That One Song- A SwaSan FanFic (Chapter 5)

21st August 2016
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Link for the previous chapters:

Previous Episodes
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RECAP: Song revelation and hero’s entry!
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NOTE: DO NOT SKIP THE A/N AT THE END OF THE CHAPTER.
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Today’s Chapter: Nok Jhok to Hatred!
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——-Chapter 5——-
If not love then what?

Swara’s P.O.V.

“So u both know each other?” Lucky bhai asked.
“Nah…I had bumped into him just a while ago, that’s all. Now, now, plzz don’t tell me that he is the same Sanky.”
I shut my eyes tightly and started murmuring some prayers. Gosh! What was this!

“Unfortunately meri saali saahiba, I have to tell you that this is the same Sanky.”
“Bhai! Stop it for heaven’s sake!”
The same voice! Ugh…only if he stopped speaking. I was going weak on my knees on listening to his voice.
“So, Sanky means crazy, right? My real name is Sanskaar. Now tell me its meaning.”
“M s-so-sorry Sanky…oops…I mean Sanskaar. I didn’t know it was you. Uh…can I be granted forgiveness?”
“Only if u tell me the meaning of my name.”
“Jiju, u told me ur brother is a topper, rgt?” I asked, getting annoyed. His voice was, oh, so mesmerising! But who knew that he could be so irritating!
“And he doesn’t even know the meaning of his own name.” I finished.
“Sho…I mean Miss Swara. Even you are a topper, you should know the meaning, looks like you don’t. Tch tch tch tch…what kind of toppers exist in today’s world?”

Sanskaar’s P.O.V.
(Finally my Sanky is gonna share his P.O.V.
Love uh…my heartbeat!๐Ÿ’ž)

“What kind of toppers exist in today’s world?” I asked, teasing her.
Well, this is kind of a test! I love testing people whom I meet, I get to know more about them. See, if she complains to this, matlab beta she is very short tempered. Let’s see what happens!
“Exactly my dear! What kind of toppers exist in today’s world! Toppers like you!”
She took it as a sport…phew! The other girls at school, they were so irritating! And unluckily, all of them, the irritating ones, they drooled over me! Ah, heat is in the air!

“So, Sanskaar means manners, something which you don’t possess. Happy to know the meaning of your own name? Well well, please may I have the honour to get to know how a great topper like you knows my name?”
“Bhai told me. He often keeps on telling me about you and Bhabhi, I have met Bhabhi, but I never saw you, but when I saw you addressing him as Jiju, I knew at once that you were the girl! And dare not to say that I don’t possess manners without knowing me.”
“That is okay, Sanky! But, why did you scream out in shock on seeing her?” Bhai and Bhabhi asked, almost at the same time.

Shit! They asked this question! Why? Oh why why why? What should I answer them now? Because I never thought that my Bhabhi’s sister would be the same girl I dashed into? That same girl who almost stole my heart, only that I snatched it back! Uh, I don’t like falling in love, I have no belief in love and all, and I guess I am not of that age to be in relationships and all! Well, I think I’m taking it too far, lemme return to my normal mastikhor mood!
“Well Bhabhi, after seeing such a diva like you, I never thought that your sister would be so, you know na, ahh…’mean so you know, I can’t find the word…yess! So like a dracula!”

Swara’s P.O.V.

Dracula…
He said…dracula…
My eyes welled up at that. Since birth, the scar on my left cheek, just a small one, below my left ear, has led me to getting called as a vamp, sometimes a dracula. I could see my eyes brimming with tears. Damn! Why always me? Whenever someone would say like this, Aarav would always protect me, but today…where are you Aarav? I need you! I quietly wiped my wet eyes somehow. I didn’t want to show my weakness to everyone.

“Scars always show bravery. If I look like a dracula…then…”
I couldn’t continue more. Ragu di understood the complete situation.
“Lucky, explain your bhai not to say anything against my sister.” Ragu di told Lucky bhai with pleading eyes.
Even Lucky bhai understood the situation. He took Sanky away to some corner. I started crying like a newly born baby does when it’s hungry. Why are weaknesses always criticised? Gosh! How will I do my paper now? I need either of the three things- music, sweets or Aarav.

Koi nahi tere sivaa mera yahaan
Manzile hai meri….

Aarav! Oh my! That’s why he’s my best friend! How well does he understand me!

Swara’s P.O.V. Ends

*Telephone Conversation*

S: Aarav!
A: You were weeping.
S: No Aarav! Don’t be silly!
A: Stop lying to me!
S: Why are you shouting?
A: I am shouting? Do you even realise that in just half an hour your exam is about to commence? Sara wished you yesterday only. Thank God I called you up now. I knew at the moment you took my name that how desperate you were to speak to me. What do you think of yourself?
S: Aarav! Already I’m so upset and you are scolding me! Do you even know how low I’m feeling?
A: Tumhara kuch nhi hone wala! Okay, okay, won’t scold you now! Now stop crying! STOP CRYING!
S: Stopped baba! Stopped!
A: That’s like my Shona Mona!
S: It’s Shona.
A: See, if you don’t stop being upset, I won’t stop calling you by this name, okay Shona Mona?
S: Do you know why I am upset?
A: Dekh, ekk to ho sakta hai ki someone made fun of your musical talent.
ย ย ย ย  Agar aisa hai then I’m ready to break the person’s face.
ย ย ย ย  Aur dusra ho sakta hai ki again someone called you a dracula or a vamp.
ย ย ย ย  Abb bata, dono mein se kaunsa?
S: The second one.
A: I don’t understand, ekk scar hi toh hai…why do they call you dracula for this? Well, who was that person?
S: Jiju’s brother, Sanskaar.
A: Sanskaar…Sanskaar Kapoor?
S: You know him?
A: Yeah, he follows me on Insta.
S: Hahahaha…why would he follow you on Insta? Gosh Aarav, you can be too funny at times!
A: Shona Mona! I ain’t lying! Nahi toh surname kya wo mere kaano mei batake gaya hai?
S: Ok, Ok. You know I almost fell for him today, but he proved that boys are all just the same.
A: Ahem Ahem!
S: Haan haan, there are exceptions like you. But he…ugh…idiot!
A: Chalo at least you realised that those who tease you are idiots! Remember, you were, are and will always be my princess!
S: Mujhe princess bulaoge toh apni hone wali ko kya bulaoge?
A: Swara muh band! Ya…jiss cheez ke liye phone kiya tha…
BOL my Shona!
S: Aarav…I love this BOL of yours…take care…Buhbye…
A: Don’t cry…and don’t take care, coz I’m always there to take care of you!

Aarav’s P.O.V.

Fallen for whom? That Sanky Monkey? Looks ke naam pe kuda, manners kabaad mein, aur sabse mahaan baat, Swara ki choice badi hi ghatiya hai! Aye phurrr…
Waiiinnn…Swara is only mine! And what? He called her a drac? How dare he! Ahhhh! I will kill him if I get hold of him! Stupid! Idiot! Duffer! Gadha! Ullu! Aiinnn…calling my princess a drac haan!

Sanskaar’s P.O.V.

Shit! I didn’t know of her scar! Damn this silly brain of mine! M gonna hit myself hard for this! Sanskaaar!!! I hate you for this! Excuse toh kya…she looked like a drac! She was crying! I saw that glint in her eyes! Bhai told me how sensitive she is! Curse the devil! Shit shit shit shit shit! Now what am I gonna do? How to apologise to her? She must have set some wrong image of mine in her mind! Shit! Okay…no one has done any shit here! M gonna go give my paper now. But I will definitely apologise to her soon.

Swara’s P.O.V.

Paper’s over! Yayy! And it was too good! All thanks to Aarav! He’s a real sweetheart!
And when he said that he was always there to take care of me, I was seriously aww-ing!
And as for that Sanky, let him go to hell! Well, one did truly say, ‘Never judge a book by its cover and online review!’ Lol! Hey, what do I see over there? Phir se open romance? Arey Ragu di…kabhi to sharam kar liya karo!
I walked upto them.

“Ahem Ahem! Hope you both are done!”
“Saali Maharani, jab aapka boyfriend ban jayega na, tab aapka bhi aisa hi mann hoga…humesha uske sath rehne ka!” Lucky bhai said.
I saw Sanskaar approaching the three of us.
I quickly turned my face to the other side and was about to leave, but Ragu di stopped me. No. I didn’t want to face him. I don’t want to face a person so mean and rude like him! Chhee! A person who can’t respect a girl isn’t worth of any love.
“Shona, you have to face him.”
“No!”
Then, came a third voice.
“Swara…”
That was Sanskaar’s voice!

PRECAP: ROMANCE IS IN THE AIR! BUT…THEN…!
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A/N

Hey my sweethearts! How are you all! You all know what? I was so happy that all of you liked my hero’s entry! I received much lesser comments, but that was bc’z many of my readers had their exams, and so, I don’t feel low at all! You all liked it, that was a lot of me!
Amu, Khushi di, Saby di…come back soon…I’m missing your comments!
Acha haan, I’m really sorry for the short update. Actually, my half yearlies are nearing, and I need to prepare myself really well for that. So, please understand my situation.
And ya, many of you were missing Aarav. Dekho, ekk hi chapter mein use nhi laayi aur missing shuru! That’s why I brought him back in today’s chapter.
Now it’s all gonna spice up! On one side, Sanky is slowly falling for Shona, Shona has slowly started hating Sanky, Aarav knows Sanky…and he can’t stand the fact that Swara had almost fallen for him, and on top of that, I hope you all have noticed Sara’s behaviour whenever Aarav gives more attention to Swara…some jealousy! And and and, Kavita bhi entry maarne wali hai bohot jaldi! So love triangle nhi, square nhi, love pentagon hai! Enjoy enjoy!
Well, I told some of you, that you all are not gonna like Sanky’s character for long. Well, that’s solely true. I love you Sanky, but it’s needed for my ff.
And, what do you all feel after reading about Swara’s scar? Well, I wanted to give a social message through this. People should never be judged through their outer beauty. Beauty is something which arises from the soul. And a scar or two never decided, and will never decide how humble a person is, or how successful a person will be.
Acha guess what? That day Anjali di asked for the link of my ff! I was so excited! I was jumping jumping jumping! She’s sucha great writer, and I love her vocab skills!
And Ashu di…you are sucha sweetheart! I love you sooooo much! You just so surprised me!
And ya ya ya…that RagSan fan bashed my ff also!๐Ÿ˜‚
And what a reply I gave her๐Ÿ˜Ž! Without using any abusive words, I gave her the correct reply, and I thank allll of you who you stayed by my side. Thanku sooooo much! Muaah๐Ÿ˜˜!
Shalu di…again a surprise seeing you! I got you as a new reader! And I really love you a lot! And remember, I’m always available for you!
Kruti di…I never thought that you would read all four chapters of mine in a single go! That was really so sweet of you! I love you๐Ÿ’•!
Prakriti…my princess! I really love you re! There’s no one like you!
And yes, those whose names I did not take, they are even more special to me. Coz they are ppl whose names don’t need to be taken, their names are in my heart alwaysโค!
And, I recently faced a split with my best friend, and only I know what happened! I cried for three long hours, and faced a severe headache, a seriously severe one! And all of you stayed by my side! All of you supported me, specially you, my Prakriti!
Now, we are together again…phew!
And yes, for all the TwiNj fans who read my ff. Well, there are numerous people who comment on my ff’s, and you won’t find them commenting on any other SwaSan ff’s. That’s coz they are TwiNj fans, and my ff is most probably the first one they ever read. I am a TwiNj fan, other than being a SwaSan fan, and they all love me so much, that they read my ff!
And and and, I need your suggestions for the upcoming chapters. Though I have something in mind yet I wanna know what you all want to see in the next chapters.

I guess aaj kuch zyada hi bol dala…
Toh Allah Haafis, Namaste, Tata Bye Bye!
Par…………..Kabhi Alvida Na Kehna…๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜
I love alllllll of uuuuu!๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

39 comments

    • Laddoo

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      Abb meri princess ko kya ho gya? Mujhe kuch smjh nhi aaya tere comment ka…na upar na neeche..
      Matlab kya hai tera? U won’t comment later? Ya phir u want to say that u will comment later? Mko kuch smjh nhi aa rha…smjha de princess…

      • Prakriti19

        Aye Meri Ishu Di..Menu Ki hoga…I am Fit and Fine And the reason of my that comment I have told you earlier…So I dont think that I need to tell you…About Chappy- Superb, Awesome, Mindblowing, Wonderful, Beautiful, Amazing, Speechless Concept of your FF…Me Teri Hai re Jabri Hoye re Jabri Fan Ho Gayi…Tu Menu Pagal mat Samajhna…Vo to tenu Pata hai ki Main Pagal nahi houn mera Dimag Kharab Hain…Hai Ki Nahi…Waise So Exicted for Love Pentagon ….Just Waiting For Next Sunday…I am waiting for next Sunday not for your ff…Kuynki Sunday ko to to ff post Jarrror karegi…TO tere ff ka kuyn INtezaar Karun….BTW DI KEEP WRITING AND TAKE CARE
        Study Well AND KEEP SMILING…
        LOVE U LOADS SE BHI MORE…

    • Laddoo

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      Haye itti tareef na karr meri…mko zameen pe rehne ka zyada shauk hai…
      Aur zyada Fan Fan na kar…mere ghar mei na jaane kitte fans aa gaye honge…
      Aur mujhe pata hai ki tera dimag kharaab hai….aur sahi mein kharaab hai…
      Aur ye acha hai…mere ff ka intezaar na kar…Sunday ka kar๐Ÿ˜
      Mere uoar gayi hai meri princess๐Ÿ˜‚
      Aur haan main padh hi rhi hu…aur na bol re
      Chl love u
      Ja jee le apni zindagi๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜˜

  1. Zuha Fatima

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    Ishu ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ U rocked it once again ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ The nok jhoks were so enjoyble I loved them soooo much ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜Œ And I really liked the idea of Swara’s scar ๐Ÿ™‚ Many ppl judge ppl coz of their looks and beauty but I believe that beauty is nothing more than the person’s nature ๐Ÿ™‚ Well for suggestions …..Uhhmmmm…..As u said Sanky will be kinds -ve so why don’t u make him insult Swara after wooing her coz of her scar! Well those were my silly thoughts ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ do what u feel is better for the story ๐Ÿ™‚

    Ok bye bye, Allah Hafiz! Take care ๐Ÿ™‚

    Keep smiling ๐Ÿ™‚ Always ๐Ÿ™‚

    Love u โคโค

    -Zuha

    • Laddoo

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      Zuhuu! I just sent u a msg sending the link of my ff! Oh My God! And that very moment I was notified of ur comment! Seriously Zuhuuu! I love uh re๐Ÿ˜˜
      Nok jhoks were enjoyable? Kahan se bhai? Mujhe 2 cheezein bilkul likhni nhi aati
      Ek romance, aur dusra humour
      Pata nahi agla chap kitne pani mei doobega!
      And thanku for ur suggestions sweetie!
      Love uh๐Ÿ˜˜

  2. Angel_pari

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    Hello!!!! How is my doll doing……. Well do i really need to say smthng abt epi??????

    Sachi mn???????

    It was out of the world totally loved it….ur writing skills are superb……

    Coming to epi.
    Awwww cute nok jhok love it……
    And aarav and swara,s bond is sooooooooooooooooo good…. I just love aarav (parth)…. And and i,m excited for love pentagon ๐Ÿ˜‰

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    Yeah i do agree with u we cant judge ppl by outer appearance….beauty is gift of God…. What means more is pure heart…….

    Ok love u bye bye……..

    • Laddoo

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      Pari di! Ur doll is abso fine!
      Thankuu sooo much di!
      Aarav is my fav character! I love him so much! And and and….Love Pentagon’s gonna be interesting! Love u sooo much di!
      Take careโค

  3. Shatakshi

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    Haye Ishu
    Maar dala tune aaj aapne chapter se๐Ÿ”ช๐Ÿ”ช๐Ÿ”ช
    Sacchi me…ittna aacha koi likhta h kya???
    I really liked ur concept about scar…
    N will be waiting for next chapter..
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    But…but….but.
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    Padhai karne ke baad he likhna…n its an order okay.
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    All the very best for ur exams
    N yaar sidhant n helly both r gonna eliminate in coming episodes of jdlj๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข
    Chall koi nahi….we will still remain sidhantians
    Love u loadsโคโค

    • Laddoo

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      Shats diiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!
      Haye maine apni twin sisso ko maar dala? Na re baba na! Mko jail nii jana๐Ÿ˜œ
      Haan baba…pehle padhai phir hi ff! Khush? And thanku so much for ur wishes!
      I know Sid n Helly are gonna be eliminated! Abb kya? I won’t jump on my bed, I won’t squeal in excitement, and I’m gonna watch the show only for Shantanu!
      And once a Sidhantian, Always a Sidhantian!
      Love u diiโค๐Ÿ’ž

  4. Mahjabeen

    Yeyyyy dear it ws awesome..fabulous outstanding part…swasan nok jhok loved it totally nd aaravs nd towrd swaras bonding ws cute, lovely…..ummahhhhh๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜….u write so welll i just cnt believe it..love u๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    • Laddoo

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      Diiii! Thankuu sooo much! U say such a lot in so less words! I love ur comments! Thankuuu sooo much for sucha beautiful comment!
      Love uh๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Laddoo

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      Anu di….thanku soooo much!๐Ÿ˜˜
      And again Swara-Aarav’s bond…well…so many comments are coming speaking only of Aarav, and urs is one of them๐Ÿ˜‚
      And love pentagon I dnt kno how I’ll write…bass likh dungi…
      Love u๐Ÿ˜˜

  5. Swarmayi

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    Kiddoooooooooooooooo……
    Super duper lovely episode….
    Amazing…
    Umaaaaaahhh…
    & do studies properly ok?? Best of luckmy bacchha!!
    Love u.. ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Laddoo

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      Shalu diiiiii!!!!!
      Thanku soooooooo much!
      Love u soooooooo much!!!!
      And now toh even ur throat is good…..bass aur kya chahiye?
      And m studying di…studying studying and only studying!
      And thanku for the good luck!

  6. Sayeeda

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    Main toh tumhari fan hogai…. Hogai bhai haan hogai… Koi toh rok lo mujhe kyuki main apne control main nai hui ye episode padhne ke baad…. Sacchi mein main crazy wali jabra fan ho tumhari ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘

    Don’t laugh Ishu ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚I know u must be thinking that I always say that I’m ur fan but I can do u r the one responsible for it…. Why do u write so well Yrrr I can’t tell how well u wrote it….

    Seriously it was the best… Till now I read so many novels but ur episode was million times better than then the novel I read….

    Those POV’s were fab…. Nd ur concept of scar nd the reason u gave that inner beauty matters more than the outer appearance… U made me speechless through ur thought’s ๐Ÿ˜ฏ๐Ÿ˜ฏ๐Ÿ˜ฏ๐Ÿ˜ฏ…….
    I’m so blessed to have a talented sis like u….

    Awesome episode… Amazing…

    Love u sooooooooo much…. Love u too moon nd back…. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Laddoo

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      Phir se fan? Har chapter mei same comment Sayu Aapi…really? Arey mko pata hai aap mere fan ho aur aapko bhi yeh pata hai ki I consider u to be my elder sister and nothing else…no fan
      Aur haa…crazy aap nhi, mai hu….aur when r u appointing me as ur PA?
      I don’t feel my work is good! Bohot boring lagta hai mujhe jab main proof reading krti hu…saare schoolmates bhi yahi kehte hai!
      And what? Novel se behter? No Aapi…
      How can I write better than novelists? And the scar concept just popped up into my mind, I never thought that I would add it in here!
      And I love u till rotating around the whole universe! Poore universe ke 10 chakkar lagalo that much I love u…muaaah๐Ÿ˜˜

  7. SidMin

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    Mere Laddoo Loved it I have no words to describe how The episode I loved it is all what I can say The way you write the way you make me emotional and then smile at some of your silly jokes Like the one “don’t judge a book by its cover or online review ”
    Loved it
    Now ….
    Ahm..Ahm …
    The best writer award goes too
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    Laddoo (Ishu)
    Loved the episode waiting for the next one waiting for Sundays
    I wait for Sundays for 2 reasons
    one coz its a holiday and
    two coz I get to read your ff
    Love you ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. Kruti

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    Ishu d epi was just so amazing
    Loved d idea of swara’s scar
    And i am waiting to see sanskar in the-ve role

  9. Ashu

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    Aww jaan!!! U r a sweetheart! And I’m flying so high in the air seeing ur love๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž

    Kiddo!!!!! You knw wht I got addicted to ur ff….especially when last week I couldn’t read it, I was so desperate as to when this stupid exams wld get over and when I will get to read ur ff!!!

    Swara hating sanky๐Ÿ˜ฏ๐Ÿ˜ฏ Swara gets too emotional…cry doll!!!
    And sanky is a dumbo!!! He really needs to think before speaking!!!

    Love pentagon๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ Only u can write something like this!!! And I’m waiting for it!!! And aarav jealous huh??? But he is such a gd friend I must say!! I loved him, especially when he said, ‘don’t take care coz I’m always there to take care of u’ I was like awww…kaash I cld get someone like him by my side!!!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
    And I hope everything is fine with ur friend!!!

    LOVE YOU ISHU๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ
    Keep smiling๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

    • Laddoo

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      Ashu di!!!!
      I love u soooo much….muaaah!๐Ÿ˜˜
      U got addicted to this silly ff of mine? Really? I never expected this! And u wanted ur exams to end only coz of my ff? Really?
      Diiii…Swara ko cry doll mat bolo…Swara is me only! I am Swara! There is no difference between Ishani and Swara! Dono ek hai…they are the same!
      And Aarav! Bhai maaf karo! Everybody…
      ‘Aarav is so sweet
      Aarav is so good
      Aarav Swara bonding is so good
      Aarav is sucha good friend
      Aarav is so caring!’

      And now, the friend with whom I fought over, is none other than Aarav! Means, the name is different in real life, but the people are the same! I have an Aarav in my life! And if I tell him of his fan following na, he’ll go all blushing blushing!
      And u wish to get someone like him, I already have someone who is him!
      Love u loads di!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  10. Arshaanya

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    First tym commenting on ur ff… its jus awesome i loved it…. u r ptryng evry chrctr vry beautifully… w8ng for next part..

    • Laddoo

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      OMG! U dnt kno but u jus made my day! I love it when new new ppl comment on my ff! It feels so good! Thanks a lot dearie! It means a lot to me!
      P.S I like ur name a lot! Whoever kept it, I don’t know, but u r lucky enough to have sucha name.

  11. Ria

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    Ishuuu,
    It was super duper, fantastic, extra fabulous. Ab kya bataun!
    I loved it to the core. Arey chill na. Maine aur meri bff ne 6 months tak baat nahi ki thi. Even now we don’t get time to talk regularly but, when we do we forget time.
    Vaise, what love Pentagon n all! Pehle maine kabhi nahi Suna. It’s really gonna be smtng different. Super excited. Waiting for Sunday to come.
    Loads of love.๐Ÿ’—
    Your Ria di.

    • Laddoo

      |Registered Member

      Ria di!
      U r always sucha person who speaks a lot in less! And don’t praise me this much! Zameen pe hi rehna hai mujhe….aasmaan door hai…๐Ÿ˜…
      Well, six months is a long time! Even m waiting for sunday to come๐Ÿ˜‚
      Love u tons
      Ur Ishu๐Ÿ˜˜

  12. Arshdeep

    |Registered Member

    Superb episode sweetheart๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ
    That jiju-saali sahiba sounds really nice๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’™
    Awww Sanky..poor boy๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜” Called her dracula unintensionally but yeah loved to know he had also fallen for her in first meeting๐Ÿ˜โค

    Aarav is such a lovely guy๐Ÿ˜ Always cheer her up and knows her so so wellโœŒ Swara is lucky to have himโค

    Really excited to watch Sanskaar apologising Swara๐Ÿ˜

    Precap sounded cute unitl i read that “but”๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜” Post the next one soon dear. I am always waiting for it.

    Omg Love Pentagon..I missed something i guess coz i didnt think about Sara before. Just now thought reason for Sara’s jealousy
    is her love for Aarav? Is it?๐Ÿค”
    Aww my name isnt there. I live in your heartโค๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
    And dont ever cry lovely. Just sort out everything with your friend. I am sure it will be fine soon๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜

    And no suggestions. I love what you write and will always love to read itโœŒ But dont make us hate Sanskar hmm..that i start loving Aarav more๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚

    Love you lots Laddoo always and foreverโค๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Laddoo

      |Registered Member

      Arshu di!
      That’s why I love you!
      Your comments are always the most spcl!
      And Aarav! Haye he is becoming more popular than the hero himself! Hadd hoti hai! Everyone is like Aarav is so cute, Aarav is so sweet, I love Aarav…and so on.
      Aarav is a person from my own life! That best friend of mine, with whom I faced a split, is Aarav himself! Just that his name is different! Eh, now we are back to our normal mode, though! I guess I should tell him that his fan following is increasing! My! He is already an introvert, how will he blush! When I’ll tell him that in my story, he loves Swara aka Me, he will definitely smack me on my head!
      And Sanky apologising to Swara will be a bit different, wait till next Sunday!
      Love u more and more…till the moon and backร—infinity!!!
      ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

      • Arshdeep

        |Registered Member

        You are lucky to have such a person in your life girl๐Ÿ˜ Never ever lose him. Pack up soon with him๐Ÿ’™ and stay happy always๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  13. Shubhangi

    |Registered Member

    Aapne bulaya aur ham chale aaye
    Love Pentagon seriously wow I’m waiting re now Sunday should come soon or else I’ll start making a time machine & wow yaar today’s episode was seriously epic re I salute you

  14. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    hey meri jaan kaisi hai..c who is back vaise main kahin gayi nhi thi but thodi der ke liye comment nhi kar payi me sweet heart..
    how r u my darling???
    plz apni di maaf kar dena main tera ff padhti toh thi but was not able to comment coz of the browser and u know what maine tere pichle post pe comment kia tha but voh post nhi hua coz of browser i suppose but dont worry now i have installed UC browser so itys ok now

    so now about the episode it was lil short but koi na bete u r chotta pack and big dhamaka this small also had the same impact as the big one my dear main humesha kehti hun and ajj phir keh rahi hun u r the best pta nhi kya khati hai tu jo itne ache ideas aate hai tere dimaag superb u r meri jaan
    be like this …i love this chappy ohh swara hating sansku and sansku falling for shona wow that will be fun..cant wait yr plz post the next one soon dear i will be waiting

    and kya A/N tha aww u were mising me but dont worry m here na ab no missing ok??
    and han koi bash kare ya tang kare toh m ujhe batana main uski watt lga dungi aise kaise koi meri sis ko tang kar sakta hai voh haq sirf mera hai..haha just kidding dear…

    love u dear plz post the next one soon darling
    love u so so so much

    • Laddoo

      |Registered Member

      Khushi di…
      I am absolutely fine! Aur aapka comment dekhke toh I am supa dupa good!
      Aur ye kya mafi wafi ka chakkar hai? Aapne padha isn’t that enough? Aur di…u won’t say sorry again…bass promise me!
      And di….m not chhota packet…poori family mein sabse lambi hu…bade dhamake ka pata nhi…shayad bhagwaan ne brain mein thoda kuch extra daal diya hoga๐Ÿ˜‚
      Aur maine keh diya hai already ki main kya khati hu๐Ÿ˜‚
      Bass aap bhi biscuits aur chocolates kha liya karo๐Ÿ˜‚
      Pr nhi……aap mese behter likhte ho…
      Haan baba abb no missing…thank God u r here!
      Haan haan only u have the right to tangofy me๐Ÿ˜‚
      I mean aap mko humesha tang kr skte ho…never a prob๐Ÿ˜‰
      Love u sooooooo much di๐Ÿ˜˜

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