Pani – a story we wish were true – Part 37

Recap: PaNi decide to go for dinner the next day while going back home from shoot. Both of them excited for the first date which is not an official “date” for them.

The shoot venue next day is a different one than the routine. They are shooting in the outskirts of the city as the plot is the jungle sequence where Raghav sir gives both Fab 5 and NH3 a punishing task.

Again, Parth and Niti reach the shoot venue together with a little help from Ayaz. The whole day goes just like a normal one till evening. It was around 4.30 pm and they still had many scenes to be done as they had to complete all the scenes in one day so that they would not have to go there again.

The scene being shot was the one where Raghav sir is explaining the task to both the bands. In the middle of the scene, Parth suddenly gave out a scream which scared everyone ! All of them looked at him and his face showed the pain he had been suffering of. He started scratching his leg and took a look at it to find it bleeding. Something from the jungle had bit him which made him feel sick and the blood flow wasn’t stopping. As soon as the others saw it, they took him to the vanity and started trying to stop the blood. Since the location was in the outskirts of the city, they could not even find a doctor so easily.

While Parth was lying in the vanity with all the others surrounding him, Niti was sitting beside him on the couch and just staring at the wound on his leg. She almost had tears brimming in her eyes when Parth noticed her concern. He immediately looked into her eyes and strictly denied her the tears. She instantly granted his wish and straightened her face. All the others were busy doing something or the other to heal the wound or call a doctor but Ayaz noticed Niti. He could feel Niti’s pain for Parth even without herself accepting it.

After enough exercise, they decided on taking Parth for some treatment from a doctor.

Director: We can’t take him to the hospital. If the news spreads in the public, it will be a big issue. We have to get him treated at some other place. Maybe someone’s house.

Parth: (struggling the pain to speak) My house.

Charlie: Your house is at the other corner. My place ?

Ayaz: ( striking an idea to let PaNi be together) Charlie your place is good but there is someone else’s place that is nearer.

Krissan, Utkarsh, Veebha: (together) Who ?

Ayaz: Niti.

Both Parth and Niti look up at him just like all the others. They then look at each other and Parth tries to avoid the plan but Niti disrupts him,

Niti: Yes ! Ayaz is right. My place comes first as soon as we enter the city. C’mon lets go.

Ayaz takes Parth in his car, utkarsh on his bike and the girls in Parth’s car. Charlie is driving his car with Veebha seated beside her and Niti and Krissan on the back seat. All of them are worried about Parth but who is concerned the most is Niti ! Ayaz’s car was ahead of them and Niti was constantly staring at it. Krissan, Charlie and veebha also noticed the extra concern on niti’s face but kept that to be looked into later.

By the time they reach niti’s place, Parth had fainted. As soon as Ayaz stops the car, Niti rushes towards it only to find Parth fainted on the back seat. Ayaz notices the others coming towards them and therefore asks Niti to control herself. She wipes out the few tears that had been trying to escape her eyes. They take him upstairs and the doctor arrives soon.

Doctor: (after checking Parth) as of now, I can’t say anything. We would first need to do the blood test to find out if the poison has been spreading in the body. I’ve called someone to take the blood sample, he would arrive in 10 minutes. I’ll again come in the evening at around 8.00 pm with the reports.

Ayaz: but doctor why is he still not conscious ?

Doctor: it’s because of the poison. But I have given him 2 injections. That should bring him to his senses within the next 1 hour. If that does not happen, just give me a call.

Utkarsh: thank you doctor. Come I’ll leave you to your car.

Ayaz: I think girls even you should leave. I will stay back and keep you all updated.

Charlie: what are you saying Ayaz ? How can we leave like that ?

Veebha notices niti’s disturbed condition and understands that something had been going on between her and parth about which she was unaware. She therefore decides to support Ayaz which would let Niti be alone with Parth.

Veebha: I think he is right Charlie. It’ll be very late and we would also come across a lot of traffic. I think we should leave.

Krissan: Ayaz are you sure you won’t need us ? We can stay if you need any help.

Utkarsh: (entering the room) what happened ?

Ayaz: no kriss it’s alright. All of you can leave. Umm utkarsh even you should leave.

Utkarsh: what ? No way ! I’m not going anywhere. And please don’t try to convince me because I won’t get convinced.

Ayaz: okay so utkarsh you stay back. Girls you can leave.

Veebha: (coming back into the room after ordering a cab) I’ve ordered cabs for us.

1 hour later, Niti had fallen asleep on a chair beside the bed on which Parth had been sleeping. Ayaz and utkarsh had been sitting on the bed beside him and chatting softly trying not to disturb Niti’s sleep.

Utkarsh: do you think we should give the doctor a call. He is still unconscious.

Ayaz: let’s wait for another 5/10 minutes and then give him a call.

Just then Parth slowly opened his eyes and so did Niti along with him. Both of them slowly opened their eyes and looked at each other. Niti quickly sat upright on seeing Parth coming to his senses.

Utkarsh: buddy how are you feeling now ?

Parth: (weakly turning to look at utkarsh) yeah ! Just a bit weak.

Ayaz: I’ll give the doctor a call.

He moves out to go and talk to the doctor. Niti moves to the kitchen to quickly get some water. Utkarsh helps Parth to sit upright and Niti helps him have the water.

Ayaz: the doctor is coming in some time with the reports. Do you need anything Parth ?

Parth: I want to change into something comfortable. Where’s my car ?

Utkarsh: your car is parked downstairs and right now we are at niti’s place.

Parth: yeah I know that. Buddy can you please get my bag from my car ? I have comfortable clothes in it.

Utkarsh: sure.

After utkarsh moves out, even Ayaz excuses himself out of the room to give the newly found “friends” some privacy.

Parth: why these tears ?

Niti: what tears ? It’s nothing like that.

Parth: so you would lie to your new friend ?

Niti: I’m not lying.

Parth: our dinner got cancelled !

Niti: oh yeah ! I didn’t realise. I had completely forgotten about it.

Parth: stop lying now ! I can read your face.

Niti: so what does my face say right now ?

Parth: as of now you are quite relieved that I am now conscious. But you are also sad that our dinner outing got cancelled.

Niti: do you want something to eat ?

Parth: Why you’re taking me out for dinner ? Niti, it has got cancelled for the time being.

Niti: I think you should take some rest.

She turns around to move out of the room but Parth stops her by holding her hand. Just then Utkarsh and Ayaz enter the room and Parth suddenly drops her hand which is noticed by both Ayaz and Utkarsh.

Utkarsh: Here buddy, your clothes. C’mon I’ll help you change.

Niti and Ayaz move out of the room while Utkarsh helps Parth change his clothes.

Precap: Parth to stay back at Niti’s place as travelling not a really good option in such a condition. Niti to take care of him.

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Sorry friends I know I’m very late….But I had to update !

Happy Lohri and Happy Uttarayan to all of you !! Enjoy the festive season !

#behappy

#spreadsmiles

Credit to: Medhavi

36 comments

  1. pulin

    We r friends na so in friendship there is no sorry n no thank u so it’s ok
    I love your updates nd wish u a very happy lohari n happy uttarayan???

  2. kavya

    This time, apne aapne saare record Thor diye dii……
    Means really dii……apne ise story ki itni ache se kyy se link kiya h…..ki hum hamshah “PANI” or “KYY” dono life ek sath experience kar lete h……
    apne ise itna special bana diya h ki ab kbhi lgta hi nhi h ki kyy show band hoo gya h……
    Nd really dii, ye kaam sirf ap hi kar sakte hoo…….
    Each nd every scene is soo special……
    Or agar itne ache update me liye 1 din ka wait too kuch nhi h dii….
    Me too 2 din ka bhi kar loo…..haa par ise jada nhi…….
    Love u dii…..
    Love pani…..
    Pani roczz…..always nd forever…….

  3. tabassum

    hi medhavi! i waited for your update since yesterday morning but its ok you eventually updated…haan mujhe apni waiting ka beautiful update mila…coming to the update yaar your too good…i can’t tell you specific reason about todays update because totall update is superb each and everything is perfect..but parth is in pain quite depressing..niti concern how much see care for her friends..i hope he will well get soon…if you don’t mind please tell me which subject do you like to study i want to know…happy sankrat #spread happiness …god bless you

  4. aena

    I read all your updates but never comment but ur writing have really forced me to comment really girl u r just awesome and amazing imagination aapki story read Karne ke baad seriously nahi lagta ki kyy end ho gaya awesome work di keep going me to cannot wait for a long time but will wait because itni amazing and lovely story ke liye wait karne mei koi problem nahi hai
    love manan
    love pani
    love ur writing
    and love u too?
    and ya do study well to☺☺??

  5. Plumpyyy

    No sorry no thank you!!
    What should i even say? Im at loss of words yaar medhu!! Matlab.. How do u manage to amaze me evrytym?????!!!!?????
    That manjha sequence!!!!!! Aah yaar i love kyy n PaNi sooo much!!!!!! The way u incorporate d scenes with ur story is truly commendable!! It seriously pained seeing parth in pain! Niti just went all tears! She just didn’t care about nothing but parth!
    Ayazzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!! How should i appreciate him now?? I want some tips! All i can say is he is a true friend! (only here not in reality)
    Friendship was highlighted… The girls.. Especially charlie.. They were so concerned that they didn’t want to leave him alone..!!
    And now comes utkarsh.. Aww how cutely he said he won’t get convinced…!!! I so hope ayaz n utkarsh were actually parth’s true friends!
    PaNi’s small convo.. Oh god! They’re so damn lovely!! So caring both were!!
    Oh oh! Hope utkarsh doesn’t feel insecure or something of that sort!
    Girl gang have a doubt on niti! Vibha’s all set to indirectly question!
    Wow! Yay! Parth at niti’s place and she gonna take care of him! The opposite is happening now! Parth took care of niti once before!
    Lovedddd itttt a lottttt!!!!!!!
    Love u medhu!!!
    Btw when is MaNan ff next?

  6. Plumpyyy

    Happy lohri n uttarayan to u too medhu πŸ™‚
    and i hope abhishek is of no use here! As in he doesn’t have any specific role to play na? Except for harshad urf jerkshad!

  7. Fathima

    Omg I didn’t see DAT coming n such a wonderful seen medhavi plss bcme a writer I swear I all read all Ur books coz u white Ur story like its living n we r facing it

  8. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous episode medhavi dearrrr, it’s superb story…the way you’re connecting all the dots from the show manan n pani it’s amazingly awesoooooome…I’m loving it n totally addicted to Youuuuuuuuu and Your both stories…coming to the episode, it was awesome…parth in pain n the same pain is showing in niti’s eyes for him…her n all the friends concern for him was really touchy…ayazzzz you’re such a sweetheart, utkarsh n veebha n all also true friends…hmmm dinner got canceled, but maybe this dinner can be in niti’s house now πŸ™‚ … precap is very interesting. ..parth to stay in niti’s place n niti will take care of him wow….keep it up…pani n manan forever. ..love you loads

  9. Zoey

    i ACTUALLY LIKE THIS WAY BETTER THEN IF IT WAS A DATE!!!!! SUCH A GOOD TWIST!!! ITS SOOOO GOOD!…PLEASE UPDATE SOON BC THIS IS A NEW TWIST AND I LOVE ITT πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  10. Megh

    Medhavi di……how do u always manage to nail it this way..The way niti shows concern for parth lyk the unexpected tears and parth warning her to control her tears just with his eyes…Oh my god…I’m just imagining all the story as If I’m seeing another episode of ky2.Nothing more I can say but just medhavi di “u” r the best….itna sweet ,interesting kaise soch the aap??!

  11. Alifya

    Oh no parth got injured dammm ab kya hoga :,(…. Well i must say that these epi was so emotional..but one thing which was glowing in between was their friendship…
    The way they guys were helping him in all possible way so so adorable…
    N parth ko chot lagi hai phir bhi use niti aur uski dinner date ki pari hai and he want his answer why she is so upset was so cute n romantic…..
    In short medhu your update was full of dffrnt dffrnt emotions…
    Which can be describe as a” short beautiful film ” … Well while describing ur work awesome,superb r just a words cuz ur telent is beyond brilliance….

  12. Alifya

    U knw what first i was just addicted to kyy bt now m also addicted to ur story..
    N the credit can be given to only one person n thts u cuz ur story owes u and ur hardships, and your truthful personality….
    Stay bless dear
    stay happy
    wsh u all the massive success in ur lyf
    keepsmiling
    lots of love

  13. Jesy

    Hey Medhavi..your fan fictions are beautiful..so enthralling and mesmerizing. .i just can’t stop myself..i read all the episodes from last week..so i m commenting for all of them together. .u r just awesome..pls continue ur gud work..love u..:)

  14. sujatha muthukannu

    Wow, what to say yΓ ar, simply saying superb . can’t wait for next update. U gave equal role for every one not only concentrating pani… Am loving it dear. Keep gng. Tkecre…

  15. Sia

    Hey meshavi i ws so busy these dyz and ws nt able to read update but so happy that u updated it tday only??again an awesome one!! U r jst a star jst keep writting…….

  16. aena

    di plz update fast seriously cannot wait for the next update parth again at niti’s place it would be so amazing omggg just cannot control pls update fast I know u must be busy somewhere but cannot wait for ur next update……..plz update fast

  17. Plumpyyy

    U busy medhu?? Okay no worries as even I’m busy? I so loved the epi??????? their frienfship? u know I had an exam today n after that I was busy singing o yaara n thinking about your stories! It’s simply a treat to all of us!?? plus yesterday on zing ptkk abhishek’s episode was aired I was laughing coz how can our lovely jerk shad be good na!!??? I miss Ky2 yaar medhu n I’m really very thankful to u got continuing your stories!???
    Love u medhu and your stories and our ky2??❀?
    And medhu.. I wanted to ask when will manan 1st kiss come??????

  18. Medhavi Thakkar

    Hello all my lovely friends…I know I’ve been keeping you all waiting for a very long time…but the thing is I have had guests at my place since Uttarayan and therefore I’m unable to update…Everyday I try to write but fail to do so as it is very late in the night…Trust me friends I don’t like to keep you all waiting but unfortunately I have been doing so…I have tried and read all your comments hurriedly but won’t be able to reply to each one of you just this one time…Please forgive me for that friends….And I would like to thank each and every one of you from the bottom of my heart for supporting me throughout…You know today when I decided to leave this one message for you all I thought my page would be flooded with complaints that I haven’t been updateing but I’m glad to find out that you all have understood my situation and actually stated by yourself that I might be busy that’s the reason i haven’t been updating…Thank you for each and every thing !! And I am coming back from tomorrow !! Missed you all a lot !! Love you all !!! and sorry for keeping you waiting….:)
    #behappy
    #spreadsmiles

  19. Plumpyyy

    I understand medhu.. its impossible to write or do anything when guests r at home. Tomorrow!! Yaye! It’s a holiday for me tomorrow!! I can read and comment fast! And kini bar bole yaar hum log.. dosti mein no sorry no thank you!!
    And love u too??

  20. Plumpyyy

    Medhu aaj PaNi ya MaNan?? Coz manan ka toh mila nahi na πŸ™ mujhe mela manan chahiye……………… Hope manan milega.. Ya phir dono!!? Whay say? πŸ˜‰

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