When he opened it !!! IB& DBO OS

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Hi buddies, this is specially dedicated to OMKARIANS fans. Many of them are waiting for this to happen and so I’m here with it exclusively for all of you.

This is the first part and if you like, I will do the next too.

Please do comment guys??

I was taking amlas for him. He has a habit to have 1 amla daily before sleeping. I always remember sultanaji giving him amlas to sleep; this reminds me of my chulbul avatar.

Even his behavior was like Amla; bitter at first and sweet later. Our married life was also like that. All the bitter phase has gone away; now it is the most sweetest phase.

I began walking to our room.But as I entered I didn’t see him there. I was wondering where he could be at this hour. I began arranging our bed.
Today I had some different feeling and so I opened the Windows. It was a full moon day and hence the soft moonlight was just running to the room. I wanted to enjoy it; I switched off the lights and sat on the bed facing moon.
Time was almost 11:30.He didn’t come till now.
Suddenly I could hear the sound of the door opening and closing; I knew it was him. I decided to act angry on him for coming this late hence I didn’t turn back; I just walked forward towards the window.
I could feel the cold touch of his hand on my hip; it’s true that this single touch gave me the feeling of completeness. His hot breath was teasing my neck playfully, yes I couldn’t act angry anymore; but I thought to continue it somehow.

“Kyu gouri?” that voice was enough to make me turn and hug him right then but I just didn’t allow my mind.

He teased me again by bringing his soft lip close to my cheek and placing a kiss. “Pagli!!!” he referred me like that whenever I’m angry.
I didn’t react…
He really knew how to make me lose on this game of attitude. He took my hair and kept the whole bunch to my right shoulder and began pressing his lips on back of my neck; I was being heated up!!
Oh no,what is he doing ; I suddenly escaped from his hold and turned back to see him.
Since lights were switched off , I couldn’t clearly see him; but there was something different in him!!!
I caught him by his arm and brought him more closer to the window and….
Hey Sankarji!!! what have he done???I couldn’t believe my eyes, really….
Before I could say something,he told,”finally gouri, I have fulfilled your wish. I have opened my hair!!” Are you happy??””

What will I say!!
The night breeze , as it has read my mind, came running through the bars of the window and touched his hair magically such that the locks were flying high.The breeze not only raised his hair but my mind too; this jatadhari’s Gouri’s mind too!!!!!

How is this guyzzz

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38 Comments
  1. Rasika

    Awsm ya shraddha ,superb ??☺️???????

    1. Shraddha-DBO

      Thanks rasi?

  2. Haaye!! Jataadhaari❀cute os. Actually sachchi me i like om with open hair personally!

    1. Shraddha-DBO

      I like both but now wanna see jatadhari

  3. Sagithya

    Wow it was awesome….loved it yaar

    1. Shraddha-DBO

      Thank you sagi, keep following?

  4. Dhar

    Awesome episode ?? i love om with his hairs open

    1. Shraddha-DBO

      Yes all OMKARIANS are fans of his open hair?

  5. Shreyanvi

    Diii plzzz continue yaar…its just awesome…

    1. Shraddha-DBO

      Yep, I shall??

  6. wow super upd soon

  7. Kanfi

    Ammazing

  8. Alekhika20

    Awesome os

    1. Shraddha-DBO

      Thanks alekhi ?

  9. Wwwooooowwww Awesomeeee @shraddha …. OMG OMG OMG OMG … This FF is like a sweet dream…. Continue writing this one….. Just loved it to the core…. U can very well imagine my smiling face with this comment…

    As u know that MAAHI i.e me is greedy of reading such FF so plz plz post regularly…. I don’t want yo miss any single chapter and yes post Ur another FF COLURED CANAVS ( sry I didn’t remember the exact name of ur FF …. missing them )
    And also SORRY for being so demandable… but what to do I just love ur FF… and Can’t get over it…

    U always write for us so below r few lines for u from my side…

    UR CREATIVITY IS LIKE A WAVE OF LOVE….
    UR IMAGINATION IS LIKE A BEAUTIFUL DREAM…
    UR THOUGHTS IS LIKE A WORDS OF HEART…
    WHEN LOVELY WAVES OF DREAMS MEETS HEARTY THOUGHTS MAKES OUR SHRADDHA….

    Hope u like this @shraddha….

    1. Shraddha-DBO

      So so happy to know that you guys love my creations like this??
      I am in cloud eleven.
      Thanks a lot for that beautiful poem dear…
      Keep reading?

  10. Awesome. Keep writing more

    1. Shraddha-DBO

      Thank you plan?

  11. B.k.maha

    Superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr……….. Keep going…..

  12. Samm

    why did you stop there? it’s practically the dead of night here @06:00 am and i’m grinning at my lappy like a fool! πŸ˜€ want more of cute jatadhari and his Gauri’s sweet interactions πŸ™‚ post next super fast! πŸ™‚
    also, like maahi’s comment above πŸ™‚ so similar to what i feel after reading this πŸ™‚

    1. Thanks @samm for liking my comments…. Kya kare can’t wait for this FF

    2. Shraddha-DBO

      Hey samm, I think this is the first time you read my story…
      Sorry to have stopped it there.
      Happy to know that my story brought a smile on your face?

      Shall come back soon with next ?

  13. Yashu

    I was waiting for this…..omg omg I really Wanna see this in dbo…..dear it was nyc….

    1. Shraddha-DBO

      Yes yashu, even I wanna see this on screen.
      Thanks for reading this?

  14. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome dear…

    1. Shraddha-DBO

      Thank you Niki?

  15. Fab episode dear, plz update next part as soon as possible.
    I loved it but I want an intro of their love story bcoz I wanna know, is every misunderstanding clear between them?
    They accept each other how?

    1. Shraddha-DBO

      Yes dear, it is mentioned in os that their life is no more bitter but sweet ,I.e. both have accepted each other now?

  16. Verna

    Hey shraddha.. is this u? I really loved this part and want next and continuous part.

    1. Shraddha-DBO

      Sure Verna, thanks for the compliment??

  17. Aastha_Reddy

    He is back for her Only for his wife Gouri Omkara Singh Oberoi. His ties bun of hairs like a pony tail is all his problems of life..hurdles towards happiness..from the fight of his parents to the murder attempt and divorce drama…from the betrayal of Ishana to Riddhima then his over come from drugs and entry of a storm like Shwetlana ..the knot formed in his hair is same as his inner turmoil in heart as a Jatadhari hippi and now as Gouri came to his life as a light breeze ..as one oasis on a lonely dessert..all the knot from his heart is removed in her company let it be his wife Gouri to remove Fakelana or to accompany him in the same mission as his best friend Chulbul..Finally after the end of every thing.. they are together..he has realised that “wife is the only best friend for life”.. The opend hair..is indicating his relaxed form back..Omkara back from the fake mask of Omkara Singh Oberoi…just hope he will recite some shayari for his wife( wink wink) or will make a portrait of her..the same one that he made of her in his heart(lovely ,may be with dabbang style ha ha).
    This is the journey and destination of his Ishqbaazi…Raaste hi manzil bangaye….
    Nandhu..Jhakkass..haan.
    With Double meaning for both Artist Omkara and You too Shraddha..lol..

    1. Shraddha-DBO

      I always love your comments di, and yes omie is gonna do something for his chiraiyya.
      Just wait n watch??

  18. Neha_Pheonix

    Amazing ….totally magnificent..!!!
    Loved itttt
    Why did you stop so soonnn

  19. VHM

    though i don’t watch DBO but i do surely read written updates….and this is super awesome…i am actually imagining Om with ;ong hairs…it seems like a decade to see him like that…such a cute description ….lovely episode dear…now i will read second part and then comment there…so please excuse me here

  20. Tanz

    Awesome part Di… Really it’s a dream come true for DBO fans…Om opened his hair for Gouri…WoW…loved it?

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