his one mistake changed my whole life…..4 shots part 4(d)

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Hi frds……. Its me Varu……..Tq so much for ur response… I readed every comments… so many were askig for happy ending … you come to know about that today….as its my last episode.. com ments were necessary… even from silent readers…

Story starts with…
After 5month… now swara is in 7th month…
We can see a beautiful lady doing arti in mm in light blue saree with cute baby bump.. hearing her voice sanky got up… it become his daily routine… it is true that he hates worshiping god……… but now he is smiling… just becoz he can hear her lovely voice …… after dis she prepare breakfast… then she become busy or we can say acts as tobe busy in kitchen … she dint wants to face him in condion she is ignoring him… she is leaving in anther room…(in raginis room)
Sanky understands… her condition… so he never forced her… after breakfast he goes to office…after he gone swara become free.. talks normally with servants… takes her food and medicines… till then sanky stands near hiding from adored her lovingly till she takes her medicines properly…

Ater dat she used to go and work in gardern ….. in these month one thing was clear to her … her hubby.. not that much bad.. which she thought… some where in corner of her heart she accepted him as her husband… that’s y she used to wait for him late night… when she hears car horn sound…. She ran and see him through window… she knows that.. his 1st job after coming from office is to see her… (in her point of view) to see his child… she acts as If she is in deep sleep… he slowly comes and used to talk to baby… keeping his hand on her stomach… at starting she scared by his behaviour… now wt is he upto..? slowly it become s her addiction… whenever he touches her… she feels her body becoming calm… she hears every word of him… he always used to kiss her forhead… she started lyking his attention.. whenever he forgots to kiss.. she feels anything is missing…

she used to get up early in morning and goes to sanky room to keep his bed coffee …
but today something diferent happened… sanky is sleepimg in couch.. (after his deed he never slept in his bed…he s giving punishment to him) after keeping coffee cup aside.. she notices something is bothering sanky in his beauty sleep… she sees sunrays disturbing him… she stands b/w him and sun… a smile appear in sanky face… she close the curtains.. and sits infront of him

“why sanskar… why u doing all these? One side u showed me ur worst face and now taking care of me ? which is ur real face…? But one thing is clear u r my lys devil… and I hate u…..

Dat day noon…. Someone hugs behind from swara.. swara got shocked she turns and hugs that person even more tight
Swara- I missed u so much ragini… u gave me a surprice..
Ragini- I missed u too… how can I not come today… u know today is my bhabhi bday…
RAGLAK-happy bday SWARAAAAAAAAAA…
Swara- oh my bday… tq ragini … tq u laksh…

Ragini- by d way where is bhai..?
Swara- in office..i ll inform him now..?
Ragini- no u call him… and tell only which I tell u tell…(she sits with swara with pen and paper)

Swara called sanky… she is 1st time calling him…
Sanky- hello… sanskar maheshwari hear…
Swara- no reply
Sanky- hello…r u hearing me(he can hear heavy breathing from another side…he stands up from seat) swara… swara… wt happened..?
Swara- (in mind- how he come to know its me… rags shakes her and said to speak something)hello…(ragini showed something) can u pls come today home early…
Sanky-(sanky skips one heart beat… 1st of all swara called him …and she asking to home early) yeah sure but y? do want anything…?
Swara-(ragini hears sanky..and write some thing showed it to swara) nothing… I m thinking to do a candle light ramantic dinner with u…
Sanky- oh ok(realise wt she said… reality hits) wttttttt? R u sure..? I mean I ll be there…(sanky breathing heavily which can hear to swara)
Swara realises wt she just said… she kept phone glares angrily at rags…

At 8.00 in evening
Sanky is beyond happy with d swaras talk… a hope arose in his heart…
He comes home with a bunch of roses…
He comes to near her.. she is wearing red saree in which she is looking like goddess
“Swara im glad that u think to give….”cutting his word
Rags- omg my bhai is so romantic…
Sanky – ragini… u ..? when..?(goes towards her and hugs her)u alays come without informing? Really missed u princess

Rags- missed u too… and how can u go office today..(sanky looks questionably y?) its ur wife bday.. and u working.. bad manners…
Sanky- wt ? today swaras bdy.. (turn and hand over roses) happy bday swara… sorry I really dint know dat today is ur bday…
Swara- its ok.. even I forgot…
Rags- come 1st swara bhabhi cut the cake.. and after romantic family candle light dinner..(teasing swasan)

Swara cut the cake 1st feed to rags ,hesitately 2nd bite for sanskar… ater for laksh… they did the dinner… 1st time swasan were doing their dinner together…

Sanky room——–
He went for wash room… when he come out he shock to see the secenery… swara is standing in his balcony… to conirm it he pinched himself….
Sanky- swara……….!! U here
Swara-(turns to him) wo… wo… ragini is there na… so…..(collecting words)
Sanky – its ok… come in… there is cold outside…. U may catch cold…come
Swara-(enters his room) (she sees the bed where her life shatterd) I cant sleep here… can I sleep in couch..
Sanky- no … u cant.. u find difficulty there… and in this condition no way… I know swara what is hunting u ….so…(he took one bed thick bedsheet “sleeping matters “ and kept in ground) u can sleep conortably now…(swara nodes)

In mornig.. becoz of changing room swara dint sleep properly at night… so she dint got up today early… her sleep disturbed by loud sound… she and sanky got up instantly not knowing wt happening.. they came ground and see raglak decorating hall
Sanky- laksh ..!! wt is this..?y all this arrangement ?
Laksh- for my kabootaras godbarai..
Sanky- kabootar?
Laksh swara……(swara angrily glares him). Hey kabootar.. don’t cry… u look horrible while crying..(swara hits at sholder)
Swara- shut up…. When u have work with me … u asked so politely… and now…(pout face.) teasing ha..

Rags – stop it… now I ll make u ready for godbarai function..
Swara- not needed…(sanky feels so much bad for her reaction…)
Atlast rags convinced swara…swara conditions that function is only with close frds and relatives only … rags agrees …
After some tym… clos frds and relatives arrived …sanlak attending d guest … when sanky saw swara decending from stairs … he is totally mermerised by her beauty… she is looking beautiful with her motherly glow… rags seats her beside sanky…
Raglak completes godbari ritual along with some ladies after that raglak starts to dance…
Ragini dancing gracefully.. lacky giving her support in dance… suddenly rags falls on ground.
Swasanlak-(together)-raginiiiiiii/princesssss/ladduuuu
Laksh carried her to their room. Dr.checks and confirms that she is 3month pregnant ..laksh on cloud nine… he hugged d dr. and peaked her on cheks…
Laksh- tq s much… oops sorry..
Swasan were very happy ….swara starts to jump in happiness…omg omg… my rags is pregnant… sanky holding her…- calm down… u too pregnant…take care….
Swra stops jumping and sees inside the room ..she sees raglak hugging eachother.. rags s too happy… seeing this she goes from there crying,,,
Sanky follws her… she found in garden crying …
Sanky- swara…. (she sees him and hugs him tightly)(snky shocked… he caresess her hair) wt happened ?

Swara- I never knew being getting a mother is wonderfull feeling … but.. but when I came to know about mine… I hated this child… I even tried to kill my child… I m a very bad mother…how can I curse my own child?
Sanky- no swara… u r very good… only situations were not right ..(swara realises she is hugging her rapist,…. Reality hits her…she aparted away from him)
Swan- I become bad only becoz of u I HATE YOUUUUU(RUNS to her room)

Swara taking care of rags very well …. She treats her lyk princess make delicious food for rags…sanlak also pampered her more…
Now swara is 8 month pregnant and rags is 3and half moth…
Once swara calls rags to go for a walk… sanlak sitting in hall… rags is decending from stairs suddenly she slips and rolled in stairs…

After 24hrs.. she got conscious finds herself in hospital with bandage in her head and hands…

Rags- laksh…….(lacky gets up in jerk… )
Laksh- rags r u fine..? I scared like hell… don’t leave me(in tears… rags easily notices that he is crying from hours….)
Rags – im fine… (she touches her belly)our baby is fine na… thnk god….
Laksh- (controlling his tears) no…. u can convince again … be storng… u r storng na bachh…
Rags- nooooo… tell me u r lieing… pls ….otherwise I kill u…. laksh… my baby…….(lucky hugs her )

Hearing noise swasan entered room… sanky goes towards rags… seeing swara… rags fumes in anger… seeing her motherly glow.. she is extremely in anger….
Rags-(in frustration) stay there itself… u r manhoos.. u took away my baby…. U r curse for me…becoz o u I lost my child..
Laksh- stop it …. Sorry swara she is not in her sense … and rags its only our fate…. How can u blame her for our fate…?
Rgas- no laksh……… she is the only reason.. she is jelous of my happiness(swasanlak were shocked) my child is the sign of our love and her child is sighn of some one lust…. She is so bad bhai… divorse her ,…. Becoz of me only u forcefully married her na.. I m regretting my decision… now just leave her…
Sanky- rags u r not good ..u take rest…and im not leaving her, she is my wife…
Rags- no bhai… im in my sense only… she is lied us…(swasan in shok) ha… she is not any rape victim and all… I enquired every details from that days… I also talked kaka and watchman… they told that on that day no unknown person came to home and moreover we dint know any chines type language speaking frds ,relatives or clints… she just traped us..(looking at her ) hey na swara…I treat u as my bff.. but wt u did is disgusting… u dint even know how I felt wn I came to k now ur reality… to grab all the property,, u acted very well…(looking at sanlak) and about this child may be its her and her boyfriends.. may he diched her … so she acted lyk bichari infront of us… she knows that I can do anything for… that’s y she dint even deny wn I went with proposal… (hearing this… swara broken she went out crying loudly)she is characterle… (before completing she got a tight slap on her cheek..)

Yes its from sanky…- not even a word againt my wife.. and my child… do u get that…

Ragini is hell shocked.. 1st tym she got slap and that too from her bhai who loved her more..

Recap- swara is missing… she decides to go away from sanky lie forever and ever…

Hai.. how is it… I started to write neat part too … I update it soon…
I think I always disposint u by saying last epi… wt to do…? I tried to cut most scene but… anyways… sorry….
And u can also bash me for my too much shots in 4shot…

Credit to: varu

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30 Comments
  1. Superb wow waiting for next update

  2. Soujanya

    Awesome

  3. omggggggggg the story is awesomeeeeee

  4. superb!!! Waiting for 4e part!!! It’s really funny to see that No. of episodes are less than No. of parts in one epsode!!! Hehehe…!!! But still I liked it soo much that I don’t mind even if you make 4z part even!!! Waiting for next part!!

    1. Hey… chandu thanks for support dea…now me too feeling the same 1epi and several part..? whenever I sit to write recap I now used to laugh … I m too eger that when it gonna complete my 4shots?

  5. surabhi Srivastava

    Awesome upload soon

  6. Omg sudden drastic change in ragini ????. Feeling sad for Swara. Will be waiting for next part.post asap

  7. Crystal

    You are killing us with suspense as to what will happen and when will happen… I am going to die please update fast and it was good

  8. Oh God…Its awesome… Never in world I thought that Ragini will say this to Swara…
    Oh God…Feeling bad for Swara…

  9. its okkk.update soon

  10. It’s awesome Plzz update next part soon….

  11. Lucky

    Wow awesome!!! plzzz don’t separate swasan… and make sanky stand for swara !!!plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

  12. Yar what’s this u always write next part is last how many parts are left
    It was fabolous

  13. Hey it’s ok. It’s really good.Hey just confirm the name of the novel,is it ‘Harshvahini’ ‘coz I never heard of any novel of sayisute with this name or can say it as I couldn’t find it.can u confirm it I would like to read it.

  14. Nice ‘ ???

  15. Tooo goood…superb..plzzzz update next part soonnnnn

  16. Abirsha

    Nice…. I think ragini is just acting….

  17. thamiazh magan

    soo heart touching

  18. Divyanshri

    please post soon…. n if u can give the original end….




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  20. AnuAnn

    Awesome dear.. Actually I’m very happy that you r dragging episodes

  21. SwaSan Deewaani

    this chappy also very nyc superb…plz..next chappy soon…!!!!

  22. Awesome

  23. Sri

    Awesome

  24. Superb dear
    Update next fast

  25. Few days back accidentally read ur previous chapter… I was like wow…then I read full epi in one go…wow superb Dr….u r amazing writer….
    Loved Swara character and sanskar different shade…its something different… Wen Swara dance with Laksh go for coffee I thought it will be a triangle… But u surprised me….and sanskar he is totally different.. Their age difference.. And Swara called him as bhai ..haha…then his angry…haha everything is good…
    Actually am egarily waiting for this epi…I wanna see Ragini – be shade..how u portray…but its perfect for her as she lost her child….I thought it was the last chappy….but thanks…u didn’t end…
    Anyway u reached 4d na…so why did u end it early…I wanna see Swara love towards sanky…how she fell in love with him….

  26. Vyshu10

    superb…upload soon plz

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