Parth.No Gift Is Better Epi3


She had opened her eyes. He was sure of it, but then they instantly shut, leaving him to get more worried about it.

He rushed out and called for the doctor. And they both made it fast in the ward.

“So she had opened her eyes, right?” the doctor enquired. “Yeah but then she closed them immediately.” Parth answered.

Doctor checked her pulse. “She will be better in a while; it’s because of the weakness. She has gained consciousness but it will take her some time to be able to wake up or talk.”

“I think as she is better now, you should also take some rest.” The doctor advised while leaving.

Parth didn’t answer, he was already busy with his thought process regarding her, the fact that she immediately closed her eyes as she saw him, was very disturbing. He wondered if it meant that she was more hurt that he was there.

He looked at her once and decided to leave since he could not tolerate the mere thought that she would again look at him with all the hate and loath.

But then looking at her pale face reminded him of her previous condition, and he worried anew that currently there’s no one around to look after her, except him.

He made his mind, let her think whatever she wants to but he won’t budge unless he see her in a better condition, whether she likes it or not.

That reminded him of calling Charlie. He dialed her number again and soon there was a frown on his face. “Where the hell has this lady disappeared?” he wondered.

Now he called for Ayaz. After 4 rings he finally took the call. “What’s up?” came the cheery voice from the other end.

“Yep Ayaz, How are you man?” Parth answered sounding a bit low. “What is it that’s bothering you Again?” Ayaz asked concerned. “Well it’s that Niti… She is in hospital in unconscious state, had a black out, but now she is better but soon she will be fine, well so this is to ask you if you could come here, I mean then I can…” but before he could complete Ayaz cut him. “I get it but I can’t help dude am in Delhi currently and so am afraid you gonna have to stay up there man, I know it gonna be tough but I think you should stay there, after all she is a human and moreover once you guys had been costars as well, right? So you should…” Parth could feel the anger rising when Ayaz talked to him in that tone. As if she is dead or alive didn’t matter to him and so he spoke Ayaz could complete with the crap. “Yeah I get it you carry on there and don’t worry I will be here itself.” He assured.

It wasn’t like he didn’t want to stay there; rather it was the thought that was disturbing him time and again.

The thought that she will hate his presence and in the process hurt herself scared and worried him more.

He turned around to find her sleeping. He never believed in Fairy tales but today he won’t say No to the sleeping beauty.

He went near her and sat beside the bed. He held her delicate palm in between his large ones. He held it firmly and gently without disturbing her.

He kissed on her palm and then opened her palm, cupping his face with her palm, feeling all the delicateness of it which he missed till then.

He didn’t want all this to end, not her being unconscious but he wanted their closeness to prevail the same way. Oh God how badly he missed her fragrance all these days, how miserably he thought about her all day and night. The soft ample cheeks of her he used to cups reminded him again and again of the bitter truth.

He lightly held her hand again in his right one.

“Please don’t.” he said in a low breaking voice, “Don’t do this to yourself. I know you are doing this to punish me, I don’t know for what, but whatever it is I am not worth all the care. And you DON’T deserve it.” And with this he closed his pained eyes and kept his head over their joined palms and keeping them shut he stayed the same way.

He felt something move between his fingers and immediately his eyes flung open he sat straight and looked down to find his hand still entwined with hers and her fingers moving lightly.

Overwhelmingly he looked towards her face. She slowly opened her eyes and invariably searched for something. Her search process stopped altogether when her eyes fell on his weakly smiling figure.

She tried to move her hand and realized he held it. He too realized it the same moment and immediately drew his hand back.

She felt a tinge deep inside her chest at his act. He looked up at her expecting her to say few hurting words to him regarding him touching her and all the stuff, but surprisingly she laid mute.

He snapped his head sideways not able to look in her eyes, “I was just leaving, I know you don’t want a sight of me here. Actually I had tried contacting your friends but in vain. None could stay so I just… anyways I would leave if you don’t want me to stay, I just thought…” and he looked down at her now to explain that he didn’t have a choice and it wasn’t because he wanted to annoy and disturb her more, when he find her in tears. Her eyes brimming with them. He felt better to die than to witness this.

“So you would have left if someone else would have been there with me?” she asked in a weak voice.

And his heart stopped realizing the pain in her voice. His heart was pinning with each word she said.

His mind ordered him to give a yes to her but his heart pleaded to listen to his soul for the last time, to not kill the hope merely in traces now and tell her he couldn’t have left even if he wanted.

And the words which made its way out of his mouth himself shocked him.

“I can’t see you in this condition, I can’t leave you even if you want me to, I can’t even if there had been your whole world around, I can’t…”his voice broke.

The trail of tears flowing down her cheeks doubled their pace, but before he could start again, blaming himself she spoke, “Exactly, you can’t leave or else I will lose my whole world.”

These shook him to the core, he couldn’t believe his ears.

Immediately he took her in a bone crushing hug, and her heart delighted more.

He kissed her forehead with all the love and care he had for her in him.

He cupped her face and joined their foreheads.

Niti’s hand went up to hold on to both of his just when she felt something wet on his left one.

She pulled it down and her eyes pricked at the corners seeing his totally bruised and hurt hand.

The blood had clotted around the edges but the knuckles still continued to bleed.

She snapped her eyes to him. “Parth what is this?” she asked, and it was only then that he reminded of his injury, he tried to pull away but she didn’t let go.

“How did this happen? And why didn’t get it dressed? Look its bleeding profusely. Doesn’t it pain?” she asked in one go.

He cupped her face with the right one, then stole a tear escaping from the corner of her eye on his index finger and said, “Surely not more than this.”

She looked at him and her face turned up with more painful expressions. He looked at it and instantly took a seat beside her on the same cot, and as he did she broke into a hug, burying her head down in his chest.

He reciprocated the hug with the same intensity. They never wanted it to end. The peace that recently accommodated in between them was disturbed by the entry of a murmuring nurse who stood fixed to the floor realizing their condition and felt embarrassed that she came in the wrong time.

Niti also hesitated realizing this but Parth stayed unaffected except that a frown had now accompanied his features.

He snapped his eyes at the nurse making her more tensed.

Niti slowly got out of his hold slowly and straightened herself in the bed. He also stood up and moved to the side a bit.

The nurse came around the other side and checked Niti, later she glanced at her reports and then without making an eye contact with Parth she dictated, “She is really weak and need attention and care. The meds have to be continued and no skipping of meals else nothing would help.”

Parth looked at Niti’s still pale face with a pained expression complaining through his eyes and asking her why.

Niti looked all around except his eyes.

He sat down after the nurse left and stared her, as if threatening.

Niti stirred uncomfortably and then finally said, “I get it. I get it. I won’t skip my meals again. And not even compromise with my sleep.” She said in a light voice. She continued, “You are no more mad at me, right?” she asked very unsure.

“Niti! I can never be mad at you. And you can leave the thought of skipping your meals right away, since that won’t be under your control anymore, I will be the one to make sure you don’t act as stupid again.” Parth said mockingly.

Niti scowled at his this attitude but smiled realizing his protectiveness.

She looked up at him with a wide smile.

“Don’t giggle so soon, moreover it makes you look not less than an idiot.” Parth again mocked.

And her face burned when he did. He laughed at that and then stopped after a while.

He took her hand in his. “Can I ask you something? And I want you to answer very honestly.” Niti nodded in affirmation.

“Are you really happy that I am here? Mean you sure it won’t hurt you?” he asked waiting eagerly for a reply.

Niti was about to say something but her tongue rolled back. She looked straight in his eyes and before the next second her mouth fell on his, and she kissed him lightly.

Parth was dazed for a moment but his heart flopped when he realized it.

He looked at Niti after coming out of it. Her eyes were drawn down and her eyelids were flickering time and again.

Realizing his gaze on her, the pink around her cheeks turned a shade darker and her fingers started mingling with the bracelet string in her hand.

Parth moved forward and her heart skipped a beat.

He was coming closer every second, No microsecond. And her heart almost came to her mouth when he suddenly drew closer, his breath mixing with hers, and their lips just half an inch away.

Suddenly he drew back and retraced the path he came closer by in an instant.

She was left dazzled at the sudden change of act.

He looked at her shocked face and smiled an unseen one.

Niti looked down to find an envelope in his hand and discovered tat he leaned forward to get it from the other side.

“What?” she heard him say when she was again staring his face. “Expecting something?” he asked and her face burned in embarrassment. “Well I don’t mind it!” he said leaning forward.

And her eyes bulged out at that. And she took a sharp intake of breath and instantly spoke, “Parth!”

He stopped midway, glanced at her for a second and moved back.

Just as he straightened, he laughed a hearty one. “Look at your face!” he said still laughing and pointing at her.

She scowled at it and cursed herself for appearing so affected by all the closeness.

She pouted thinking this and before she could even realize that the laughter came to an end suddenly, she found him capturing her in a close embrace and next he grazed her lips with all the passion.

Her eyes bulged out and his smiled seeing it. They parted to catch breath.

“You are a tease, aren’t you?” he said in between his hacked breath. “First if all you tease and affect me and then don’t expect consequences? Not fair dear.”

Guys plz forgive me 4 the typos, since I wrote it hurriedly
Guyz I have really put some attempts so plz plz give me your views
Plz comment guys plz I just love to read them, and secondly it helps me a lot to improve and moreover its no fun to keep writing when none is interested

Credit to: niri

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  1. I loved it
    Plz update frequently if dat isn’t a prob fr u
    I wait fr dem lyk nythn
    U r fab ty:-)

    1. thnx dear
      loved that u commented
      coming to ur wish, u keep commenting and i will keep updating
      so wat say DEAL???? LOL

  2. It was a very good update dear…loved Parth’s caring..and their chemistry is superb ??waiting for next parts niri….pls update asap

    1. thnx dear and will try to update next one tmrw
      keep commenting….i love to read ur comments

  3. my heart is singing in joy….loads of kisses n hugs to u for this amazing update…. thanku

    1. ahhh so many kisses and hugs… delighting….
      yeah you got it thats me….i keep doing such stupid things…but really dear overwhelmed seeing ur comment….and plz whenever u find the quality of my update a bit low straight away say it on my face..that gonna make u a better frnd of mine …and me a better writer
      love u for commenting

  4. Ohhh gud..thanks for the update…

    1. yep and ty for commenting

  5. I didn’t like it coz I loved it yaaarr…just waiting 4 da next update ? when will their misunderstanding be cleared ??? i can’t see them hurt after such romantic moments….

    1. you scared me man!! and the track will go on….i dont know dude its like i get it in my mind only after i start writing or sometimes when i am not sleepy i ponder over the going to be part of my story well that happens b4 i go to bed.thnx for commenting and plz keep giving ur views

  6. Niri u r too gud n today s update is sooo romantic… Parth care,protectiveness n pani s growing closeness…all these r just awsome

    1. thnx dear… its turning pretty awesome, the experience of writing and then getting such lovely comments, and know what i will even skip my works for this, like i will keep u guys updated with this story…so keep enjoying and delighting me with ur comments

      1. Thats soo sweet of on a serious point dont hamper ur work 4 it. But i really like to read this and appreciate ur skill. Soo plz continue

    2. naah dear…i din mean that i wud totally neglect moreover since i am not updating today but tmrw u must have got it that i cant actually even if i want to
      and thnks again for talking to me

      1. U r welcome n thank u 4 replying

  7. Amazing dear…. How can u do dat… So… Nicely… With ur skills u give so much happiness… Yaar… Thnks fr update… Keep it up…luv u

    1. thnk you dear..and the credit goes to u guys as well!! since u all turn my mood up, and when i get cheery like now i write something to delight u guys along with.

  8. It is so delighting to see pani together. Thx for awesome update

    1. Thnks dude and plz keep commenting

  9. Wow amazing.. You write so well.. Second time I got interested in a fan page.. Sorry if Iwould have came cross this earlier it would have surely been my first.. I just loved it.. The way you wrote and the story.. Truly appreciable .. Please do write more you can be a novelist 🙂 🙂 and my expectations soon gonna reach heights 😉

    1. The way you write I can clearly imagine the character’s face .. Your words reflect their every expressions so we

    2. awwww so sweet of u dear to think so much abt me…u know what this is why i write..and i know i can do better but problems and complications in daily life dont allow me…and thank you so much for such a lovely comment

    3. Pleasure is all mine dear .Wish you all the very best.. Face all the obstacles but please never stop writing. Cause you have got the talent.

      1. whoaaa love u for it….and wait till tmrw for the next one promise to all of you i will post a pretty long and put all my efforts to make it enjoyable

        LOve u all so much….muaah

    4. Yup sure.. Sabra ka fal meetha hota hai so I expect the best of you

  10. It do good please when updating tmrw make it very long more than this please

    1. yeah dear i will make it pretty long but am afraid wont be able to make it today actually am moving to a rural area by evening and network problems wont allow me to update but surely i will update onwe tmrw and i promise it will be twice as long as this one…in the mean time you guys prepare ur self for the long one and i will think over the story, yeah?

  11. Woooow! I just loved it..all the care and attention..I hope all her friends would soon reach there knowing her condition…u are awesome…

    1. ya you got it somewhere near her frnds gonna reach there but lets c whats destiny stored for them
      thnks for commenting

  12. Superb niri….really u put so much efforts to make us happy like the same way parth put efforts to make niti happy …love u niri…keep updating…

    1. oh yeah dear i am very much influenced by Parth and thats so very true..i do put some efforts..after all that turn out to be so fruitful… guys give such awesome and lovely comments that my heart keep on craving for more..and so i have to put something better than the last one, right?
      and love u too dear priya

  13. Ohhhh wow y don’t u become writer if u did it will be awesome
    Waiting for next episode

  14. ahh thats some good idea but dear i can barely handle this now thinking of writing books am gonna be dead…LOL
    thanks for commenting and stay tuned will soon give u guys the next update
    well not b4 tmrw,sorry for that and LOVE U ALL

  15. Thank you tmrw we willbe waiting you know it my breakfast

  16. Keeeping on looking for ur update….plz update fast na..

  17. Hello everyone. I know niri writes awesome . The words she put and her efforts attracts everyone.
    I have tried to write a ff. I would love it if you guyz support me . Th title is ’till that day’ thank you guyz .

  18. Wowwww awesome episode. ..I just loved it very very muchhhh. …eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads

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