his one mistake changed my whole life…..4 shots (part 3)

Hi frds… tq…for d love and support…its actually a turning point of d story… am I capable to express in proper way or not as I readed it in kannada … pls guys If u want to bash… u can for improper narration… but pls do comment for this part…. I took so much time to describe dis… I wann know… how much sucessull in translting… pls guys…

So story starts…
Its bright day….. the sun rays falls on swaragini through window… to wake up d two beautiful ladies…. Swara gets up… and 1st shocked by surrounding.. but later understands she is in raginis plce… she sees that ragu stuggling in sleep due to sun rays… she went to window side… and stands in b/w them… she sees a cute smile in ragu s face then she.. closes curtens… and went to freshen up…

After getting fresh she went down to see d arrangement…
She shocked to see d senery… sanky… doing arrangements along with d servnts in his casual wear…
She thought to go inside d room beore he see her..but unluckily he sees her and
Sanky- swara….u got up…!! Good… come here and help in preparations… I want all d arrangement done with d taste of hers…. I know her taste…. But u r her bff na…

Swara-(hesitately comes to him) good morning… wt help u want? I ll try to help my level best…

They both discussed about selection of flowers , her fav.. food items…, theme of party, her fav cake.. and shape of cake… both were exchange their ideas regarding raginis tastes… swara feels some kind comofort while talking with him… he also feels she is not afraiding from me infact she was enjoying… after complitation of list…
Sanky- atlat done … tq swara for help….u know after so many years she is celebrating her bday grandly… im so exited … and tq so much without ur help… don’t know wt am I going to do…?

Swara- its ok … no need of tq she is my best frd…. Any thing for ragu ….

Swara- oh its already 10.00 .. this ragini naa still sleeping…sleeping queen…I ll take tea for ragini….(saying this went to make tea)
Sanky- let her sleep… its her bday…
Swara- no… how can she sleep these much late… u know this make her lazy and she looks dull in party becoz of lack of sleeping
(swara went to room)
Swara- ragini… get up… its ur bday…dea… atleast start any good habit from today…(pulling her blanket)
Ragini- let me sleep… u r always behind my sleep… im with my dream boy don’t sisturb me

Swara- if that dream boy comes today in party .. and sees ur dull sleepy ace…then he will ran away ..(teases her)
Ragini- (getting up in a sec)noo I ll be active from today… saying this she ran to washroom…

Sanskar did all d arrangements with servants.. excitedly….he not allowed to do any work from swara… swara did face pack for ragini and applied to her … ragini is simply sitting there swara is not allowing her to go down ….swara also wanna help in decoration but sanky is not allowing… he told her to check d decoration after d completation to detect any error…

At 7;00all is set for party…guests r coming.. sanky attending them… ragini is all set to go but swara is not ready yet…
Ragini- swara.. get ready yaar… its getting late..
Swara- I ll u go… u r center of attraction bday girl not me…
Ragini- no madam… I go only along with u.. otherwise no(in sturbon tone and sits)
Swara- aree.. ok give me 10 minutes
Ragini gives one dress- I spl bought for u .. its not so heavy .. I know u r taste … and don’t talk anything rubbish lyk.. I cant take it… and all…I bring this with lots of love….. plss…(with innocent smile)
Swara-(she thinks to deny.. she remembers her rudness towards her on dat day… how she hurts… she don’t wann repeat it again)hmm ok… only dis tym…
Swara gets ready..- ok come now we ll go
Ragini – where?
Swara- down
Ragini-u sit here.. now I ll do u r make up…(she applies lipstick according colour of her dress…do simple hairstyle in which she looking like angle) now redy come….
Its alredy 8:00
Our two beauties decending from stairs holding eachother hand… both are looking pretty angles…
Ragini is wearing long orange gown(which she wear in serial when kaveri attacks her)
Swara is wering light pick suit(which she used to wears after swasan 1st fake marriage)
Ragini goes straight to sanky…takes his blessings…
Sankay- happy bday my lil sister..
Ra- tq bhayya…
All clg frds of swaragini comes there… and wishes her..nd all shocked to see swara in this attire…
Some boys- yaar yeh tho… super hot ..hain.. y don’t we notice this first…shit…

Sanky wanna beat all the boys who is commenting lyk that…he is also fallen in her beauty today… but dint express…
Gadodiays arrives…
Shekar- hey sanskar…. (patting his sholder) how r u my son?(friendly hugging)
Sanky-good uncle..
Shekar-wr is my doll?
Ragini- here I am…(hugs him)uncle.. y so late .. I was waiting from so long… wr is janki anty…
Shekar- she has some work in last moment so I alone came…(she disappointed by hearing by alone)happy bday butterfly…(kisses her forhead)
Ragini- tq uncle…
Guy-(from behind ragini) happy bday moti….(hearing this she feels so happy.. and turns immediately there he is)
Raini- lakshhhhhhhh…………(her one and only love… secrate love…she dint even share this thing with swara…. She dint understand… how to react… )
Laksh- happy bday..(friendly hug…. But in raginis stomak there is lots butterflies dancing…)
Ragini- tq(with smile) I ll come in sec…(she goes to some corner and starts to jump…) omg … omg…he came…(swara shocked to see her)
Swara- r u ok? Can I call dr…?
Ragini-y…? (understands) no need… come
Swara- u go… I ll come … I hav some work
Ragini- ok…
While returning swara collides with laksh….laksha hold her before she hit d floor..
Laksh-(in flirty manner)hey hai..im lucky… may I know ur sweet name miss?
Swara- excuse me… sorry I cant…I forgot my name(she was impressed by him acts as if she dint affected)
Hearing her ans… he goes from there… she feels bad…
Ater some tymm dj plys music all youngstars… sorrunded in round cicle..and dancing ragini also drags sanskar..
Sanskar- wt I do in b/w young stars.. u go and enjoy.. ill see from here itself..
Ragini- stop it bhai… even now thousands girls can all for u…u r handsome than any other boys in our clg… no excuse now come….
(pls imgine any suitable party yet melodious song… I dint know which song to select)
Some of frds also dragged swara on floor.. all r doing couple dance.;.. swar with one of her clg frd…
Ragini with sanskar and laksha with some other girl …
In a particular beat they change d partners in rotation
Now swar with sanskar
Ragini with laksh
Both swargini shocked to see their dancing partners..
Swara with fear…ragini with nervousness…
Sanskar hold her wist due to dis her eyes widened by his act….fear and nervousness clearly seen by her eyes…
Sanky- (coming near her ears while dancing according to beat… by dis she stats shever) y u always.. afraid of me..? im purely vegetarian,… im not going to eat u…

Swara-im not afraid(tring to be brave)sir……
Sankar-(while twisting her) im I really look that old…

Swara-(she remember her comfortness in morning try to talk freely) noo nt at all… bhai…
Hearing bhai from her mouth he holds tightly and pull her more towards her making her gasp in fear…
Sanskar- don’t ever dare to call me bhai… im bhai only for ragini not for u………..(softening grip) baby…(widened her eyes) got that (and wink)… (she is silently praying or couple changing beat)

In other hand ragini is too shy to look in luckys eyes she just following lucks step
When the couple step came swara is beyond happy to free from sanky where as ragini is sad to go from lucky..
Now swalak are together
Laksh- hey miss u..? u look lil upset wt happened? Madam..
Swar-(looking lucky she feels happy) nothing..!
Lucky- I think u r new to these type party…(looks in wonder .. he drags her from dance loor) one mast always do in which we r comort)
Saying this he goes…
Swara- (from behind ) tq…(just smiled at her…)
She was so happy and she eels very interesting….she is falling for him…. Her 1st crush…
After the dance rags cut the cake 1st feed sanskar and next bite to swara… party end soon…
Sanskar biding bye to guest… atlast godadiyas too left… now only sanskar and swaragini remains at end… swara got ready to go … she just wanna leave from sanky… she feels sanskar gazing her in bad way… she is sense that in while dancing..

Ragini – pls swara.. its too late.. pls stay for today night naa,,,
Swara- no ragini.. ma is alone … I want to go…. And ha I kept ur gift in room check that…
Ragini- u never listens my word .. I wont talk to u…(she angrily goes….swara wants to convince her but she goes)
Sanky- pls stay for today night…
Swara says nothing and goes from there…

After that sanky drive somewhere without telling ragini too…

Recap-sanskar secrte…swalak coffee date…. Swaras lifes biggest twist….

Hey guys I want another eposide to complete it … wt should I do?
U guys tell me wt should I do? Complete it in next episode itself?
And pls comment
Wt u guys think which sanskars shade will be reveled here which is unknown to rags? Guess and comment… I m waiting both +ive and –ive comments…

Credit to: varu

24 comments

    • Jj

      Hi ,
      I think sanskar is behind the girl,but this matter don’t know by ragini.but pair is swasan because I like it so much. Swara life twist is sanskar confess the feeling for her or do something wrong to her.but don’t end soon soon ,please make to story brief don’t finished so soon,to speed up the story,because it is nice concept.OK bye

  1. Divyanshri

    |Registered Member

    if u want u can extend it to 50 I will be the happiest …….u r an amazing writer….. now a days ever story is fab. …

  2. Kaviiiiii

    Please dont end it so soon and make sanskar image +ve pass. Try to update the next part asap

  3. Fan Of SwaSan

    its very nyc chaps…but pair swasan hai ya swalak….plzzzz make it swasan…..waiting for next…

  4. Tanu

    hey bhaqwan swara called him Bhai ..seriously …plz swasan pairs hi krna or sanky shuld b +ve

  5. Anita

    Hi..r u from karnataka…even me from karnataka….I think it’s possible to finish in next chp….

  6. Bhargavi

    I am so much interested to know how you are going to end it one more ff. Just can’t wait to read that one. If possible try to post it today na

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