Old brick new house DYM FF, [Introduction]

Hello.. I love manmarziyan but honestly it was not up to my expectation. I thought it will be different but somewhere it went derailed according to me… the writers really tried to fix it but the glory was not there according to me. Sorry if I hurt you. Actually I expect too much. So I thought to rewrite story according to me.
List of my disappointment by the original series.
1. Cracks in Sam and Radhika’s friendship.
2. Lack of birdsong scene
3. Force entry of Nandini tract, which was not needed. [how a dead Nandini got back to take revenge?]
4. Marriage of Ardhika without being in love before.
5. Interaction of SamArj before Ardhika when Ardhika was supposed to be end game.
6. Ardhika’s love life based on sam’s heart break.
7. Sam turning b***cy and acting immensely immature
8. Sam turning negative
9. Lack of family sketch for neil [I mean he should had a life other than sam like everybody does]
10. Neil always helping Sam but Sam never returning it. [Every relation should be on the basis of more or less equivalent exchange.]
11. Lack in Arjun and Neil’s bonding.
12. Radhika being flawless [She is a human, she should have been in the fault at least once in life]

Ok this was just a short list … I can’t remember all.. I will try to redeem it if possible. And I will try to update it once a week cause I am really busy.

Introduction

Dosti …. It’s a very lovely word. Friendship…. While walking on road we become friends of numerous people. But very less people keep and maintain that friendship they are our … Yaar.. life is incomplete without their yaarian… but only yaarian cannot itself complete a person as whole… life is then complete when heart listen to its manmarziyan. … yes it’s desires…because desire lead our pathway to success …
These three words … dosti, yaarian and manmarziyan … tangled four life in such a way that they made a new legend out of them. Four of them are not as they look, each one of them are different from what they appear.

Radhika- from outside, she is a sweet docile girl. Have a very loving family, mom, dad, brother, sister, and grandfather. She is loved by everyone. She has all love in the world but no dream. She is not allowed to dream… well, if we see clearly she have the biggest dream in life, to do something, to be someone in life but she thinks she doesn’t have that bravery to go against her family to dream… she cannot go against her family’s expectation …. But is it not necessarily true… bravery and courage lies in everyone. We just need to find it to fight for our dreams and desires.
Samaira- fierce, feisty, career dependent girl she is… she has every opportunity to live her dream… To be establish in life… but she doesn’t have love… well, she has family just there is no love there for her… from outside she is very strong but inside she is a broken doll.

Arjun- handsome, ruthless, fierce guy… people stand and sit on his command…. Manipulative much… but not only love but lack in family too.. His heart is dark. Filled with wrath, envy and vengeances. People say he got no heart at all… but is it true? Can anybody be born without heart…? No… it’s just covered with a dark veil of sins… it’s just need to be unwrap.

Neil- he can be defined by a one liner ‘mom taught me how to shave’. Yes right his mother is his mother as well as father. She did everything which his father was supposed to do. …Neil has only one aim in life… to see everyone happy around him…. He shares happiness with world but sometime forget to keep little happiness for himself… The smiling joker is not always happy.

Credit to: Tanu

14 comments

  1. Silpa k sivadasan

    Interestng plot

    I too agree with ur points
    If ppl like u were cv s
    It would hav made a huge difernce

  2. aastha

    thank you Tanu …….loved it…..but Nandini was never dead….she was in London and Radhika is a selfless girl like Harry Potter……….and I too agree about nesam………Niel always was there for Sam and did everything for her but she never returned it…………..anyway I liked it and plzzzzzzz update the next part soooooooooooooooooonnnnnn……………

  3. Hi Tanu good begining. I agree with u & what about saral entry & bonding with radhus friends ( sam neil teji krithika zubin).

  4. maandey

    before reading the introduction and after reading ur opinion i also want to say that i am agree with your these points….this show is started with a tagline “before sombodys life i want to find my life” something like that…but they cnt give it that essence….she becomes someones wife before finding her life……..and alot more…..just coz of trp issues they shut this show tpp early othewise may be till now sam and radhika are enemies to each other…..hahhhhh

  5. Gianna

    Tanu I 100% agree with ur points in the process to garner trp they ruined such a good show. Its great that u are taking this initiation to give us all the mmz we wanted. Love you, take care

  6. Correct point outs… However the lacl of bonding b/w arjun and neil i dnt agree completely. It is quiet ok. Everyone cant share a good bonding right? It will become like we wrote our density ourselves sharing good relation with each and everyone. Even both the boys contrast in every thing so hard to deal

  7. Roma

    Awesome, wowwww tanuuuuuuuu, loved it very very muchhhh. …all the points are really true…I also wasn’t really convinced with the story as they started with some very promising n motivating concept n plot but ended so soon…..I would love to read this ff, with your amazingly awesoooooome talent. …I’ve read your nesam confession n Krishnadasi ffs….and I’m veryyyyyyy big fan of yours….plzzzz continue dear, eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads n alllllllllll the bestttttt. ..

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