Hello peeps…I know I m a bit late..sorry I got up late… 🙁 …now I will not waste ur time…here I bring to u…


I move out of my observations as he stands in front of me. He stares intently for a moment as though, he is going to find me even through the black layers that cover my face leaving just my eyes to meet his. He now looks me directly into my eyes and for a moment I think that I will get caught, so I turn my face away.
” Miss Hassan, I don’t usually meet anyone in private but you insisted that your problem was really genuine so please tell me now. What is your problem?” He asks.
Quick. Search. Search for an answer and I get one. My heart skips a beat in excitement. This is the only way to know.
” Actually, I have read every single article of yours and you know, you write so well that umm….” I trail off so that he picks up curiosity.
” Yeah… so what’s the problem there? ” he asks looking confused and as I know him, I know he is irritated.
” The problem is that I love you and I have loved you every single day. Will you marry me?” I ask, trying very hard not to giggle. The expression on his face nearly makes me explode into fits of laughter but I control because the real thing is still left.
” What are you saying? I thought that you had a genuine problem. I hope you are not joking.” He takes a step back in astonishment.
” Do I look like I am joking? Anyway my problem is really genuine. Please marry me otherwise I may die.” I say now knowing, that my face would be red both with heat and resisting laughter.
” Look Miss Hassan, I can’t marry you. I am sorry to hurt you but I just can’t go around marrying anyone.” He says and turns to go.
” Then whom do you want to marry? Do you love anyone? ” I say, now coming to the real part.
He stops his tracks but doesn’t turn towards me.

” Yes. Very much.” And I feel the earth sliding beneath my feet. I somehow control myself.
” Then why don’t you say her so. You are breaking her heart and yours too. You will mend both if you just accept it in front of her. Love is a dangerous thing. It has the power to both break and mend hearts.” And by saying that, I have his full attention. He freezes in his place. He doesn’t move for a while. But then he turns towards me and takes his small steps in my direction. I suddenly notice that his eyes have filled up bit and he is fighting the urge to let those tears flow down. He finally comes to me and lifts the burqua off my face. And he just stares into my face. No reaction. He just stares. No shock. No excitement. Just stare. Tears rolling down finally.
” Mr. Shravan, if you are done staring at my face, can I just hug you?” And the moment I say so, I am pulled into his comforting arms. I can feel his breaths on my back which thankfully has some bare part. He rests his chin on my shoulder. My head is on his chest, listening to every beat of his. I never want to come out of this comfort zone but I have to as his tear falls from his face and slide down my back. I break the hug to stare at him, to see what those clear eyes are reflecting now.
They reflect pain. Longing. Love. Sadness. Some kind of compulsion.
He sees that mine are flooding with questions. It brings him out of his trance and he steps back as if realising that he shouldn’t be here.
He turns to go but I hold his hand.
” Why?” I ask. Just one question and that can end all of this.

” Because I live in darkness and I don’t want to pull you in that. You see, I left my home for this because nobody understood what I wanted from life. I don’t have views which are normal to people. They are dark. I am dark. I didn’t tell you my surname cause I don’t have one. I am just ‘Shravan’, among the thousands with the same name but I still want to stand out. For that I want to explore new things and that includes mysteries hidden in the darkness. I didn’t tell you my job because I don’t have a specific one. I keep on exploring. I keep on moving. And I keep on searching. You are straightforward on the other hand. I told you this on our first meeting only. And I fell in love with you because of that reason. I know you must have thought that I was just someone who met his desires by using your feelings but trust me, it is not so. I knew that we are not a match but I just couldn’t resist that morning. That night just lighted my life. That one night spent with you did something magical. You see, that darkness gave me light. But you are not meant for me and I am not meant for you. You get the answers because you think you know them. You find them correct because you feel they are. But that is not the case with me. I just explore and explore. You see, you have the answer but I want to search for it. You know things but I want to find them. You are scared of darkness but I embrace it. You don’t like to find ways in the dark but I feel that’s my job. In short, you are everything that I never can be. Our paths are different. When destiny has not written that we are meant for each other than we are no one to change it. I really am sorry to have dragged you in all this but we can’t be together. I am sorry. I can’t see you trying to catch up with me and trying to find me every time I get lost in the darkness. I want to you keep shining like that beautiful moon. I want you to spread your light and not get lost in my darkness. Goodbye Ms. Suman Kashyap. I am sorry once again.” He ends his so long speech and starts to walk away from me and I can do nothing but stare at his back.

For a moment, I think that I should just go stop him but I don’t because I know now is not the right time and atmosphere. He won’t listen now, he needs time. Plus I don’t look good. Yeah I know I sound damn foolish but I want my love confession to be nothing less than a fairytale.

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  1. Ryt now my eyes r literally filled with water which is unusual ?
    After reading shravu’s speech m so touched tht i just cant explain….?
    U kno u r superb
    The way u express is unbelievable at this age…???
    Eagerly waiting for the next part
    Lots of luv n care?

    1. WeirdSister

      Awww anamika…
      Thank you so so much dear…
      Means a lot to me…!
      I will post soon…!
      Love u too…!

  2. Perfect superb fantastic what else i mean how could any one write like that much perfection…..ammmmm should i tell u something being writer its big compliment for writer when readers relate themselves to characters and yeahhhh somewhere lil bit i manage to relate with sharvan like his thoughts abt darkness and all!!!!! It was amazingggggggggggg

    take me as ur biggest fan

    with lots of love……………

    1. WeirdSister

      Hey angel…
      What a pleasant surprise….
      Yeah I know…that its a great compliment…nd I feel so blessed to get it from someone like u…seriously…thank you so so much…!
      M eagerly waiting for u nd ur ff to be back…!
      Love u loads..
      Take care..
      All d best for ur exams..

  3. pretty preeti

    One word which I would say perfect.
    It was really outstanding.
    Weirdy tune kamaal kr dia.
    I fell in luv with this idea.
    Niyo it was emotional u wrote so beautifully.
    Loved it.
    I will die if u didn’t post last one fast.
    Eagerly waiting.
    Love u

    1. WeirdSister

      Hey preeti…
      How can a ghost die huh????
      Just joking ….
      Thank you so much…
      Nd I will post soon…
      Love u too…!

  4. My eyes are all teary????????
    U can’t imagine my state!!!
    It was so beautiful di!
    I loved it so much!
    Love u?

    1. WeirdSister

      Hey laddoo…!
      Thank you so much sweety..
      Luv u too…

  5. RANdomfANCreationz

    ThIs is as always amazing i loved it a lot and u know what u r one of my fav writer ?

    1. WeirdSister

      Hey fatarajo…!
      Thank you so much dear…!
      Love ya..!

  6. Ufaaq

    Heyyyyy WS that was like ammmmmaaazzzzziiiinnnnnggggg
    I just loved it
    Oh shr his explanation made me sad
    Suman teased him a lot
    Amazingly written ur writing style is awesome
    Plzzzzzzzz post soooooooooonnnnn
    Love u
    Take care
    Bye bye

    1. WeirdSister

      Uffiii…thank you so so much..!
      Love u too…
      Will post soon…
      U too take care…
      Waiting for d next part of ur ff..

      1. Ufaaq

        Yar dil nae kr raha us ko post krone ka

  7. Its Just Superrrr Thankgod I Can Comment Now Im New Here I Read All Storys And Im Love Them All Can Any One Tell Me How To Become Edkv India Forum i Rely Try All Most 2mnth But Icant Join That Plzz Tell Me I Realy Want To Join fandom if Edkv Plzzzzzz Help Me

    1. WeirdSister

      Hey shanu..
      Thank you so much..
      Nd welcome to our family..
      Well I hve no idea abt india forum..coz I m not a part of it..
      Anyway I m sure somebody here can help u out..
      Love ya..

  8. Malika

    What you did to me……… Tears for forming in my eyes. Wow……….. Your writing skill made me mad. Superb yr. You nail it. …….?????

    1. WeirdSister

      Hey malika…
      Thank you so much dear…
      Love u loads..

  9. Wt to say..
    Wt to say…????
    Its just heart touching talks of shravu..
    At this moment..I wana..sing the title song of hamari adhuri kahani..????

    1. Alina

      Oh sona di..apko b hamari adhuri kahani pasand h kya..??..I love this song sooo much

      1. Of course..
        I love it..kal hi myney vo dil Dekhi thi..I loved it..after shah rukhs tab ne bans di jodi..this film hamari adhuri kahani became my fav one..mujhey spcially..vidya balan mam ki vo last dialogue bahut achi lagi..that she says..
        Maang meri sindoor tumharey naam ka ..
        Kalayi meri chudiya tumharey naam ka..gala mera mungalsootr tumharey naam ka..yaha tak..ghoog meri..doodh mera..khoon mera..aur bacha tumharey naam ka..aakir hai kya tumharey pass merely naam ka..??
        ????????most emotional dialogue I ever heard..????

    2. WeirdSister

      Hey sona…
      Thank you so much..!
      Love ya..

  10. Angel20

    You are superb yaar! What to say? I’m speechless! Seriously!! Your writing skills are??? love your story and this episode as well! May I know your age? And please post the next part soon!! Waiting… Waiting… Love ya??

    1. WeirdSister

      Thank you so much maria…!
      I am 15??
      Love u too..
      Take care.

  11. Diya

    What a love confession !!! The moment of their hug was so.?? …….just awesome…no other word to express !!! ??

    1. WeirdSister

      Hey Sonai…
      Ur one word is more than enough…
      Love u loads..

  12. Waaaaaaow! Just one word which says it all???
    Loved it to the core????
    Your writing skills are ????????
    Hats off di?????
    Do post soon!
    Love ya!??????

    1. WeirdSister

      Oh thank you anshu..
      For reading it all..
      Means a lot to me..
      Love u too..
      Will post soon..

  13. awwww
    I love you yaar
    way u are opening pages of this story is just mindblowing
    post soon
    love u dear

    1. WeirdSister

      Aww thank you sami…
      Love u too..!
      Will post soon..

  14. Alina

    Its fantastic..I like the way u describe each n every thing their dresses.. u give excellent description of location..u r just superb…Really I got teary eyed after reading shravan’s convo..u r ammmaazzing..
    Waiting for ur next part..
    Post soon..
    Take care

    1. WeirdSister

      Thank you so much alina..!
      I will post soon..
      Won’t keep u waiting..
      Luv ya…

      1. Alina

        Hey WS …wats your name dear??
        N u was asking for nikki..did she contacted you??
        I m asking this becz one girl named nikister is on twitter if she is your nikki then I will contact her n will tell her that u was calling her..

    2. WeirdSister

      Hey alina…
      U can call me niyati….
      Well no she didn’t contact me…
      Nd I m not sure abt her twitter handle…
      But I guess its not nikister..
      Thanks a lot for taking an effort…
      Means a lot to me…!
      Love ya..

  15. This made me emotional and speechless at the same time. It was just so amazing. Loved it so much. Post the next part soon. Take care. ?
    Much love ?

    1. WeirdSister

      Thank you so such zainab…!
      Love u too
      Will post soon…

  16. Nice one

    1. WeirdSister

      Thnx shiksha..!

  17. Ariana

    I promise by now I’m tired of myself and my activities. I’m always giving late comments nd u have 100% right to get angry on me. I’m Sorry!! ik it’s too much of apologies now a days but I seriously stepped inside my house a hour back (it’s around 9 here) And my days r more than hectic ones.Plz forgive me nd try understanding my situation. Anyways for this shot then I should b thanking u. I love how ur shots make the busy tired day turn refreshing. There is that beautiful charm behind ur words which allows cool breeze through my mind (Don’t get poetic but true girl!) I loved, loved, loved it. Pls post the next part soon though for sure i’ll b late again reading that too. Apologies over my head again. Can u forgive me? *innocent eyes*
    Love u dear

    1. WeirdSister

      Hey Ariana…
      I hve always told u….that I can wait for any amount of time…for u nd ur comment…
      So no need to be sorry….
      Well…thank you so much…!
      Love u too…
      Take care..
      Nd it doesn’t matter if u r late..!

  18. i wanna hug u di.. wonderful.. u r absolutely unique and ur ideas r awesome.. u bring up such wonderful characters through the names shravan and suman u di

    1. WeirdSister

      Hey deotima…!
      Thank you so much sweety…
      A hug from my side too..!
      Love u too..

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