his one mistake changed my whole life…..4 shots part 4 (c)

Hi frds… sorry… for late post… I hope u all remember my ff…. tq for ur lovely comment…

Story starts with…angry rags entered in sankys cabin… loking at her sanky got shocked…
He dint expect her here as she dint inform anything about coming india
He flshes the worst deed of his… and scared like hell… cutting his thought rags shouted..
Ragini- bhaiiiiiiiiiiii…………. I want all d information regard u r clients..(saying dis she started find something in files.. and started to throw… all the things…)(and shattered completely on ground)

Sanky totally shocked by her acts… he thought something different and this… swara dint told anything or what..?

Sanky-(back to sense)ragini… look at me…(rags cryed even more) wt happened angel… wt u finding here..? look at me dea….
But rags.. hugged him tightly…and talk while sobbing
Rags- bhaiiiii… swara.. sw.ra….(sanky is getting ready to hear harsh words form her angel for his deeds………closed his eyes) she is raped by someone ……..(cryed loudly)and u know where… and with whom…….?(anger is clear by her voice)

Sanky- (turned his face..to not having courage to face)
Rags- in our home… and swara dint even know his name… she told me wn she came our home that beast attacked her from back… he is taling in some kind of chinies… and I just want to know who he is ….?(sanky shocked .. y swara dint told about him any thing..?he is in confusion) and trust me when I got that beast naaa….. I ll kill himmmmmmmmmmm… how dare him to tocuch my frd? Before that I ll slap tightly……(sanky heart beating fastly… rags keeps on going to tell frustration) but… now…there is even more important work than fing him(sanky looked at her) bhai… wo…bhai…wo…. Do u marry her?(looks straight into his eyes)
Sanky-(shocked..) wt? no……how can i…?

Rags- do u rejecting her just becoz she is unpurre and…
Sanky- no not that… but she is small.. I mean our age difference is a lot.. and me a
Rags- this thing… if u marry her than u save 4 lifes…
Sanky- 4 lives.. !! how?
Rags- 1st is swara…2nd is me.. if she is not happy than how can I lead a happy lyf.. 3rd one is lucky,if im not happy how can I keep him happy.. and 4th one is(sanky is very curious) s…w..a..r..a..s.. ba..by….

SANKY IS TOTALLY SHOCKED.. AT ANOTHRR SIDE HE IS GOING TO BECOME FATHER HE IS HAPPY..rags words made him furious
Rags- I know bhai… how u feeling? U r thinking how can a sis marry his bro to unpure girl and that too with a girl who s carring a baby of the beast…(snky lowers his eyes) but we tried to abort that child..(somewhere sanky s happy that he is getting his child saras back but rags word made him urious)but swara is too weak to abort.. and u know that in our socity whatever happened d blame only goes to the girls… they dint even question boys … this is worst truth of our socity…

Sanky dint even telling a word..
Snky- bhai I know that u don’t like give anyone to kumud bhabhi place… but u know what..? I ofenly thimk about u .. ur loneliness .. then I thought swara to be my bhabhi… but becoz f age difference only I kept my mouth shut… but now things were changed..she is leading leading lyf worst than death…. She need a a protectiveness… she s suffering a lot… she dint need any lyf partener but she needs a father for her child… and I know u ll prove a best dad… plese.. (fell on ground and holds his leg)bhai I beg u pls give my frd a lyf… I cant believe anyone except u…

(sanky made her stand… and nodes his head in positive..giving his acceptance)
Sanky- if swara is ok… with this new relation.. I mean do told her about this….?(his heart beating fastly)

Rags- no… I thought to talk with u first later talk to her…(hugged sanky)tq so much … I know my bhai is best… tomorrow is wedding come to devima.. temple..at 8.00 am … don’t forget… bye,,

Sanky stands there looking at her sis and thinking about swara..Y SWARA DINT TELL ANYTHING ABOUT HIM?

ITS 8.00 am swara is ready in her wedding costume… rags FIL and MIL were present… they dint know anything about swaras pregnesy… as they were traditional they dint accept this thing so they hided it from them… laksh told them that sanky likes swara so they were getting married…..

Sanky is sitting in grooms place.. he was hell nervous.. wt if swra tells everything seeing me… he closed his eyes tightly…
Laksh- here swara came…(hearing this he opened his eyes and saw d girl whom he ruined … and tears were continuously lowing from his eyes)

Sanky-(in mind) oh my god… wt I done to this girl..?(he remembers his meeting with her.. her confidence… her attitude.. )now she looks lyk dead person even worse than that.. she lost her charm just becoz f my one mistake…and look she is looking lyk scalaton … I m really ffeling lyk hang myself doing all that with her.

Swra sat next to him she is looking at blankly.. no emotions can be find in her face… ..
Sanky doing whatever pandithji telling him..he took 7owes while taking
“I KNOW SWARA WHATEVER I DID ITS WORNG… BUT I PROMISE U .. FROM NOW I U R MY RESPOSILITY.. I LL GIVE ALL D COMFORNT…THT IS PROMISE.. I LL BEAR ANYTHING… I KNOW U R NOT STABLE NOW …..I KNOW U HATE MEEEEE….”
He applied sindoor and made her wear mangalsootra
ALL RITUALS WERE DONE…
Rags- swara I know… in wt situation ur going through but believe me my bro ll never ask u anything regarding that incident… and try to move on… I know it isa easy to tell… but to do it very difficult… pls dear,.. its ur new life… start ur lyf again…. I ll always with u……..
Saying this she goes out from swasan room….living her alone

Laksh-(to sanky) bhai.. I know u loved kumud bhabhi… but try to accept her… she is very good girl… she needs u r help come out of this truma,…..
Sanky just nodes… and goes to his room and he shocked to see room… it seemed lyk eartquate happened in his room… he searched for his new bride… he find her in the corner of room… he goes near to her…

Sanky- I m sorry swara… my one mistake ruined ur whole life…. On dat day…..
Swara-(cutting his words… and stands holds his collar )u r calling this as mistake..(smiles sadly)its sin mistake mr.maheshwari… u r one mistake took all my dreams aways… my happiness, my confidence.. my maaaaaaaa…. Every thing ruined… and now this is really funny naa… mr.maheshwari.. where I got harrashed Im standing in that place. And I have to leave here forever..and who spoiled me,treated me badly, whose face I ignored these years I have to see a beast face daily….
Sanky- im sorry…but I promise I ll
Beore he complete he got a tight slap… then he recognised that he holding her sholder while explaining

Swara- don’t even dare to touch me…. I hate u.. u get that…
Sanky- y don’t u tell my name? y u married me……?
Swara- I told ur name to maa..(crying)she died immediately… I cant see ragini.. she trusts u… she thinks as u as god… she is sensitive…. She cant bear ur true face.. I cant hurt my frd…….. AND U …. U TOO ACTING AS MAHAN FROM LONG … I MAST SAY U R A GOOD ACTER… DON’T TRY THAT IN ME… I SEEN U R TRUE FACE… I MARRIED U JUST FOR DIS BABY… I HATE THIS TOO…ITS SIGN OF U R LUST.. (saying this she doze off… sanky hold her at d nick of time)
He hold her and placed her in bed covered her …and sat near her… holding her hand..
“im sorry… really sorry”

After few days raglak return to London…
Swara is start to leave in another room…she ignored sanky… she used to active when sanky goes to office… before he came she used to sleep… she is giving silent torture for him…he understands she is not be free in his presence.. so used to see her through away from her… yes he s falling for swara… he took care of without her knowledge.. now she again become helthy.. her face is glowing … which we call as mothers glow..

He thinks of his 1st love kumud –she is very bubbly..sweet… understanding
Swara- is diferentg from kumud… swara is mature, and silent girl…but something is attracting him.. his silence…, her attitude…everything…

he used to go late from office… just for her happiness… after that he go to swara s room and use to see her lovingly use to talk to his child which is in swaras tammy…
sanky- baby.. how r u? mom taking care of u naaaa…. U know im ur papa… and I love u more and also u r mom…. I know ur mamma never accept me as her husband… but she ll be always my wife…
(to swara.. when she s in sleep)I know swara… u cant get of that incident … but pls give me one chance…. I want my family… I want to settle in family…pls swara I promise… u ll never regret for giving me a chance…

(holda her hand and kissed her.. and sleeped on her hand for a while…then touched her tommy)
Sanky- gnite… baby take care… don’t hurt ur mamma… tc of ur mamma and urself… I ll meet u tomorrow at same time…(he went out)

Recap-swara p.o.v towards sanky… rags negative shade… (last ep)

I know I alredy told in previous ep… this will be last… I tried.. but… when I read in kannada… its seemed simple and short story… now while writing I come to know how long it would be…?

How is it? Pls comment me… am I good in writing …?
Both positive and negative comments were accepted… I know more were disappointed by one more epi… but u know I cant end in hurry…if I did I myself dint get stisifaction so…

But I ll promise next part last one (pakka wala promise)

Credit to: varu

20 comments

  1. Avan

    Feeling bad for swara…even for sanky….. Ending must happy….plz…plz… N story was awsum….plz give happy ending…its my humble request.

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