The pain that continues..(episode 55)

Hi guys . this is long part . hope u all like it . plz comment . they mean a lot to me . this one is not proof read n done in hurry . so plz excuse any silly mistakes .
Episode 55 :
Aadit and aaru comes down . they leaves their hands unwillingly .
“ Aadit I will go home now . “ Aaru said .
“ now itself . y ? “ Aadit asked .
“ I promised dad to return soon . he will be tensed by now . anyways u carry on b’day boy . I will meet u soon . bye “ Aaru said smiling .
“ bye n thanks for making this day really special . “ Aadit said .
“ its not at all me infact u r the one who is special . bye . “ Aaru replied n turns to leave .
Aaru passes by alok . she stops n turns to Alok .
“ hello uncle . I know u don’t know me . I’m Aaradhya aadit’s friend “ Aaru introduced . .
“ oh I see . u r leaving soon beta .. “ Alok asked smiling .
Aadit comes to them .
“ I said to my dad that I will return soon . so that’s y I’m leaving soon n party is really great uncle . “ Aaru said .
“ strange . even kids of today’s time are still listening to parents . ? I think u r different . “ Alok said .
“ no uncle even I’m not different . I enjoy a lot . I used to go always against my dad . now I realized his value . so I changed suddenly . now I will listen to him “ Aaru said frankly .
“ so do u think everytime we should listen to our parents ? “ Alok asked .
“ not all the time . there are such issues in which even parents should understand their kid’s will n support them . when that happens naa there will be no pain in any family . “ Aaru replied .
Alok is impressed by her frankness .
“ ok uncle bye “ Aaru .
“ ok beta .. “ Alok said .
Aaru looks at aadit n turns to leave . she stops at entrance n looks back at Aadit n waves him bye . Aadit too waves bye to her n smiles wider . when she went out n his smile vanishes . Alok notices it .
“ so Aadit u never said to me about her ? “ Alok asked .
“ I never got any chance dad . “ Aadit replied .
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@ maheshwari mansion .
Aaru enters the home .
“ wat is this Aaradhya ? I said to keep guards with u … n even u promised … this is not expected from u . “ Laksh , in louder tone .
“ dad sorry … but I’m safe right . I came straight here didn’t go anywhere else promise … “ Aaru quickly replied .
Laksh looks serious still . Aaru goes to him .
“ oh come on lucky …next time I wont do it . now plz smile naa . ok sorry “ Aaru said holding her ears .
Laksh smiles n side hugs Aaru . Aaru too smiles .
“ go n take rest . u look tired . “ laksh said caressing her hair .
“ ya … gud night dad “ she said n leaves .
While laksh looked tensed .
“ bhai tomorrow panditji is coming right … “ Laksh asked sanskar .
“ yes laksh . just relax . “ sanskar said .
“ don’t know since it happened I’m not feeling gud I feel scared even to keep aaru out of my sight . I want panditji to see Aaru’s kundli once . till then I wont get peace . “ laksh said tensed .
“ everything will be fine . u taking a lot of stress its not gud for health go n take rest . “ sanskar said .
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@ malhotra mansion .
Aadit is in his room having changed in his comfortable clothes . he is thinking about Aaradhya . he hears knock on his door .
“ come in . “ Aadit said louder.
Alok enters .
“ dad aap ? “ Aadit said getting up .
“ sit aadit . “ Alok said sitting on beanbag . Aadit feels surprised n sits on another beanbag .
“ I know I’m very strict to u .. u don’t feel free to share things with me . I was so dumped in business that I never spared time for u … “ Alok said .
“ no dad . why r u saying that ? u r working forus only right . we never feel like that . “ Aadit said looking him .
“ but u can share things in ur heart with me now . I’m free .. “ Alok said .
“ wat kind of things dad ? I know I can share with u …now I don’t have anything . “ Aadit said smiling .
“ really ??? “ Alok asks looking Aadit keenly .
“ haan … “ aadit said looking down .
Alok smiles n caresses his hair .
“ toh teek hai … don’t u think the girl I met Aaradhya is too frank … I mean when isaid she is gud unlike others she rejected stated herself as common as others . she looks like from big family but acting like common girl . the way she introduced herself without mentioning surname shows she gives herself more importance …. How can she be so ? “ Alok said .
“ dad no …u getting her wrong . she is really sweet … acts like carefree but cares the one close to her heart really . only few can understand her . once we understand her with heart then we feel no one can be better than her “ aadit quickly took Aaru’s side .
“ so u can understand her ? “ Alok asked .
“ yes … I think no one can understand that crazy girl better than me . after all she is of my type n I .. . “ Aadit said without realizing .
“ n u … wat ? “ Alok asked .
“ I … I’m her friend . “ Aadit said .
Alok smiles .
“ ok so u two r just friends then its gud . if it is just friendship then we don’t have anything to discuss about it … gud night . “ Alok said getting up .
Aadit becomes dull . Alok goes near door n turns to Aadit .
“ Aadit …. “ Alok calls aadit .
Aadit looks at him .
“ I like Aaradhya … she is so simple n frank . this kind of girls are so rare . y being just friends … ? “ alok said with smile .
Aadit is stunned . Alok leaves .
“ wat dad said just now … ? wat dad means ??? oh god It means … “ Aadit exclaims .
Aadit gets overwhelmed with happiness .
“ I cant believe dad understands me this much . I though it becomes really tough to convince dad . but he understood my feelings …. Its like everything is happening on our favor to keep us together forever …“ Aadit said n falls back on bed .
He takes his phone n calls Aaradhya .
“ hey monster party over … “ Aaru asked .
“ yep …. N listen its working “ Aadit said .
“ wat working ? “ Aaru asked confused .
“ birthday wish …. Wat else ? u r right arrogant maheshwari . it seemed god really listened to my wish . “ Aadit said .
“ I said right … It will . till now all my birthday wishes are fulfullied expect one wish of getting my mom back to me … “ Aaru replied .
“ Aaru … “ Aadit tried to comfort her .
“ I’m fine aadit . ok let me is anything else … “ Aaru asked .
“ yes … my dad likes u …its really strange to me … generally he don’t like people so early … but today he was quite impressed with u . don’t know y everyone likes Arrogant maheshwari so soon … when u can impress aadit malhotra u can impress anyone that not big deal I know … “ Aadit replied .
“ ya … not just aadit malhotra .. the great Aadit malhotra … who loves tease and play everyone with his crazy pranks outside home but in front of his dad he becomes really quiet as if he don’t know anything about this world n seeing it for first time … “ Aaru replied in teasing manner .
“ shut up ok … I respect him … so I’ll be like that not bcoz I’m scared of my dad .. “ Aadit replied with attitude.
“ oh really ? stop covering things mr. malhotra I have seen u in the party . u were like small kid standing with his dad on the first day of joining in school . by the way u looked so cute in that angle … “ Aaru said laughing .
“ ms. Maheshwari remember even my days will come soon till then laugh as much as u can … “ Aadit replied being annoyed .
“ let us see … n then listen …“ Aaru continued .
Both talked for long hours n then went to sleep .
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Aaradhya is sleeping while Aadit sleeping beside her . Alarm rings …. Both gets disturbed .
“ yaar Arrogant maheshwari off that stupid alarm … “ Aadit said rolling other side .
“ no u off that one . I need to sleep … “ Aaru replied pulling quilt over her face .
“ jaa naa yaar plz .. “ Aadit said still closing eyes .
Aaru takes her phone n off the Alarm . she opens her eyes n sees Aadit sleeping still n caresses his cheek with her . soon she gets conscious .
“ Aadit get up … “ aaru screams sitting on bed .
“ I want to sleep more “ Aadit replied with sleepy tone .
“ gadhe get up “ Aaru holds his arm .
“ wat the hell arrogant maheshwari … ? if I sleep for some more wat loss will u get haa ? “ Aadit with louder tone . he gets up n sits .
“ I wont get any loss . but wat r u doing in my bed ? I mean y r u sleeping beside me ? “ Aaru asked confused .
“ wah wat kind of question is this ? seriously brilliant … when we r married … if not beside u where should I sleep ? do u expect me to sleep on road or wat … ? “ Aadit asked louder .
“ wat ??? “ Aaru screams .
“ y r u shouting ? now don’t ask me when we got married . now go n get my bed coffee fast … “ Aadit said leaning back to sleep again .
Aaru holds his hand not letting him to lie down again …
“ wat r u doing ? I said u to get my coffee … go “ Aadit lil louder sitting straight .
“ y r u ordering me now ? u were not like this before now wat happened monster … ? u cant rule me ok “ Aaru asked .
“ that is before marriage . we r married now . I’m ur husband n all husbands will be like this only . now go get coffee for me bcoz of u daily I’m getting late to work . today I don’t want get late again .. “ Aadit said lies down on bed again .
“ wat the hell ? again u r sleeping … just before u said u r getting late to work daily instead now get up n get ready … “ Aaru said impatiently .
“ without bed coffee my day wont start .. “ Aadit said with sleepy tone .
“ idiot “ Aaru let outs .
“ oh idiot … then y did u marry idiot ? if u r daily interview done can u go n do wat I said ? “ Aadit asked
Aaru gets totally confused . aaru about to get down from bed .
“ wait …wat is happening here ? is it really happening or wat ??? let me check “ aaru said looking Aadit .
Aaru looks at Aadit n pinches aadit’s hand .
“ ahh……… “ Aadit shouts louder .
Aaru quickly gets up from sleep n looks beside her . n realizes its just her dream seeing no one beside her . Aaru starts laughing at her crazy dream .
“ aaru .. aaru …u r mad …really mad … anyways its all bcoz of that monster . not my mistake . “ Aaru made self talk .
Aaru recalls the dream n smiles .
“ even monster too behaves like that ..after marriage ? if he behaves so then I will break tray on his head … then he becomes fine … “ aaru said smiling .
Aaradhya looks out through window .
“ hmm…. Its like last night it rained . weather is really pleasant . n time is just 6: 30 today I got up early . “ Aaru made self talk before getting down from bed .
She goes to fresh up .
*****
Laksh n all family members are waiting in hall for pandit ji . finally he arrives .
“ namasthe panditji aaiye … “ laksh welcomed him .
“ bhagwan aapke poore paarivaar ko asheervaad de … “ pandit blessed them .
Annapurna gives him Aaradhya’s kundli . panditji looks at it keenly .
“ once call Aaradhya beti … “ panditji said .
“ ji … I will call her . “ parneetha said n heads to her room .
*****
Aaru standing near window . she is smiling remembering Aadit .
“ don’t know when I will tell that idiot “ Aaru let outs smiling .
“ wat u wanna tell aaru ? “ parneetha asked entering into room .
“ nothing bade maa …just I was thinking something … “ Aaru replied quickly .
“ ok … come with me … pandit ji came .. “ parneetha said holding aaru’s hand .
“ one min “ Aaru stopped her .
“ pandit ji came .. but for wat ? “ Aaru asked .
“ nothing particular . u come naa . u will know … “ parneetha said .
Aaru nods positively and goes behind her .
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Aaru comes to hall n looks at laksh . laksh signs her to take blessings from panditji . Aaru touches his feet .
“ stay happy child . “ he blesses her whole heartedly .
Laksh smiles . Aaru gets up n looks at laksh n shrugs her shoulders as if asking laksh wats happening ?
Laksh nods nothing . Aaru goes n sits beside him . while pandit ji is checking her kundli .
“ may be u don’t know papa I’m really smarter . tell me wats going on here ? “ Aaru only audible to laksh .
“ nothing Aaru …. When that things happened I feel so strange just I wanna get ur kundli checked once … “ laksh said .
“ wat papa ? still u believe all these things . I mean if its written to die anyone will die no one will know it expect god … “ Aaru replied .
“ aaru don’t talk about death beta . I want my daughter to live 100 years n enjoy all happiness “ laksh said .
“ 100 ears like seriously papa …I will be bored then … ok now can I go “ aaru said rolling her eyes .
“ ok go … “ laksh replied smiling .
Aaru leaves . laksh looking her leaving .
“ what happened pandit ji ? everything is fine right …. “ Annapurna asked a bit tensed .
“ no . Annapurna ji not everything is fine . “ pandit ji said .
“ wat ??? wats wrong …pandit ji “ Laksh asked quickly turning to his side with tensed look .
“ Aaradhya has dosh in her kundli . n the near death accident happened two months back is only bcoz of this dosh . the period running now is not at all safe for her life . her life is in danger still . again she will get attacked some way … “ pandit ji said .
Everyone gets shocked .
“ plz don’t say like that pandit ji . wat should we do now ? there must be some way right . plz tell us . “ laksh asked tensely .
“ don’t worry … I will think about some way . first Aaradhya should do pooja . bring her tomorrow to temple . god will protect her . I will take her kundli with me n inform u all wat we should do later . now I will leave . “ pandit said .
Everyone gets up . pandit ji leaves . laksh eyes becomes moist .
“ wat pandit ji is telling maa … ? I don’t understand . “ laksh said with tears .
“ laksh plz … don’t worry nothing will happen to Aaru . she will be fine . we r there right . we will do pooja … leave everything on god . “ anaapurna consoled him .
“ till now wat ever he said that happened . now wat if something happens to Aaradhya . how should I live ? “ laksh asked with tears .
“ laksh don’t say anything beta . think good . everything will be fine . “ Annapurna assured him .
Whole night laksh was in full stress .
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Morning 5: 00 am . Aaru is sleeping in her room . laksh comes to her room .
“ Aaru get up … “ laksh wakes her up .
Aaru gets up .
“ wat happened papa … ? so early today . “ Aaru asked in sleepy tone .
“ we need to go to mandir now . get ready in these clothes . “ laksh said giving her clothes .
“ white salwar suit … y papa any pooja .. ? “ Aaru asked .
“ yes … get ready n come soon . no more questions now . “ laksh said n leaves quickly .
“ expect me everyone will have clarity …. Now even dad not telling wat going on ? “ Aaru made self talk n leaves to get fresh up .
*****
Aaradhya gets ready in those clothes n comes down . she sees everyone in hall . Aaru gets damn confused . but she didn’t ask any question since she knows she gonaa get nothing from them .
They leaves for mandir .
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“ aaru go n sit “ laksh said to her .
“ me…??? “ aaru confused .
“ yes u … “ laksh said .
“ papa seriously I’m not getting any of things . suddenly we came to mandir n these clothes n now u r asking me to sit in pooja … still u feel I should not ask anything ? “ Aaru asked .
Laksh remained silent . Aaru sits in pooja n does pooja .
After pooja she gets up . everyone prays closing eyes .
“ just keep my daughter safe n happy “ laksh prays .
“ I wont trouble u much god . just let me know wat is happening in my life …that’s enough for me plz… “ aaru wishes .
aaru remained silent . laksh takes her with him . everyone follows .
Aaru is walking silently . they cross the road . every one stands n wating for drivers to get cars . aaru stands under one building maintaining some distance from them as she feels annoyed for not telling her anything . the building near which she standing is still under construction . Aaru too waiting for car . laksh understands she is angry .
“ aaru come here “ laksh calls her .
Aaradhya turns her face away . laksh smiles .
“ come here aaru …don’t be childish . “ laksh said .
“ I never thought that my life becomes this much funny …first of all they r treating me as kid by not telling even about my things there is nothing wrong in it but when I act childish it went completely wrong … “ Aaru murmurs .
Aaru phone rings actually her phone is with laksh right now . he took it while she was sitting in pooja .
“ aaru call for u .. “ laksh louder …
Aaru looks away .
“ hmm….ok ….its just ur friend Aadit … I will cut the call as u r not interested … “ Laksh said …
Aaru wants to take the call but she pretends to be not interested .
“ ok then … it seems u r not at all interested in ur friend’s call … “ laksh let outs .
“ monster’s call aaru …. “ aaru thinks for a second n heads towards laksh .
Laksh smiles . as soon as she moves few steps ahead … the building near which standing she is standing till now bundle of iron rods kept for contrition purpose of building falls on the spot she was standing till now from building .
“ Aaru “ laksh screams .
every one gets utter shocked . Aaru turns back suddenly hearing sound even she too left shocked . laksh condition was unexplainable . he went out of senses . laksh goes unconscious n falls .
“ laksh …. “ everyone screams .
Aaru looks at them …
“ papa “ aaru shouts running to him .
“ papa look at me … “ aaru cries holding laksh .
“ get the car fast “ aaru screams .
Episode ends .
Precap : laksh’s condition .Aaru’s promise to laksh . n laksh revealing his choice of right one for Aaradhya …

Credit to: honey

5 comments

  1. lovely

    Aadit is protector of ragini, he saves her from danger 2times, hope they will united soon

  2. Mamu

    Oh no dear don’t make rivan as laksh’s choice for aradhya…anyways the update was awesome continue soon

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