That One Song- A SwaSan FanFic (Chapter 4)

14th August 2016
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Link for the previous chapters:

http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=That+one+song
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RECAP: Flashback of childhood.
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Today’s Chapter: Dhak-Dhak Dhak-Dhak…
The heart-throb is finally here๐Ÿ˜‰
One month leap.
Song revelation.
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——-Chapter 4——-
The Kapoor Brothers

***One Month Leap***

Pehle kabhi na tune mujhe gham diya
Phir mujhe kyun tanha kar diya
Guzaare the jo lamhe pyar ke
Humesha tujhe apna maan ke
To phir tune badli kyun adaa
Yeh kyun kiya
Kabhi jo baadal barse
Main dekhu tumhe aankhein bharke
Tu lage mujhe pehli baarish ki duaa
Tere pehlu mein reh loon
Main khud ko paagal keh loon
Tu gham de ya khushiyan seh loon
Saathiyaa…

Swara’s P.O.V.

Music. My world. My life. These three are synonyms. Music is my everything, I know that you already know that. Mom and Dad never forbade me from pursuing music as a career, but I know how much they want me to become an established, successful doctor. This one song, I’ve been humming since the past one month. Not humming actually, but singing. People say that this song is perfect. They further say that this song is the best for any breakup situation. I don’t feel so. Don’t know why, though. It’s said that music is nothing widout the feel. I solely agree. I have felt the pain, the emotions, the love, the happiness, in every song I’ve heard, but this song is so different. I just can’t feel anything in this song. No wonder it is sung by my favourite singer cum idol, Shreya Ghoshal. This song, whenever I listen to it, I feel no emotions, I just sit dumb and listen carefully to it, trying to find something. And that something is far from my reach. I’ve felt pain in almost every breakup song, then why only this one doesn’t work? I shared it with Ragini di. To my bad luck, Aarav is at his grandmother’s place, while Sara is on a family vacation. I had no one other than Ragu di to share this with.

“Sweeto, you’ve not fallen in love as yet. When Laksh broke up with me, I understood how perfect the song is, though we’re together again.”
“If that is the lone reason, then why does it not happen with any other song?”
“This song is special. Leave it and sleep now. Don’t forget that tomorrow is your entrance test.”
“Okay. G’night. ‘Dreams.”
Maybe she was right. I lied down on the bed, trying to gather some sleep. It just wasn’t possible. Sleep and my eyes were the same as like poles, they would never meet, always repel. I lied down, dreaming with my eyes open and I had to doze off, my exams are too crucial for me, more crucial than any 75% OFF sale for a shopaholic even!

Ragini’s P.O.V.

This girl, Swara, true that she’s my sister, but she’s two worlds apart from me.
She is a girl drenched in the world of music. She is really skilled at it, I must say. She hasn’t received any training, though. She can identify any song from the first chord that is struck. She experiences the feel in every song she hears. I myself can’t understand what game is this song playing with her. She asked me this question. I myself am incapable of answering her question. I know how much she wants to pursue music as a career. I chose my ambition over my parents’ wishes, so she is fulfilling their wishes. This song is gonna change her life. I can bet on it. She hasn’t slept, I know. She never gathers sleep without listening to her favourite lullaby. She’s a grown up and she listens to lullaby, that’s what you are thinking, aren’t you? Well, that’s what my Shona is like. We both share a bonding, such that people should rather call us the soul sisters. Well, that’s what we are. She’s the best sister, the best daughter, the best, oh the best of everything she is. It’s time for me to sleep. It’s her entrance test tomorrow, and I’m the one who is more worried for it, coz I know, she’s never tensed for her exams! My weirdo Sista…!

Swara’s P.O.V.

Wishing a very good morning to the sleepyhead! Phew! Finally I woke up! It’s already 7 30! Ahhhh! I’ve gotta reach the centre by 9! I have to brush my teeth, take a bath, select a proper dress, make a proper hairdo, collect the necessary stuff, take Ma-Baba’s blessings, argghhh!!! This is hectic!

Before I knew, I was ready! Well, Swara Bose getting ready in half an hour, is something next to impossible! Cmonn, everyone knows I dnt take less than an hour to complete my getup. Nevertheless, sometimes changes are necessary. I climbed down the stairs, faster than ever before, and greeted Ma-Baba. I could easily sense a glint of tears in their eyes.
“Ma, Baba, it’s not my bidaai! U both are weeping, aren’t u? Why in the world Ma?”
“No Shona, nothing like that. It’s just that we were…”
Mom couldn’t speak more so Baba continued.
“Shona, u sure u wanna do this? We know beta how much u want to pursue music as a career…”
I frowned at that. This question was asked to me each morning. I mean just yesterday they asked me this question! Every single day this question was asked to me, and I never imagined that they would ask this question on the day of my exam! And they say of pursuing a career in music as if it is very easy, and that all directors would run after me, believing that I was Lata Mangeshkar! I was just fed up of all this now.
“If you both don’t stop asking this question, I’ll break all ties with music!”

Well, only I knew how I could utter these words. Breaking all ties with music is no less than a sin for me, a crime for me. I could very well understand how shocked they were at my sudden words, the words which I couldn’t utter even in my wildest dreams. Neverย  had they ever thought that I would say something like this. There was shun silence for a while until Raguu entered the scene.
“Why is this silence here? Don’t tell me you both again aksed her that question!”
She said these lines, understanding the situation. Ah, whose sister is she? Mine, ovio! That’s why she’s so intelligent! But, but, wait! What if Ma Baba tell her about my reply? Noooooo! I dnt want to die so quick! Shit! Swara…..!
“We did, but her reply was unexpected. Sorry Shona, we won’t ask this again.”
I realised that they were really sorry. I shouldn’t have said all those lines. Uhh, my weakness that is; blurting out whatever comes into my mind and then repenting. I seriously needed some soft and slow music to pacify me.
“Sweeto, come have this sweetened curd. I know u need some music at the moment. But, don’t forget that for u sweets and music are the same.”

She was right. I love anything sweet in taste and anyone having a sweet nature. The curd really pacified me. That’s why I love Ragu di! I went up to my parents and hugged them tightly, apologising to them. Baba stroked me hair and wished me goodluck, kissing me on my forehead. This third eye kiss always awakened the passion and energy inside me. And that’s why I love Baba the most! And I may have a Prince Charming soon, but Baba will always be my King! Love you Baba!

Ragini’s P.O.V.

Whatever Shona said wasn’t right. I had heard it from the kitchen. I just didn’t want to let her know of this. She’s a topper and I want her to succeed in this examination as well. I accomapnied her till the examination centre. I could sense her nervousness easily.
“Come on Shona! U r a topper! Stop being nervous!”
“I-I’m n-not.”
Her voice cracked. She avoided eye contact with me. Stupid girl! Hiding things from her sista!
“You can lie to almost everyone but me, meri jaan.”
She pulled my cheeks. And why did she do so? Oh, this girl can be so damn confusing sometimes!
“I know that! Afterall, aap meri mahaan behen jo hai! Waise…Lucky bhai will be there, no? Whey….his brother is also giving the entrance test, isn’t he? I don’t even know his name, neither have I ever seen him, introvert types he is, right?”
“Shonaa…u r getting naughtier day by day! Well, Lucky’s bro’s real name even I don’t know. I have met him once, but we never had a proper intro! Hehe….Lucky calls him Sanky…”
“Sanky…? Weirdo! What if he is really a sanky? Imagine di, ur devar ji in a mental asylum! Won’t that be cool?”
“Cool? My foot! Ms. Bak-Bak, if u can turn ur attention frm ur blabbering for a sec u’ll find that we’ve reached.”
“Uh-oh! Let’s make a move!”

Swara’s P.O.V.

What is this place? A dungeon? Shit! The fact that I’m coming to this place is all crap. Oops…sry sry…sry Saraswati Ma…I’ll not say so again! I looked up, only to see Ragu di hugging Lucky bhai as if she hadn’t seen him for yrs. I scoffed as usual. I never understood what love is, and open romance…uhh!
“They call it love!”

I heard a sweet angelic voice singing these words into my ears. I turned around to see the person. Oh, forgot to mention, it was a manly voice. I turned around but he was so close that I actually bumped into him. He held my elbow and made me stand straight. I looked up to see the face of this man. Forget face, his eyes were enough for me. I got lost in them, simply lost, really ya, one wouldn’t find me even in this universe until they shook me really hard.

Koi nahi tere sivaa mera yahaan
Manzile hai meri to sab yahaan

Why did this song start playing all of a sudden? What connection did this song have with this mystery man? Wait wait…that was my phone ringing! Hehe…it’s not the same kismat connection always. We composed ourselves. I excused myself from him n went to pick up the call. Unfortunately, it was the Airtel services disturbing the first eyelock of my life…not any normal one, but the deepest and the most intense one can ever share. I stood there cursing them under my breath. I saw Ragu di approaching me.
“Whom is my sister cursing? ”
“THE GREAT Airtel Services!”
She chuckled at that. I saw Lucky bhai approaching the two of us.
“Heeelllloooo jiiijuuuu…”
I said, pulling his cheeks. Ragu di scolded me playfully while Lucky bhai chuckled.
“So my sali maharani is here for her exam? Wait…even Sanky is here. Beware haa…even he is a topper! U never know when the tables turn!”
“Lucky…” Di gave him an angry stare, while Lucky bhai gulped in fear.
“Jiju, is ur bhai really Sanky? Why don’t u send him to a mental asylum?”
I laughed out loud…but stopped as soon as I heard a voice from behind, just the same as the voice I had heard before, of the mystery man.
“If my nickname makes u feel m a real sanky, then what will my real name make u feel?”
I turned around and the same thing took place. Just imagine! The same thing, oh with a li’l change for sure. I turned around and just dashed into him, as he was even closer to me this time. He held me by my waist. Those same dark eyes, the same intense smile, the same longing gaze, my vision was blurring when reality struck me and I screamed out.
“YOU!!!”
We both spoke out in shock.

PRECAP: NOKING-JHOKING WITH MR. KAPOOR!๐Ÿ˜‰
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A/N

Hello sweethearts! My darlos! How are you all? Main to supa dupa good hoon!
Hwz the chap? I wrote longer than ever.
How was the song? Did u all like my song selection? Now, keep wondering that how this song will change Swara’s life!
And coming to my hero, Swara’s hero, in fact, every1’s hero, how did u all like his entry? U all liked it, or no?
See, I worked very hard for this chapter, and I expect many comments in today’s chapter, though I know that I won’t get more than 20 comments.
Achha haan…yaad aaya…DO NOT forget to have a look at the complete look of today’s chap’s cover pic on my page…I have really worked very hard for the cover pic…plzz do have a look at it here…

User


Acha ek aur baat, some RagSan fan is continuously bashing us SwaSan writers. So, I request all writers, not to pay heed to them, and to continue with their ff’s.
And yes, another new thing has started nowadays, of accusing people that they copy work.So, before only, I clarify this, that this is my original piece of work, as m not on WattPad or IndiaForums, and I hate people who lie, copy or cheat. So, dare someone blame me for that.
And why I chose this song, I’ll tell later, okay?
Anyways, keep reading, keep supporting, and I love u all!๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’ž

39 comments

  1. Fatarajo

    |Registered Member

    Hey laddoo finally got to read ur ff it’s awesome dear keep it up and those people who bash u r stupid btw I m both Ragsan n swasan fan I love both equally no worries I will nver bash u XD

    • Laddoo

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      Hey Jo!
      It’s so gr8 to see u commenting! I am so very happy that u commented! Dnt wry, I kno u will never bash me or anyone…u r not that kind of a person. It’s so great that u hv started a new ff, I read and commented also….keep loving, keep commenting!

  2. Ria

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    Laddoo, meri Jaan,
    Kaise kahoon ff mein tere kitni hoon Betaab main. Words se words mila ke chura loon teresoch main.
    Well, the episode was fantabulous. I loved it. You’re making me love Swara’s character even though I don’t watch the show. Soo, I will start loving umm..Sanskaar right? His character too. Will be eagerly waiting for your next update.
    Love you loads.๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ˜˜
    Your Ria di!

    • Laddoo

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      Ria di….m blushing blushing! Haye…someone can write a song for me also? Aww…love u shooooo much….muaahh๐Ÿ˜˜
      And Swara’s cgaracter is similar to mine, so m damn sure that u will love her! And as for my Sanky, u will love him also….bt not for long….now, now, I won’t reveal much…
      Bass…tc….love ya๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Laddoo

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      Hii! Woww yaar! I got a new reader! M so happy that u commented! Really! Yaar I already get less comments, today u commented, m grateful to u!
      Well, m not foolish enough to say all this to you! R u jobless or what? Koi kaam dhandha nhi hai? I mean do one thing, try some low level companies, they will give u a job. Instead of doing such useless things, u will get something for a living at least! U r commenting on every SwaSan ff, do u think we all write for bashers like u? No my darling! And if u qant me to stop writing, then try all this in ur dreams, coz this will never happen in reality. U toh don’t even know how to bash properly, and u didn’t even check the A/N, I wrote something specially for u. And abt boring, bhai tera dimag kharaab hoga, coz I have won 15 story writing competitions, and surely the judges aren’t foolish like u, that they would call my piece of work boring! Anyways, thanks yet again for commenting on my post! And keep loving RagSan! Sab ki choice hoti hai, respect that at least! Aise hi bash krna hai toh plzz dnt read. I was very polite this tym next tym, I’ll bash u like anything, so dare u turn up on my FF again, and any other crappy comment, u won’t be alive! Get lost!

  3. Angel_pari

    Heyyyy ladoooooo amazing seriously okk first to sorry i didnot comment on pre parts but i had comment at one or two if u remember

    let me tell u that u r gng amazingly till now and cover pic wasss awwww so cute

    p.s same angel_pari if u remember just without logging in

    stay blessed doll

    • Laddoo

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      Pari di! What a pleasant surprise! And dnt be sorry di! Cmonn! Chlo u saw the cover pic! I took half an hour to make it! I promise to go amazing ahead also๐Ÿ˜‰
      Thankuu for calling me a doll! No one ever did that! M overwhelmed! Ya di…how can I forget u? Keep loving, keep commenting, keep smiling, I love u๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Laddoo

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      Partner, for the first tym in life, a one line comment has pleased me so much! M so damn happy….thanku soo much! Love u piles๐Ÿ˜˜

  4. Shatakshi

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    Oyeeee hoeee
    Now the hero is in
    U know I hardly watch Swaragini but ur ff really made me a Swasan fan today
    N laddoo u really made my day as my today’s test was bakwas๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข

    But on reading the chapter I was like… I LOVE U ISHU๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž

    N the song selection was Awesome
    N one more thing…let bashers waste their time in their non sense…but at the end of the day its important that u take it sportingly n so u did my sweetheartโคโค

    Really proud of u
    Love uโคโคโค

    • Laddoo

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      Yayyy! The hero is in! My Varun…my Sanky!
      Wohooo! RagSan fan kuch seekh meri di se…wo bhi SwaSan fan ban gayi….tu bhi ban jaa na๐Ÿ˜‚
      And di…dnt wry…tests bakwaas hote rhenge๐Ÿ˜‚…pr life to ek hi hai na…to aap enjoy kro…
      And thanku for praising my song selection….this song is my life!
      And di…uss basher ko main ghaans nhi dalti…hum likh rhe hai…hum likhenge! Bass…aur kya?
      And I love u sooooooo much di….muuaaahhhhh๐Ÿ˜˜

  5. Sayeeda

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    Laadoo jaan…. What a epic episode… Too good yrr…
    Chal accha song toh reveal kr hi diya tumne…

    Nd Yrrr I told u earlier only I’m big big big big big big wali fan of ur writing skills… U r write amazingly….

    Those POV’s were the best one I read till date in any of the ff…. Loved it….
    Though this is my first swasan ff I’m reading nd I thank u for making me able to read a great ff of urs…

    To good…. Nd u basher u better stop commenting rather than saying her to stop her ff…..
    Nd Icchu what a reply u gave to that basher… ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚…. Seriously u r a so positive person….

    Love u ๐Ÿ’Ÿ๐Ÿ’Ÿ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ˜†

    • Laddoo

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      Wohooo! Epic tha? Yayyy! Diiii….no fan! Only badi wali behen aur badi hi pyari wali di! And dii….aap hi ne uss din kaha tha…NO thanku…toh aap kyu bologe? Only love u bolo..
      Abb maine Ria di ko promise kiya tha ki main uss basher ko bash nhi krungi, isiliye maine nhi kiya
      Aur usne kaha bhi to kya tha…stop writing…abb usne kaha aur hum kr de ye to shayad iss janam mei na ho…pr main khush hu…comments ka number to badha๐Ÿ˜‚
      And as for positivity, aaj kal meditation kr rhi hu na…isiliye kaam aa rha hai๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
      Chlo bye bolne ka tym aa gaya hai….love uh๐Ÿ˜˜

  6. Prakriti19

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    Its Amazing My Story Queen Di…You are an Amazing Writer Di…You know what we have many things similar…You are also a topper…I am also topper…You have won 15 story writing competition s…I have won 10 story competitions….But I have not any idea of love story….I have only written moral stories…But manna padega Di kya jawab diya aapne us pagal sanki Ragsan lover ko…Main To Teri fan ho fan gayi…Well Di If you get free time then also read my ff Am I yours???It is my first fan fiction…Read and tell me your feedback s…Di Your real name is Ishani and my best friend name is Ishanvi…Similar name…Kuch jaada lamba comment ho gaya…I hope you didn’t get bore…
    Bye Di and Love u loads..

    • Laddoo

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      Prakriti! My sweetheart! My darling! My Prakriti is so talented! U r a topper? Really? Woww yaar…dnt bcum like me, m losing my rank, coz of my teachers’ partiality (m a staffward that’s why), but I do pray that u never lose ur rank! And u hv won 10 competitions? Really? Woww yaar…u r really very talented! Even I always write moral stories and mysery and suspence stories. Abb uss pagal RagSan fan ko sabak toh sikhana hi tha…har ff mei yahi kr rhi hai yaar! Paagal hai wo…mann to kr rha tha use goli se uda du…khair…hum usi ke prajati ke thode hi hai…hum lakh guna behter hai…huh! Aur Prakriti, tu meri fan nhi hai….only chhoti sista, ok? No fanning๐Ÿ˜‚
      And I will definitely read ur story, in fact, I was abt to ask u which ff u write, sachhi! Aur haan…am I not ur best frnd? Naam bhi mikta julta hai…mko bhi best friend banna hai…plsshhh
      And m never bored of my sistas….ok? And u toh can never bore me…my cutiepie
      Love u tons๐Ÿ˜˜

      • Prakriti19

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        Well Di What is staff ward…Who said you are not my best friend in fact you are my bestest friend…BTW Di one thing I say You are so sweet just want to meet you once…And about your Song’s choice its superb…In fact my favourite singer is also Shreya Ghoshal…I love her so much…Her every songs touched my heart…I also try to sing like her…Well Singing is my passion…What is yours Di? Well Di if you are free we can chat on TU…So tell me the time when u will be online on TU… Till then Bye…
        Love u loads

    • Laddoo

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      Aur haan…tumne Story Queen kaha…awww…cho chweet of u…par nahi yaar….maharaniyan bhi hai yahan pe๐Ÿ˜‰
      Main to sird Rani hu๐Ÿ˜‚
      Thanku my princess…love u๐Ÿ˜˜

  7. Zuha Fatima

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    IshuโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคYeh itne saaaaareee hearts meri Laddoo ke liye๏ผ๏ผ๏ผKya likhti ho By God hum toh aap ke fan ho gaye๏ผ๏ผWaisay woh jo idiot Ragsan Fan hai na usko aur uske comment ko maaro goli aur enjoy the life karo ๐Ÿ˜‰ Seriously such people are really FAARIGH to comment KAAM KE NA KAAJ KE DUSHMAN FFS KE ๐Ÿ˜‰ U just keep smiling like always ๐Ÿ™‚ And we friends are there for u sweetooooo๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ Lots of love and support from my sideโคโคโคโค And MA u received award for writing๏ผ๏ผKuch mujhe bhi sikhado!!!!!!!!!!!

    -Zuha

    • Laddoo

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      Haye Zuhuu…u aur teri tareefein! Mar jaungi ekk din itni chashni ki wajah se! Haye…mko award de rhi hai? Aww…tujhe bhi award milega toh phir…han…tie hoga humare beech๐Ÿ˜‰
      Chlega na?๐Ÿ˜ aur uss RagSan fan ko chhodo yaar…kaun kre unki kadar? And m always smiling…tum bhi haso…heehee….
      Love uuu๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Laddoo

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      Thanku Anu di….for now, no Aarav Sara for a few chaps….even m feeling sad coz my fav characters are on vacation…bohot sambhal liya un dono ne Swara ko…abb meri hero ki baari๐Ÿ˜‚
      Love u di!

    • Laddoo

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      Wowwww! Again new reader!! Yayyy! You jus made my day! Thanks a pile dearie…not a prob…keep reading keep supporting! Have a nice day!

  8. Shubhangi

    Here comes ur Latelateef sis nice selection of song and after reading the last scene I doubt, kuch toh gadbad hai and han happy Independence Day

    • Laddoo

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      Shubhu….how r u my sweetheart? Meri jaan…theek hai na ab tu? Aur khud ko late lateef na bula…tu tabb bhi jaldi aayi hai….ekk hi dinn toh hua hai…aur song selection toh acha hona hi tha…selection hai kiski๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜‚
      Gadbad zyada kuch nhi hai…bass agle chapter tak wait krna padega….aur Happy Independence Day na bol, hum students ko life mei kabhi independence nhi mil skti

  9. Arshdeep

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    Laddoooo๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ Love you yaarโค
    The moment i read “Pehle kabhi na tune mujhe gam diya”๐ŸŽถ My face lit up๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’ƒ I just love this songโคโค

    Loved Ragini’s Pov..”soul sisters..”๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ‘Œ

    Yaar you make me fall in love with your writing again n again. How to praise you more n more๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ™

    Such a beautiful ending.. I could feel those dark eyes..intense smile and Sanskar holding Swara by waist๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    Actually i dont read your ff.. I watch it๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Laddoo

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      Arshu di….I love u soooooooooooooooo muchhhhhh……muaaaahhhhh๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
      U loved the song? Thank Goodness! This song is my life, one of my three fav songs….I love it more than anything else in the whole world! And Ragini’s P.O.V., well, I blv that two siblings can never be sisters until and unless they r each other’s soul, that’s why i wrote this word. And di….u jus scared me by saying that u dnt read my ff! I was hell shocked! And then I read ahead๐Ÿ˜…
      Dnt scare me like this! Love u shoo much๐Ÿ˜˜

      • Arshdeep

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        Would love to know the rest 2 songs as well??
        Haha๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚ Okay wont scare you next time๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜˜ But seriously i can visualise everything and feel it๐Ÿ’™
        Love you tooo infinte๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โคโคโค

      • Arshdeep

        |Registered Member

        Aww i love these songs tooโคโค
        Wont say as favourite but yeah i love them.. the voice..feelings..lyrics everything is brilliant๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ

  10. Kruti

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    Ishu finally i read all d 4 parts of ur ff and mai tumhari badi wali fan bangayi hoon
    U write soooooo well
    And that letter which swara had written to Aarav woww i mean it was sooooo cute
    I throughly enjoyed reading every part of d ff

    And the song …..awesome
    Loved all d partsโคโคโคโคโค

    Love u ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โค

    • Laddoo

      |Registered Member

      Kruti diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
      I love u soooooooooooo muchhhhhhh
      Aww emm gee! I never thought that u would read my ff! Thankuuu sooooooo much for reading! It’s such an honour for me! And that letter is jus another of my million creations, those creations which turn out to be bakwaas most of the tym๐Ÿ˜œ
      And the skng is one of my 3 fav songs…I love it…it’s my life! And diii…no fan wali baat…u r my badi wali sisso…aur badi hi pyari wali sisso….NOTHING ELSE…..ok? Hmm…that’s like my Kruti di…love ya…๐Ÿ˜˜

  11. Ashu

    |Registered Member

    Kidddooooo!!! Hw r u??? Finally I got tym to read and comment!!!
    My sanky๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
    You knw what?? I love this song!! Perfect!! But wht do u mean by we won’t like sanky for long???? Wht r u planning? Bechara mera sanky!!!

    Swasan eyelock๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    Okay abt ur writing, I think u already knw wht I’d say, so I am not repeating it!!! My little sister is a big star!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
    I knw its a really late comment, but I knw how mch it pleases a writer!!!

    Love u!!!๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ

    • Laddoo

      |Registered Member

      Ashu di! Oh my God! That’s why I love uh so much! You were busy na? Still you….you know I’m getting so emotional!
      And as for Sanky, in my ff, he’s not bechara, but but but
      I won’t reveal everything now! Just that you all won’t like him for long! He’s kinda Mr. Carefree.
      And SwaSan eyelock๐Ÿ˜
      That was something loved by everyone except for my frnds๐Ÿ˜‚
      This was what they said
      Hero ki kya entry thi! Kya batayein kya entry thi! Itni ghatiya entry aaj tak kisi hero ki nhi hui!

      Imagine!!๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
      And dii…I’m not a big star…m only a Twinkle Twinkle Little Star!๐Ÿ˜‚
      Ok…one thing I may reveal to you…that SwaSan won’t become a pair afterall. Bass now don’t ask me why and how or to change my decision!
      And ur comment really nade my day! Love uh๐Ÿ˜˜

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