One rainy day (a twinj OS by Bhavika)


hey guys Bhavika here i hope many of you know me though some don’t know here i am with my first OS

One Rainy Day

It was raining heavily outside. Twinkle could hear the rain lashing on her roof. She had closed all the doors and windows of her house. She felt depressed when it rained and wished it would stop raining. The rains always brought back old memories. Memories, she would rather not think about. But, the rains continued in full fury and Twinkle was transferred back into those times when she was just 18.

It all happened 10 years earlier when she was 18. Twinkle was studying for her degree in Arts and she simply enjoyed going to college. Attending lectures, roaming around the college campus during free lectures and eating samosas coupled with hot masala tea was her regular routine. Her parents were both working and she was their only daughter. Life was easy for Twinkle. She was doted upon by her parents and was loved by all her relatives. Yet, Twinkle felt something missing. She was not sure what was lacking, but a feeling of incompletion always surrounded her. She was not even sure what the feeling was or what she was seeking. It was only on that rainy day that she found out.

It was raining heavily and her class had a free hour. Twinkle loved the rains unlike her friends who disliked the murky weather it brought about. Twinkle and her friends rushed to the canteen for steaming hot cups of tea. They settled down at the corner seat in the canteen. As Twinkle peeped outside the transparent glass windows, she saw an image. It was of a boy rushing towards the canteen. He didn’t have an umbrella and was soaking wet. She had never seen him before. She knew most of the students in her college and was sure he had taken admission recently. As he entered the canteen, Twinkle’s eyes followed him as he took a seat in the other end of the canteen. He looked a bit older than she had guessed. Maybe he was a final year student. There was something about this boy that fascinated Twinkle. She had many friends, but most of them were girls. Though she talked with most of the boys, she always kept a distance.

This was because she felt uncomfortable around boys. But this boy was different. He was totally drenched and yet he looked comfortable. Twinkle felt like walking up to him and talking to him. This was quite unlike her nature and she reprimanded herself for thinking such thoughts.

The canteen was not crowded today. twinkle kept glancing across at that boy from above her tea cup. Her friends were discussing about the latest film released and did not notice her silence. The boy had also ordered for tea and was sipping it silently totally unaware of Twinkle and her friends. The rains had subsided and the boy having finished the tea, walked out of the canteen. It was with great effort that Twinkle held herself to her seat. She had felt like following the boy and finding out which class he was in. What had gotten into her? Why was she behaving in this strange fashion? All these questions popped up in her mind. What kind of attraction was this?

The whole day at college passed in a trance for Twinkle. She was hoping to see that boy again. One more lecture, and she could go out of the class and maybe, just by chance spot the boy somewhere in the campus. As the professor entered the class, the students stopped talking and became silent. Twinkle glanced up from her books as she heard the professor’s voice. She got the shock of her life to see that boy standing across the room, introducing himself as the substitute professor for Psychology. This boy was a professor! He looked so young that she had assumed him to be a student. He had managed to dry his hair and clothes. He introduced himself as professor Kunj Sarna. So that was his name! Twinkle hardly heard what Pr. Kunj spoke. As the lecture ended, Twinkle found herself getting up and going across the classroom to speak to Kunj. As she stood in front of the professor, she suddenly felt shy and was dumbfounded..

Kunj had seen Twinkle staring at him in the canteen. He was impressed by her looks and was surprised to see her in his class. Now as she stood in front of him, not speaking a single word, he got a complete close up look of her. She was beautiful. As she looked up to meet his eyes, he felt an attraction that he had never felt before. He longed to listen to her voice.

That was when Twinkle spoke. He hardly heard a word of what she said. She was equally attracted to him. Her eyes said it all. Twinkle muttered a ‘Thank you’ and rushed out with her friends. This rainy day she would never forget in her life. She was feeling complete and whole as a person. She felt like her body had turned light and she could fly, soar up in the sky and float across clouds. She had fallen in love. Maybe this was the feeling she had been seeking.

Twinkle walked home with the hope of seeing Kunj again tomorrow and hoping to speak much more than she had today. But fate had something else in mind. As she reached home, her father hugged her and started sobbing incessantly. It was with great difficulty that he was able to convey that her mother had met with an accident and was in the ICU at the hospital. There were very little chances of her survival. Twinkle felt her knees weaken and she fainted. Her mother never recovered and expired two days later. It was the worst 48 hours of her life. Her father went about the final rites mechanically. He couldn’t come to terms with his loss. He applied for a voluntary retirement and decided to go back to the village. He informed Twinkle of his decision and asked her to complete her graduation via correspondence from the university. Twinkle was unable to say a single word. She went along with her father’s decision like a zombie.

The village was a beautiful and peaceful place. Her grandparents were very supportive and loving. Yet Twinkle felt depressed. She felt like she had lost more than just her mother. She had lost Kunj. The special feeling she had felt for him which had made her feel complete as a person was also lost. Would she ever see Kunj again? She could not share with her father, what she had felt on that rainy day. So, slowly she came out of her stupor and completed graduation as per her father’s wishes. Her father had started a small business in the village and was quite successful in his venture. Her father then started looking for a good match for her marriage. Twinkle was not interested in marrying and told her father that she would like to take up a job and make a place in this world for herself like her mother. Luckily, Twinkle got a job in the city and she bade goodbye to her father and grandparents.

That was all ten years ago. Her father had constantly tried to get her married off but with no avail. She had made several excuses for not marrying and yesterday her father had given her an ultimatum. As the downpour continued, thoughts of Kunj troubled her. Image of a totally drenched Kunj flashed in her mind. She closed her eyes tightly trying to remove the image from her mind and that was when she heard the door bell. Who could it be at this hour, with these heavy rains ringing her doorbell? She ignored the bell but it went on ringing persistently. Finally, she decided to check who it was. As she opened the door, she saw a drenched person standing in front of her. It was Kunj. He looked much older but yet the same. He smiled at her and asked her to open the door completely, so that he could step inside.

With shivering hands, Twinkle closed the door. They both stared at each other. Kunj couldn’t believe his eyes that it was Twinkle standing in front of him. Surely she must be married by now. He spoke to her telling her that he had come to the nearby supermarket and the downpour had caught him by surprise. Finally seeing no signs of the rain stopping, he had decided to seek shelter in a nearby house. And that house had turned out to be hers. Twinkle listened to Kunj all the while wondering if he was married. She had waited for 10 years in the hope of meeting him someday. And here he was standing in front of her. Kunj had not married and had gone to the US after his brief stint at the college. He had returned recently and had landed the post of the principal in the same college. Twinkle felt elated at the information and spoke of all that had happened in the last 10 years. The attraction they had felt had been mutual and permanent. Neither of them could have imagined leading a life with another person. Both had remained single.

So, Twinkle finally saw kunj after 10 years, totally drenched and soaking wet due to the rains. It was because of the rains that he had made a dash for her house and they had met. She no longer felt that the rains were depressing and went across the room to open the windows. She had found her love due to the rains and the sound of the raindrops felt like heaven now. Her Kunj had come back in her life and this time it was for ever………..

Credit to: Bhavika

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  2. awesome but if it is the end?

  3. Fantastic, awesome….. These words r less to express myself…. I m just speechless…. Bhavika u r really too good at writing…??

  4. Wow so touching..awesome…

  5. Awesome bhavika….
    u r n amazing writer…

  6. Omg Bhavika….it was so sweetttt…
    It was a very beautiful story??

  7. Lovely bhavika.

  8. wow wow wow ….
    no words
    in first os u write such a beautiful story…very nice

  9. bhavika…… may i hv ur autogarph pls?

  10. Bhavika you are an excellent writter and your os was extremely good.I loved it????☺☺☺☺

  11. Omg your writing was very soulful and awesome keep up the good work

  12. OMG!!! This is ONE of my FAVOURITE OS ever!! It was just osm… the plot, the narration everything was perfect! Plz keep on writing.. Luv u loads! ♡

    Note:- I really luv evry1s ff and plz dont get sad..thats why I stressed on the word ‘ONE’!

  13. Amazing story sissy. Loved it to the moon and black???

  14. ur stry….

  15. Awesome one ……

  16. Amazingg….os. It was much better than mine. Awesome. Yaar Bhavika I love u

  17. Amazing my chotu sis…it was too good …I really liked no no Infact I loved it.

  18. Bhavika dear it ws jus amazing loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much……. An osmm story

  19. Ab mein kya bolo such itense n divine lov story loved it

  20. Heyy diz one z copied… It’s d same swasan OS once updated on TU itself long time back

  21. wow it’s soo amazing ??
    actually can’t express properly
    ur an outstanding writer ????????

  22. Yaaaaar Awesome……perfect story

  23. Omggggg… u r such n amazing writer.. usage of words n fluency of writing… it was just superbbbbb…..

  24. Awesome loved the reason scenes

  25. amazingg

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