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Love and love only-RagLak OS
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> “Lakshya..!!”a stern voice is heard making silence
> everywhere including the one who were blabbering boldly few
> seconds before..!!
> A pair of boots is shown and it was stepping ahead without
> any distraction..,and stopped infront of another pairs..!!
> “Captain Lakshya reporting for duty sir..!!”
> His face is revealed as Laksh and he was seen in an army
> attire with lots of medals at his shirt near the chest and
> the guy first was seemed to be his senior official..!!
> “are you ready for this mission..!!I don’t wanna
> hear any backsteps ..!!”
> “trust me sir and we will replace our flag
> there..!!”
> “good luck my boy and keep communicating..!!”
> They moves apart after giving their salutations..!!
> There starts an rotation of the copter blades which
> symbolizes everyone to get ready for the mission..!!
> Everyone gathered and the copter takes off and they were
> bold enough to face the upcoming target..!!
> A pale face was shown at the corner and he was lost
> somewhere..!!
> His pov*******
> Mein Lakshya.,one of the captain in Indian army presently
> guiding my crew in this xxx mission..!!
> It was really my privilege to be one of the crew members of
> Indian army..!!
> But presently my thoughts are travelling far away from
> here..,to my hometown.,to my place.,to my love..,to my
> laadoo..,to my wife Ragini..!!
> Ragini..,my love my life my wife my everything is her..!!she
> haven’t failed in showering me with her love..!!she
> haven’t asked me anything still ..,it’s been 4 years
> we have started our journey and till date we are in love and
> love only..!!
> Even the distance may part us apart but still we are
> connected by our hearts and it keeps on fluttering and
> echoeing each others name only..!!
> Ragini have been my backbone in everything I do..!!honestly
> speaking I doesn’t gave her a single happiness which
> every women expects..!!
> Yeah..,it’s true..!!
> It was every wife’s wish to express their next step in
> their life as parents to her husband first but I didn’t
> gave that happiness to Ragini..!!
> At that time I was involved at one of the major mission and
> I got succeeded in that and I was even awarded for my
> breakthrough but I failed in life..!!
> Don’t think like everyone that we had a love marriage
> ..,that isn’t true we entered into this journey
> forcedly..!!
> Initially we had many disputes in everything we do and
> sometimes I even thought that we gonna have separation in
> future..!!
> But everything got changed..,slowly we got addicted to
> each other and our bitterness lost its taste and sweetness
> started occupying our hearts..!!
> We started giving up some quality time for other and our
> life was connected together from now on..!!I don’t know
> that this was my destiny before but from the day I started
> feelings for Ragini..,I changed from the reserved Lakshya to
> ragini’s crazy lucky who would love to do anything madly
> for her only her..!!
> We RagLak started falling for each other and that day has
> come for our confession..!!
> That day I still remember when we are returning on our way
> after attending one of my friend’s wedding..!!
> [email protected]
> Ragini(gently):laksh..,stop the car..!!
> Laksh:why..??
> Ragini:please..!!(she pouts)
> Laksh(smiling madly):ok ok..!!
> Ragini stepped down stretching her hands wide and enjoys the
> cold breeze..!!
> “Ragini..!!”laksh neared her and the next moment
> she grasped his hands and dragged him towards the backside
> of the car..!!
> Both looks deep into their eyes..,laksh was like drowning
> completely in her eyes..,while Ragini softly initiated
> breaking the interlude of their silence..!!
> “Laksh..,I don’t know when and why I started liking
> you and I don’t know whether you like me the same way
> like I do or not..!!but frankly I don’t want to hide
> anymore..,usually girls won’t open their heart out to
> anyone without hesitation..!!but I don’t feel hesitated
> or nervous whenever you are around and am saying this to you
> because I don’t want to lose you..!!if I didn’t open
> up now.,then I can’t wait for an year to express my
> feelings since you are leaving tomorrow..!!(she stops there
> for a moment)will you be my love..??will you tackle this
> khadoos for life time..??will you accept this captain’s
> wife..??will you be mine..??will you laksh..??”Ragini
> bends down on her knees and said everything she feels for
> him..!!
> Laksh amazes and he never expected this from her..,he gently
> placed his hands on her shoulder and pulled her towards
> him..!!
> “yes..i am..!!”he dragged her into the bone
> crushing hug..!!
>
> “There are only two times I want to be with you…
> Now and forever..!!”he whispered near her ears making
> her blush hard..!!
> They spend some quality time together and took their life
> into the next step..!!
> Fb ends @
> The next day.,I was feeling extremely happy for us but
> feeling enormously sad..!!
> Mood swings started occupying my brain..!!
> Yeah..,I have to leave today back to my camp..!!I love my
> country that’s why I started my life as an army man..!!
> But I love my Ragini equally and I have no doubt in
> that..!!
> Today for the very first time I was not able to step out
> from my room her thoughts making me nervous.,giving me
> shivers…!!
> Till yesterday I have noone.,but from now on I have a
> family.,my Ragini is there for me..!!what she will do if
> anything happens to me.,she will be left alone since she
> doesn’t have any support from her family too and I am an
> orphan..!!fighting with terrorists is better than fighting
> with my heart and brain..!!
> Finally I crushed away all my thoughts when I found my
> angelic beauty coming with a tea tray..!!
> “Captain wasn’t eager to camp I think..!!”she
> placed the tray on the table nearby and stares into my eyes
> deeply..!!
> “will you miss me Ragu..!!”I uttered softly
> looking into her eyes..!!
> A tear drop escapes from her eyes which I noticed..!!and I
> got my answer through that..!
> “laksh..,you need not to worry..!!I will
> manage..!!”she said wiping her tears..!!
> “am sorry..!!”I said cupping her face to enlighten
> her mood..!!
> “don’t think about it laksh..!!even though we may
> be far apart but still we are close enough through our
> hearts..!!my whole day won’t pass without your thoughts
> and I know it’s same for you too..!!and am really proud
> to be an army officer wife and am happy about that..!!now
> please smile karo..please..!!”she said pouting cutely
> at last..!!
> Even though she convinced me but she can’t console her
> own heart.,which only i can read..!!
> Her face was completely turned pale and she was saddened
> thinking about me..!!
> I neared her and says”nothing will happen to me when
> you are there Ragini..!!”
> The next moment she jumps over me and kissed all over my
> face making me stand numb..!!
> “if you do like this then I can’t leave
> Ragu..!!”I said smirking..!!
> The horn sound disturbed our sweet romance and she hide her
> pain deep inside and sends off with her warm smile..!!
> I vanished watching her cute smile..!!
> ***pov ends when someone came reporting to him..!!
> “Captain..,just15 more minutes to go..!!”
> Laksh then pushed away his thoughts and stood up..,he then
> started giving them their last commands and encouraged them
> to be bold enough to face any kind of situations and he
> repeated by stressing the word”no backstep..!!”
> “yes sir..!!”everyone nods..!!
> He again lost in his thoughts reminiscing the way they used
> to talk..!!
> Laksh’s pov****
> Everything went well and we used to talk more within that
> few minutes time allotted for me..!!
> It’s been an year journey we have travelled together but
> infact we wasted few months in quarrelling with each other
> and finally we cleared our terms and started liking eo..!!
> And that day has come..,my sweetheart is carrying my little
> one..!!
> Ragini with so much joy..,happily dialled my number and
> asked the official to inform me that she is on line..!!
> But I wasn’t there in the camp.,I was in the meeting
> with my higher official..!!
> I think I wasn’t blessed to hear that great news.,she
> wanted to express that first to me..!!obviously every
> girl’s wish was that..!!
> I doesn’t have time to speak with her and after few days
> I contacted her and expressed my work and how badly I missed
> her in these two days..!!
> I didn’t got anything in reply..,I got tensed and
> nervousness occupied my mind..!!
> “Ragini..,can you hear me..!!”I asked..!!
> “haan..!!”she replied in a single word which she
> usually won’t..!!
> I understand that something is weird and I know she is not
> that type who used to dump things on me..!!I wanted to know
> what is hurting her..!!
> She can’t hide anymore and the next moment she burst out
> crying and finally confessed..!!
> I was on cloud 9..,I blown back to back kisses to her
> through phone and made her blush hard which I can’t see
> but I can feel that..!!
> I was at fault but still she doesn’t blamed me,such a
> selfless women she is..!!I think that quality impressed me a
> lot..!!
> But I was surprised to hear that she haven’t shared this
> happiness with anyone even with her mother.,she waited for
> two long days to talk to me.,to express how she was feeling
> now and I can feel her emotions..!!
> Days passed by and she was on her 9th month.,for the first
> time i felt why did I wish to become an army man.,it’s
> hardly hurted me when i wasn’t able to attend my
> wife’s godh barai rasam..!!
> And again I was again leading a crew as a captain for
> another mission..,and her date is nearing..!!
> Both my country and my Ragini are like my eyes.,I can’t
> take one side and leaves the other..!!
> But my destiny again played the game in my life.,yes I was
> not fortune enough to be with her during her labour
> pain..!!
> She gave birth to my lovely princess Diya and when i and my
> team returned back with the victory this happy news reached
> my ears..!!
> I was really happy at one side but something is piercing my
> heart..,yes the love for which she might have longed during
> her delivery which i didn’t gave her…!!
> I bursts out crying loudly when i felt that I wasn’t
> able to lift my princess in my arms first.,i wasn’t
> there with her during her pain.,i wasn’t there to hear
> that good news first.,i felt like I am cursed..!!
> Everyone around consoled and congratulated me for my new
> promotion of becoming a father but i cant digest the fact
> that I was not with them to share my happiness..!!tears
> blurred my vision and I asked special permission to my
> official and went to talk with my Ragini..!!
> But my mother in law picked up her mobile and informed me
> that Ragini was still unconscious and also said that she
> will gain conscious after an hour..!!
> I hanged up the call and was dying to cross that one hour
> gap.,but that was the most dangerous phase of my life..!!
> Usually when we are around our family.,the day would pass
> like a jet but that one hour time phase wasn’t that much
> easy for me it was a crucial time period and it was like
> walking on a fire..!!
> I roamed here and there and everyone around me were making
> fun of..!!
> “if guys were in my place..!!will you laugh like
> this..!!”I wanted to quizz them but I don’t want
> anyone over there to be in my situation..!!
> Finally that one hour crossed.,when it crossed 11:45 I
> immediately dialled the number and the other side was my
> Ragini holding the phone..!!
> She was silent and I can feel her emotions and I heard some
> sobbing sounds..!!
> We haven’t uttered anything for few minutes and our
> heart have spoken everything..!!
> “Ragini..!!”before I could complete she
> interrupted..!!
> “laksh please I know what you gonna say now..!!please
> don’t feel bad about not being with me..!!concentrate on
> your work and come soon to me Laksh..!!me and my princess
> will be waiting for you..!!”her soft voice made me
> stand dumbstruck..!!
> I cried my heart out and expressed everything what I felt to
> her .!!
> “laksh..,please control yourself..!!my superhero
> na..,please..!!”she said and made me laugh atlast..!!
> Time out and I hanged up the phone after spending few valid
> talks with my sweetheart and also I heard my princess
> sound..!!
> After few days.,my leave has been sanctioned and I returned
> to my Ragini and the tears escaped when I found my love
> struggling to make my princess to sleep..!!
> When she found me at the entrance.,she immediately rushed to
> me and I putdown all my luggage’s and went to her and
> took her into my embrace..!!
> I showed how badly I missed her and she hugged me tightly
> without letting even the air to separate us..!!I could
> understand the pain she have gone through in these phase.
> !!
> “am sorry..!!”I said with much difficulty because
> my words got struck in my throat..!!
> “I love you laksh..!!”she muttered and planted a
> kiss on my forehead..!!our forehead merged and I was happy
> being around her..!!
> Diya.,my princess..!!I forgot her completely.,obviously
> whenever my Ragini is around me,she will make me numb and
> would make me to forgot the entire world..!!
> Days passed through and after a month I returned back to my
> work leaving my Ragini and my princess alone..!!
> I missed every phase of diya’s life..!!the day she
> called me paapa was my most memorable one..!!thanks to my
> Ragini for making that happen..!!even though I heard my
> princess voice through phone that gave me unlimited
> happiness and that erased all my wounds..!!
> At that time I felt like I am the happiest man in the
> world..!!ofcourse I am ,who will have such a lovely family
> like mine..!!
> It’s all because of my ragini’s understanding
> nature..!!within a couple of days she started occupying my
> heart and now she is ruling it..!!
> *****pov ends when someone says “we reached the
> target..!!”
> Laksh stood up from his place and just said
> “jaihind..!!” and everyone around replied the
> same..!!
> Now they are upto something running towards the target of
> clearing the terrorists from their land and once again
> fixing the flag to fly high showing it’s courage to the
> world..!!
> They reached the target and it’s the time for the high
> voltage phase where everyone were fighting against the
> opponent..!!
> {I don’t want to drag this more..,so I skip this fight
> sequence..!!}
> Every terrorists were shot dead and the crew were confirming
> about that and when they confirmed that they did
> that.,everyone were overwhelmed in joy and happiness crept
> on all of their lips..!!
> Laksh took the national flag and started hoisting it and
> make that fly high in air..!!
> “Jaihind..!!”everyone did their salutations..!!
>
> “Dishquaan..!!”bullet sound came and it travelled
> towards laksh and hits on his abdomen and back to back 3
> bullets travelled into his body..!!
> Laksh falls weak and he was trembling but still he
> didn’t gave up.,he immediately grabbed an pistol and
> shot the one who was hiding far apart beside the
> bush..!!that guy was dead.
> Laksh was feeling suffocated and his eyes turned out
> red.,his breath got strucked in his throat,with much
> difficulty he uttered ragini’s name and went
> unconscious..!!
> One of the crew member checked his pulse and lift him in his
> arm saying that he is alive..!!
> Information has been sent to the higher official and laksh
> have been taken to army hospital on the copter..!!
> Laksh was taken to operation theatre and the doctor’s
> were doing his surgery..!!
> On the other side.,Ragini was getting ready to do pooja in
> temple..!!pooja thaal falls from her hand when Diya hits
> that unintentionally with her ball..!!
> “Ragini..!!”a guy came rushing towards her..!!
> Ragini:Vishal bhai..!!how are you..??Bhabhi told me
> yesterday that you came back for vacation..!!
> Vishal:woh Ragini.,am good and now please come with me..!!we
> are going to Kashmir..!!
> Ragini(shocked):What..??everything is ok right..??
> Vishal:haan..but laksh want you to be there with him for
> some important work..!!so you are needed right now for
> him..!!rest I will explain you later.,now please come with
> me..!!
> Ragini(felt something weird):but bhaiyya laksh haven’t
> said anything to me about this..!!
> Vishal(controlling his tears):woh there exists some network
> problem..,that’s why he doesn’t informed you..!!
> Ragini nodded crushing away her thoughts and took Diya too
> along with her..!!
> Vishal takes them to heliport and they stepped inside the
> copter..!!Diya first astonished and happy when she first
> stepped inside the helicopter and squeezes the headset and
> other equipment in it..!!Ragini glares her and pats
> diya’s hand and asked her to keep quiet..!!
> Diya then starts crying when the copter takes off..!!Ragini
> took diya into her embrace and made her calm down..!!
> Here in the army hospital.,doctors were cleaning laksh’s
> wounds and trying their level best to remove the bullets and
> somewhat succeeded..!!but still there are two more bullets
> remaining and his pulse rate is also decreasing further..!!
> Vishal takes Ragini and diya to hospital..!!Diya looks out
> through the window and was enjoying the climate..!!
> The car gets stopped with a sudden jerk outside the army
> hospital..!!
> Ragini stepped down and was confused when she gazed the
> surrounding..!!
> Ragini(nervously):everything ok na bhaiyya..??laksh kaha
> hai..!!
> Vishal eyes turned moist and he was sobbing continuously
> increasing the nervousness level of Ragini..!!
> “bhaiyya please say something..!!”she uttered
> shooking Vishal..!!
> Vishal finally gathered his courage and revealed everything
> to her..!!
> Ragini stand numb and the tears were gushing out
> continuously and her vision got blurred and the next moment
> she collapsed on the floor falling unconscious..!!
> “Ragini..!!”Vishal opened the car door and
> sprinkled water on her face..!!
> But she wasn’t responding.,Diya started crying when she
> found her mom wasn’t reacting..!!
> Vishal took Diya in her arms and called the doctor..!!
> Ragini was taken inside in the stretcher,doctor treated her
> and she was now kept under observation..!!
> Doctor comes and informed Vishal that “she is alright
> but her blood pressure raised and so she fell unconscious
> and don’t worry about her health.!she will be back to
> normal after few minutes..!!”
> Vishal thanked him and took Diya to the canteen area to feed
> her food..!!
>
> {“Laksh got shot..!!”
> “He is in critical condition..!!”
> “doctors are treating him and the surgery is going
> on..!!”
> Everything echoed in her mind..!!”}
> Ragini woke up clutching the bed sheets and screaming
> laksh’s name..!!
> She looked around and holds her forehead stressing hard..!!
> Ragini stepped down and then thrashed the trips wire that is
> connected to her hand and rushed outside madly..!!
> Nurse and other members of hospital were trying hard to
> control but they failed..!!
> Finally she reached the operation area where laksh is being
> treated.,but she was blocked by the security guards outside
> the room..!!
> “leave me.,I want to see my laksh..!!laksh..!!”she
> was repeating the same..!!
> Vishal passes through that area and found Ragini arguing
> with the guards.,he immediately gone there and informed them
> about her identity.,about her relationship with laksh..!!
> While talking,doctor came out and informed
> that”operation is done but still we can’t say
> anything..!!let’s hope for the best..!!”
> Ragini(screaming madly):kuch nahi hoga mere laksh ko{nothing
> will happen to my laksh..!!}
> Ragini pushed away the doctor’s who are blocking her way
> and entered inside the operation theatre and found her love
> connected with lots of machines and was lying
> unconscious..!!
> His abdomen was bandaged with the white cloth and the time
> stops for her there itself..!!
> “saans mein teri saans mili to..!!
> mujhe saans aayi..!!
> mujhe saans aayi..”plays in the bg..!!
> Ragini started crying bitterly holding her mouth using her
> palm.,she tried to control her emotions.,but how could
> she..!!
> She trembles and caresses his face and her tears touched his
> cheeks..!!
> She rest her face on his chest and cries badly can’t
> able to bear this pain..!!
> Ragini(sobbing):you failed to fulfil your promise laksh.,you
> told me na you won’t leave me forever..!!(she sobs
> continuously)
> Nurse:mam.,please don’t disturb the patient..!!please
> leave now mam,we will shift him to ward then you can meet
> him but not now please leave..!!
> Ragini unwillingly stood up and stares him painfully
> composing herself and turned to leave..!!
> She stops there itself and her heart thumps faster..!!she
> then turned back and found him holding her wrist but his
> eyes were still closed.,a small tear drop escapes through
> the corner of his eye..!!
> His eyelids slowly gets opened and his vision got
> blurred..!!he closed his eyes and was struggling to clear
> his vision and finally succeeded too..!!
> He found her lady love broke down completely before him.,he
> pulled her slightly which brings her back to this world..!!
> “laksh.,I know you will become
> fine..!!doctor..doctor..!!”she screams..!!
> Laksh(fumbling):idiot..!!did you forgot..!!I told you na
> nothing will happen to me when you are there..!!
> Ragini smiles through tears and hugged him the next
> moment..!!
> “ouch..!!”he winces when her hand slightly touched
> his wounds..!!
> “am sorry laksh..!!”she have gone mad again and
> started caressing his abdomen..!!
> Laksh chuckles and dragged her back to his embrace and
> planted a kiss on her forehead..!!
> Doctor comes inside and checked his health and amazed seeing
> the drastic improvement and informed that there is no need
> to worry now and laksh is perfect..!!
> Ragini’s face gets enlightened and glowed..!!
> Laksh thanked Vishal through eyes and found his princess
> sleeping in Vishal’s arm peacefully..!!
> Few days later..!
> Laksh was resting on his bed and Ragini is doing his
> bandage..!!he was playing with her hairs not letting her to
> do her work properly..!!
> “laksh..!!chup kar..”she glares him but he smirks
> and continued tickling her..!!
> Ragini shooted him with back to back death glares and
> finally she finished his bandage..!!
> “What..what you want..!!huh..!!”she pats his
> cheeks playfully..!!
> “maa.,be a good girl na..!!obey paapa’s
> orders..!!”diya said who is resting her head on
> laksh’s arm and was pulling his cheeks..!!
> Laksh smirks while Ragini gasped..!!
> He pulled ragini towards him and kissed her cheeks
> lovingly..!!
> “for me..!!”diya pouts..!!
> Ragini and laksh goes towards her and was about to kiss but
> she moved intentionally making their foreheads to met..!!
> Diya claps her hand lovingly and jumped in between
> them..!!she kissed both raglak and then followed by a family
> hug..!!
> Happy family •••
> Thanks for reading guys..!!
> “Army mens were spending their sleepless nights just to
> make us sleep peacefully..!!A huge respect to
> them..!!”

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32 Comments
  1. Awesome dear

  2. Awesome wrk dear.
    I vote for this.

  3. Amazing

  4. Sindhura

    It’s so awesome

  5. I vote for this

  6. Lovely7

    I’m scared to read in the middle but it’s an amazing part
    Superb os dear

  7. Outstanding one

  8. Mintu

    Awesome.. I vote for this

  9. Wow..it’s awesome dear.I vote for this.

  10. Outstanding os dear and Raglak scenes are really beautiful. U scared me in middle part (Laksh in hospital). Thanks for this beautiful story. If possible, Please write more Raglak stories dear. Love you dear

  11. Follybraverl

    It was so pure…… Thanks for such a great os

  12. Honey

    I vote for this

  13. Jiyani

    Awesome dear..I vote for this

  14. Asra

    awesome dear….loved it alot….
    i vote for this….tkcr dear…

  15. Awesome

  16. Outstanding OS dear, loved it

  17. Laashya

    Wonderful os and cute raglak

  18. Amazinggg
    I vote for this
    10/10

  19. Awesome

  20. Loved it

  21. amazing I vote for this 10/10

  22. really a good one.. I vote for this..

  23. Interesting dear

  24. Harinipriya

    AWESOME…AMAZING…. I vote for this os!

  25. TeitokUn1718

    Fantastic… Emotional One…
    I vote for this…

  26. IQRA222

    it was superbly awesomely wonderful
    i vote for this

  27. Aradhya

    I vote for this

  28. Fantastic.. i vote for this..

  29. Super dear I vote for this

  30. amazing
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  31. Su_16

    VOTING CLOSED

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