OS: I love u – By ayushi

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Dev’s PoV
Hi!!!i am Dev!!Dev Dixit!!in love with Sonakshi!!sonakshi Bose!!soon to be Sonakshi Dixit!!as I am going to propose her for marriage!!!we are going to Manali via train with our friends Vicky,Elena and Bunty!!vicky and Elena are in love but Bunty is a player?who is bringing her current gf with him!!the train is tonight!!although I know when I will propose Sonakshi she will say yes but I am hell nervous!!come on Dev!!lets concentrate!!Imagine Kar ke nhi Bol paa raha pata nhi real mein kaise karunga!!
Dev:I love u!!girlfriend ban ja Meri…………arey nhi woh toh pehle se hi girlfriend hai(I love u………will u be my girlfriend!!!no!!!no!!!she is already girlfriend)
Dev:will u marry me Sonakshi????………..no………zyada simple hai(it’s really simple)

Dev:Ms.sonakshi Bose will u be my Mrs Sonakshi Dixit????
Elena:Dev!!c’mon lets go!!
In the train everyone is there except bunty nd his gf!!
After some time Bunty comes with his gf and on other girl
Vicky:Bunty Tu toh Sahi hai hum ek ke sath phase hue hai aur Tu do do lekar ghoom raha hai(Bunty!!we are stuck with one girl since ages!!and u have 2-2)
Elena hits Vicky!!??

Dev comes!!
Dev:so…………Lara(the other girl is Lara)
Lara hugs him immediately
L:Awwww!!!dev baby!!u know how I missed u!!!
Sona’s PoV
Dev BABY???iss Lara wara Shara ki Himmat kaise hui!!(how dare this Lara wara Shara)Lagta hai Andhi hai!!!dikhta nhi hai woh 27 saal ka bada ladka hai baby nhi(I think she is blind!!can’t she see he is a 27 year old big boy not a baby)
Sona:excuse me!!!can I talk to u mr dixit!!!
Dev:mr Dixit!!??

Dev’s PoV
Dev beta Jwalamukhi Phatne wala hai!!??Dev Dixit Tu toh Gayo!!!she is going to kill u!!?taapmaan(temperature)bahut garam Hai!!
Takes her aside
Sona:do u want to explain mr Dixit!!!
Dev:first stop calling me Mr Dixit!!
Sona:fine mr Dev Dixit!!
Dev:Sona!!!
Sona:Dr Bose!!
Dev??

Sona:open ur mouth!!
Dev opens his mouth ??
Sona:URGHHHHH!!!i meant speak up!!!
Dev:we were together in college!!and she has a crush on me!!!!and…….I……….
Sona:AND U WHAT?????
Dev:chottu sa
Sona:what chottu sa??
Dev:chottu sa bhi nhi Ittu sa!!!
Sona:WHAT???
Dev:I too had a lil crush on her!!!
Sona:LIL???
Dev:puppy face☺️
Sona leaves!!dev too follows her
Dev:but now I love u Shona!!!!babu!!!???
Sona comes and sits with other!!and Dev sits beside her!!lara comes and sits beside Dev(Dev babu ladkiyan mein Phass gye???) Sona takes a novel!!!
Elena:let’s play a game guys!!
Sona:I don’t want to play!!
Bunty:Sona don’t be a spoil sport!!
Sona:ok fine!!
They play truth,dare or situation!!First chance Sona!!
Sona:Truth!!
Dev:Phatu(coward)
Sona:what did u say??
Dev:Phatu!!!

Sona:dare!! ?
Elena:kiss Dev on his cheek!!
As Sona was angry she said no!!
Vicky:Sona he is ur boyfriend!!
Lara:BOYFRIEND???
Sona:YES!!!any problem??he is MY boyfriend!!!i love him!!!(and kisses him)
Dev☺️(blushes and laughs at Sona’s behaviour)
Second chance Dev!
Dev:situation

Sona:Now who’s the Phatu(coward)
Dev:yes I am Phatu but remember ma’am u said that u love this Phatu!!
Sona:aukmun(blabbers anything)
Vicky:If Sona and Lara are drowning!!who will u save!?only one of them!!
Sona?Dev?Lara? Us ???
Dev:can I choose something else!!
Vicky:ok fine!!
Dev:truth!!
Elena:so in this situation who will u save!!??(phir Phass gye)
Dev:Dare!!

Bunty:propose Sonakshi!!
So now Sonakshi is standing and Dev is kneeling down!!
Dev:so……….Na…..I…!!!
Sona:DEVVV!!!
Dev:I lo…..!!!
Sona:tumse Na Ho paayega dev(u can’t Dev)
Sona is about to go when Dev holds his hands and turns her
Dev:Ms.sonakshi Bose!! I LOVE U!!!ONLY U!!(points towards his heart)ITS ONLY U HERE!!i had a lil crush on Lara!!lil only!!but she was my crush!!u r my love!!my life!! U complete me Ms.bose oh sorry Dr.bose
Sona:it’s Sona for u!!
Dev:she was my past!!u r present and my future!!Ms Bose will u be Mrs Dixit??
Sona:no I will be Dr.dixit from dr.bose!!
Dev:Sona?
Dev stands up but before he could hug Sona he gets a slap??by Lara(ofc yaar ek ladki ke samne uski Itni bezti???)
Lara:tumhe pata bhi tha ki main Yahi hoon!!??

Saying so she leaves!!and Sona starts laughing????
Dev:this is not done Sona!!ek toh tumhari vajah se Mujhe Thappad pada woh bhi itna Zordar and u r laughing!!!theek hai main Lara ke pass ja raha hoon?
Sona:sorry sorry sorry I LOVE U!!mr Laal gaal
Dev:Sona!!!
Sona:??Acha baba sorry!!
And hugs Dev!! ??

Ok so this is it!!result tha Aaj?CGPA 9??
If u like it will come with other such stories
Tried to make it funny with ayushi touch
Love u all
And next ff hi hoga pakka wala promise??
Ayushi❤️

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45 Comments
  1. Rekhadhir

    superb.. awesome…

    1. Manya

      Thanks❤️❤️And did u read Happy DEVAKSHI happy family??if not do read?

  2. ShrutiP

    Awesome ayushi…loved it as always…
    Ranbir tha waha yjhd mein aur yaha Dev babu…bechari Deepika aur Sona….????
    Love you

    1. Manya

      Ohh toh tumne guess Kar liya??
      Thanks Shruti?

  3. Priya12

    Ayushi, awesomee…nice…
    Jwalamukhi phatne wala hai…
    I luved this line so much dr..
    And last slap superbb dr…
    But dev’s cheeks would be red r8..so sad..haha
    Waiting for ur works..Post asap

    1. Manya

      Thanks Priya??
      Will post the ff tomorrow?

  4. Oyyeee hooyyeee…..9 CGPA.?.. CONGRATS dear…!!???
    The OS was awesomeeeee and hillarious as well…how cute….
    LARA was such a spice….???
    Lappad bhi pad gaya dev babu ko…bechaare…????

    Very very nice OS….keep the fab work coming….??

    LOVE LOVE..??

    1. Haa and in your words…
      Dev babu ki toh LANKA lag gayi….right..??!????????

    2. Manya

      Thanks?
      Yes Dev babu ki Lanka lag gyi??
      Love love❤️

    3. Manya

      Maine 2OS aur daala the!!
      Pade??

      1. Ha padhe the…but sorry wo comment nai kar paai…was stuck in some work..?

    4. Manya

      Arey it’s okay bas Bata Rahi thi?

  5. Akshita

    Loved it manya ??? abh plzzz ff b post krdo yr nd congratulations for the result ☺

    1. Manya

      Thanks Akshita??
      Will definitely post the ff tomorrow?

  6. awesome. write another os. and post ur ff soon…

    1. Manya

      Thanks and I have written 2OS before!!do check and read them

      1. i have read them. sorry i could not comment. i am very busy these days. i can not comment on ffs too. b coz i am always in hurry. and i am very depressed b coz of devakshi fights in the show. i hope u understand. love u. bye….

    2. Manya

      Perfectly OK??
      I just wanted u to read them?

  7. Aarti32

    Lara wara shara????
    Tumhare posts padh k humesha main 2-2 ghante tak hasti hu..Aur phir usi baat ko yaad kr kr k phir hasti hu..
    It was so comical n At d end it became romantic..
    Do write more OSs like dis..

    1. Manya

      Thanks???
      Will surely try?

  8. Darshana

    Hey firstly congratulations for ur results..
    try get even more better the next time!..?????..
    the os was awesome?????…????????????
    but next time promise me that u will post ur ff’s next episode….
    love u??

    1. Manya

      Thanks Darshana??
      Yes I will try harder as they are boards this time??
      And I will post the ff today?
      Love u too

  9. Rj12

    Amazing
    If Dev Babu plays with girls feelings then chata hi milega ??????????????

    1. Manya

      Isliye toh padva diya??
      Thanks?

  10. Riti1107

    This was so cute ❤❤❤
    Thoda bahut yjhd ki yaad dilane wala OS tha
    But Ayushi ho nd RK ka zikr na ho ye to ho nahi sakta na
    Loved it
    Nd that slap in the end
    You nailed it???

    1. Manya

      Hmmm…Sahi kaha!!?
      Thanks a lot riti??

  11. V.V.harshita

    Hey ayushi awsome dude????????

    1. Manya

      Thanks??

  12. Priya9876

    Nice one…
    Babu..?? baby..????
    Nd jor ka thappad…??

    Jaldi jaldi FF post kar…

    1. Manya

      Thanks a lot Di??
      Going to post the ff!!shaam tak aa jaayega

  13. Heshine

    Wow….this was such an amazing os dear…! Perfect plot..???❤❤❤
    Lovely and cute u know…! Do come up with more like this..!
    Their T/D game was…?????????
    Lara’s slap..????
    Amazing…awesome…
    And post ur ff soon dear…!

    1. Manya

      Thanks a lot heshnie????
      Posted the ff Dear?

  14. Nikkita0194

    Same pinch for .9CGPA
    Congo bongo
    I mean congratss
    Cho chweet of u n this ff
    U know what u r original and what ever dialogue is used is referred 2 your day2day life I appreciate your writing
    Love u love u love u a loooooooooooot
    ?☺?☺??muuuaaahhhh
    What a gr8 n creative writer deserves
    ???

    1. Manya

      Thanks Niks?????????
      Love u more❤️❤️❤️❤️
      Gr8??

  15. Fuggysona

    ayushi it is splindid of fun
    i loved it and lara..???
    ohhh how dare she is to slap dev…
    i am gonna kill her
    and propose is wow
    and sona kiss dev oooooo……

    1. Manya

      Thanks a lot??
      Main tumhe Uska address doon????

      1. Fuggysona

        yes fast…i will

  16. Aamu

    Hey….
    Ye ekdm phadu tha…
    Bole to jhakkkaaas…
    N muje lagta hai tum kuch zyada hi ranbir ki fan ho…
    Mene notice kiya…bohot baar
    Yjhd ka scene….
    But anyway..it was amazing..?

    1. Manya

      Woh sirf star nhi Duniya hai Meri
      I am his jabrafan!!woh bhi Badi wali jabra fan??bole toh jabrest fan????
      Thanks a lot???

      1. Aamu

        Hehe..
        Jabrest fan..nice haa.!
        Now i’ll call u miss jabrest fan/randirian…
        ??
        Meri duniya varun dhwn hai..
        ????.n ofcourse sk…salman khan

  17. Niki645

    Omg, it was so cute!
    So much fun! Loved it!
    Especially the truth, dare situation..

    Pls post more like these!
    Love

    1. Manya

      Thanks a lot niki❤️❤️❤️❤️
      Love?

  18. Muthash

    Lovely….:)

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