OS: I love u – By ayushi

Dev’s PoV
Hi!!!i am Dev!!Dev Dixit!!in love with Sonakshi!!sonakshi Bose!!soon to be Sonakshi Dixit!!as I am going to propose her for marriage!!!we are going to Manali via train with our friends Vicky,Elena and Bunty!!vicky and Elena are in love but Bunty is a player๐Ÿ˜œwho is bringing her current gf with him!!the train is tonight!!although I know when I will propose Sonakshi she will say yes but I am hell nervous!!come on Dev!!lets concentrate!!Imagine Kar ke nhi Bol paa raha pata nhi real mein kaise karunga!!
Dev:I love u!!girlfriend ban ja Meri…………arey nhi woh toh pehle se hi girlfriend hai(I love u………will u be my girlfriend!!!no!!!no!!!she is already girlfriend)
Dev:will u marry me Sonakshi????………..no………zyada simple hai(it’s really simple)

Dev:Ms.sonakshi Bose will u be my Mrs Sonakshi Dixit????
Elena:Dev!!c’mon lets go!!
In the train everyone is there except bunty nd his gf!!
After some time Bunty comes with his gf and on other girl
Vicky:Bunty Tu toh Sahi hai hum ek ke sath phase hue hai aur Tu do do lekar ghoom raha hai(Bunty!!we are stuck with one girl since ages!!and u have 2-2)
Elena hits Vicky!!๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Dev comes!!
Dev:so…………Lara(the other girl is Lara)
Lara hugs him immediately
L:Awwww!!!dev baby!!u know how I missed u!!!
Sona’s PoV
Dev BABY๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ฑiss Lara wara Shara ki Himmat kaise hui!!(how dare this Lara wara Shara)Lagta hai Andhi hai!!!dikhta nhi hai woh 27 saal ka bada ladka hai baby nhi(I think she is blind!!can’t she see he is a 27 year old big boy not a baby)
Sona:excuse me!!!can I talk to u mr dixit!!!
Dev:mr Dixit!!๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ

Dev’s PoV
Dev beta Jwalamukhi Phatne wala hai!!๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜‚Dev Dixit Tu toh Gayo!!!she is going to kill u!!๐Ÿ˜ขtaapmaan(temperature)bahut garam Hai!!
Takes her aside
Sona:do u want to explain mr Dixit!!!
Dev:first stop calling me Mr Dixit!!
Sona:fine mr Dev Dixit!!
Dev:Sona!!!
Sona:Dr Bose!!
Dev๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข

Sona:open ur mouth!!
Dev opens his mouth ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
Sona:URGHHHHH!!!i meant speak up!!!
Dev:we were together in college!!and she has a crush on me!!!!and…….I……….
Sona:AND U WHAT???๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ค
Dev:chottu sa
Sona:what chottu sa??
Dev:chottu sa bhi nhi Ittu sa!!!
Sona:WHAT???
Dev:I too had a lil crush on her!!!
Sona:LIL???
Dev:puppy faceโ˜บ๏ธ
Sona leaves!!dev too follows her
Dev:but now I love u Shona!!!!babu!!!๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
Sona comes and sits with other!!and Dev sits beside her!!lara comes and sits beside Dev(Dev babu ladkiyan mein Phass gye๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚) Sona takes a novel!!!
Elena:let’s play a game guys!!
Sona:I don’t want to play!!
Bunty:Sona don’t be a spoil sport!!
Sona:ok fine!!
They play truth,dare or situation!!First chance Sona!!
Sona:Truth!!
Dev:Phatu(coward)
Sona:what did u say??
Dev:Phatu!!!

Sona:dare!! ๐Ÿ˜
Elena:kiss Dev on his cheek!!
As Sona was angry she said no!!
Vicky:Sona he is ur boyfriend!!
Lara:BOYFRIEND???
Sona:YES!!!any problem๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚he is MY boyfriend!!!i love him!!!(and kisses him)
Devโ˜บ๏ธ(blushes and laughs at Sona’s behaviour)
Second chance Dev!
Dev:situation

Sona:Now who’s the Phatu(coward)
Dev:yes I am Phatu but remember ma’am u said that u love this Phatu!!
Sona:aukmun(blabbers anything)
Vicky:If Sona and Lara are drowning!!who will u save!?only one of them!!
Sona๐Ÿ™‚Dev๐Ÿ˜ณLara๐Ÿ˜š Us ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
Dev:can I choose something else!!
Vicky:ok fine!!
Dev:truth!!
Elena:so in this situation who will u save!!๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚(phir Phass gye)
Dev:Dare!!

Bunty:propose Sonakshi!!
So now Sonakshi is standing and Dev is kneeling down!!
Dev:so……….Na…..I…!!!
Sona:DEVVV!!!
Dev:I lo…..!!!
Sona:tumse Na Ho paayega dev(u can’t Dev)
Sona is about to go when Dev holds his hands and turns her
Dev:Ms.sonakshi Bose!! I LOVE U!!!ONLY U!!(points towards his heart)ITS ONLY U HERE!!i had a lil crush on Lara!!lil only!!but she was my crush!!u r my love!!my life!! U complete me Ms.bose oh sorry Dr.bose
Sona:it’s Sona for u!!
Dev:she was my past!!u r present and my future!!Ms Bose will u be Mrs Dixit??
Sona:no I will be Dr.dixit from dr.bose!!
Dev:Sona๐Ÿ˜…
Dev stands up but before he could hug Sona he gets a slap๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚by Lara(ofc yaar ek ladki ke samne uski Itni bezti๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚)
Lara:tumhe pata bhi tha ki main Yahi hoon!!๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

Saying so she leaves!!and Sona starts laughing๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
Dev:this is not done Sona!!ek toh tumhari vajah se Mujhe Thappad pada woh bhi itna Zordar and u r laughing!!!theek hai main Lara ke pass ja raha hoon๐Ÿ˜‚
Sona:sorry sorry sorry I LOVE U!!mr Laal gaal
Dev:Sona!!!
Sona:๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚Acha baba sorry!!
And hugs Dev!! ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

Ok so this is it!!result tha Aaj๐Ÿ˜˜CGPA 9๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
If u like it will come with other such stories
Tried to make it funny with ayushi touch
Love u all
And next ff hi hoga pakka wala promise๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
Ayushiโค๏ธ

45 comments

  1. ShrutiP

    ShrutiP

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    Awesome ayushi…loved it as always…
    Ranbir tha waha yjhd mein aur yaha Dev babu…bechari Deepika aur Sona….๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
    Love you

  2. Priya12

    Priya12

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    Ayushi, awesomee…nice…
    Jwalamukhi phatne wala hai…
    I luved this line so much dr..
    And last slap superbb dr…
    But dev’s cheeks would be red r8..so sad..haha
    Waiting for ur works..Post asap

  3. Vaishaali

    Oyyeee hooyyeee…..9 CGPA.๐Ÿ‘.. CONGRATS dear…!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
    The OS was awesomeeeee and hillarious as well…how cute….
    LARA was such a spice….๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
    Lappad bhi pad gaya dev babu ko…bechaare…๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

    Very very nice OS….keep the fab work coming….๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

    LOVE LOVE..๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜

  4. Akshita

    Akshita

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    Loved it manya ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ abh plzzz ff b post krdo yr nd congratulations for the result โ˜บ

      • Ritika

        i have read them. sorry i could not comment. i am very busy these days. i can not comment on ffs too. b coz i am always in hurry. and i am very depressed b coz of devakshi fights in the show. i hope u understand. love u. bye….

  5. Aarti32

    Aarti32

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    Lara wara shara๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
    Tumhare posts padh k humesha main 2-2 ghante tak hasti hu..Aur phir usi baat ko yaad kr kr k phir hasti hu..
    It was so comical n At d end it became romantic..
    Do write more OSs like dis..

  6. Darshana

    Darshana

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    Hey firstly congratulations for ur results..
    try get even more better the next time!..๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘..
    the os was awesome๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
    but next time promise me that u will post ur ff’s next episode….
    love u๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Manya

      Manya

      |Author

      Thanks Darshana๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
      Yes I will try harder as they are boards this time๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜’
      And I will post the ff today๐Ÿ˜Š
      Love u too

  7. Rj12

    Rj12

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    Amazing
    If Dev Babu plays with girls feelings then chata hi milega ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

  8. Riti1107

    Riti1107

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    This was so cute โคโคโค
    Thoda bahut yjhd ki yaad dilane wala OS tha
    But Ayushi ho nd RK ka zikr na ho ye to ho nahi sakta na
    Loved it
    Nd that slap in the end
    You nailed it๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

  9. Priya9876

    Priya9876

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    Nice one…
    Babu..๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ baby..๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ
    Nd jor ka thappad…๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

    Jaldi jaldi FF post kar…

  10. Heshine

    Heshine

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    Wow….this was such an amazing os dear…! Perfect plot..๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โคโคโค
    Lovely and cute u know…! Do come up with more like this..!
    Their T/D game was…๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
    Lara’s slap..๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜œ
    Amazing…awesome…
    And post ur ff soon dear…!

  11. Nikkita0194

    Nikkita0194

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    Same pinch for .9CGPA
    Congo bongo
    I mean congratss
    Cho chweet of u n this ff
    U know what u r original and what ever dialogue is used is referred 2 your day2day life I appreciate your writing
    Love u love u love u a loooooooooooot
    ๐Ÿ˜Šโ˜บ๐Ÿ˜Šโ˜บ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜muuuaaahhhh
    What a gr8 n creative writer deserves
    ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

    • Manya

      Manya

      |Author

      Thanks Niks๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
      Love u moreโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
      Gr8๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜‚

  12. Fuggysona

    Fuggysona

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    ayushi it is splindid of fun
    i loved it and lara..???
    ohhh how dare she is to slap dev…
    i am gonna kill her
    and propose is wow
    and sona kiss dev oooooo……

  13. Aamu

    Aamu

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    Hey….
    Ye ekdm phadu tha…
    Bole to jhakkkaaas…
    N muje lagta hai tum kuch zyada hi ranbir ki fan ho…
    Mene notice kiya…bohot baar
    Yjhd ka scene….
    But anyway..it was amazing..๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Manya

      Manya

      |Author

      Woh sirf star nhi Duniya hai Meri
      I am his jabrafan!!woh bhi Badi wali jabra fan๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚bole toh jabrest fan๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
      Thanks a lot๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

      • Aamu

        Aamu

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        Hehe..
        Jabrest fan..nice haa.!
        Now i’ll call u miss jabrest fan/randirian…
        ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
        Meri duniya varun dhwn hai..
        ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜.n ofcourse sk…salman khan

  14. Niki645

    Niki645

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    Omg, it was so cute!
    So much fun! Loved it!
    Especially the truth, dare situation..

    Pls post more like these!
    Love

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