Oh Fish Not Again (twinj) -Chapter 4 (cont.) ~ by Tara

Hello everyone!! Surprise…. hehe actually i was not satisfied with my previous update so i thought to write for u guys today only.. as I have my English xam which is easy so i got some time… and typed it.. i hope u will enjoy this one.. its the continued portion of the previous chapter..
If u skipped any chapter here is the link

Oh Fish Not Again
Chapter 4: ‘is that my luck’ (continued)
“dreaming about a girl right??” said the one standing beside me….

I rubbed my eyes and mumbled “shruti??”
“yep!!” she said banging my head with the newspaper roll she used earlier to hit me….
“ouch!!… what u doing here??” i exclaimed..
“ first answer me.. u were dreaming abt a girl right??” she stated directly…
Now this is called a best friend…you don’t need to say anything..
“is this the way to wake up a person?” i said still horrified by the dream..
“u know that’s my style” said shruti..
Shruti… the name sounds sweet.. but she was the most unpredictable and notorious girl i have even seen in my entire life. She was my maternal uncle’s daughter as far as our blood relations were concerned…but to be true, we were like buddies and sometimes more than that…none of us hesitated to discuss about our personal problems… even she shared all her girlish talks..more often than not, our gossips ended up on the topic of s*x. I never treated her like a girl… she was always dashing..and open hearted. However few years back our family relations got sour due to some reason..so our meetings went limited.. but we never terminated our friendship…and met in our parents absence…
“how come u are here at pune??” i asked..
“inter-college dance completion..” she replied as she parked herself on the bed at my side..
“you still read this magazines?? Grow up kunj..its time to do practical application of it” she said glancing at the semi naked woman who posed beautifully on the cover page…

Now this is shruti, witty and full of surprises. Sharing non-beg jokes was not a new thing for us, in fact the first blue film was gifted to me by her. It was back during our school days when she was a guest at my place for the summer vacations. I was illiterate about s*x and presupposed that babies popped into this world merely by kissing. It was my great friend who cleared all my confusions and took me to the video shop to buy a blue film…
We gossiped and she told me about her boy friend whom she had found in her college..we recalled those golden days spent together during our premature life. I wish i could revert to those years.
“lots of days have elapsed without hearing a joke..” i said..
“wanna hear one?” she said ..
“yeah sure”
“Then here it is, Two men were sitting outside a clinic…
One of them was crying like hell so the second person asked,
Why are u crying??
I came here for the blood test, the first person replied.
Are u afraid of it??
No, its not that. Actually they cut my finger during the blood test…
Hearing this, the second one started crying…
Now why are u crying??
Because m here for urine test”

Hearing this i fell down laughing..and it continued for about 5 minutes…after that i told her about twinkle and my new friends… she said she would like to meet twinkle as her ‘bhabi’ soon.. i gave her a smile. Only i knew what i was going through….
After shruti left..it was 10:30 am. Twinkle had asked me to visit her house as early as nine thirty. So i rinsed my face..rubbed on kilos of hair gel and squirted half the deodorant bottle on my entire body..thank god , humans invented these products , otherwise a shower daily would have been mandatory..
My walk en route for twinkle’s house was sluggish. Idk what but something unusual was running through my head. I got some instinct that something awful was about to happen…she had warned me not to call or demand for explanation, so there was no way to know her decision. My legs were taking me to her house but some part of my heart opposed it. Finally i stood at her compound gate. Before i could press the bell, her mom came out..
“hi kunj.. looking handsome..”
“thanks auntie..” i hope your daughter has the same opinion..i muttered “is twinkle there??”
“yeah she is coming..we are heading towards our relative’s place..” she said and walked in the direction of the car parked .
Twinkle walked out along her dad. I could not believe my eyes…all colours in the world seemed to merge to form ‘white’ of her Punjabi outfit. The blood running under my skin just seemed to clog..she walked in my direction while her dad turned towards the car..
“twinkle beta,, lets go.. we are already late..” her mom called out.
“ we will talk later..” she said and turned around to walk to the car. I stood still like a statue.. she didn’t even care to peek back at me. She sat in the car and drove off. Tears rolled down my cheeks; somehow i controlled them and walked back home. Mom had already left for the office…i went to my bedroom nd threw myself on the bed. Tears resumed their flow. I didnt try to stop them, neither did they stopped on their own…
So guys by this we come to the end of another chapter.. this was the continued part as i couldn’t complete it yesterday… i knw most of u have a lot of questions regarding twinkle.. but my suggestion is to wait till the next update…. do throw ur comments.. as i felt it was a bit less in my last update.. bt i wont complain coz it was merely a chapter.. but today i hope this was better.. so plzzz comment.. love u all stay blessed…

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  1. Maggi


    1. Tara

      thanks dear 🙂

  2. Good job Tara
    post next one asap

    1. Tara

      thank u payal..
      next update on tuesday…or monday at night

  3. Lovely….
    Post soon nxt part….

    1. Tara

      thank u sana..

  4. SidMin

    Loved it Tara And Me and Kunj brother-sister?? I mean seriously awesome Loved it and mine And Kunj’s conversation were awesome and that joke too So me and my boyfriend Ha 😉 and I taught Kunj all these s*x talks ??Loved it 🙂 Post soon and All the best for your exams 🙂
    Love you yar 🙂

    1. Tara

      hahahaa… ikr…
      i was scared if u would say “how dare u portray me as such a girl” or something like that…
      but m happy u liked it..
      yes u n ur bf.. lol
      thanks for the cmmnt..btw
      love u too yaar

  5. Fan

    Super epi tara!

    1. Tara

      thank u dear..
      btw u a girl or a guy??

      1. Fan

        Hey tara!..as u don’t know anything about me..let me introduce myself-
        I am a girl..i am studying in 12th grade n i am 16 yrs old…also i am a crazy fan of ur writing…u know i have been on tu for quite a long time now..n i read ur 1st ff on twinj from the starting…i was crazy silent reader who nvr used to comment…anyways enough of my stupid talks…btw if u want to know more about me like my name n other stuff..we will have to be friends first..n i would love to make frnds on tu..god this is probably the longest comment i have ever typed!!..btw all the best for ur English exam?..rock the test!

  6. Aww loved this surprise ??.. keep giving more surprises as I love them??.. haha.. the epi was damn amazing.. loved kunj n shruti’s bond.. it was awesome.. n how open they were.. hehe.. n poor kunj??.. hmm have a lot of qns abt twinkle but no problem 🙂 will wait for ur next update.. do cont soon ?

    1. Tara

      thanks a lot dear…
      i know who dont like surprises..??
      bt u wont get any surprise tmmrw…as next chappy on tuesday..
      feeling bad for kunj??
      dont worry.. everything will be fine…
      stay tuned..

  7. Hey di…this was something I would cheer Kudos for!!..
    Amazing yaar
    ..bechare Kunj ke haal bilkul mere jaisa hai…

    1. Tara

      hahaha lol..
      tum bilkul aise ho kya??
      bohut hi interesting bat hain…
      btw thank u so much…

      1. Yup..abhi Kunj ka haal mere jaisa hai..mere life ki Twinkle bhi mujhe reject kar rahi hai..though my parents are rich enough.. And I am damn handsome too..ab kahoge apne much miyaa mitthu toh its true that I love my face and hair yaar..God has made me taking lot of time??

        Meri wali Twinkle mujhe bhaav nahi deti..and mere life main abhi abhi ek shruti aayi hai..though we don’t talk these kind of things…but still…

        Pray that mam se mam meri vali Twinkle maan jaaye???

  8. Loveleen

    sry dr fr nt cmntng fr so long….episd ws awesm….poor kunj didn’t get twinki s attention….waiting fr nxt part….

    1. Tara

      oh.. loveleen..i mean utu.. where were u?/
      i missed ur cmnts..
      anyway happy u did it 2day..
      next part on tuesday…
      love ya

    1. Tara

      thanks sanju..

  9. Ramya

    Hey Nice one

    1. Tara

      thanks a lot dear

  10. Very nice…

    1. Tara


  11. Chiku

    Awesome ❤️❤️?

    1. Tara

      thanks meri fruto…( umm this is ur new name.. chiku which is a fruit…so fruto)
      hope u dont mind.. 😛

      1. Chiku

        I dont mind????

  12. It was amazing ….Tara ..it was very nice
    N plzzz yrr amu ne kya likha hai plzzz batana plzzzz
    N yrr tu bhut accha likhti hai yrr
    I love…




    Your ff ????.



    Areeeee udas mat hona ….

    …… I love u to infinity …..sabse jyada…..

    Plzzz post soon ..I m waiting for u ….n your ff ….

    1. Tara

      arey aamu said she would continue writing only if she gets cmmnt.. as she will not be able to cmnt in others ff so she fears no one will do the same..
      bt i guess she is better now..
      thanks btw..
      love u too yaar..

  13. Sayeeda

    Amazing episode…. awesome one…. loved it to the core…..

    Love you??

    1. Tara

      thanks sayeeda dear..
      love u too

  14. R.S.H.H.P

    Amazing ☺????☺

    1. Tara

      thanks dear

  15. Panchiii

    Nyc update tara….. wtng fr d nxt one…. love u ????

    1. Tara

      thanks panchii..
      next part on tuesday

  16. Shreya098

    Amazing Tara..

    she wore white dress …I thought she’ll wear red…but..???..

    Mere kunj ka dil tod diya..??

    I am hell excited for the next one… Plzzzz post it soon..

    1. Tara

      aww.. dont cry sweeto..
      kunj ka dil tuta hain i know..
      bt dont wry..
      thank u btw
      next update on tuesday..

  17. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing shocking suspense full epi

    1. Tara

      thanks dear…
      ok lets see

  18. Wooowwww Tara……..it was soooooo nyyycccc.. …I just luved it……… waiting for the next one

    1. Tara

      thanks dear.. its posted..

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