D…Dev…w..what..what have you done?)

Yes, the person was indeed Dev and to Sonakshi’s surprise, he stood still infront of her with a bright smile on his face. He wasn’t ashamed was he? No. The look on his face could simply tell that rather than being shy, he was proud. But what was he proud of? Thought Sonakshi. But poor her, since she didn’t have the slightest idea of what was making Dev so proud. She simply couldn’t think of what was to be his most precious possession. Would it be me, she thought but considered it to be a rather irrelevant thought. Meanwhile, all of Sonakshi’s friends stood still watching the couple look into each other’s eyes and communicate through them.

Dev: (turns around facing his friends, leaving his back facing to Sonakshi) Yes, so this is the girl I’d been talking about ever since. Meet her my dear friends, my best friend as well as my most prized possession whom I simply can’t afford to lose, Miss.Sonakshi Bose (looks at Sonakshi and passes a warm smile).

Sonakshi was taken aback by Dev’s recent words. Was all this real? Or was she stuck in her dreamworld yet again? She wondered whether she herself was real currently. She couldn’t manage to utter a word, although she wasn’t required to either. All she could do was stare at Dev with a puzzled look on his face.

Sonakshi’s POV: Oh god! What did Dev just say? Did he just introduce me to his friends that way? I’ve never seen a guy choosing a girl over his best pals except for if the girl truly means a lot to him. Wait! What did I just say? I ain’t really important to Dev, am I? Besides, he referred to me as his most prized possession as well. MOST PRIZED POSSESSION. Seriously? What would I have said if the same question was asked to me? Would I have chosen Dev? Dunno. Or, would my answer be straightforward choosing my passion-cum dream, singing over Dev? Well, that be a bit too mean then, wouldn’t it? On one hand, there’s this guy Dev whom I badly love but then, on the other side, I’ve gotten my passion. Would Dev really stand a chance in front of my dreams? I dunno this one either. I know too well that even Dev has a few dreams he so badly wants to fulfill, but, he chose me over all of them, didn’t he? He is a really determined person, maybe not as much as me, but he sure is one. If he can choose me over his dreams, why can’t I? Don’t I love him? Or is it just an obsession? Oh dear, I do fear that it’s just an obsession now! Or else, if I truly loved Dev, I would’ve told him that he was what mattered the most to me when he’d asked me that question last night. Dev deserves all the happiness which can be found. He deserves to get his true love. But, I’m afraid that it just isn’t me. I don’t deserve this man, who’s willing to give his everything just for me! Uhhh! Sona, you’ve gotta be really wise now.

All this while Sonakshi had been thinking to herself, Dev had been busy speaking to his friends and introducing them to Sonakshi. Once in a while, Sonakshi would pass a smile or greet them but then again, she’d get carried off with her thoughts. Throughout this time, all of Sonakshi’s friends couldn’t believe what was happening in front of their eyes. They all came up with a conclusion: Sonakshi meant more than anything in the world to Dev. Actually, more than the world itself. They thought that it’d be wise enough of Sonakshi to take their relation to the next step, or atleast make this a really firm one. They knew Sonakshi really well, although not as much as Dev, but Elina sure did know that Sonakshi’s dreams meant everything to her and she wouldn’t be surprised if Sonakshi chose them over Dev. Therefore, she decided to warn Sonakshi and tell her that it’d be better if she gives a chance to this relationship, for there was one things about Dev which Sonakshi was completely unaware of- He’ll love you like nobody else can, but if you break his heart, he’ll trouble you and hurt you like nobody else can.

The bell rang and everyone ran into their respective classes. From then on, the day went quite smoothly. However, it was really dull for both Dev as well as Sonakshi since Sonakshi had been avoiding him a bit. A real bit. But that bit was badly hurting both of them. Thankfully, Dev considered this unusual behaviour of Sonakshi’s either due to the pressure of their work load in school or maybe because she was stuck back thinking about last night. Yes, they both loved last night and it’d been the best night ever spent by the two. And Dev considered it absolutely fine from Sonakshi’s side to be thinking about the night, as he too, couldn’t digest the fact that so much had happened between them and they were still ‘friends’.

The hearts were inseparable for a moment, but it seems, there’s some trouble awaiting Dev and Sonakshi. Is Sonakshi really not worth Dev? Is her love not really love but just obsession? Weren’t the two made for each other? Will this behaviour of Sonakshi really force Dev to show his rough and harsh side? And lastly, will Sonakshi be able to ever choose Dev over her dreams? Seems there is a lot to happen, or will there bond help them overcome all obstacles? Looking at the current situation, it doesn’t seem that things will be easy for these two hearts to join. Will the two souls be able to become one forever?

To know more, stay tuned to ME, YOU AND PASSION by Anshita.

So how was it??? I assume this chapter has really disappointed you but I’m simply following my storyline. If it was up to no good, then please do forgive meπŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ™πŸ™ I know everyone would only want to see Dev and Sonakshi living happily together but…
Kindly excuse me for typos!

However it is, do drop in your suggestions and comments!
With love,
Anshita😘😘😘😘😘😘

54 comments

  1. DevSona

    |Registered Member

    FABULOUS EPISODE…When I first read their convo I was like YES! They proposed…wow….but then BOOM! it was just a dream πŸ™ Sona is so confused between Dev & her career…please Sonakshi, don’t overthink it and tell him your true feelings….you can sort out things later…just be together…FOREVER… πŸ˜€ πŸ™‚

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you soooooo much!!!
      Well, I’m glad you liked that part except for the fact that it was just a dream😁😁😁
      I’ll definitely convey your message to Sonakshi! Hope she understands!
      Loads of love!😘😘😘😘😘

  2. Ali

    |Registered Member

    Γ gain a wonderfully epress epi.truly speaking i am waiting for ur ff.truly speaking that each and every single word of ur ff is beautifully describe.
    sorry to hear that u r hurt.take care.
    and thank uuuuuuuuuuuuu……..
    for a fabulous ff.

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you soooo much for remarkable comment!
      Honestly, I can’t explain how happy I am reading your comment! The way you expressed your appreciation towards my FF made made a feeling of excitement pass through my spine!
      Well, I sure am hurt but that doesn’t stop me from pleasing my audience! Besides, your warm wishes sure have been helping!😊😊😊
      And please, don’t thank me! The pleasure is all mine!☺️☺️
      Take care!

  3. Maleeha

    |Registered Member

    amazingly superb……..epic one……πŸ’–πŸ˜˜πŸ’—πŸ’Ÿβ€πŸ’˜πŸ˜πŸ’žπŸ˜‹β€πŸ’•πŸ’˜πŸ’•β€πŸ’‹πŸ˜πŸ’–…….Awesome…….πŸ’“πŸ˜˜πŸ’ŸπŸ’–πŸ’•πŸ’˜πŸ’‹πŸ’žπŸ‘πŸ’Ÿ…….

  4. Pooja26

    |Registered Member

    awwwww loved it !!!!!!
    superb chappy…… πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

    hand is injured & itna likh liya…….
    better u tc………

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you soooo much!!!
      I’m so happy you liked it!
      Are di, getting injured doesn’t make me stop from pleasing my audience!πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
      I’ll take care!
      Loads of love!😘😘😘😘😘

  5. sami

    hi
    hows ur hand now
    hope u r ok
    coming to episode ijust loved it
    I just cant understand from where u get such fantastic ideas
    love u
    post soon
    sermistha

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you sooooo much Sermistha di!!!
      Well, my hand is way better nowπŸ™‚πŸ™‚ Just that I’ve still gotta be carefulπŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…
      I’m so happy to see that you liked the chapter!
      All your lovely comments make me feel the urge to think of ideas and then finally, I come up with something presentable….☺️☺️☺️
      I’ll try my best to post soon!
      Loads and tons of love!😘😘😘😘😘

  6. Maria

    |Registered Member

    Wow! is just the word coming out now!! really awesome, amazing, fabulous… and please take care of your hand..
    love you πŸ™‚

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you soooo much for your lovely comment Maria di!
      I’m really happy to see that you liked it!
      Yes, I’ll take care and I bet your warm wishes will work out!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰β˜ΊοΈβ˜ΊοΈ
      Loads of love to you!😘😘😘😘😘

  7. Heshine

    |Registered Member

    Wow…..Anshita dear its juz awesome……πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’“πŸ’“loved it …no words to explain ……its really beyond the level dear…..πŸ’œπŸ’›and amazing…..u r really a awesome writer …..wanna say this…..πŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’žπŸ’and take care of ur thumb finger dear….OK??!waiting fr the next post…..eagerly……!!!!☺😊☺ Get well soon…..πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜—πŸ˜˜πŸ˜—πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜—πŸ˜˜luv u…..😍😍😍
    Heshine…!!!

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you sooo much di!!!
      I’m so overwhelmed seeing your comment!!
      I’ll definitely take care of myself, however it won’t possibly be able to prevent me from pleasing my audienceπŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š
      I’ll try to post the next one as soon as I can!
      Love ya!😘😘😘😘😘😘

  8. Azzuu

    |Registered Member

    as i started reading i got it that sona was dreaming ovio hai love storys are not so easy and tum toh itne jaldi story khatam karogi nahi
    by the way it was faab and when i read my name i was like what is this girl up to
    i hope ur fine now and as ur exams are over u willl be posting daily
    waiting for the trouble in devakshis life
    post asap

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Well, seems like you could crack up the mysteryπŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…
      And yeah, main itni jaldi tum sabka peecha nahin chodoongi😈😈😈😈
      I’m so glad to see that you liked the episode!
      Yes, I’m way better now!
      Well, I definitely can’t assure you with daily updates but I’ll try to be as frequent as possible!
      Love ya!😘😘😘😘😘

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you sooooo much Dolly di!
      I’m so glad to hear that you liked the episode!
      Loads of love!😘😘😘😘😘

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you soooo much dear for your hear touching comment!!☺️☺️
      I feel so blessed to have readers like you!
      I’ll definitely try to post as soon as I possibly can!
      Love ya!😘😘😘😘😘

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you sooo much dear!
      Your comment makes me feel that my efforts were worth a tryπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
      Loads of love to you!😘😘😘😘

  9. Juhi

    Liked itπŸ‘πŸ‘ but…..


    Luved it more….😍😍
    Hey howzit…
    Awsm episode. …
    Though after reading it I M a bit like kaash Sona dev ko upar rakhti…
    And everyone wud want typical Devakshi union
    But the superest and uniquest part is that u gave the story from sonakshi’s point of view
    And infact Every forward modern girl won’t like to be crumbled off and thrown into the perfect tangle of responsibilities of great value but no worth….
    For boys relationships marriage love etc doesn’t act to be any hurdle in their mind set their passion their career their success and all the other dreams of them… of course if the green paper support them..
    For the girls first their targets and dreams get merged with that of the hubby then it gets inferiored and then finally gets deleted
    Sometimes through financial problems sometimes through social sometimes through emotional and mostly through innumerable social conventions..
    I’m not saying that it’s a fault of the male society but rather of an age old stereotypic notion of girls as inferior…
    So girls shudn’t compromise with their potentials their dreams their targets and their purpose of being born on this earth which absolutely is not JUST serving as a servers of their husbands and in laws…
    In fact in the real series of Krpkab also Sona’s independence is snatched away and in place of showing girls at par with boys in all aspects its brought down to the typical saas bahu melodrama…

    Anyways, I M sorry for posting an entire volume on GENDER EQUALITY
    Your story and way of writing as I have mentioned earlier too is totally awesome. ..In fact so very awesome that it compelled my fingers to come up with a comment as long as the episode. ..
    And take care of Ur SELF and ur finger too..
    Hpy B day 2 ur sister….
    I m totally mesmerized reading it and have no words to admire it…
    Just three words “KEEP IT UP”
    I m really sorry if I’d hurt anyone and these are just my own practical interpretations and I don’t at all meant to hurt ….

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you sooooooooooooooo much for your lovely comment Juhi di!
      I’m happy to see that you appreciate Sonakshi’s way of thinking currently and her bold stand towards her dreams and career.
      Yes, I do agree that marriage is nothing for boys as much as it matters for girls, for it is the girls who end up having to make most of the sacrifices.
      And yes, after a marriage, the chances of achieving her dreams slightly leases for most of the girls.
      Coming to the real series, I definitely do feel that this Sonakshi isn’t the one whose self respect we appreciated. I feel the makers should rather consider getting us the old Sonakshi back.
      Besides, I seriously didn’t mind your comment on gender equality. Infact, I’m glad to see that you could express your concern over the topic.
      Coming to my FF, thank you soooo much for appreciating my skills! I feel blessed to have such wonderful readers like you!
      And yeah, I’ll definitely take care and you too!
      Thank you for your warm wishes to my Sister! I’ll definitely pass them on,
      I’m really thrilled seeing your appreciative response towards my writings!
      And di, you haven’t hurt anybody, I believe, or atleast, definitely not me!
      Loads and tons of love to you!😘😘😘😘😘

  10. Juhi

    Liked itπŸ‘πŸ‘ but…..


    Luved it more….😍😍
    Hey howzit…
    Awsm episode. …
    Though after reading it I M a bit like kaash Sona dev ko upar rakhti…
    And everyone wud want typical Devakshi union
    But the superest and uniquest part is that u gave the story from sonakshi’s point of view
    And infact Every forward modern girl won’t like to be crumbled off and thrown into the perfect tangle of responsibilities of great value but no worth….
    For boys relationships marriage love etc doesn’t act to be any hurdle in their mind set their passion their career their success and all the other dreams of them… of course if the green paper support them..
    For the girls first their targets and dreams get merged with that of the hubby then it gets inferiored and then finally gets deleted
    Sometimes through financial problems sometimes through social sometimes through emotional and mostly through innumerable social conventions..
    I’m not saying that it’s a fault of the male society but rather of an age old stereotypic notion of girls as inferior…
    So girls shudn’t compromise with their potentials their dreams their targets and their purpose of being born on this earth which absolutely is not JUST serving as a servers of their husbands and in laws…
    In fact in the real series of Krpkab also Sona’s independence is snatched away and in place of showing girls at par with boys in all aspects its brought down to the typical saas bahu melodrama…

    Anyways, I M sorry for posting an entire volume on GENDER EQUALITY
    Your story and way of writing as I have mentioned earlier too is totally awesome. ..In fact so very awesome that it compelled my fingers to come up with a comment as long as the episode. ..
    And take care of Ur SELF and ur finger too..
    Hpy B day 2 ur sister….
    I m totally mesmerized reading it and have no words to admire it…
    Just three words “KEEP IT UP”
    I m really sorry if I’d hurt anyone and these are just my own practically interpretations and I don’t at all meant to hurt ….

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you once again!
      And yeah, I’d decided to bring ahead this story while keeping all of Sonakshi’s thoughts, concerns and fears in mind. And I’m happy to see that you like it the way it is!
      Love ya!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Np di!
      Besides, I’m glad that you could shower your love and affection twice on me!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
      Love😘😘😘

  11. Manya

    |Registered Member

    Hey Anshu can I call u that??so it will not be right if I just write one word for this episode and sorry if it’s a lil long and boring😁U can’t imagine my happiness right now!!!i wish it had an audio system😝
    Coming to the ff u write so well at such a small age u can be a writer in future like seriouslyπŸ˜‹πŸ’˜it is just not a compliment but lot more than that❀️❀️
    And that was so sweet of u by using our namesπŸ’žπŸ’ž
    And especially RANBIR’SπŸ˜πŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’Ÿ
    And that line ki jab Dekho Ranbir Ranbir karti rehti hai is usually said to me on a daily basisπŸ˜œπŸ’“
    To uβ€οΈπŸ’ŸπŸ’žπŸ’˜πŸ’˜β£πŸ’—πŸ’•πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ’–πŸ’πŸ˜‹πŸ˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’žπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’žπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’πŸ’žπŸ˜β€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’
    Ur ffβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’˜πŸ˜πŸ’•β£β£πŸ˜˜πŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’—πŸ’πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ’–πŸ’˜β€οΈπŸ’ŸπŸ’“πŸ˜πŸ’•
    Post soon❣❣
    Eagerly waitingπŸ’Ÿ
    Love loveπŸ’πŸ’ŸπŸ’žπŸ’“πŸ’–πŸ˜

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Hey Ayushi!
      Yes, you can definitely call me Anshu😊😊
      And one thing: All comment received by me from my dear readers may be small or big, but I love all of them☺️☺️
      Awww…thank you sooo much for your kind words!
      But di, guess being a writer isn’t my cup of tea!πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜…πŸ˜… Yet, I consider it to be a remarkable comment received by me from a dear reader of mine😊😊
      I’m glad you noticed it! The moment I thought of you, RK immediately popped in my mind!
      Well, I agree what trouble we have to face when we’re a huge fan of someone!
      After all your loved conveyed to me, all I can say is: I LOVE YOU!!!!!
      I’ll try to post as soon as I can!
      Loads and tons of love to you!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

      • Manya

        |Registered Member

        Thanku thanku yeh toh bahut achi baat ahi RK Mera favourite haiπŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’
        And how is ur hand now??take care of urself yaarπŸ’Ÿ
        Love love πŸ’“

      • AnShIta

        |Author

        Hehehe!
        Well, when it comes to actors, my favourite ones include SRK and RK😍😍😍
        I badly love both of them!
        My hand is all perfect now! And that’s all thanks to your lovely, warm wishes!
        Love ya!😘😘😘😘😘

  12. Niki

    Hi dear Anshi!!! It was so awesome!!!
    Just waiting for DevAkshi love confession ❀️😘
    But for now I want to enjoy Dev and Sona’s amazing friendship…..
    And ya, continue writing and keep up the good work😘😘
    Love u very much,
    Niki

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Hey Niki di!
      Thank you soooo much for your lovely comment!
      I’m happy to hear that you’d want to enjoy Devakashi’s friendship for now☺️☺️☺️
      But, confession is one thing I can’t guarantee you with!🀐🀐🀐🀐🀐
      Love ya!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  13. Bhoomi

    |Registered Member

    Loved it to the core…😘😘 U described it very beautifully … I love your writing skill😘.. Sona is Devs most prized possession aww so cute😍….
    Hehe Sona ki leg pulling main bada maja aaya mujhe πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚….
    Fantastic ….😊
    Love ya 😘

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you sooooo much Bhoomi di!!!
      I’m so happy to see that you like my writing skills, including the description ☺️☺️
      I’m glad you enjoyed teasing SonakshiπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      Once again, thank you sooo much for your lovely comment!
      Loads and tons of love to you!😘😘😘😘😘😘

  14. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Hey Anshita,
    Well, I know I’m late. I wasn’t in the mood to read anything yesterday because of my ff response.😭 After that, entire morning I was busy with my test preparations though it didnt go that we’ll.

    Anyways, yours is the first article I’m reading on this page. Believe me, it was just splendid! Frankly, I was wondering how come Sonakshi’s not even for once thinking about her career. Doesn’t it oppose her character? But, you’ve set things normal. I’m so happy reading this chapter, not because DevAkshi aren’t being the lovey-dovey couple but, because Sonakshi didn’t change herself.

    Well, take care of yourself and enjoy tonight. Try posting soon but, ofcourse when you’re all fit and fine.

    Loads of love.πŸ’ž

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Hey Ria di!
      No problem for being late di! I understand! Coming to your ff response, di, trust me I do love it!
      I’m glad to see that you like Sonakshi’s character along with the bold stand retaken by her for herself…
      Thank you so much for your wishes! Yes, I sure did enjoy tonight! How I wish I’d get a chance to meet you all at a party!
      I’ll definitely try to post soon! And di, my injuries shouldn’t be causing a problem for me when it comes to pleasing the audience, so I’ll leave that aside…
      Love ya!😘😘😘😘😘😘

  15. Erina

    |Registered Member

    I have just stole some moment to read my swtheart ff nd trust me its superb, commendable, amazing, lovely, cuteee nd funny too for me. So this is for my swtheart πŸ‘‰πŸ’πŸ’žπŸ’ŸπŸ’“πŸ’–πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜nd this is for her ff πŸ‘‰πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
    Hahaha hey swtheart! Kya baat h hua? Mjhe bataya bhi nhi ki mai sona ki friend kab ban gyi????? πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜œπŸ˜πŸ˜œπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
    Jab tmne mera naam use kiya mjhe lga by mistake tmne elina ko erina kr diya h but seriously it was awesomeeeee surprise for me nd i really loved that part bcse most of them r my sweetu frnds nd whom i don’t know u connected them to me……
    Coming to ur ff its awesome, commendable and adoreable epi swtheart nd i don’t think ki story me sirf happy hi things hote hai ya i like to see them together but its not necessary bcse mai unke sth happy v hona chahti hu, to unke sth sad v hona chahti hu nd i will always love to see what u hve thought to….. So go for it swtheart nd i trust that jitna mjhe abhi happy feel ho rha h mjhe uthna hi uss time v feel hoga bcse i trust my swtheart nd believe her… πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜„πŸ˜„
    Mjhe jitna v free time mila tha maine usme comment kiya bcse u know why…. So till then take care nd love u swtheart… Post soon whenever i will stole some moment i will definitly read nd comment….
    take care of urself swtheart whats this u have hurt ur hand i’m very much upset 😞😞😞😞with u for not taking care of urself
    With loads of love to my swtheart 😘😘😘😘😘😘

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      First of all, without eating much time, I’d like to say: I LOOOOOVEEEE YOU ERINA DI!!!!
      I always feel so amazing after reading your comments!
      I’m so delighted to see that you liked the surprise! It was for my dear friends and sisters, of course!
      Well, despite the story’s track, I’m glad to know that you yet continue to support me! I feel blessed to have such friends like you! You’ve become such important people for me in no time! Awwww…and I love you for that!<3
      Hearing that you trust me makes me go all red! I'm soooo madly in love with you and your sweetness di!
      I completely understand your situation and thank you for taking out your precious time to read my writings!
      I'll definitely try my best to post soon!
      Awww..I'm so sorry di! Pakka se I'll take care of myself from next time! Abhi to I've twisted an ankle of mine…but don't worry, it'll be fine in no time with all your lovely wishes!
      Loads and tons and tons of love to my dear Erina di!πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’

      • Erina

        |Registered Member

        Kya my swtheart loves me for this only😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒……… Swtheart ab mai apko kehti hu god ne apko y khubsurat si eyes kyu di h haan???? Plzzz take care of urself nd ur comment also bring big vala smile on my face nd i always love to read ur comment…. 😘😘😘😘😘😘
        @Urs erina di loves u more than how much u loves me 😍😍😍😍😍

      • AnShIta

        |Author

        No, no di! I not only love you for all these comments, but for being such an amazing and sweet person as you are! And most importantly, for being such a lovely and adorable Sister to me!😊😊😍😍😍😘😘😘☺️☺️☺️
        Okay! Ab se I’ll definitely take care of myself varna aap mujhe daatna! Pyaari si daat khaakar mujhe bohot achcha lagega πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
        I too, love you a lllllloooooootttttttt!!!!!!!πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’

  16. Yashfeen

    |Registered Member

    Heya…hwz lyf???
    I hope u r fine and ur thumb is ol gud as itna lamba n nuy ff…tussi cha gai..n hw did ur xmz went??
    The dream ws jst beautiful but at frst i thought tat did i missed an epi but thn it striked tat, man..its anshita’s ff…readers cnt miss it..
    Seriously i ws really very busy..thr4 nly cudnt catch up wid ur ff on tym but thn erina msged me n tld tat thrs a surprise fr me n asked me to read soon…so i any hw left ol wrk n read d ff n found d surprse…thnk u sooooo much dear for mentioning us as sona’s frns…bt yr ek do ko dev ki bhi frn bana deti( dev’s fan)….
    Well..coming back to d ff…it ws as usual osum…long chats, perfect dream…bt weird behavior of sona (angry on hr)…m seriously disappointed by hr behaviour..hw cn be she so cnfused…yr itna pyaar krti hai bt decide ni kr pa rahi..kya kru ye cheez achi ni lagti n thr4 hr comment mein mention krti hoon…i feel pity n angry on hr..nd ya plzzzzzzz dont turns dev into rough or rude dev…hes a man of soft n calm nature..cool dude n cnt be rough…he cnt hurt someone..he seems to b a kind hearted man…so plzzzz dnt make hm rude..n plzzz ff mein sona ko thodi satbuddhi do…sona is dev’s prized possession he cn do anythng to fulfill hr wsh….buddhu ko ye samjh ni aata
    Bt ol dese r my suggestions..n i knw wt u have planned vl b perfect…
    So cntinue dear
    N do take care
    Stay blessed

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Hey Yashfeen di! Life’s doing great for me after my exams!
      My thumb is way better now! The only problem is: I twisted my ankle today during my sister’s birthday party! Ugggh! It sure does hurt but I’ll definitely manage!
      Well, my exams actually turned out to be pretty good! Except for the fact that they were waaaayyyy too lengthy!
      Awwww…I’m so overwhelmed seeing your affection towards me! The line ‘it’s Anshita’s ff and readers can’t miss it’ made me smile like an idiot to myself! Love you for that!
      I’m really glad to see that you liked the surprise! It was for my dear friends!
      Coming to the ff, yes, Sonakshi is currently amongst the most confused people on land and is going through a terrible state if mind deciding between her dreams and her love. Yet, it is time that’ll tell us what she chooses and how it effects her life and as well as Dev’s….
      I’ll definitely take care and you do too!
      Loads of love!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

      • Yashfeen

        |Registered Member

        Its gud tat finally xams r over…nw we cn get chance of reading ur ff sooon….ya lengthy schedules of xams r headache..bt 3to 4 days r needed to b perfect in d sub…n dear do take care of every thng..n ur sis birthday ws on 16 ryt??
        N its a fact..I jst try to read ff of ol gud writers…so u r 1 among dem….
        So take care…be happyhappy n turn up widn wid d 8 part..
        Cya…

      • AnShIta

        |Author

        Yes, it definitely is wonderful that me exams have finally come to an end after all the trouble they’ve caused me! I’ll definitely try to be more regular now! Although I can’t provide you wo guarantee for the same as I might get involved in other activities as well during my vacations, which will be starting on 26th…
        And yes, on a minimum, 3-4 days are surely required before one can finally think freely and get rid of all those thoughts related to exams! For now, I’m so screwed up thinking about my results! We’ve gotten a few today, which I’ve really scored well in, and the rest are to be given tomorrow…I hope that my results do turn out to be good! We have papers worth 80 marks and in the results I’ve gotten today, I’ve scored 75+ in all subjects except one..Hope things so the same way tomorrow as well!
        Yeah, my sister’s birthday was on the 16th but we had her party held yesterday, right after my exams so that I too would be able to enjoy thoroughly and get my mind refreshed!
        Awwww…I’m so happy to see your appreciation towards my writings!
        I’ll be back soon, hopefully…!
        Loads of love!😘😘😘😘

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