his one mistake changed my whole life…..4 shots part 5

Hi frds… tq tq tq tq q…… so much… for ur support … im super happy seeing u r coments… ha its confirm dat name f that novel is “harshvahini” may be author is different.. actually I randomly picked it… from sayisute section… even I checked in google ,,, I ll confirm it when again went to library,,, through my other ff…… don’t be afraid guys I m not dragging this to 4 (z)…

Story starts with——-
Sanky slaps ragini…
Sanky- don’t utter single word against my wife and my child…
Rags-(placing her hand where he slapped her) bhai… for her u raised ur hand on ur pricess.. what mgic she did on u…? she is not deserved u bhai…. Leave her…

Laksh – rags stop… u talked too much today… I know ur suffering a lot… but let me remind u she is d only one who united us…just try remember ur friendship… u r depth in dat relation…

Rags- no. no.. I dint have any relation with her……… don’t utter any thing about her…… I think u also become fan of swara…. Just leave me aloneeeeeeeeee………

Laksh took saky hamd goes out of ward….
Sanky sits on d bench… holding his head…
Sanky- wt happen to her…? Wts happening here…?in worst dream too I never expected ragini in this way…
Laksh- bhai… she is not in her sense… but she is saying true… we both enquired about that day incident personally… but we dindnt found anything about that rapist ….but we thought we missing something and now becoz of stress.. she blurted all these… she just want some tym…

Sanky- its all my mistake… my one mistake.. changed everything… how can I explain her? I cant leave her she s my wife and she s havig my child in her womb

Laksh thinks that he is took dis relation deeply and thinking swara child as his..
Lucky- u r so good bhai… u accepted her … the way she is…and also that child… u r g8..
Sanky- no no laksh… im telling u im the responsible for every thing…I m her rapist…
Laksh- wt….? no pls….i know u started falling for swara.. but pls… to save her y u taking some ones deed on ur head…

Sanky-belive me dammit … I m da one who destroyed everything……(saying this he sits on floor…)

Laksh totally confused.. and he dint understanding how to handle him…mjust sit beside him.. sanky hugs him… and telss him every thing how he raped her?in what condition he was going through …..?how much he was guilt ?

Laksh stands.. and give a disgust look to sanky.. and went away from him…sanky cries allnight … suddenly he remember swara…
Sanky got up immediately from ground…- where she went? Oh god… how can I neglect her… she is pregnant ?
He finds all over hospital even in washroom with d help of nurces … he dint understand where can she go..? home ya may be she is there…
He drove to home try to find but no….she is not found anywhere… he checks every possible places like her old home.. temple..park…… he dint understand wr he find her… he started to show swara p;ic to everyone.. asking them if they seen this lady…? He starts to shout “swaraaaaaaaaaa… im sorry pls don’t give this big punishment… I cant live without u… yes u r my lfe…… I love uuuuuuuu… pls come back… I promise I ll solve everthing… pls just give me one chance….”
Then rain starts hevily.. but it doesnot effecting sanky..
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. after nearly 15 days… now sanky is leading a life worst than death… he just uttering one name that is SWARA SWARA AND ONLY SWARA…
Ragini is ashmed of her behaviour with swara… she is trying to calm sanky but sanky ignored her…
(u all mast be thinking… how rags shanges in 15days)
Flash back—
Sanky enters home sadly… then rgs started her same radio again…”leave her…” then sanky helds her tightly
Sanky- I alredy told u not even sigle word
Rags- u r supporting her… but she .. disgusting now she s telling that the child in her womb is urs… like seriously… how can she fall…
Sanlak shocked how she know this….sanky cutting her words..
Sanky- how u come to know about this…(rags shocks) she came here…(in happiness) swara … swaraaa…
Rags- no… I found a letter from nurse … she told me swara told her to give me…
Sanky- wr is it…? Give me ….
Rags give that letter…
In that———–
Hi rags… I m u r frd …sorry I was u r bff…. Trust me.. I don’t know whether whether u belive or not… this child which is in my tommy is sanskars….. yes I thought to tell u at first itself I m afraid that it will effect u.. and also ours… I alredy lost everything my soul.. my dream, my mom, I cant loose u too… so I lied to u… my rapist is none other than sanskar… ur bhai… this child is ur bhais.. im not telling this to brainwash and all… its true… in wild dreamsa also I never thought of misunderstanding in our friendship… pls don’t hate me…
Yours loving frd/cheater
SWARA

Look u placed her in high position and she she is blaming u……………
But to her shock… sanky kissed that letter…- swara… rags she is whatever writed in this is true…. Every single word is true… yes I raped her ….
Rags- stop it …. Y u taking…
Laksh- ragini… shut up wt happened to u? u r not my laddu… my wifes heart is always filled with lots of love and respect and u …. U r telling she is jelous of u… u know when u wish in midnight for chats and all she is d one who make that all… …… if u r acting lyk this for ever then u can take a divorce from me… I just want my old ragini back… I know we lost our child…. I have equal sad for that but its our fate…pls come back ragini..pls… don’t go awy from me(laksh cups her face… wipes her tears… rags hug him)
She also help sanlak in fin ding swara…
Fb ends….
Raglak were very upset one side they lost their child… sanky s silent everything …

After few days laksh finds…..some clue through police … he informs this to sanky…
In oldage home
lucky- maam do u seen this lady..?(showing a pic)
lady- (looking somewhere)no ….who is she..?
sanky- my wife.. swara sanskar maheshwari…. She is pregnant pls again see this… police seen her in this area… maam…(tears were roling)
lady- I said naa.. beta.. I dint seen her..
while they returning sanky feels something.. but ignores that…. but again returns to take d pic which he left that in the table….
He went near a wall holds a ladies hand…
Sanky- swara…. I found u come out…. Wt u think I cant find u….? I can feel u swara… I can hear ur every heart beat..
She feels tenced and her labour pain stars… he took her in his arms… she is shouting.. laks calls and tells about swara….

In hospital—
Sanky is standing outside the icu… raglak also there..
Dr.comes out and said that… she is more stressed.. in this condition we can choose only 1 among them… whom u wanted to save mr.maheshwari..? mother/child
Sanky-(shattered ) (but composing again)pls save my swara….

After an hour..
Dr. –(sanky is sitting sadli as he knows… his child is no more)(he hears baby crying sound)
Sanky- dr… swara … how is she?
Dr. relax mr.maheshwari…. congradulation … both are healthy and safe… u r now father of a baby girl… take her… u can see her in general ward after 1 hr…

Sanky is so happy…. Raglak too soo happy..
Rags- bhai sorry… becoz of me
Sanky- no … all my mistake…

Swara in general ward…
Rags enters the room ….she hugs swara… and asks sorry for her rude behaviour… and tells that she knows every thing about sanky … and asks forgive ness or her behaviour… swara forgives her…. Than sanky comes with their baby…
Raglk leaves the room giving some privacy to swasan…
Sanky kept their baby in her lap(she is sitting in bed withsupport of pillow)… and about to go.. than swara stops him… made him sit near her… she tells nothing… just kept her head on his sholder… sanky gets shock 1st by her behaviour … than he keep his hands on her sholder wraping her… swara feels peace in his embrace…..
They named that child as SANVI…

After 2years…
Swasan celebrating 2nd year bday of sara.. ragini is again expecting and this tym.. all were taking care of her very much rags is 6month pregnant….
In these 2 years swasan become friends… now swara too falls for sanky… but sanky is not ready to say anything about his feeling …

Swasan room—
Sanky- swara… wr sanvi went ? its too late…
Swara-she is with laksh…today she will be there…
Sanky- ok then … I ll freshen up..?
Swara is thinking to move on in her lyf… she wants to fresh start with sanky….
Swara…is wearing dark blue saree…in that she is looking lyk an angel…
Sanky comes out and goes to sleep in couch… swara holds his hand…
Swara- sanskar….i forgiven u alredy… U feel still guilty… ?
Sanky- ha ….. my one mistake destroyed ur lyf … u may have so many dreams about u r lyf partner… all ur dreams shattered… I m too old for u… and moreover im a widower …. I m not suitable for u….

Swara-(hugs him from back…)sanskar…. U know u did really wrong with me….? But u r guilty about ur deed..? and ur d only reason for my happiness..how I hated u now trice time I m loving u…(sanky looks her ammasingly) yes sanskar I LOVE YOU…. U R MY LYF…not from now… I don’t know I fell love with u… ur care…. Yes I used to act as If I m in deep sleep but actually… I heard u… ur every sigle word… u r pain… u r love.. everything…”I don’t know u r going to ask me or not… but I cant wait or that much….(bending in knees)can u be my love for whole love…”
Sanky- swara..! yes I love u …..
Swara- our love is beyond ages….

Swara knows that sanky is not going to lead… so she took 1st step by kissing him on lips..1st he got shock but after he too reciprocates…
They consummated their love in both of their acceptance… swara is on same room …same bed where she is got harasshed but then without her mercy..
But now… with love….
They leaved happily ever after….

The end…

Thank god finally I ended it guys….
So Tell me how is it….? Am I good writer…? Pls tell me guys … waiting for ur response….
Did u liked d ending…. Or I m weak in writing romance and all.. but I tried…
I agree that this concept is from a novel based but trust me …. I made really hard work on this…

Thank you for supporting me till my last episode… love u all guys…. Becoz of ur comments only I completed it … tq….
… frds 5 is good no… na… even we take 5 rounds on temple… so i typed this as part5… nice na

Credit to: varu

32 comments

  1. rehnuma

    It was amazing. I do not regret following this story and really appreciate your efforts.
    It has become one of my favourites. A full time drama of love ehate and what no.??????????
    Left me speechless??????

  2. Divyanshri

    |Registered Member

    Hey varu…. I really like ur ff….. please tell the name of ur other ff…. n one question is the novel also have the same ending or it is different????

  3. Samu

    I love ur story please keep reading and u made me comment today I never comment on other stories please keep writing

  4. Divya shankar

    Nice dr pls come back with romantic os..don’t worry ur very good writer a every writer has his own writing skills it’s superb

  5. Aahna

    |Registered Member

    awsm….
    all part are amazing. U portrait every character and their emotions very well. I don’t able to comment in ur previous part sry 4that again coming to this story.I don’t have much words to appreciate u.only I can give u this emoji ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺

  6. chandu

    awesome yaar!!! You really made an amazing ending <3 !!! going to miss this story 🙁 !!

  7. Jenisha

    |Registered Member

    Superb …. loved it….. you are good at romantic scene but you write it very small… overall it’s lovely…..

    Take care of your self……??

  8. Avan

    Superb….no no…it is not superb…it is beyond it……really NYC….. I loved your 5 .n ending…super yarrrtr..tq for your superb ff….love you

  9. SwaSan434

    Wonderful story really loved the ending & wish to read more !! Beautifully written

  10. Varu

    Tq… tq…so much…guys for wonderful comments… ha my other ff name is WHO AM I?SWASAN

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