ME, YOU AND PASSION – Chapter 3

Hi guys! It’s me Anshita here! I’m back with the third episode of the series.
Honestly, I couldn’t believe the number of comment I’ve received so far for all my posts😡😡 Especially the number of comments I received for my fist and second episodesπŸ™‚πŸ™‚ It was truly UNBELIEVABLE!!!πŸ˜΅πŸ˜΅πŸ˜΅πŸ˜΅πŸ˜΅πŸ˜΅πŸ˜˜πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡
I look forward for the same response to my further articles. Of course, if they’re good enough😊😊 Once again I’d like you all to kindly answer this question of mine: Do you find the storyline catchy and interesting enough or would you recommend a few changes? Kindly reply in order to lemme know if I should continue with the current storyline or add a few changes to it. Do drop in your suggestions and/or complaints without any hesitation😊😊😊 I’d better get started before it’s too late! One more thing: I’d like to know if the vocabulary I’m currently using is convenient for everyone or I should upgrade/degrade it a bit.
So here we begin with the third chapter of ME, YOU AND PASSION……

Recap of the previous episode: Sonakshi gets mad at herself for admiring Dev. Sonakshi sits beside Dev during chemistry period while the two share some cute yet romantic moments.

It was night and Sonakshi stood by the window in her room at home gazing at the moon. The sky looked magnificent with the bright twinkling stars up above surrounding the white shiny moon covering a dark layer of black colour which was seen everywhere. How she loved the scene! For it reminded her that just like the stars in the sky, there are a few people on land who twinkled. Elina and her parents had always been amongst those people. Or precisely, the only people who came under that list. However, today, a few variations had been made in the list by Sonakshi. The change included another member being added to the ‘twinkling people on earth’ group. Any guesses who that special person was and what special thing did he do that made Sonakshi add him in her list of special people? Well, of course, the person was none other than Dev. For Sonakshi, he was only Dev. No Dixit and no title of Mr. She had started considering him as a friend but wasn’t sure if it was right since she didn’t have the slightest of idea of what Dev felt.

Dev, on the other hand, sat in his balcony all dressed in jet black from head to toe with his headphones on and stared endlessly at the endless universe. He’d always loved doing that. But something made this time feel even more special. What was it? He thought. He didn’t really admire thoughts of his interrupting him at this time. However, this thought of his made him smile like a small child who’s just been gifted a lollipop despite being told not to have them by the dentist. His smile, was definitely natural and it counted in the endless list of why he was heavily admired by not only girls, but also boys. What’s wrong with me? He questioned himself. How begged his own brain to try and figure out who or what that thought was all about after all!

Today’s day had been a long yet interesting and different one for both Dev and Sonakshi. A lot had happened today. Even more than they could’ve possible expected. They felt this weird feeling in their stomach whenever they’d think of each other.

Dev’s POV : Why is this happening with me? What is this all about? And why is this even happening to me? I’ll talk to Sona tomorrow and seek advice from her on how to deal with such weird or probably psychological problems. Wait a minute, why should I ask Sona?! Why her? What makes her so special for me? Is she even special? Oh gawd! I’m sure I’m missing out on something. Something really very important I feel.

He quickly exits the balcony and rushes to his study table. Everyone else had been asleep at his house. Therefore, he tried to make minimum noise in order to not disturb anyone’s sleep and most importantly, make nobody got suspicious about him and his weird acts. He picked up his laptop from the table and ran towards his bed I’m great hurry. He jumped on his bed, quickly unlocked the laptop and started to search the following on the Internet:
1. Signs you’re falling for her
2. Symptoms of falling in love
3. Am I in love?
4. Love tests for boys
5. What’s so special about her quiz for guys

Soon after his extraordinary research on the Internet, he placed his left palm on the centre region of his heart and softly spoke, ‘ I guess it is true then. I’m in love with you Sonakshi! Real, mad and desperate love. But the only problem is, we’ve hardly known each other and will you even accept me and this proposal of mine keeping in mind that we’re just ‘just-became-friends-from-strangers’???’ And irrespective to the fact that how recently they’d met, will Sonakshi still accept Dev? Nope, thought Dev. He doesn’t really stand much of a chance infront of her. Besides, as far as he’s learnt about her in one day, which is a lot, he has concluded and very well learnt that Sonakshi is definitely amongst those rare girls who does not believe in love and would rather prefer following their dreams and building up their stairway to success and glory. She truly was the type he wanted and admired. She was no type. She was one and the only one and no replacements can ever be found, thought Dev as he smiled to himself. Then again due to the fear of losing Sonakshi, although he hadn’t even completely earned her yet, his face became pale and expressionless.

Dev’s POV : Oh no! What am I supposed to do? Main usse paana zaroor chanta hoon lekin khona bhi nahin chahta hoon. Kya karoon? Hey bhagwaan! Mujhe lagta hai ki abhi mein usse apni dosti bhadata hoon! Are Dev, dosti bhadegi to tab naa jab dono log usse bhadana chahe. Lekin koi nahin, mein apni poori koshish karoonga Sona ko humesha ke liye apni Sona banane ke liye. Mujhe poora yakin hai ki ek na ek din vo maan hi legi. (Oh no! What am I supposed to do? I sure do want to earn her but on the same time, I’m afraid of losing her. What should I do? Oh god! I think it’d be better if I increase our friendship currently. Oh Dev, friendship can only be made better if both the people want it to be so and give it a try. But no worries, I’ll give my best to make Sona officialy my Sona. I have full faith that one day or another, she’ll agree to accept me and my proposal.)

It was final now. Dev was head over heels for Sonakshi while she’d been trying to be the least expressive and hide her feelings as well as the sorrow and pain she’d have to bear for the sake of her dreams and goals. Was she right? She simply just couldn’t chose between yes or no. After all, it was a matter of her dreams and ambitions and the first person whom she admired, lovingly.

Sonakshi’s POV : Hey bhagwaan! Iss dil ka kya karun? (pinches herself really hard). Mera matlab yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai? Pehli dafaa hai ki mujhme koi aur chalka hai. Pehli baar koi mujhme mujhse zyaada hai. C’mom Sona! Apni padhayi par dhyaan de!
Kahin tujhe pya…Nahin! Tujhe kissi se pyaar nahin hai. (Oh god! What am I supposed to do with if this heart? (pinches herself really hard). I mean what happening to me? It is for the first time that I’ve been coloured by someone’s colour. It is for the first time that someone lies within me even more than myself. C’mon Sona! Focus on your studies! You aren’t in lov….No! You do not love anyone.)

The thought of loving Dev troubled her, for that would mean leaving her dreams, goals, ambitions and parents behind, and she couldn’t possible just do that. They all meant a lot to her. While not loving Dev also didn’t seem appropriate to her. And why would it? After all, as per to what Elina’s theory suggests, love is a human right. Wasn’t she a human as well? Or was it just that she didn’t have the same right as everyone else? She thought. Finally, she came up with a conclusion: ‘Huffff! I’m tired of this thinking! It’s final now. I’m going to confess to Dev and let him know about my feelings. If he reciprocates positively, it’s fine then. And if the result is negative, I’ll atleast get a a surety of what he feels for me and most importantly, to never love or fall for someone ever again.’ She thought.

However, from the inside, she badly wanted Dev to accept her as his own. But, some part of her kept on telling her that what she was about to do was extremely wrong and she should rethink about her decision. Yet, for she’d already decided what to do, she thought of it to be best if she’d stick to her plan. After all, confessing wouldn’t cause any harm, would it? She might regret it later on but the option of not confessing seemed even worse. What if Dev liked her and she liked him as well, but due to her fear of confessing, neither of the two confessed and could never be one? She asked herself. The thought of it was even more worse than her worst nightmare.

So it was set then. Both the two had something big planned for tomorrow. Dev with his proposal for friendship and Sonakshi with her admiration-turning-into-love confession. ‘It is late enough to think about it further. A peaceful sleep shall do great help for the day tomorrow,’ thought the two as they went to bed and closed their eyes with a lovely smile on their sweet faces. Yes, tomorrow indeed was going to be a big day for both of them, probably the day which Sonakshi feared the most in her life and Dev awaited for. What would happen? Would both accept each other’s confession/proposal? We’d only get to know after the break of dawn the next day.

It was a bright early morning and both Dev and Sonakshi tried to look their best. They wanted to look simple yet lovable for each other. After all, they had to dress to impress! They both were in a great hurry while getting ready. Their families were shocked at this behaviour of theirs. Sonakshi, on the insistence of her parents, had light breakfast while Dev refused to have any despite his family’s requests and insistence.

Elina, who’d been watching Sonakshi weird and unusual behaviour and Vicky, who’d been watching the same with Dev, thought that there definitely must be something fishy. Vicky had fallen for Sonakshi. But he couldn’t call it true love. He even liked Elina. Maybe more than like, admired or maybe, loved her. More of love at first word than love at first sight, for he liked the way she spoke, boldly and in a rowdy yet cute and comfortable manner. Although Elina wasn’t as great, beautiful, talented, outspoken and admirable as our dear Sonakshi, Vicky liked her for who she was. She was one clumsy and messy girl unlike Sonakshi, who was neat, clean, disciplined and more or less, perfect. Elina was naughty most of the times and was very supportive. However, one mustn’t consider Sonakshi to be a quiet, obedient and shy student, for she could beat everyone in naughtiess if she wanted to and could be one of the most spoilt brat if she desired to. The main flaws Elina possessed, which were yet unknown by Vicky, were that she could be sensitive to a very big height and wasn’t comfortable in making her own decisions and rather preferred following than leading. She’d become a bit better after she started living with Sonakshi. She became more bold and confident, although not as much as Sonakshi. The two sisters shared a very deep bond and loved each to her to the core.

In the case of the two brothers, Dev and Vicky, you could say that Dev was nearly the male version of Sonakshi and Vicky was nearly the male version of Elina. The qualities Dev and Sonakshi possessed were nearly the same. However, in terms of the qualities possessed by Elina and Vicky, Vicky had always been brave enough to take his stand from the very start unlike Elina who had to be built to do so. Dev, well known for his attitude, nature, charms etc. always gave the best to Vicky so that he’d have his own identity and wouldn’t be known as ‘Dev’s brother’. However, girls didn’t seem to admire him or even notice him due to his flirtous nature. Yet, Elina admired him. She thought that he was never flirting but just wanted someone whom he could love and who’d love him in return. Thus, behaved in a kind manner with Vicky, unaware of his feelings for her, and this made Vicky fall for her even more.

Sonakshi and Elina quickly ran to their classroom and grabbed the same places they were seated on the day before. To Sonakshi’s and Elina’s disappointment, Dev and Vicky weren’t there yet. They badly hoped that the two weren’t absent. Suddenly, two dashing looking boys with their black shades on entered the class. They passed a smile to Sonakshi and Elina and walked towards them.

Sonakshi: Hey Dev! Good morning!

Dev: Hi Sona! Good morning to you too! (he went and grabbed the seat next to Sonakshi’s seat)

Vicky: Hiii Elina!

Elina: Hiiiiiii Vicky! So good to see you! (then she realised what she’d just said and the two went red blushing while Sonakshi and Dev looked at each other and laughed)

Vicky quickly went and grabbed the seat beside Elina’s and the two started talking. Meanwhile, Dev and Sonakshi were eying each other lovingly.

Dev: (holds Sonakshi’s hand and whispers in her ear) Sona,I’ve gotta tell you something.

Sonakshi: (holds his hand and whispers back in his ear) Oh really? Me too! Something really important!

Vicky and Elina: (interrupt in their conversation) Ahem, ahem!! (cough).

Elina: Guess this isn’t the idol time for romance, right Vicky?? (smirks)

Vicky: Oh yes! Of course! Bhai aap hi to kahte hain padhayi par dhyaan do aur khud hi….( Bro you’re the one who always tells me to focus on my studies but you yourself….) (blinks his eye)

Elina: Exactly Sona! Looks like love is in the air, huh? Dev jiju? (giggles)

Vicky: Of course, love is in the air! Sona bhabhi? Tell us naa. (both Elina and Vicky leave giggling)

As the duo left, our poor Dev and Sonakshi stood still looking at each other, highly embarrassed and were badly blushing. And all of a sudden, they ran after Vicky and Elina yelling, ‘Vickyyyyy, Elinaaaaaaa!!!’

Seems like both the bodies have realised their passionate love for each other. But will they be able to confess? Will Sonakshi be able to confess? Will Dev be able to propose Sonakshi for their friendship? The hearts seem to be get closer as well. But will this last for a long time? Are things going to go really smooth in their paradise? Will two bodies be able to make two souls one forever? We’ll have to wait and see.

Continue reading ME, YOU AND PASSION by Anshita to learn more😊.

So how was it???? Hope it was long enoughπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜†
Do drop in your suggestions and please do comment!!

Yours lovingly,
Anshita😘😘😘😘😘

60 comments

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you soooooo much Sami!!!
      If you can seriously imagine it all in real, then what more could I possibly want???😊😊😊
      I’ll try my best to post as soon as possible!πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thanks a looootttt di!!!
      I’m sooooo happy that you liked it😊😊😊😊😊
      The main goal was to make the emotions seem realistic and it seems they sure did to my lovely audience😊😊😍😍
      Love ya!😘😘😘😘😘

  1. dolly

    It was super duper awesome. I feel your writings are perfect the way you write them. No need go change anything.
    Post next one soon. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😍😘

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you sooooooooooo much Dolly di!!!!
      I’m so happy you liked it!😊😊
      If you truly appreciate my skills, then a badaa vaala hug from me to you!😍😍😍😍
      Although posting seems dicey till Friday, I’ll try my best to keep up😊😊
      Loads of love😘😘😘😘😘😘

  2. Manya

    |Registered Member

    Superbbbbb Anshitaβ€οΈπŸ’•πŸ’–πŸ’žπŸ’—πŸ’“πŸ’ŸπŸ’˜β£πŸ˜˜πŸ˜β€οΈπŸ’•πŸ’–πŸ’žπŸ’žβ£πŸ’˜πŸ’˜πŸ’—πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’“πŸ’“
    And Anshita whenever DEVAKSHI will confess their love I want it to be on a college trip somewhere in Manali or Shimla it is just a suggestion dearπŸ˜‰Or it can be before love realisation also but just want a college trip😊
    Post soon
    Love loveβ€οΈπŸ’˜

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you soooooo much Ayushi!!!
      I really respect your suggest, however, it depends on their confession…it is ‘if’ they confess. I won’t reveal any more to ruin your excitement🀐🀐🀐🀐
      However, I’ll definitely try to organise a college trip in the coming episodes if it matches with the track I’ve thought of😊😊😊
      Although posting another episode seems tuf till Friday, I’ll try my best to be as quick as possible☺️☺️
      Loads and tons of love😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  3. Maleeha

    |Registered Member

    U r going superb dear…….πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ’˜πŸ’–πŸ˜˜πŸ’–πŸ‘πŸ’˜πŸŽ€πŸ’‹πŸ˜˜πŸ˜

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thanks a looootttt Maleeha di!!
      Your comment means a lot to me😊😊😊
      Besides, do post HOW OUR JOURNEY BEGAN😊 M eagerly waiting for it😊😊
      Love ya!😘😘😘😘😘😘

  4. Azzuu

    |Registered Member

    it was osm like the last ones
    i really love ur writting skills
    and sona and dev confession
    so eager …
    post soon
    and i can imagine shaheer and erica infront of my eyes
    loads of love

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you soooo much Azzuu!!!
      I’m delighted to see that you liked it☺️☺️☺️
      Let’s see what’ll happen during the time of their confession😬🀐🀐
      If you can imagine it all just by my words, I simply couldn’t ask for any more😊😊
      I’ll try my best to post at the soonest although it’ll be hard enough to find time till Friday 😬😬😬
      Love ya!😘😘😘😘😘

  5. Raya

    |Registered Member

    Amazing AF.. Loved it.. Amazing story line..Perfect vocabulary and everything is so nice… Would love to read more and what will happen.. Arghh can’t wait for next one… Post soon… No need dear to change anything everything seems perfect.. Good writing skills… Keeping up

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you soooo much Raya di!!!!
      I was literally smiling while hearing your kind and touching words😍😍😍😍😍
      I’m extremely overjoyed seeing that you appreciate my storyline, vocabulary and of course, writing skills☺️☺️☺️
      Can’t expect more than thisπŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜Œ
      These kind words of yours are what make me urge to write despite the heavy loads of studies and I finally figure a way out to balance between bothπŸ€—πŸ€—
      I’ll try my best to post at the quickest despite my studies. However, if there is any delay caused for the next episode, do forgive me😊😊
      Loads of love😘😘😘😘😘😘

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thnx a loooottt Bhoomi di!!
      I truly am blissful seeing your valuable comments😊😊😊😊
      Pakka, I’ll try my best to post soon πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚
      With love😘😘😘😘😘😘

  6. Aaru

    |Registered Member

    I thought ki itta lamba episode h proposal ho hi jaega aaj to, but brothers n sisters k differences k explanation ne mere khwaab tod diye.. Ye tune kya kiya re!!

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Ohhh..so sorry Aaru di!πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”
      But kya pata agle episode mein khwaab poori ho jayein? Pataa nahin..
      Keep calm and have patience di 😎😎😎😎😎😎

  7. AnShIta

    |Author

    Thank you sooooo much Ashriti di!!!
    I’m pleased to view your comment☺️☺️☺️
    I’ll try my best to post soon!😊😊😊
    Love you too Di!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  8. Erina

    |Registered Member

    Hey anshita u r going in superb way dear nd i want u to keep going with ur imagination dear. Abhi to baate kuch unkahi si kuch unsuni si hone lgi hai devakshi ke beech, kabu dil pe rha na hasti inki khone lgi so abhi tm jaisa sochi ho vaise hi jao bcse abhi to hmri journey start huyi hai na swtheart so kabhi kabhi hm thore se dard ki vajah se bht achi cheez kho dete hai jaise dekho hmre cvs ne storyline hi change kr di hmri vajah se aur now hm regreat kr rhe h ki first nd second promo hona chahiye tha so tm apni story line hmre lye change maat kro dear bus kuch aisa suspense aur attraction rkho jisse hm y kahe khiche mjhe koi dor teri oor nd u r going in same manner that even i can say this for u…..
    Nd i think isse pehle sona confess kre dev usse frndshp ke lye propose kr dega jisse vo apni baat nhi keh payegi nd still my finger crossed hope so that i’m guessing true. Plzzz post soon dear i’m eager to read ur next epi.
    Again with loads nhi tons of love Erina here πŸ’•πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Hey Erina di!!
      First of all, thank you sooo much for your lovely comment😍😍
      I’m happy to see that you wouldn’t be minding much if the track goes against Devakshi’s love story but doesn’t go off the story line😊😊
      I’ll let your guess remain as a guess for nowπŸ˜Šβ˜ΊοΈπŸ˜‰πŸ€πŸ€πŸ€
      I just hope to keep up with your expectations 😬😬😊😊😊
      But seriously, your comment has made an effect in my mindset and I assume the best way is to write what I feel and put something worth loving in that itself..
      I’ll try my best to post soon di!
      Love😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  9. Simplesweety1

    |Registered Member

    You Are An Awsm Writer! I Read All The Parts In A Go! I Love Your FF! Update Soon! BTW .. I Also Write An FF Named Kya Ma Manengi ? …… A Devakshi FF … Do Read If You Want To! And Yeah Update SooooooooN! πŸ™‚

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you sooooo much di!😊😊😊
      I’m glad you like it!☺️☺️☺️☺️
      Besides, I do follow your ff πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Post soon!
      Meanwhile, I’ll try my best to post soon πŸ™‚
      Love ya😘😘😘😘😘😘

  10. Yashfeen

    |Registered Member

    Heya Anshita..it ws really nyc..I lyked d description of d star n tat endless sky n tat too ol black even dev..addition of nature actually enhances d beauty of every fiction n tat is d most beautiful thng according to me..
    Elina is a way smarter whras u made hr a little dumbo…y??
    U knw wat, I feel..u writing has an impact of novels…ur habit of reading various buk is actually seen in ur ff…ur vocabulary, style, sentence formation n ol is jst perfect…keep going..
    And as u r gona post d nxt epi on Friday den this means u have ppr in between..so ol d best n do really well..
    Loads of luv..take care

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Hi Yashfeen di!
      My heart has melted after reading your comment😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘
      I guess my addiction to books is what helps me so much in writingπŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚
      Well, glad that you came up with the point of claiming Elina to not be as smart as Sonakshi. Well, as I’d mentioned in the introduction, that Sonakshi and Dev are the main protagonists and the story shall mainly revolve around them. I had to make the two stand out from the rest. However, if I’ve hurt any of your feeling, kindly forgive me for them sameπŸ™πŸ™πŸ™
      Well, hopefully, I’ll post before that as Friday seems a bit too Long for my dear readers to wait till. Therefore, I’ve already started working on the fourth chapter. I’ll write a bit whenever I get time and try to post it at soonest rate.
      Thank you soooo much for your lovely wishes di!😍😍 I’ve gotten a study leave today (since its 2:40, it practically WednesdayπŸ˜‰πŸ˜…) and had one yesterday as well. I’ve gotten papers on Thursday as well as Friday.
      Love you a loooooottttt di!πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’

      • Yashfeen

        |Registered Member

        Heya no forgiveness n ol…I felt a thng n shared wid u tats it..its ur story, u r d writer its upto u hw efficient a character shud b…whereas wen v talk of elina d actress playing d role pops in my mind..n shes actually smart thr4 I mentioned n I hope u didnt felt bad d way I pointed it out n m obliged getting so many hearts…

      • AnShIta

        |Author

        No, not all di! I’m haven’t been hurt the slightestπŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜Œ
        In fact, I was happy to see that you got your point cleared😊😊😊

  11. Pooja26

    |Registered Member

    ohhh !!!!!
    i got late to comment

    sholly πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

    amazing part
    superb chappy πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    really loved it !!!! dear πŸ˜‰

    wating 4 nxt chappy….
    post asap…
    tc

    & u r in which class???
    m in college 1st year
    studying law
    in bhopal……

    bubye…..dear tc…… πŸ™‚

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      No problem Pooja di!☺️☺️☺️
      I’m thrilled with your response di 😚😚😚😚
      I’ll try my best to post soon. However, since I’ve gotten an exam on Thursday and as well on Friday, I might not be able to make it on time but I’ll surely try my bestπŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚
      I’m currently in sixth grade😬😬😁😁
      Love you!😘😘😘😘😘😘

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you sooooo much di!
      MuaaaahπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹
      Love ya!😘😘😘😘😘

  12. Maria

    |Registered Member

    Anshi now I have to ask you one question! Are you really 12???? I’m very confused, how can you write so amazing? You are so talented my girl! All the descriptions and everything! I just loved it very much! Elena and Vicky teasing Devakshi was also superb! They both whispering in each other’s ears was also awesome! Overall your ff is awesome! Your imagination is awesome! Your everything is awesome! Coz you are awesome! Post the next part soon!! PleaseπŸ™‡

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Hey Maria di!
      I truly am overwhelmed by your comment☺️☺️☺️☺️
      Yes, it’s true I’m 12😊 Actually, a bit far to twelve😬😬😬😬
      But the thing is, that age doesn’t really matter here. The love and support I’m getting from you all is what plays an important role☺️☺️
      I mark your words and will definitely remember those sweet words of yours😊
      I’m happy that you titled everything as awesome and even me. However, it just doesn’t seem to be that I’m awesome in front of incredible writers like you and many others😬😬😬
      Yet, I’d like to thank you for your sweet and kind words πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      I’ll try my best to keep although it seems quite tricky to post till Friday. I’ll write a bit whenever I get time πŸ™‚
      Love ya loads and loads😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  13. Vaishnavi

    |Registered Member

    Mind blowing….. I never commented but today i couldnt stop myself….. Awesome fantabulous super duper hit……… Luv i dear….. Keeo it up….
    Ummmmaaahhhh….. πŸ’™πŸ’–πŸ’πŸ’–πŸ’“πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ
    Quintals of love.
    Do read sky is not the limit devakshi ff.

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you soooo much Vaishnavi di!!!😍😍😍😍
      My heart has melted seeing your kind words😊😊😊
      I can’t possible thank you enough for these lovely thoughts of yours☺️☺️☺️
      M glad that my ff turned out to be persuasive enough to make u commentπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
      Besides, I do follow your ff and trust me, it’s simple amazing 😍😍😍 Do post soon di!
      Loads and tons of love!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  14. Erika

    |Registered Member

    awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee writing skills dear seriously are u 12 years old how can u write so well u now what the way u write i was just imagining things like everything was happening just in front of me dear fabulous writing skills keep it up dear awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee keep it up and i hope both of them confess their feelings soon so update asap

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you soooooo much Erika di!!!
      I’m so pleased after seeing your lovely comment☺️☺️☺️
      It’s not the age that matter here but all your lovely comments and words😊😊😊😌😌
      If you can imagine all of it just by my words, then there’s nothing more I can seek for☺️☺️☺️
      I too hope your wish gets fulfilled, yet, I can’t promise anything 😬😬😬😬🀐🀐🀐🀐🀐
      I’ll try to find time and post at the soonest☺️☺️😊😊
      Loads and loads of love!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  15. Erika

    |Registered Member

    awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee writing skills dear seriously are u 12 years old how can u write so well u now what the way u write i was just imagining things like everything was happening just in front of me dear fabulous writing skills keep it up dear awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee keep it up and i hope both of them confess their feelings soon so update asap lots of love and big hugs to u dear

  16. Niki

    Wowwwwwwww amazing!!! U really write so so wellπŸ˜ƒπŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»Post next part soon..

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you sooo much Niki di!
      Really appreciate your comment😊😊
      Will try my best to post soon πŸ™‚
      Love ya!😘😘😘😘😘

  17. Maria

    Awesome chappy!!😍😍 Really loved it!!!! Eagerly waiting for the next one…..post soon, dearπŸ˜‰

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you sooo much Maria di!
      M so delighted to hear your kind words😊😊
      Will try to post as soon as I can☺️☺️
      Love ya!😘😘😘😘😘

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