Oii Romeo..!!! (INTRODUCTION )

Hiiiii beauties!!πŸ˜‰ How u r doing??πŸ˜ƒ U might have known me for an os and ff on Swasan tum ho mera sukoon aur dard. Now this is my second ff on Swasan -raglak…..hope u love it…

All the characters in swaragini is same… except sujatha and RP and step sister track actually dp and ap has two sons and a daughter. Sumi and shekar has two daughter and shekar’s mom said is with them..


The ff first episode starts with AP showing a girl’s picture to the MAHESHWARIES and asking how is it. The family looks at it and says she would be perfect for our son. AP smiles and says our daughter in law is ready. Then there enters MR.Sanskaar maheshwari into the house he is as usual dashing with white coat and black inshirt . He takes AP’s blessing and goes to his room and DP stops him.

Ap: Sanskaar here look ur future wife..

Sanskaar: ma how many time I have to tell u I don’t want to marry first I want to be successful and then I’ll marry..

Ap: what will people say when a young boy is unmarried??

Sanskaar: ma what will the people say that’s what u think and u know what.. that’s what the people too think…they don’t have time to think about us leave it ma think about ourselves not about others…

Ap: beta until u stop talking like devdas or a philosopher u will never have a lady love… nobody will marry u…

Sanskaar: ma I’m not Romeo and I never want to be Romeo leave me alone I will never marry…

Ap: but I wanna see my son’s wedding….

Sanskaar: stop ur drama ma and yeah u have given birth to another Romeo right!! Make him married…he will surely…but pls leave me now.

Uttara: Bhai Chota Bhai Na he is romeo girls will come in queue to marry him..then u will never have bride that’s why mom is hurrying..

Dp: stop it uttara leave Sanskaar alone he knows what he is doing.

Sanskaar smiles at dp and makes faces to uttara she too does and he leaves..

Dp: Annapurna leave him from childhood Sanskaar has taken responsibility of our family now if we r here that’s because of him he is very matured one he knows when he should marry leave him he would get a understanding wife for his good mind.
Ap and uttara smiles at dp.

In Galgodia mansion

Sumi: ma pls come this show didn’t come still..

Dadil: she is not a small girl she will come soon

Shekar: here see a grooms pic came his name itself define him…

Dadi: hare tum u r not gonna marry him it’s ur shona who is gonna marry… anyway what is his name?

Sumi: ma it’s Sanskaar maheshwari. The boy too looks fantastic ma he would be perfect for shona..

Dadi: shona is a blessed child I know God will give her best for her good heart.

There enters swara in a cute manner jumping and dancing around…

Swara: hai family I think all these photos are for my marriage…if let me tell u one thing I will marry one one who is so caring loving romantic and understanding….let me clearly tell u my husband should be a romeo..for me..

Dadi: yeah shona first see him then speak with him if u want then marry..
Swara and dadi makes hi-fi.seeing that Sumi and shekar smiles.
Sumi: swara where is ur younger sister?

Swara: may be in don’t know she is always matured doing boring matured things so I don’t know…

At highway road….

A girl is seen walking absent minded and abt to get hitted by a scooter and then suddenly a boy drags her and embrace her in his arms. They share an eye lock (they are none another raglak)

Laksh: helo Cinderella lost ur mind…u r about to hit in that scooter and break ur legs not only kegs but also my heart..

Ragini: thank u and who r u?? I’m not Cinderella my name is Ragini Galgodia.

Laksh: ohh I’m really sorry I might not have called u with that witty name when u r having such a beautiful name Ragini…wow this name is more cute than Cinderella..

Ragini: uff u and ur bakwass flirt OK anyways so much tq and I’m going to my home bye..btw what’s ur name..

Laksh: may be Romeo…

Ragini : ohh OK romeo bye..
She then goes…

Laksh thinks to himself,”may be Raginis Romeo..”

Then laksh urges to Sanskaar room and tells everything in one breath. Sanskaar as looking into.file.didnt.react much.

Laksh:sanskaar r u listnening?


Laksh:then answer this question who is that girl

Sanskaar: suhani

Laksh:sanskaar its ragini.

Sanskaar:im sorry laksh i mean u r introducing five girls a day how can i remember all those name…and leave all these and look out business with me come..

Laksh:my god sanky in a family one must be entertaining like me and another one must be responsible like you without either the family will be incomplete…

Sanskaar:yeah laksh actually im….

Laksh:sanskaar pls im in a good mood dont spoil it ok byee tina is calling….

Sanskaar feels sad that everybody is thinking him boring…

Ragini sees sanky pic and exclaims wow jiju is hot..swara gets curious and looks at his pic and says not bad…ragini asks swara to call him and makes a call. Swara gets phn frm her and waits..for him to attend..
Sanskaar attends and ask who is this…

Swara: hii sanskaar this is swara i knw u dnt knw me but i knw u…how r u ??

Sanskaar: excuse me mam..who r u and why did u called me…

Swara:laughes and controlls herself hey sanskaar my name is nt imp i have been loving u for six mnths will u marry me??

Ragini and swara winks at eo and smiles..

Sanskaar looks puzzeled thinks to himself how could she call him didnt she feels shy…

Sanskaar: hoo…mam im sorry im not that type i mean sorry dnt mistake me…pls…

Swara : wait wait first let me ask u question why u r rejecting me r u in love with another??

Sanskaar: no its waste of time fairytale lve stry never happens in real life…

Swara : hare yaar so boring…actually i want fairytale lve stry…what kind of person u r??

Sanskaar: if u think im boring then why did u called me…


Sanskaar tries to call off phn but swara ask him not to do and tells him that she can understand him sanskaar calls off. Swara looks at his pic and says,” ohh my poor sanskaar sorry yaar “then maheshwaris come to see swara to baadi.

Guyssss how did u feel abt this epi and this ff pls comment down….should i continue pls tell me..im confused ax i think its not upto mark …anyways lve u all keep smiling:-D:-D;-)


  1. Fairy


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    Its amaznggggg!!!loved raglak scene πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜€ ..hehe bechara sanky…swaragini r reallly naughty…. πŸ˜€ ….keeep rockng n stay blessed sweeety πŸ˜€ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

  2. SwaSanFan.Goldie


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    Wow…awsum…aww swasan ki cute love story 😍😍…It will be Interesting to see hw boring sanskaar will turn into Romeo hehe πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ…Continue soon..

  3. srusti

    Omgggggggg sanskar was matured and our swara was a romantic type interesting one choti loved to see how matured sanskar falls in love with my romantic swara post next episode asap

  4. Maha016


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    awesome akshu “oiii” ingradha paathapave neyadhan irrukumnu nenaichen yes i m crct bcz oiii idha tamilians dhan use pannuvom…n indha concep semma sanskar awwww how cute….loved it dear continue soon….love u….

      • Maha016


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        awww thank u akshuu…n first nan assignments-a mudichiten adhuvaraikum laaa inga irundha…ippo laaa voda turn ava assignments pannanum nan stries eludhanum…ava maybe innaiku vandhuduva…love u akshu…

  5. Anurta


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    Wwoowwwwww……….amazing 😘😘😘😘
    Loved it alot…………….
    Very much interesting concept
    Really really really really really interesting………
    Loved the bonding of swaragini and sanlak
    Swasan and raglak r awsm…..πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€
    Post next part soon waiting eagerly to read ur story more……..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
    Don’t take much time bcz I can’t wait more so post next part soon
    Tc…. and keep rocking

    • Aksharaa



      Awwwwwwwww tq so much dear yeah i will post it by today but this tu i dont knw abt them but i will discharge my dute crctly ok dont worry my next is on the way lve u a lot…

  6. IME


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    It was just fab,excellent,superb,awesome and every thing. Loved everything. NOW GO AND WRITE THE NXT PART FAST!!!!! I cant wait to read nxt part.chall fatafat jaa.
    love you

      • IME


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        oohhh thank you very much i love you to yrr 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  7. Baavana

    Wow Ammu
    Its really fabulous . both the pairs are awesome . ur creativity mind is superb . ragsan attitude is mind blowing .swalak naughtiness is so cute.pps cont dr. Love u chellam



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    superb… πŸ™‚ …..
    amazing…. πŸ™‚ …..
    fabulous yaar………..
    Loved it a lot……… ❣
    it was a awesome bonding of swaragini and sanlak……….. πŸ™‚
    can’t wait to read next part yaar………………. πŸ™‚
    love you dear….keep smiling πŸ™‚ ….

  9. Akshaya


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    Arrey swaragini oda naughty side romba nalla irruku. Lakshana , the flirt summa pa.
    Sanskar aa call panni kalaaikaradhu nalla irruku akshu

  10. Mica


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    Akshuuuuuuuuu.. love it love it love it..
    well i have to admit that your improvement on writing just awesome..
    be frank, this ff more enjoyable to read than the first one..love it
    keep it up dud!

  11. Scooby


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    Wow superb…. semma chapie.. do continue.. and laksh character semma bcz he like comedian…
    personal question r u new to tu page or this swaragini page??
    thnk u for giving me links..

  12. Vidhya Shree

    Raglak scene Semma ash… Waiting for next episode.. come on soon… Can’t wait… Make swasan meeting as unforgettable meeting… Love you dear…

  13. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Interesting concept dear.. Plz continue.. Swaragini and sanlak bonding is very nice.. All the best for the further parts..
    Take care
    Keep smilingπŸ˜€

  14. Kakali


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    Waaaaaaaaaaaa toooo cuteeee n funny…. enjoyed n loved it sooo much Aksharaaaaaa…. u r rocking with it dear…
    Thnk u… ;-*

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