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An OS – Devakshi with No Ishu

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Hi guys… I got idea to write this OS after watching yesterday’s episode… Ishu is irritating a lot now… I agree she was irritating before also but now its going beyond limits… so I thought to write a story without Ishu…
Hope you guys like it…
Ishu came to know about Devakshi relationship and disagree for this… Devakshi try to convince he but as you all know… she is totally useless…
Sona’s engagement is fixed with Ritwik and Dev becomes Devdas… Ishu still in her ego… Dev starts hating his mother but never says anything… but start having gudges against Ishu…

On the other hand Sona is ready to move on for the sake of her family… but Dev is not at all ready…
Ishu thinks that by separating Devakshi she can have a hold on her son but she is totally wrong… She never understands that Dev is not her property… he is living thing and she can only win him by giving him Sona but she is so mean, so cheap…
She thinks that she has controlled her son by not accepting Sona but she does not know that only Sona can control her son… Dev starts stalking Sona… while Ishu is being self centered…

One fine day –
Dev argues with Ishu for Sona and Ishu is hell shocked to see this…
Finally she gets agreed for Devakshi marriage only to keep hold her son…
Ishu does not treat Sona as a family member but only as Dev’s wife… GKS also ill-treat Sona… Dev witness all this…
But our Sona is real SOna(gold)… she never complains about this…
Now the current track –
Sona is unable to conceive and IShu makes a big issue of this…
Ishu – Sona… you deceived me by lying about your fake pregnancy…
Sona – no maa… I also came to know about tyhis only yesterday…
Ishu – You mean Dev lied to me… ( with much pride)… Dev is my son, he can not lie to me… its only you who made him hide this thing from me… you are the reason of all the problems… coz of you I always feel insecurity… I always have fear to lose my Son… and that is why I never wanted Dev to marry you but after seeing his condition, I had to agree… I will not let you snatch my son from me…
Sona(shocked) – Maa… how can you even think this? I love Dev but it does not mean that I came here snatch your son… Dev will always be your son… I always seek for your love but I never know that your love is conditional…
Ishu cuts SOna.
Ishu – do you think I am a fool… you want to control my Dev… my family… my house… but I will not let you do this…

Sona – no maa. I don’t want all this… I only want Dev’s and your love.
IShu – after doing all this, you will not get my love… I never accepted you as a part of my family… I only accepted you coz of Dev… I never consider you as part of our life… because of you only Dev starts hiding things from me… I, myself wanted to find a suitable bride for my Dev but you snatched this chance from me…Dev started giving you more importance than me… how could I bear this?…

he starts spending time with you… I can never see Dev going far from me… but after you came in his life, he started loving you… and now you lied to me… how can you stoop so low?
Dev is overhearing this conversation… he come out… IShu is shocked to see Dev…
Dev – stop it maa… Sona has not done anything wrong… it was me who hided all these things from all of you…. Sona never lies… I also never lied to you… but its you only who firced me to lie… I knew it that you have accepted Sona coz of me… Sona tried a lot to win your heart but you are so rigid… you never allow her to get close to you… I don’t know what problem you have with SOna… Sona never asks me to lie… even she was forcing me tell you but I know you well… afterall I am your son…

Ishu and Sona both looking at Dev with widely opened eyes…
Dev – I know maa you hate Sona… but why… only coz I love him… don’t I have the right to love someone other than you… How can you foret all the things she has done for our family… don’t you remember hor Sona made Neha wear her shadi ka lehnga… Sona saved Riya from that wicked Ayaan…

Afer our breakup which happened coz of you only, she came to hospital for you… but you don’t want to remember anything… you don’t want to think… don’t want to see anything positive about he… how can a mother be like this ?
Ishu – Dev… what are you talking ? you lied to me about Sona’s pregnancy?
Dev – yes maa… I lied… coz I could see your insecurity… you are afraid of Sona… but you never able to see how pure she is… you are blind in your so called ego… I never thought that I will talk to you in such manner… you are a lady… you should feel how a lady feel when she came to know that she cant not become a mother… but ibspite of that you came here… you always want us to give you importance…
Sona – stop it Dev…
Dev – no Sona… let me speak today… Yo always keep saying mera Dev… mera ghar… mera pariwar… you never consider Sona as a part of this family…
Have you ever think ki agar Ranveer ki family ne bhi Neha ko aise hi treat kiya hota to ?
Ishu is in shocking state…
Dev – tere jesi auraten hi kabhi saas se maa nahi ban pati… jo humesha chahti hain ki uske beti ko to sasural me beti ke jesa pyar mile, par wo apni bahu ko kabhi bhi beti nahi manna chahti…
Ishu is tatally blank…
Dev – I always seen that you never talk properly to Sona… Mami always insulted Sona infront of you but never say a single word to stop mami… and… after knowing about Sona’s pregnancy, suddenly you started caring her… you started giving her importance more than me… sudden a drastic change… how can you be so selfish… you only care for your grand child… not grandchild for grandson only… what if Sona give birth to baby girl… kya tu tab bhi use accept karti… aap ko to bas apna vansh aage badhane ke liye pota chahiye…
Ishu(angrily) – dev… I need a grandson to continue our name… its my right too…
Dev – Disgusting… you can never change… agar Sona ki jagah mujhme problem hoti to kya tab bhi tu mere sath aise hi behave karti jesa
Sona ke sath kar rahi hai… I thought you would change after seeing Sona’s pure heart but no… you never changed… you were doing acting to change but now the TRUTH IS INFRONT OF ME…
And now I am taking a big decision of my life…
Sona and Ishu stastr looking at Dev…
Dev – maa.. you keep living in your ghar… I am leaving you and your so called house… I am going with Sona… bahot door jar aha hoon teri is jhuthi duniya se… jahan tera jhootha ahnkaar nahi hoga… mujhe koi fark nahi padta ki Sona maa ban sakti hai ya nahi… mujhe bas itna pata hai ki main Sona ke bina nahi reh sakta… mera koi astitva hi nahi hai sona ke bina…
By saying this Dev holds Sonas’ hand and left from there…
IShu keep calling him but does not even turn… He does not listen to Sona too…

Bose house –
Dev and Sona enter… Bose family look at them…
Dev – baba… I am sorry… coz of me only your daughter had to bear a lot… but its all over now…
Bose family give them a question look…

Dev – baba… I left that home… and came here to live with you…
Bijoy – what? But its not right.
Dev – jo ab tak maine kiya wo galat tha… par ab jo main kar raha hoon wo sahi hai…
Dev folds his hands.
Dev – Do you allow me to live here with you or else I have to search some other place?

Bijoy holds Dev’s hand.
Bijoy – what are you saying beta… ye ghar jitna Sona ka hai utna hi tumhara bhi hai… tum jab tak chaho yahan aaram se reh sakte ho.
They all do a group hug and they all live happily ever after…

19 Comments
  1. Manya

    Awesomeeeeeeeeee❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
    Matlab Ishu ki toh😂😂😂😂😂
    Kaash Dev mein itne guts hote😒😒😒
    Love❤️❤️❤️

  2. JenniferAndrews

    Really nice yaar.kaash aisa bomb blast show mei bhi hota.I think you are damn angry on ishu and this os really expresses it.

  3. Angel20

    Omg!! It was damn amazing! I loved the way Dev behaved with Ishu! I hope in serial also this happens!

  4. Awesome

  5. Good.. But would have been better if they would get settled abroad..

  6. Aarti32

    Awesome OS dear..I always luv our OSs

  7. Sriya

    Awesome
    Awestruck
    Marvelous
    Stupendous
    Beautiful
    Outstanding
    Fantabulous hope this happens in serial loved your OS keep writing 💝💝💝💝
    Love❤️

  8. Alka

    Thank u yaar ….
    Ishu aunty aaj kal kuch zaada hi disgusting ho gayi haii 😩😩😩 . …. Esa kuch ho toh Aacha lage 😮😅

  9. Chanpreet0815

    Excellent. Waah dev ne bht acha kaam kiya. Bht acha laga mujhe aapka OS. Good idea

  10. Haaayee asmita……Iss OS ke liye aap ko dher sari 💋💋💋 kisses and hugs…. Love u for this…. Ishwari is really irritating in serial….. And u did it so good…. And dev…. Bukhar tou nhi char gaya Iss dev ko….. Ma ke saamne Itna bol diya…. But jou bola sahi bola….. Kaash serial main bhi aisa dev dekhne ko mile…. In serial, he’s just a puppet of his mom….😠 jou bolti hai Wohi karta hai….
    Overall, as always u did a splendid job…
    Love,
    ❤❤❤

  11. It was really amazing your anger on ishu expresses this os
    I hope this would happen in serial also

  12. Priya12

    Di, , superbbb…..dev’s behaviour was fantastic…….his dialogues….all were perfect….splendid dr…post ur ff rang pyar ka soonnn

  13. 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
    SUPERB..!!!😝😝😝😝
    Agar serial main aisa ho jaaye to ishwari ko on the spot heartattack aa jaae….aur bhagwaan se face to face mulaakat ho jaae idiot female ki….😈😈

    Par DEV….husband ke naam pe dhabba ban ke reh gya hai….wo aisa kuch nahi kar sakta….😠😠😠😠😠

    Tumne apne os main humaare armaan pure kar diye…THANK YOU for that…it was perfect..!!😍😍

  14. Ngkrishnakumari

    Amazing & outstanding os asmita that you have
    Dev frustration on ishwari for the sack of truth love crore hope 50% should frustrate on our show

  15. Shruti710

    Dev aisa kabhi nahi kar paayega
    kyunki ishwari dev ke Liye Bhagwan hai
    Aur koi apne Bhagwan Ki nahi chodta
    Specially dev to bilkul bhi nahi

  16. Anjali333

    It was really amazing…..i wish aisa show me bhi ho.
    Pr pta hai kabhi nahi hoga
    Post another one soon

  17. Niki645

    Amazing OS!!!!
    Wish Dev would be like this in the show😕😕
    Very well written😘

  18. Bhoomi

    Wow.. Wow… Wow… Wow… What a OS di.. Loved it.. Kya Fantastic kam kiya hai Dev ne…
    Amazing OS di… Aisa kuch kuch likhte jao.. Bada aacha lagta hai😁….

  19. Erika

    awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee amazingggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg os dear

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