Parth.No Gift Is Better Epi9 continued

She was still struggling to get up preventing taking his support when suddenly Parth pulled her up by tightening the grip around her waist. She looked up at his face shocked as to why he did that. And as instantly he flipped their positions and now he was over her, his one hand resting on the bed rather supporting his body in air so that he won’t put all his weight on her.

Now Niti breathed hard and goose bumps rose all over her skin when she found him looking at her intently. He observed every expression of her and shifted his gaze from her face to her eyes looking straight in them.

Niti was startled for a moment but the next moment she felt better, as for now he moved a bit back keeping a safe distance yet his body dawned over her short one. Even though the skin contact was hardly somewhere yet he managed to affect her badly like all times.

Her hands were lying on the sides but looking at his so calm, yet concerned, hurt yet loving, angry yet comforting frame she felt all the best things in world coming up to her slowly, coming only when he was around.

She loved his company. She loved his talks. She loved his possessiveness. She loved his care. She loved his concern. She loved it when she found that the only thing which really disturbs him is her discomfort. Summing all, she loved Him.

Till date since the day she had met him first, she had decided firmly that the person whom she would fall for can be like anything, anything that would please her not necessarily the ideal man and she would love him like mad but won’t ask for a reciprocating act. She won’t ask the person to love her the same way or even love her. All she would know is that she would go to any extent as she would love him.

But now when she found him, it was getting difficult for her to not ask to love her back, to care for her, to be concerned about her small worries and sweet joys. Though in Parth’s case she never had to speak it up for anything of these to be done, but don’t know what was stopping them, them both, that they didn’t come out in open about it, they never expressed it vocally though actions were grabbed and noticed by everyone else.

She felt his finger slid from the corner of her forehead and trail down huskily to her cheek and tracing her jaw bone till the mid of her chin. She felt something curl in her lower stomach when she saw the heat enter his eyes again.

“You need me! And I am not going anywhere unless I sort this out. And you will help me, yeah?” he said as he leaned towards her lips.

He stopped an inch away and looked in her eyes for an answer and she spill it out, “I will.” Her voice sounded weak and lot affected, and Parth smiled listening to it.

His thumb slid over her lower lip and caressed it while her body stuttered with the effect of it.

“We will deal with it together. Do you trust me?” He said with all the love and care that he had for her.

Niti came out of trance as soon as she heard it and her heart pained seeing his eyes moist and him still unsure about the way she feel for him. He was still looking in her eyes to find the answer but he only got something down in the pits which he could not decipher.

He was busy with the act when suddenly he felt her arms curl around the back of his neck and he was pulled forward and down. In no time she was grazing at his lips with all the love that she can pour in it. She pulled him harder and his hand slipped and his hard front crashed on her soft one. She licked, sucked, caressed more and flipped their positions. Now she was on top of him and her hairs went to the sides covering their faces.

Parth could feel the assurance and affirmation she was giving to him. He was still shocked at her this act. She was kissing him as if it’s their last one and she wanted to drench all out of him and pour all of her inside him.

She had tried speaking it up to him a lot many times, what she felt about, felt for him, felt for Us. But as soon the words reached her mind, her tongue trailed off and not a sound would come out of this bl**dy mouth. Now when her throat had been carrying the gulp seeing him so vulnerable, the same repeated, her mouth didn’t open.

And as known and felt she proved that a kiss can speak the ongoing crap when the tongue refuse and probably it explained better.

“Parth! I know that you still don’t believe that I trust you but, try to get it, I Do. I just can’t prove it but I do Trust you Completely. I know you would never hurt me, any way! Somewhere I knew it before too but just failed to keep a good hold on it. I can’t lose you, not Again, and this time I won’t let any of us to grow some insecurities and ruin this.” She said as they slowly departed.

Parth could see the honesty in her eyes and the confidence in her voice too didn’t get unnoticed by him.

She got up from over him and sat on the edge looking down at her feet while he straightened himself and moved near her. And she heard him say, “I know it. I knew you believed me somewhere down in your heart and surely someday it would come up bold enough that you will accept and that is the reason why I never forced you to listen to me, but I surely forced you to listen to that heart of yours.”

She looked up shocked and he nodded and his palm lightly held hers and just as the skin contacted she squeezed it gently.

Both stayed for some time not speaking anything but just looking out of the window as the highway dazed with the car as it flooded with more cars with every passing second.

Suddenly Parth got up and she frowned at this sudden act. He appeared again after about half an hour and in the mean time she had a shower and as she was making her way out of her bathroom she saw him entering the room as along.

Parth was moving to her room with the tray and he entered careful enough not to spill the juice from the brimming glass. His eyes went on for searching her as he stood near the door when he saw her appearing from behind the bathroom door and his breath caught in his throat.

She was rubbing the back of her head with the towel, her hairs shifted to the left side, exposing the creamy skin of her right shoulder. The few water droplets still sticking to her neck and his eyes followed the trail of one from the neck to the shoulder and down to her collarbone and down, when she said loud enough for him to look up and answer her, “What is this?? God! Parth I can’t believe. Fruit salad!”

He saw her features screwing and forming a shocked and as well irritated expression as she stared the bowl in the tray.

She moved forward and now glared at him, “Haan toh, its required okay? Didn’t you hear what the doctor said? He clearly stated that you need to have healthy food. And don’t you dare think main iske saath compromise karne wala hoon, aur nahi tumhe karne dunga, get it?” he tried to sound angry but failed badly.

She continued glaring at him and said, “Parth! This is Not done. Tum tabse mujhe sirf healthy foos de rahe ho. I didn’t complain doesn’t mean I will continue this life time. And moreover I am perfectly fine now, I don’t need all this sadu sa khana anymore. I mean c’mon man I can’t eat soooooo much Healthy food for so loooooooong.”

Parth looked at her making faces and laughed at her cute antics and smiled seeing her behaving just like a kid. Well she was one, no matter how much she ever she try to pretend she was always a kid inside, so delicate and away from the harsh side of this world until….

And his thoughts came to halt as he saw her snapping her fingers in front of him. He looked at her face and tried to concentrate. His eyes fell on her luscious lips which moved curving too much to add to his impatience and he till now couldn’t make out a single word of what she said.
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GUYS plz dont make me regret my decision of continuing this story…plz plz plz comment….i know i am not regular but believe me even after work load….which is like lots…i am still putting it for you…i am literally trying really hard to put the best and most delighting one……soo plz plz pleaseeeeeeeeeeee comeent lovelies….plz comment…i am just fed up of asking you to do it again and again…i an turning too oody nowadays and hence cant concentrate on anything yet tried to write this short part so plz bear with me and do comment

Credit to: niri

55 comments

  1. knight_angel

    Their argument for fruit salad was Soo cute.. and finally after days i guess niti freshened up.. No complains yaar. But pls be regular .

    • c’mon dude if i didn’t mention in the updates doesn’t mean that she is so clumsy….she freshens frequently…and that says i needa add that stuff too…..and yep will be regular but i guess longer intervals…i hardly get time nowadays….keep commenting

  2. Chelsea

    Love the way u narrate the story…
    I love it.. i dont comment much..only i think 2 or 3 ff’s..this ff is good..just reveal the story line and update faster… will be eagerly waiting

    • thanx dear and plz plz plz dont ever forget to comment even if its a single word against your name in the comment section…that will be much more than enough thnx again for commenting and plz keep commenting coz as u will b eagerly waiting for update i will be waiting for commnts….

    • sure dude but only if u guys remember to comment and dearies this time i am pretty sure i will update by 14…….wait till then…plz…and will try updating regularly plz bear with me

    • me too….. hey i am talking about the comment…continue commenting well i know u do comment frequently still for name sake…see ya

  3. Roma

    Hi niri….it’s really superbbbb n marvellous episode. ….I just loved it…so heart touching n lovely emotional yet very interesting story….I’m totally addicted to it. ….parth n niti….very lovelyyyyyy pair…I’m wish this ff was really true story…. n I feel like it is true….very well written n beautifully narrated. …plz continue dear, don’t stop…don’t worry about comments. ..just write it for us n you….I’m always here waiting for this awesoooooome story….n believe me it’s really mind blowing n unique story. ….keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . Muaaaaahhhhhh

    • aaaawww….such a lovely comment…am on the verge of shedding thes tears…thnx a lot dear for motivating me so much….and love u too. its just that i know many are silent readers but when i find the commnets decreasing i get really worried and think that may be its getting boring and none wud like to trouble with boring stuff…yeah…just wanna know if its really worth reading….and it really matters a lot…anyways let it be and thnx again for writing such a lovely comment….love and keep smiling always

  4. Kyy

    It’s really really super, amazing and awesome……..
    And yes….I am a silent reader……now I started to comment reading your update…it’s mind blowing

  5. Tanushree

    Dnt even think of stoppin. Afyer givin such a lovely n amazing story u dnt hv the ryt to break our heart ??. Amazing update today. Thanx ☺

    • awwww thats so sweet dear…but i feel more disheartened without the comments….plz keep supporting me until u feel i m worth it….and thnx to YOU for commenting and motivating me always

  6. mishti

    o come on yar……why u worry so much about comments I just don’t get it…..u no there are zillion fans of manan who reads ur ff as silent reader like me…..so don’t worry about good or bad…..ur ff is awesome…. trust me….I think u need to trust ur ability,ur writing more…..this way na u will get better feeling…. ur ff rocks….?????

    • i know dear i shudnt and thnx for all the beautiful descriptions and ‘praises’ but you know what….a person gets to now about the improvement or fall back only after feedbacks and responses and i believe i need to know…anyhow felt great that you commntd ….also i know that u guys love it…and find it readable…but at times when i see so few responses i feel am doing worse..which is really so frustrating…plz guys dont stop commntng plz plz plz….i will be waiting for ur cmmnt in the next as well plz comment and make my day…plzzzzzzzz

  7. Anu

    Hey Niri!! First of all A big big big sorry for not commenting since so long. It seemed like forever. I was actually busy with my own ff and also my assignments. But today I had a lt if spare time cause tomorrow is a holiday for me. And talking about the episode. You really wanna know? It was SUBERB as usual. I love this ff and right now its the only ff on PaNi/MaNan that I read atm. Keep writing dear ♥ and post asap ♥

    • thnx dear and yeah i understand at times we just cant make it and its fine and really glad that you finally commented…thnx for sparing that much time…it feels really nice that u guys comment and support me so much and thats the reason i keep waiting for you…i am like really feeling so high that u read my ff …..only…(ff out of those on PaNi/ MaNan)……keep commenting and next one tmrw

  8. Hely

    Amzed to see dat bold step of niti – d KISS!!
    N her reaction on healthy fruit salad – u juz nailed it sweety…
    Don’t u dare think of ending diz cuz of lack of comments.. Trust der r many many many readers bt dey don’t comment dats it (evn I used to be 1 of them)

    • i know even u USED to be not ANYMORE…….thnx and i wanted it to be clear that Parth is the reason that Niti want to discover her own self…..keep commenting dear i need those very badly…and i wud tell u guys by next update if i wud continue or not…plz comment dearies also the silent readers…cmon guys come out and show up…any queries regarding the experience from a silent reader to the commenting one….approach Hely…..she wud tell u which position is better, yep dude????…………LOL…..keep commntng <3<3<3

  9. Anjali

    It’s awesome dude…I love it….pls continue…and yeah..I will keep commenting…:). Awesome work..keep going..

    • finally atleast one got it…yeah….i need exctly that….love u dear and thnx a lot…i guess i will tell u guys whether i wud continue or not…help me decide……see you in the next part…comment section <3<3<3<3

  10. priya

    my comment is not posted yesterday……….. may be due to network problem………..update is soo good niri………. after soo many days seeing ur update………I felt soo happy……. the way u narrate is soo good and easy to imagine………so parth will never leave niti whatever might happens right……….. whats disturbing niti so much……….. whats her secret………..keep updating and I will keep commenting even how busy I was…………. happy sriramnavami niri……my sisters marriage wil be in next week ………so may be for that week comment is delayed…. :P:P love u niri

    • thnx dear for allthe lovely words and no issues until u continue reading i can wait for the comment(a bit only) lol…….hope u enjoy the marraige…weddings are always interesting and enjoyable…i believe so…..will update tmrw…stay tuned…..love u more

  11. Hy niti its ahana,,,,Wow fantastic writting skills u have,, i never comment in any ff bcz i dnt know the optn 2dayonly i found,,,u know i always feels disssppointed not able to cmnt n praise u fr this fantastic ff,,The way u written parth niti ‘s exprrssion ,words yeh sab hum feel karsakte h ,Reading ur ff i cn easily imagine thm,,,N plzzzzzzzzz dnt stop this yrr,,Thanku very much fr this update

    • finally found it thats great….and its really sweet of u to think that way….i wanna express it the way i feel about them and hence try to put it…..and bada wala thnx for commenting and also for the promise…keep smiling dear

  12. Sry fr ur my mistake of ur name #Niri n han forget 1thing
    ,,,I promise i will comment regularly whtevr u do
    love u loadssssss keep
    update

  13. GUYS I HAVE POSTED IT FEW MINUTES BACK…SORRY BUT I GUESS IT WILL BE UPDATED ONLY AFTER MIDNIGHT….LOVE U ALL…PLZ SUPPORT ME…AND I WUD LOVE TO CONTINUE IF U GUYS HELP ME…LOVE U ALLLLLL

  14. LOVELIES ITS NOT MY FAULT I HAD POSTED AND ITS NOT UPDATED YET I GUESS I WILL HAVE TO POST AGAIN…..THANK GOD I HAD SAVED THE CONTENT WELL I WLL WAIT ANOTHER HOUR IF NOT TILL THEN ALSO…..THEN I WILL POST AGAIN, AS INSTANTLY…PLZ BEAR WITH ME….<3<3<3<3<3

  15. i think theres some problem i am not able to upload it…..its showin the email adress to be wrong…lovelies anyone here with a solution??????? i so badly want to know ur views on the next part…dont know when will i be able to overcome this problem……oh god help me…..plz someone here with the idea of what to do next???????????

    • Hey wht happen??
      So excited fr next update
      Wht hppn with niti???
      Its must b some ntwk prblm i
      think ,,plzz try to update again

    • Tanushree

      hey niri…dear what happen? its been so long. is the problem fixed? waiting eagerly for u n ur lovely ff. pls reply

  16. GUYS I TRIED BUT ALL IN VAIN…SECONDLY I CANT MAKE IT IF DOESNT GET DONE BY TMRW…..I AM MOVING TO RURAL PLACE…I AM FEELING HELL MESSED UP WITH ALL…ITS SO FRUSTRATING AND DEPRESSING…THNX TO ALL THOSE WHO ARE CONCERNED…I AM FINE…BUT STILL DAZED THAT EVEN AFTER SO MANY TRIALS AM NOT ABLE TO MAKE IT…URGHHHH….I AM SORRY…REALLY SORRY GUYS AM GONNA TRY AGAIN..TILL THE TIME I CAN ACCESS THE NETWORK…ALL STAY BLESSED AND BEAR WITH ME….LOVE U ALLL AND MISSING U TOO MUCH

  17. Tanushree

    niri try to make a new id n continue… if u havent done it. its depressing n frustrating. i can understand how u r feeling. kip goin. tell us if u need ne help.

    • thnx dear for the suggestion And i have tried but dont know if it will work…well for now i am moving so see u guys on 25th….tell me hows it…have made it lot lengthier….hope u enjoy and yeah i will be able to reply only by 25th plz dont mind guys….love u all loads

      • Tanushree

        its been so long now. i hv lost hope on ur update. it will never come i think. its very very depressing

  18. bindu

    if u don’t mind try to rewrite the whole episode one more time and update with your old id.sorry I know its a long process but try it. waiting for your update.

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