Pahela Pyaar :Raglak Os


Hello Guys..I Meethi is.. back with one more os on Raglak..Pahela Pyaar❤…
I got loads of comments in my previous os..

And many ppl asked me to write i m back..hope u all like this one too?..

So now i will start ?⛧…
The scene starts on a girl who is checking some reports..

Girl-So Mrs Maya after checking ur reports it seems u r completely fine now..but remind u take care of urself..u r weak..u need extra care..u this stage of pregnancy it is very imp for a would be mother to be careful..u shd carefully plan everything ur food..ur sleep and ur exercise shd also be on tym..u r strictly prohibited frm doing any house work…and Mr Kapoor..u have to take extra care of ur wofe now..its only one month left for her delivery date..

Maya-Thank u so much Dr..I will take care..
Mr Kapoor-Yes Ms Ragini..if u wouldn't be here..we would have lost our kid…Thank u!…

(Yes the dr is none other than Ragini..she is a gynaecologist)

Ragini-Sir..its not only bcoz of me..its her..who did not lose her strength and her determination..she had to bear d pain..not i..i jst consoled her..and helped her..after her accident it was difficult to save her child..but its jst bcoz of her and ur prayers which saved the child..And once again i m reminding u both..pls take care..u r weak maya..and u need to gain strength till d delivery date…for a safe delivery..
Maya-Yes we will make sure…amd Thank u once we will take ur leave..bye..

Ragini smiles…They go and Ragini sees the watch…

Ohk its 4pm…and i knw wat is gonna happen…5..4…3….2…1..she counts and her phone rings..and she picks it up with a smile…
Ragini-Yes mom..Ya ya i have eaten my food…yes i shared it wid min cn u decide this…ma pls…wat will i do their…and..hello not not again and she cuts d phone…..

Oh more trouble my no..shes not d trouble..infact she is d solution to all my problems..but today..she created a problem for me..wat!I'll tell u..she wants me to meet some di's hone wala dewar..jiju's bro and di fell in love wen they were studying engineering..last year and i was in USA pursuing my Medical…I had no idea wen her engagement got final until..

Tring Tring Tring my phone rang..and remind u i was sleeeping coz it was night there…
I picked up d phone..
Hello is said in a sleepy tone..
Di-Ragu..u r sleeping get up its afternoon…she sounded excited..and i think she forgot that i was USA..
Di its 3 am here…i again said in a sleeping tone..i asked di wat happened y r u soundng so excited..
Di-Ragu..i m getting engaged in 3 months….i want u to come..and i knw u have ur Finals the nxt month so u can the 2nd month..
Okay i said..and cut the phone..but then realised that my nerdy is goona get engaged..i was happy 4 her..very..much..i love her..

Flashback over⛧…
But the problem was  I missed their engagement… finals were postponed..and i came home after 1 month of her engagement…imagine wat a  volcano might have blasted on me..but it was calmed by my jiju..After that i decided to work here in mumbai itself…Luckily my bestie..Rohan who is also a doctor and owns a chain of hospitals..showed mercy on me and gave me a job..on d condition tat i will share my food wid him always..jst kidding he knew my talent so i was appointed….now its been 6 months i m in Mumbai.. nd my ma baba are running behind me 4 marriage wich i dont want… di is gonna marry in two months..and i dont wnt myself to thnk abt marriage now…Returning 2 d current problem i have to meet "Lucky"god knws who is he..the 2nd prob is..even if i want 2 meet him i cannot..coz i have a very imp meeting wid some  Mr.Laksh who is a renowned Cardiologist.
So now i have to take help of..

I heard..(pov ends)..
May I come in Madam!..said Rohan..

Rohan-U were cmg to me ri8..
Ragini-Yes actually ma wants me to meet some jiju's bro..but i..
Rohan-u have a meeting..
Ragini-U knw me now u gonna talk to my ma..
Rohan -Ufff ragu..u r too much..i will not talk to her..pls..she will ask abt my marriage..but u knw na Me and riya need some tym..
Ragini-I knw..and u have to…i have done a favour on u by allowing my bst frnd cum u..
Rohan- Nautanki…okay i will call..saying this he calls nd ragi asks him to put d phone on speaker…

Sumi-arre Rohan beta..aaj mujhe kaise yaad kiya..Did ragu do smthng..I will scold her give d phone to her..
Rohan-Arre no no aunty actually d thng is Ragu has a meeting ..tday and she will not be able to go to meet d person..pls Aunty..
Sumi-Koi nahi beta..i knw u will not lie..if ragu told me this i would have not agreed but u saying it is acceptable..okay..i ll tell ap ji..byee beta take care…
Rohan cuts d phone..and sees..ragini standing..with her jaws dropped..

Ragini-This is not fair..she always does this and she sits with cute puppy face..
Rohan-Arre..Ragu..its d truth accept it..she loves me more than u..after all i m her only son..and he winks..
Ragini-Acha..i am her daughter she love me more..and shows him tongue ??..but i m happy to get such cute..carng brother like u sayng this she pulls her cheeks..
Rohan-Thanks..wait did u jst call me cute..ragu u knw na..i dont like u calling me cute..!..
Ragini is gonna say smthng wen rohan's phone rings..
Rohan-Yes i m cmg make him sit in my cabin..
Ragu i m gng i will call u 5 min..okay and BEHAVE..
HE leaves..
Ragini imitates Behave??..

Ragini-..ok now ragu concentrate..u have to do this meeting nicely..
 Ragini is called and she goes..

She enters and sees a handsome and a dashing male sitting..wid rohan…

Ragini pov..
Ok ok..i was startled to see he d experienced doctor abt whom rohan was talking..he is so damn handsome..his eyes..are deep and passionate..his stubble..makes me like him even more…wait wat did i concentrate..he is ur new boss..the hod..but his eyes have a hypnotizing effect…ragu controll..
My thoughtswere broken by rohan..
Miss..introduce urself…rohan said..
He very well knows me..

Ragini-Good evening sir..i m Gini..Nice w meet u..and forwarded her hand..
Rohan smiled at her..
Laksh-Hello miss Gini i m laksh..nd shook hands with ragini..

 Laksh Pov..

So it was quite strange..she was my junior..but she might be jst a year younger to me..she looks like a true..Princess charming…wait LUCKY..u jst chngd d name frm..prince to princess charming..strange…but her eyes…be d most beautiful thng i have ever seen..he d cutest..wait lucky concentrate..she's ur junior..but i like her..lucky..calm down..its jst a mere attraction….now concentrate..
Pov ends..

Ragini-So ro..rohan stares her..i means sir shall we start discussing d topic..
Rohan-Yes miss..Gini..
Laksh and ragini sots..and they three start their meeting…

The meeting ends….
At night..
Ragini..oh scoooty..why do u trouble me by not getting i will ask rohan for lift and she goes and stands near d gate..and is going to call rohan wen..she hears a horns and turns to find laksh in d car..
Laksh-Miss u need a lift?..
Ragini-No sir i will manage..rohan will drp me home..dnt stress urself..and she smiles..
Laksh-Vaise..rohan has already left..riya ka call aya tha..
Ragini-Oh..this rohan..pyar mein andha..and sir..u dont worry i will take a taxi..
Laksh-I said na..i will dro come sit..
Ragini agrees amd sits..
Laksh-So where do u live..

Ragini pov..
Oh god..this is wat i feared i cannot tell him that i m a gadodia..its like i dnt like this dad is renowned buisness man..and is sme1 comes to knw that i m his daughter they will ask that why did i not prefer working jn my dad's Franchis of hospitals..or any other field..this is d reason why i dont disclose my real.. i want 2 achieve everythng on my lyf by my talent onlyt..not jst bcoz i m a gadodia..rohan knws this hence he always asks me 2 introduce myself..nd now if he comes 2 drp me..he will come to knw by the name plate…
Her thoughts r disturbed by laksh..

Laksh-Miss i asked for ur address to drp u not ur no that u r thnkng so much..
Ragini-Oh ya..sorry..take a right frm here..
Laksh-Thinks strange..okay he says..

There is a silence in d car wen ragini shouts stop..and laksh applie d brake..
Laksh-Wat happened..
Ragini-We reached..ragini gets out of d car..
Laksh..opens d window..and says u live here..a bustop and autostand is seen and no house or no buildings around..
Laksh-Ginu u live here..there's no building or a house here..
Ragini-Actually..i live in Juhu..and i heard Rohan saying that u live in u would have to travel extra distance 2 drp me..nd its better i take an auto here..and pls dont say no..i took lift frm u na ..
Laksh-Okay but on 1 condition stp calling me sir..u can call my laksh..and give me a call wen u reach..

Ragini-Okay..Laksh…but how will i call u… mobile..u give me ur no..and then realises..ohk..sorry if u dont want to give then its okay..he says..??
Ragini raises her 1 his statement and smiles saying..laksh i was joking..wait give me ur no..
Laksh-Smiles at his antics..and gives her his no..and bids a good bye 2 her..
Ragini took an auto and reached home..she mssged laksh..she reached..and slept after having dinner..

Next Day…
Laksh entered Ragini's cabin to take sme files frm her..but also asked..
Laksh-gini why did u mssg me..?.i mean i told u to call..
Ragini-She chuckles but hides it be4 laksh sees and says..voh its that I don't call strangers u knw?..
Laksh is shocked..and says..we r toh frnds na!..
Ragini-Frnds..but frm wen..and raises her eyebrow..
Laksh-frm wen i allowed u to call me Laksh..and i also drpped u na..
Ragini-Acha..but i toh dont regard u as a frnd na..!??
Laksh-Acha!..he gets sad..wen..
Ragini starts laughng..arre buddhu i was joking..we r frnds…and  forwards her hand for frndship….

Days pass and their bond changes frm frnd to best frnd and then they grew close 2 eachother..they both started loving eachother but d problem..was as usual..they were not sure of their partners..feeling so they kept mum..

But one day..

In ragini's house..
Sumi- Ragu..and shona come down jaldi..
They both came down..wat happened they say..curiously..
Shekar-I nd ur mum has taken a decision..that along wid swara..ragu..ur marriage will also take place..and we have already found a groom..lucky..Sanskaar's brother..and pls dont say no..we knw its hard 4 u to accept..but we want both of u to get a very well settled family..and it would have not been better that u both get married in d same household..
Ragini-But baba..i ..
Sumi-Pls ragu..

Ragini-Sadly ok..amd runs 2 her room..
Swara goes behind her..
Swara-Wat happened ragu..she sees ragu crying on d bed..
Ragu-Di i love sme1 else..
Swara is shocked but happy..who is d lucky 1..
Ragini-Laksh..she shows her his photo in her mobile..di i love him very much..
Swara-Is shocked to see d pic..and my ragu dewarji..i mean her 2 be husband and she doesnot knw that lucky is none other than laksh..interesting..abh maza tease her..
Swara-Ragu..i understand ur love..but pls for me  once meet lucky..he is a very nice guy nd of u dnt like him..we will refuse for marriage..
Ragini-Ok..saying this swara leaves d room and informs shekar and sumi ant her yes 4 d marriage..while ragini thinks..he only  will reject me ????…

The scene shifts to Laksh's house..

DP-laksh its our final decision u r gng to marry Ragini Gadodia..swara's sister..
Ap-Yes beta..we have met her..she is jst lyk d girl u desire for..all good qualities she has in her..pls for  us..
Dp-See laksh..Shekar is my bst and old frnd..i cannot refuse his daughter has agreed 2 marry u..tom..ur going to meet her along with sanskaar..and thats final..
Laksh angrily goes to his room..
Sanskaar also goes behind him..laksh..listen y dont u jst meet her..i bet u wipl fall in luv with her..
Laksh-But bhai i love some1 else..Sanskaar is shocked..laksh Maheshwari has fallen for sme1.who is that lucky girl..laksh shows him her pic..Sanskaar he loves my saaali saheba..amd he himself doesnot knw that she is swara's sis and his to be wife..mazaa toh lena padega is situation ka ..Sanskaar laksh atleats meet her and then give ur ans..laksh agrees…sanskaar leaves..

At night..
Trimg tring..
Sanskaar-Picks d call..
Swara-Hello mr kumbhkaran get up..i want to tell smthng..
Sanskaar-Ha tell tell..the 3 magical words..i m dieing to hear..
Swara-Chii sanskaar raat ko bhi yahi baat..
Sanskaar-These type of thngs are talked in night only..
Swara-Huff..leave listen do u knw that laksh and ragini luv eachother but they themselves r not aware that they r gng to marry eachother only..
Sanskaar-I knw..i knw..
Swara-I have a plan..and tells him d plan which is muted…

The next day in d evening…

Sanskaar laksh are waiting..for ragini..actually swara couldn't accompany bcoz ap had sme work wid her..
Laksh-wen is she gonna come..i need to refuse n leave..
Saanskaar-Wait have patience bro..
Laksh-Bhai..i ll jst come frm washroom..sanskaar-ok..

At that tym only.

Ragini comes along wid a boy..
Sanskaar-Ragu who is he..
Ragu-Actually jiju he is bf..n i love him very much..and i cnnot marry ur bro..
Laksh who saw ragini (but did not see raj)..cmng follows her and hears her confession and is shocked..
So he is ur bf..right miss gini..or i shd say ragini..
Ragini is shocked and turns to see..her love..full of rage..
Ragini-Laksh tum yaha..
Laksh-Yes nd i m d same guy whom u jst rejected now..amd he storms..out..
Ragini understands d situation and leaves behind him..
She is walking on d search of laksh..wen two three eve teasers come and start eve  teasing goon starts comng close to her wen dhooom??????..
A person punches d goon amd yes that is none other than our hero laksh..

Laksh one by one hits evry goon..wen 1 goon asks..why r u protecting her..kya tumhare saggi lagti hai..
Laksh-yes..i love her in full rage and anger and continue hitting them..wen every goon is injured he demands ragini to sit in d car..
Ragini doesnot responds..anything..laksh angrily hold her hand and makes her sit in d car..
Laksh drivers very angrily..ragini tries speaking but laksh..mums her saying i m not interested in listening to u..
Suddenly…laksh applies breaks..
Laksh-Get out of d a car…we have reached d ur raj..he might be waiting 4 u..he says angrily..
Ragini senses that he is jealous..she doesn't ans..and sits there only..
Laksh-I said get out..but ragini reluctantly sits there only..
Laksh gets angry and he himself goes out of d car..
Ragini feels bad seeing him angry and gets out of d car and back hugs laksh..though laksh feels good and happy but..d thought..of her bf..brmgs him to d reality..and he removes her hands..and says..ragini u better go..i m not interested in any of ur..talks..

Ragini-But u have listen..she screams..
Laksh also screams-Wat shd i listen..u love that raj..shd i listen this..or shd i listen..that u dnt want 2 marry me..tell!..
Ragini-I want u 2 listen..that i love u..i have always loved u..tum ho mera PAHELA PYAAR..i love u stupid..not raj.. wat happened upstairs..u presented raj as ur bf in frnt of my bhai..y!"..he demands
Ragini-Because i loved u..and did not want to marry..some1 else..i did not knw that u r lucky..
Saying this she hugs him..laksh also hugs her back..and says..sorry gini..i mean ragini..i love u..i m sorry i misunderstood u..be4 understanding ur point i poured all my anger on u..
Ragini-Actually fault was not was mine..i shd have met lucky..who now i knw is u..first.

They break d hug..

Laksh-So u agree that its ur fault??..
Ragini nods her head..

Laksh-So b ready 4 ur punishment..
Ragini-Wat punishment.
Laksh moves closes to her and sees her lips..ragini understands and smiles..she closes her Eyes in approval and they kiss..
It was a deep…passionate…full of love and care…kiss..
They break d kiss and go up..and see swara and sanskaar..
Ragini-Di u here..
Swara-Aur nahi toh kya..u knw how scared i got wen sanskaar called me and told me that u brought ur bf…wen we knew that u both love eachother…
Sanskaar-So romeo and juliet..have reconciled..right.
Laksh smiles..and sees ragini…
Laksh-But it is cheating..u both knew then also..u both did this…i would have gotten a heart attack…agar mujhe sach pata nhi chalta…
Sanskaar-It was all swara's plan..
Swara-Alls well that ends welll!…she n sanskaar laughs..while ragini and laksh smile seeing eachother…

2 years later…

A lady is shown..screaming on d stretcher…
Lady-laksh..its paining..
Laksh-Gini relax its gonna be a very easy method nthng will happen he assured…
Ragini -Angrily mr Maheshwari…for ur reminder i myself is a gynaecologist..i knw..wats d procedure as i myself have performed it many tyms on others..but..never thought how much paining this procedure it is…ooouch she shouts..
Laksh-chillax..and ragini is taken in d ot..
All famuly member laugh seeing there nok jok..

After sme tym..

They hear..a baby's cry..

The nurse comes out and says..its a one persin can go n meet her..laksh runs inside..and sees ragini sitting on d bed..with his daughter on her lap..
He comes inside…and sits beside d bed..
He takes his daughter on his lap..amd says..
Gini u have given me d worlds best RAGYA…i love u…thanks for being my pahela pyaar…❤❤..
Ragini- I love u too mera pahela pyaar❤❤..
Laksh kisses ragini on her cheeks..and ragya on her forehead…

The scene ends on their happy faces..

So ppl…. How was it…i knw it was not good..but do tell me abt ur views..ur comments matters alot to me…⛧..

Thank u ❤….

Take Care❤❤❤….


Load of love❤

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  1. amazing nice next part soon love the O’s plzz give ts O’s ts as raglak abhimanu track

    1. Meethi

      Thank u so much❤⛧

    2. Meethi

      Yes i ll my level best⛧

    1. Meethi

      Thank u so much ⛧

  2. Fats

    Fabulous OS. I loved RagLak’s attraction at first sight, growing friendship/ love, and their happy ever after. It was all so sweet ❤️. RagLak truly had a unique and cute arranged/ love marriage. Thank you so much for writing this OS. I had a nice time reading it ?

    1. Meethi

      Thank u so much …Ur comment motivayed me..thanks❤

  3. Sindhura


    1. Meethi

      Thank u soo much di ❤

  4. awesome..!!!

    1. Meethi

      Thnk u❤

  5. Amazing, raglak scenes are superb

    1. Meethi


  6. Raglakholic

    Wow meeti
    U left me speechless
    It’s so cute os
    Loved it to the core
    Please do write more
    Eagerly waiting to read your works

    1. Meethi

      Thank u so much ⛧

    2. Meethi

      Yes will definately try 2 write more❤

  7. Astra

    Wow…super dear

    1. Meethi

      Thank u so much ⛧

  8. Akshata

    outstanding os, raglak’s last prank was boomerang to themselves, that was so hilarious. very unique story.

    1. Meethi

      Thank u ❤

  9. Asw


    1. Meethi


  10. Liya

    Its awesome dear?? Raglak are tooo cute to handle!

    1. Meethi

      Thank u soo much ⛧❤

  11. osm……..plz write one more os

    1. Meethi

      Thank u❤

    2. Meethi

      Will definately try⛧

  12. IQRA222

    awesome loved it meethi di

    1. Meethi

      Thank u soo much ⛧

    1. Meethi

      Thank u soo very much ❤

  13. Asra

    amazing dear….raglak r sooo cute…loved it core dear…tkcr dear…

    1. Meethi

      Thank u so much dear❤

  14. Awesome os dear and loved it a lot. Raglak scenes are beautiful and plz write more Raglak stories

    1. Meethi

      Thank u so much Ammu❤

    2. Meethi

      Will definately try❤

  15. Jazzy

    it was supeeh meethi amazing it was sooo sweet

    1. Meethi

      Thank u so much Jazzy❤

  16. Fantastic os Meethi di

    1. Meethi

      Thank u so much dear❤⛧

  17. Hemalattha

    awesome yar.the way raglak scenes you gave superb.continue with others os and ff.

    1. Meethi

      Thank u so much❤

    2. Meethi

      Will definitely try⛧

  18. One of the best raglak os

    1. Meethi

      Thank u so much it means a lot❤

  19. Ragz_teju

    it was amazing dear… I loved it so much.. such a cute raglak ff ???

    1. Meethi

      Thank u so very much dear ❤

  20. Sreevijayan

    Very sweet nd awesome os dear….

    1. Meethi


    1. Meethi

      Thank u❤

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