One body two souls an OS ( ek duje ke vaaste)

Hello guys…!!
Maria here with one shot on friendship…..on request of my sweetheart UFaq API…!!!
This OS named…..”one body two souls”
Hope u all lyk it……

UFaq as sumo n
Maria (me) as preeti…cause I can’t use our names TELLY UPDATES MIGHT NOT ACCEPT…..
So let’s start….

Sumo n preeti r sisters…..
Sumo is 2 years elder than preeti (like UFaq API is 2 years elder than me) πŸ™‚
They both love eaChOther deeply…….
Bcz preeti is younger so sumo used to fulfill all her wishes……
They r like “ek jism do jaan” never want to leave eaChOther hands……

But sumo has a secret……she has a boy in her life name shravan malhotra….
He is their family friend……
She don’t want preeti to knw this truth……cause preeti feels sad…she is d only person in sumo life according to her….so that’s y sumo didn’t told her abt that n sa saying fr d right tym…..
..where as preeti also has a secret…she also likes shr…..secretly….but is unaware from d fact dat her elder sis n shr both loves eaChOther…….

One day…..
Sumo with so much courage….goes to preeti’s room……
S: preeti I want to tell u smthing…….
P: yes di….
S: I love shr……..
P gets up in shock……she was shock not bcz she likes shr bt bcz her sister have smone in her life……
Preeti has tears in her eyes….
S: m sorry dear….but I promise u will be a always n important person in my life I promise……
P: no di…..I will never b…..I can’t be…..
(She runs fr there….n sumo tries to stop her n follows her)
Preeti loses her balance n falls frm stairs…….
S shouts…..preeti…!!!!!!!!!!!!

Scene 2:
After the accident….preeti is lying on d bed….
Whereas doc checked her up…..her head was bandaged….sumo was continuosly crying……
S in mind: it’s all bcz of mr I shoul have never told her….she will never ever forgive me…….
P slowly opens her eyes…..
N the Frst thing she saw was her sis face then shr…….
Sumo luks at her….but she was not angry at all……
All family members gone…now it’s only sumo n preeti….
S: preeti…….
P: ji di…..
S: did u forgive me…???
P: fr wat di…??
(Sumo gets confused)
S: wait do u remember how u fell fr stairs…???
P: no…..I think I was walking n lost my bale that so may be…..
(Sumo gets shocked)
S: u don’t remember anything…???
P: matlab…??? Did smthing happened…??
S: ahhh no…no…nothing happend….
P: so y r u so SCOCKED……I don’t remember anything….
(She gets a headache) ahhh…..
S: preeti plzzz rest……I will cm in a sec….
(Preeti sleeps…..)

Sumo cms out of d room in shock…….
S: no I will never tell her….bht me and shr…wat happened to her…no no I can’t lose my sis……..

1 month later……….
Dining table…….
Preeti n sumo having lunch……
P: yuck….no I won’t eat French toasts I don’t like them…..
S: so want do u want to eat….
P: ummm pan cakes…….
S: wait I will made them fr u….!
(Sumo makes d pan cakes fr her)
N makes preeti eat herself…..
P: I love u di….!!!!!!
S: I love u too my love….(as UFaq API call me love) πŸ˜€

Shr family cms there n everyone greets them shraman smiles……..
Where as preeti got happy…
Ram: anuj (sumo-preeti father) I want to talk to u……
Anuj: Han ram bolo…….
N he talk abt d alliance… Not shraman’s but preeti n shr……
All gets shocked……
Parents of both children got happy n also preeti……
But sumo n shr r in d biggest shock……
Anuj gets agree…….but shr never wanted this…….
He cms to sumo…..
Shr: u will tell evetyone abt us……
(He strts to go but sumo holds his hand)
S: no shr…..u will not….
Shr: r u crazy I love u not preeti…..
S: I love u but preeti is my sis….n can’t u c that she is so happy….??? She loves u….
Shr: wat…!!!!! She loves me….!!!
S: yes can’t u c her face….didn’t u c her reaction…???….n it clearly said dat she loves u….,
Shr: no that can’t happen but I only love u…..
S: plzzzz shr…..If u love me…then marry my sis….I only want her happiness…..
Shr: or u don’t love me….wat abt my happiness….aren’t they matter fr u…??
Sumo luks down…..
Shr gets angry goes to every one n said yes fr marriage……
Sumo gets happy n sad……..

Preeti cms to sumo room at ni8……
P: di….!!!!!
S: Han love….
P hugs sumo…..
Di m so so SO happy….!!!!!
S: m also so happy fr u….(showing her fake happiness)
P: but di u value won’t gets less……u r still n important person in my life….!!
S: I knw dear….!!
P again hugs her…..
(Sumo remembers how she said all dis…n abt preeti’s reaction……)

Next day…….
Shr angrily cms to sumo room…..
Shr: plzzz sumo say once that u love me…!!! Engagements rings r getting selected…..!!!!! Plzzzzzzzz
S: I love u but less than my sis…..
Shr leaves in disappointment whereas sumo sits on floor n cries louder n louder……
Sfter sm tym she cms down stairs where everyone WS selecting rings…..
P cms to her….
P: di I was waiting fr u…..y so late….acha tell me which ring to choice fr shr…..
S: he will be tu fiancΓ© it’s better u select….
P: but he is ur best friend u knw him better than me…!!
(Both shraman gets sad)
Sumo c’s a design n remembers it was d same design ring she n shr choose fr her……n she promised that she will make him wear that ring only…..
Sumo chooses that ring……..
N shr gets more sad…….
Now it’s shr turns…..n he chooses a red diamond ring….which was sumo favourite colour but preeti hates red……but didn’t tell him……
Sumo gets sad…….

Engagement day……
Preeti gets ready…in pink maxi….where as sumo gets ready in red maxi…her n shr favourite colour……..
The sisters go down stairs……
It’s engagement tym……
Sumo was abt to take net to d stage but preeti back off…….
All get shocked….n preeti pushes sumo slightly on stage…..with a smile….
Shraman gets confused……
P: Kia bheeee….????? Y u all r luking at me lyk that…?????!!!
S: preeti….
P: Kia hoa…??!! Aray…..
Shr: but u…????
P: wat me….??? Di sacrificed her love fr me can’t I sacrifice hpmy crush fr her….???
—shraman gets shocked n lyk at EACHOTHR n also others get shocked…..—–
P: wat do u think…..I didn’t knw….
..(she tells them everything…..n it is revealed….that preeti didn’t forget wat sumo said to her before her accident…..)
Sumo lefts shocked after hear this…..
P: I was expecting di to say that she loves shr….when my alliance got fixed….y didn’t u……
S: cause I…..
P: cause u love me too much dat u sacrificed ur love how can u….!!! Even engagements rings Bhi apki pasand ki hain c…???
(It was her plan……cause she knew everything)
Shr sits down on knees……
Shr: thanks u so much preeti…….
P also sits down….
P: my di sacrificed her love fr me……it proved that I will always first person in her life……
(she luks at sumo who is smiling)
P: shr take care of my sis………
(Both sisters huh in happiness)
S: but u also…luv him..,.
P: I only liked him….it was attraction not love….u knw wat on that day when u tell me….I WS not sad cause I love him….or like him….I was sad cause I felt insecure……but now……everything is fyn….I knw that u will always love me…!!
P: m so sorry di…..I feel insecure n I behave like a child on dat day…I should have think once abt u n shr..jiju…….plzzzz forgive me…..
S: aray my preeto how can I forgive u…if m not angry at u…?????
P: thank u soooo much…..
S: tappar lagao gi….thank u KISI aur ko Bol jake Mai teri behen hoon or behen ko kon thank u bolta hai pagal….!!!
P: hahahah acha acha mafi……..Now let’s strt engagement ceremony….!!!!
Sumo n shr exchange rings……….
Everyone claps……….

Three years later……
Preeti one day while driving got into a huge accident……
Sumo rushes to hospital…..
She was crying continuously while shr consoles her…….
S: my sis….shr if anything happens to her I will be dead…..
Shr: plzzz don’t say that…….nothing will happen to her…
Doc cms their n say smthing in mute………
Shraman gets shocked…..
S: m ready doc ……….

Scene changed…..
Where preeti opens her eyes after operation..,….
N d Frst word she say was sumo di…
She saw shr was standing there…..
P: shr where is di……
Shr: preeti listen carefully wat m going to say….u needed a heart….
Preeti eyes widen in shock……she gets negative thoughts…..
Shr: ur di…..
P: no,,,,,no……(she strts crying non-stop) no di…!!!
Shr: aray aray…!!! Ooy don’t cry I was joking….!!
P: (while crying) wat…
She removes d curtain….n sumo was lying…..on d bed…..she was smiling…..
Shr: u needed blood doc were bot able to find ur blood group….n only ur n her blood group…..got matched…..
Preeti cries….
She hits him: jiju dobara aisa Kia na toh…!!!!
S: acha acha nai kare ga…..hahaha roti kyun hai….
P: I WS so scared….u knw na I love u….
S: I knw I love u tooooo…!!!
—-both sis holds hands….—–

—–THE END——

So guys how’s it….so sorry if I bored u…
But UFaq di requested..n I can’t deny my sweetheart sis request……
n I write it in less then one hour so plzzz guys I knw I bored u…..Cause it’s not on shraman it was on family…..on love b/w sisters……
Sacrifice…….fr love…..no love shuvra can be more important to u than ur family……
I have a lot of sisters (all of u) n I love u all…..nothing is important to me than u all…,!!!!!!!!!
Hope u all forgive me…….
N UFaq di I love u so much……Luk I wrote it….
Guys do cmmnt……

By by
Love u all……!!!!

29 comments

  1. Nandini aka Nandu

    Oh Mario , this is the sweetest thing I have ever read😊😊 it was too good dear. How do u get such ideas man! We all here are sisters. Even I got manyπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡ lots of love dear and it wasn’t boring at all. Keep writing.

    • Marie

      |Author

      OMG really u liked it…..!!! Then it’s a happiness fr me my dear….!! Thank u sooo much fr giving me such sweet appreciation!! Thanks alt….!! Really glad that u liked it yrrr….!!
      I love u tooo my dear…!! So so SO so much se Bhi bht ziada…..!!!
      Take care my love!!

  2. Anamika

    Awwww
    So cute yr
    Loved it from the core of my heart
    It feels so gud to read abt two sisters who are everything to each other
    Thnx for giving this treat
    Luv u baby

    • Marie

      |Author

      Aww thank u soo much anna di…!!!
      M really really glad that u liked it…!!
      Aaya no prob fr treat thank god u all liked it… πŸ™‚ it’s enough fr me dat u all liked it πŸ™‚
      Love u tooooooo di,,,,
      Take care !! πŸ™‚

  3. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    First of all di,
    congratulations on your 11th OS.. i’m very happy for you..
    and the OS was amazing… aww… Ufaq di ka pata nahi,
    but i promise you, mei ro rahi hoon…. *_*
    Bohot pyaara OS tha.. Preeti’s so cute man !!
    And Sumo, hats off to her !!
    amazing di.. Mindblowing! Loved it !!
    loads and loads of love,
    Nikkko <3333333

    • Marie

      |Author

      Awww thank u sooo sooo much my nikko…,!!
      OMG u were crying….so sweet even I was cried when I wrote it……
      U r soo sweet yr…..!!!
      Thank u
      Thank u
      Thank u sooo sooo much
      M really glad that u liked it yr……!!!!
      So sweet of u…!!
      Love u sooooooooooooooooooooo much yr….! Take care!!

  4. Ufaaq

    |Registered Member

    Hi love
    Oh my God it was like wow amazing
    Fantastic
    Fabulous
    Spectaculus
    Beautiful
    Amazing
    Awesome
    I loved itthank u sooooooo much so nice of u
    It was amazing
    And ya I love u yar
    Take card

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hy API….!
      Thank u so much m really glad !!! Thank god ap ko pasand aaya
      I was hoping ke sab ko pasand aajai cause pehli baar Maine emotions daal diay Thai mere…..but I got succeed.. Yay…!!
      Thank u
      Thank u
      Thank u
      Thank u
      Thanks
      Thank u so much apke liay kuch Bhi API…!!
      Infact sab ke liay kuch Bhi πŸ™‚
      I love u tooooooo
      Take care

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hy aru…..!!!! Thank u soo much yr m really glad that u all liked it….!!
      Thanks a lot
      Love u tooooo my dear take care yr…..!!

  5. sona

    Hahaha..
    Lolll..ending..
    And yes…deep relations mey kabho kabhi insecurities..hotey hai..I agree..
    Aur dho behenon mey tho pakka hothi hai..ye insecurities..😊😊😊😊
    Thanks for this is treat maria😊😊

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey kaya….!!
      Thank u
      Thank u thank u soooo much yr…!
      M really glad that u liked it……
      Love u !!
      Keep reading !! N loving ..,!
      Take care πŸ™‚

  6. pretty preeti

    Maro kya kaho
    So nice os
    Loved reading it
    So sweet sissy
    U r much sweet
    Love the os
    Post next also
    Loved it
    Love j
    Amazing
    Bye

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey my preeto……
      Thank u so much my dear !!
      M really glad u liked it…!!
      Love u so much
      Hhahah I will sure…..
      Love u so much yr…!
      Thanks alt
      Byy byy
      Take care

  7. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    OMG !!!! Maria it was just something
    Wonderful
    Beautiful place piece of art ..
    Just m speechless ..
    Really speechless ..
    U write soo well … nd it is written in just an hour .. waohhhh !!! I can’t believe … hats off dear ..
    U r just .. just amazing ..
    Take care dear ..
    😘😘

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey Fatima !! Really u liked it….!!!
      OMG thank u so so so much yr…..!!! M really glad!!
      Thank u thank u thank u yr
      Yr soooo so sweet my dear…..’
      Love u sooo much
      Take care yr…!

  8. Angel_pari

    Awwww maira it was so cute

    superb

    fantastic

    mindblowing

    or kya??
    Han

    marvelous
    unique
    zabardast
    mast
    epi
    bs yar mere words khtam hogae πŸ˜€

    loved it…..

    • Marie

      |Author

      OMG OMG OMG
      Thank u
      Thank u
      Thank u
      Thank u
      Thank u soooooo much API…!!!
      Itne saari compliments really glad that u liked it….!!
      Love u so much API
      Take care !!

  9. Ruchi

    |Registered Member

    Hey Maria…
    who told u it was boring?
    it was superb yr…
    it was so sweet yr…
    Loved it…
    Lots of Luv
    Ruchi… πŸ™‚

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey Ruchi di…..!!
      Hahaha cause I put emotions I thought it will be boring but thank god…..
      M so glad really so glad that u liked it…..!!!
      Thank u thank u
      Thank u soooo much di…!
      Love u soooo much
      Take care
      Frm ur choto sis maria πŸ™‚

  10. Rukhsar

    |Registered Member

    Wow maro what an os its out of the world behen ho to aisi yarr what a relation of sisters really amazing ap ne bilkul true relation dekhaya ha sis ka meri sis b bilkul aise hi ha although hum lig larty b bht hain but ma pyaar b sab se zayada usko karti hn and ur ff showed the true love of a sis and plz dont say that we got bored baqi sab ka
    to pata nahi but mujhy bht maza aya love u sweeto take care

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey API…!!
      Aww thank u sooo much so happy that u liked it….!!!
      Hahahah I have no sis……but u all my sisters n so sweet sisters …..!!! Love u all….!!
      M really glad that u didn’t find it boring !!
      Thank u so so much API…..,!!
      Love u so much
      Take care n stay blessed…..!!

  11. Neeti

    |Registered Member

    😭😊😭😊😭😊😭😊 aisa emotions tha mera parte wakt,
    itna emotional and itna accha aur pyarr bhara
    I’m sure sab ro rai the baki sab nai to Uffi di aur ap to rai rahe honge….main bhi ro rahi thi….
    ap batao itna accha likhne ke bad apne boring kiu kaha….ab apka chocolate treat cancel… jao main nai bat karti apse
    lekin itta emotional tha I’m still crying… har behno ka ahi relation hota he…ap jante ho meri behen jabbhi ati hai me usse jhagra krti hu bt jab wo chali jati he main use roz phn kar kar ke puchti hu kab aye gi wo…
    aur jab me sochti hu ki ye show ekdin khatam hoga aur humlog alag ho jayenge me roti rehti hu, kiuki aplogo ki waza se me akelapan mehsus nai karti…bt den I think ki hum log kabhi alag hoi nai sakte we ar sis after all….
    luv u Maro di, luv u soooooooooooooooo much – Neeti

    • Marie

      |Author

      OMG OMG OMG……!!!
      Yr thank u so so SO infinity….! U know wat ur cmmnts r boosters fr me…!! I always wait fr ur cmmnts…!!! Hahah sorry sorry I though emotion dall diay hain…..Jo Jo dimag Mai say likh dia I didn’t knw ke story BANTI Bhi hai ya nai bht m so glad that u all liked it so much n give me love on this….!!! Nai bhe Mai nai cancel karti chocolates treat I wnt I want !!!
      Hahahah acha na shooryyyyy shoryyyyyy ab nai kahoon gi mafi acha na maaf kardo na yrrr
      Awwww I have only all of u tumlogo si hi jhagadti hoon or pyaar Bhi tumhi logo se karti hoon u all r far frm me…….physically but emotionally u all r soo close to my heart …..!! I too think abt it n cry Smtyms but I think then we will never part away always….!!!!
      Love u soooooo soooo much yr…!!
      My sweeto cuto !!
      Sweetheart everything….!!
      Take care my love !!

  12. Sss

    |Registered Member

    yar marie it’s amazing os..you nailed it with you story I really love the sister bonding and you exactly that in awesome way..after reading this I must say you and you sis ufaq have great bond that cool and sweet..trust me really liked the story you are very good at emotional dialogue keep it up..

    • Marie

      |Author

      Thank u so much SSS m really glad u liked it……really ur cmmnt meant a lot to me….
      Haha yeah she n me r really great sisters…..thanks fr d cute compliment I hope u find my OS like this……also….. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Take care
      Lots of luv
      Maria

  13. Maria

    |Registered Member

    Nice depiction of two sisters!! πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ Loved the sacrifice that preeti did! These are like perfect sisters…

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