one who r enemies God made them a married couple (TS by Rabia) 1st shot

Hello guys rabia here:-

First I thought to give this TS to shan that she will post on my behalf butt im posting by myself for 2 reasons.. on is for kakali this is her farewell gift ( I hope u will like it kakali).. and one is I want to share something but I will share in next part 😉

Sooo now no more bak bak.. let’s juts start the TS

One place is shown and there are many couples who are going to get married…..butt we saw a hustle bustle there.. like someone is shouting……we can see few ppl were holding one boy and girl… both didn’t saw each other because both were bzy in freeing themselves… both are in the dresses of bride and groom..

Boy while shouting : leave mee im not the one whom u r searching plz leave meeee…

Girl : please leave mee im not the one whom u r searching…

Ppl : u both are wearing the same dresses now shut your mouth and sit down for marriage…

Both deny but ppl not let them run from there…. Helplessly they both settle down…

Boy is having sehra (shade/veil) in front of his face and while girl is having veil… both got married helplessly…

Finally marriage got over…

Both at a same time : now u all r happy?? both removed there veil… and becomes shocked after seeing some familiar faces in front of them… they are the parents of boy and girl….

Parents giving them death glare….. both gulp in fear…

Girl : oo God mom dad… they will surely say that if I want to marry someone else then why I didn’t told them and got married here with an unknown whom myself didn’t know…..

Same goes with the boy he also thought the same… both didn’t know whom they got married…

Both being uninterested look towards each other and turn their faces butttt… their eyes pop up.. and they again turn towards each other…

Both become shocked after seeing each other…. They rubbed their eyes many times…. Slap own cheeks many times… but when the scene didn’t change…

Both shouts: noooooooooooooooooooo and fainted….

Their parents who were giving them death glare become shocked and look towards each other.. later they took them home…

After taking them home… almost 1 hr later they both got conscious….

They find themselves in boy’s room while their parents looking them with a look of “ u both owe us an explanation”…

Dp: sanskar swara u both r going to get married today itself in the big ceremony then why u both got married like this?? In random marriage function with too many couples?..

Shekhar: yaa u both got married like we our against your marriage today was your marriage na then why u ran away like this??

Ap and sumi also ask the same…

While swasan gave each other death glares…

Swara with fake smile: uumm wohh daddd.. Actually we both want to make our marriage memorable… right sankyyyy??? She pinched sanky’s hand…

Sanky : ouch give her death glare and too parents with fake smile yes mom dad swara is saying right…. Actually na we want a kick said by plastering fake smile…

Sumi : ooo God… u both r too much… okay take rest we will talk tomorrow…

Both parents are very open minded and friendly.. shekhar and dp were frnds from many yrs and also shares a brotherly bond… same goes with sumi and ap… buttttttt… both
swasan were heart throb enemies of each other… they can’t resist each other for a single second….

In sanky’s room….

Swara : oouccchhhh and by saying this she rubs her hand.. and give death glare to sanky..

Sanky : whattt??? Tit for tat u pinched me soo I pinched u back..

Swara while gritting her teeth: don’t u found any other place rather than coming to that random marriage place…??

Sanky : same goes with u….. OOOO God the one from whom I ran from my marriage u make me married me with that same witchhh…

Swara : oooo hellloooo uu gorilla…. I also ran due to u.. and God made us both married..

Sanky : I will never consider u as my wife…

Swara : ha ha ha… very funny I am also not dying to call u as my husband….

Sanky points finger towards her : uuuuu…

Swara also points finger : uuu…

Both :hhuuuuhhh and turns and lay down on bed facing each other’s back and slept….

Flashback :-

Swasan were studying in same clg….both are each other’s enemies.. because swara’s bf rehaan and sanky are enemies.. soo whenever.. sanky said something to rehaan… swara always reply him back….

And on the other side sanky’s gf shruthi is jealous of swara because she wants to become clg’s most beautiful girl but due to swara she never became… swara is modern yet simple girl.. she never wore such dresses which exposes her body… but she is also not a bhenji type girl.. she always wore stylish yet elegant cloths… which never reveal her body… and also gives her modern look…

shruthi all the time wearing such cloths which were hardly covering her thighs.. and u can find her all the time behind sanky while sticking to his arm or in his lap….

rehaan always said to swara to wear such cloths but swara never wore…. shruthi and rehaan always tried to become physical with swasan but they both knows their limits… being
in open minded and from rich families.. they both didn’t crossed their limits… their relation is just starts with hug and ends on a light peck….

Both swasan never share any friendly bond…. Just a hi hello.. and after coming in relation with shruthi and rehaan.. both even stop looking towards each other… (guys don’t think they both love or feels for each other)

When their parents decided their marriage.. they both deny but they didn’t listened…. Soo on the marriage day they both runs away… but God has stored something else in their destiny…..

The place where many couple going to get married… from there one couple ran away… and swasan who both r going from the same place but don’t know about each other being in a same place… they both are going to their respective bf and gf…

But ppl caught them because they r wearing almost same dressed.. and forcefully made them married.. and now both r sleeping below the same roof in a same room and same bed 😉
Days are passing like this… both didn’t paid any heed to each other… both only act in front of parents that they are very happy couple… and goes out for roaming but in actual the roam with their respective partners..rehaan and shruthi…. Butt both swasan now start feeling awkward with them.. may be because deep in heart they respect their marriage… but now also they dont want to see each other’s face

After 2 weeks their parents gave them honeymoon tickets… on which they didn’t said anything but they also invites shruthi and rehaan with them…

In flight swasan are sitting together and rehaan and shruthi sitting together… because his hostess said that they can’t change their seats…

Swara : ooo God why u make me sit with this gorilla..

Sanky : ooo 1.5 feet witch… just shutup okay…

Swara : how dare u to call me 1.5 feet??

Sanky : oo sorry I said half feet extra in actual u r totally a 1 foot dwarf…

Swara after looking him from head to toe while sitting : ya yaa u r calling me that because u urself is a king kong…. Huhhh…

Sanky : shutup u pink turnip…

Swara : what the hell…. U beetroot

Sanky: uu…. Pink lacchaa (candyfloss)

Swara: u red reddish…

Sanky : uuuu…. Let me think…

Swara : think think….

Sanky : jao maaf kiya (go I forgave u)

Swara : oo hello who wants your forgiveness here??

Sanky : u… and stick his tongue towards her…

Swara throws her hanky on his face and turns and slept…

Sanky smirks and later he also slept…

Rehaana nd shruthi were sitting far from them that’s why they didn’t listen their talks…

Finally they reached London…

Rehan said to swara that they will stay in one room.. sabky just saw rehaan with disgusted expressions and murmurss dont he see that she is married huhh.. and gave death glare to swara but swara didnt saw sanky

Swara : sorry rehaan but I want to stay at separate room…

All four stays in separate room… swasan’s rooms were at first floor while rehaan and shruthi’s were on 2nd floor…

All four are resting when we can see one person is coming inside the hotel… by seeing his or her getup… we can easily say thattt he or she is a detective… by giving a closer view from camera… we are able to see that the detective is girl…. (guys I think many of u guess who must be she 😉 ) if u read my last os 😛

The girl is munching almonds… while munching

Girl goes to reception and asked about someone’s room number…

Receptionist : your good name maam??

Girl while eating almond from one hand and in other hand she is having a a big choco bar…

Girl : myself detective foodie..

Receptionist : whattt?? Foodie??

Girl : oopss sorry that’s my pet name my actual name is kakali the detective from Mumbai…

Receptionist passed a smile : okay mam…

Kakali asked the room number and goes…

To be continued….

Precap : kakali is discussing something with someone…

so guys what u think from whom our dear detective foodie is talking?? 😉

I know guys this OS is not upto the mark but due to such a bad schedule I only be able to write this only… and sorry kakali if u didn’t like your character… and plzz tell me when will be your 2nd last day because I will not be able to post soon its 2nd part soo when u will be able to read I will try to post on that day.. and sorry guys in advance if im not be able to reply.. because I just posted for kakali….and yaa guys bf,gf name was given me by shan (hehehehee) because I can’t be able to think except arjun karan etc names… soo thankuu shan  and kakali plz do tell me what u want to eat while doing your detective girri 😉

90 comments

  1. Hemanshi

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    Rabiaaaaaa……….finalllyy
    You came……I missed u sooo much😘😘😘😘😘😘
    Muahhhhhhhh
    Love u…..hope you are going good…..

    • Hemanshi

      |Registered Member

      I am literally missing u alotttt……u know I am jumping from here nd there seeing ur ff….though we r in touch through WhatsApp but then to…….

    • Rabia

      |Author

      Hahahahah thankuuu sooooo muchh hemanshii and dont jump more what will jiju think?? 😆😆😆😆 hehehehe and luv u too dear and im also missing u alot thats why i said chal rabiaa goo and post otherwise u will not be able to post if u delay it more 😆😆😍😍😍😍😍😙😙

  2. SRSL

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    Lot of farewells for kaku di….awesome di loved it…but kaku di are you really a foodie…😂😂sorry if I hurt you…just a doubt..

  3. Rosey

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    wow yar its awesom i really loved it
    after so long yu come back i think you got som free time well i m hapy to see you again and i hope you are doing well with yyour oppertunity i really like this concept its funny

  4. Divyanshri

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    haha…. rabia Di. ….ur every story is one. of its kind… awsome love it….. if u can clear my one confusion….few days back why all were giving u good bye wishes…….. I was so tense that u will leave writing…. but so happy that u r back wid a cute story…..

  5. Shreeyu

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    Another mind blowing concept Rabia Di …. Will seriously miss Kaku Di a lot….. Continue soon di
    LOV UH BOTH KAKU DI ND RABIA Di WILL MISS U SOOOOO MUCH

  6. SHAN

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    Ha ha di its amazing….. Very very nice di….. Loved it….. U didn’t leave the fainting….. Ha ha….. U r really a faintaing queen….. Surely kakali will like it…..

    • Rabia

      |Author

      Thankuu sooo much dearr and work(hehehehe) im doing much more from it 😆😆😆 in next epi u will come to knoww 😆😆😆

  7. Vyshu10

    |Registered Member

    OMG Rabia…i was thinking “ok yeh ladki aayegi kaku ke liye” and see u came. Awesome ep……whenever u say something in brackets……its a hint for twist

    Oy Khabri laal….choco for me???

  8. Deeksha

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    Rabbbbbiiiiiiaaaaaa….!!!!!!!!! Ohh God… I was shocked seeing the title….!!!!!! But now I am happy that it is u….!!!!!!! All the best for your future dear…..!!!!!!!

    • Rabia

      |Author

      Heehe deeshaa dont worryy rabia without any attached digits or words will always be mee only because u know naa same words are not allowed 😆😆😆😆 thats why other rabia added 032 with her namee and thankuu sooo much dear 😊😊

  9. Fairy

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    Omggggg woww rabi dear itsss ssoooo good to seee u yr 🙂 🙂 🙂 m soooo happpy!!!…awww!its such an awesome farewell gft for my pyari patar patar…love u lotzzzz rabi n kaku 😉 😉 …plz tm dono jaldi jaldi se vapas aajana okay!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂 rabi ur concept is amaznggg!!!!loved it yaaar!!waitng for nxt part eagerlyyy. Keeep rockng n stay blessed dr … 😉 😉 😉

  10. Kakali

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    Rabiaaaaaaaa Diiiii !!!! puuuut puuuttt !!!! *my new signature…
    Waaaaa !!! lemme remove my oxygen mask which i was wearing due lack of breath for continuous laughing….
    hahhhh !!! *feeling much better…..
    huahhh haa haaa !!!
    my SWASAN,,, yumpossiable creature….
    n Kakali,,, mad creature….
    Goshhhhh !!! putt putttt !!!
    Huhhhh i love anything written by my Diiiii….

    Haa diii m here till 21 or 27 November… not more than this….
    u can post anytime…. when u got time….
    My Fav dish is always ROLL …. chicken, egg n veg … i love trio…
    huhhhhh but i like all …. m a big spice lover…*foodie….
    bilkul sahi pakre hai….
    Thnk u Soooo very much for writing this… i know u have a busy schedule though u write….. M BLESSED diiii….
    love u….
    Thnk u… ;-*
    puuut puuuttt !!! :0

    • Rabia

      |Author

      thankk God i have days 😉 actually i was trying to write from many days but didnt get time finally today i completed but in actual it was an OS but due to lack of time i converted it into TS…. and luv u toooo dearr.. and dontt worry i will give u all the thingss while doing your work because food is very much imp for u in this story 😉 hehehehehe tell me one one u also like chocos or not?? or soft drinks??

      • Kakali

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        Choco,roll,cake r my heart n kidneys…. i love them above all… huhhh !!! soft drink *lemme ask my tummy… !!!
        hmmmm chalta hai.. !!! but my fav is lemon juice.. !! puuut puuutttt !! ;-*

    • Rabia

      |Author

      heheheheh rabia i will be temporary only now but will comeback for sure.. and yaa actually na my mind is sleeping but for kakali i have to wake him up fro writing thi 😉 andd yaa obviously im missing u all and dont miss the next epi i will tell u all one thing 😉

      • Rabia0032

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        Hahahahha soo finally you mind is a awake hahahha😂😂😂for Kakali..come soon dear missing but come with a bang okey When you come it should very special you know acha I will read your next epi Post soon and what do you want to tell han

  11. Niku

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    Hy dear after soo many days I m reading something n d first one is ur TS…. its kk now hope in 2nd part u spell ur magic …How’s u n ur job….
    Bby dear
    Take care

  12. xavia

    Hey…dear…msd uh yr…thnx fo ts…..n well i olrdy guessed dat it w’d b nly kakali….the 1 n nly kakali….
    Take care dear….

  13. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Diiiiiiii, l missed you sooo muchhhh… But now I very happy to see back… You are back with a BANG…. About storyline, hmmm let me think….
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    . Well,I got four option..1)bakwas,2)cheap, 3)not good,4)ok type…. So, now let me think with full attention….
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    .But di, yeh inn categories mein suit nehi karti*puppy face…Then how is it😳😳😳
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    . IT’S AMAZING..SO CUTE STORY…PLZ CONTINUE DI…

    I am also gonna miss kaku bcz she is so cute,bubbly,funny,adorable….her talks is amazing….I always smile while reading her comments….

    KAKUUUUUU, I WILL MISSSS YOUUUUU DARLING….PLZ COME BACK SOON…. ALLALL THE BEST FOR YOUR EXAMS IN ADVANCE….LOVE YOU LOADS😘😘😘😘… A TIGHT HUG AND LOTS OF KISS(CHEEK KISS OK, DON’T THINK ESA VESA😉😉).. STAY BLESSED DEAR..
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    TAKE CARE DI
    KEEP SMILING😊

  14. Aasthu

    |Registered Member

    Gey Rabia………..its nyc…………why aren’t u posting “Raglak ff by vini tum mere ho”????? or can u tell me how to read it in fb??????

      • Aliya123

        Awesome
        Mind blowing
        Amazing…………..

        Whoooouuuuu……enemies become couple…… Apiii agar har enemies ki marriage kara di jaye toh socho kabhi fight nahi hogi kisi mein😞……..bad idea……….

        Why everyone is leaving tu……..first u then kakali……sab chale jayenge toh tu walo ko website hi band karni padegi….hehehe……bt mujhe apae bat nahi karni…….i m angry on u😠

      • Aliya123

        Swasan cute fight……loved it api……bechare jisse bhag rahe the unhi se shaddi ho gayi😀😀😀

    • Rabia

      |Author

      Aliyaaa januu chooorrryyyy 😘😘😘 u know im seeing continously your last online yime but it was many hrs before so i thought that u may be not come soo ehen u came i told u 😆😆😆😆

  15. SNY

    |Registered Member

    I am a big fan of ur ff….I read all ur previous ff but not commented on ur previous ff…..after a long gap u come back…very happy to see ur post….I miss u and kaku sis badly….kaku sis is my first sis in tu…In future I will miss u….take care….all the best for ur future sis….stay blessed…

  16. SNY

    |Registered Member

    I am a big fan of ur ff….I read all ur previous ff but not commented on ur previous ff…..after a long gap u come back…very happy to see ur post….I miss u and kaku sis badly….kaku sis is my first sis in tu…In future I will miss u kaku and rabia sis …take care….all the best for ur future sis….stay blessed…

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  18. Manasvi

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    Dii.. Love yu…
    I m jumping here and there in happiness that you are writing a ts atleast.. I know there is a shock awaiting for us.. So just waiting to get shocked…
    Love you…

    And this part is
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    You know na as always
    Stupendous
    Amazing
    Awesome
    Simply magical
    Fantastic
    Fabulous

    Love you tooooooooooooooooo much…

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