“My obsessive lover” by alia and dolly chapter 11

Hey guys ..it’s alia back again …thanks for the beautiful comments ..

Thanks for the wishes too dears …

Here u go with the next episode ,

Sanskar : swara u will always be with me and will never leave me na

He was holding her hands …swara tightens her grip on his hand

Swara (smiles & tears) : never Sanskar …don’t worry

Sanskar smiles : we will always have a evergreen friendship swara …it’s only swara and Sanskar ….

You u know good days don’t stay with u forever for a longer time ….soon the bad days comes to swasan also

It was leaving time of Sanskar …he was going to join in collage ….

Swara was standing in the school gate , while Sanskar was also standing there …

He was holding her hand and convincing her to stop crying ..

Sanskar (controlling his tears) : swara ….I am not leaving u …it’s just I am next street ….we can meet everyday …

Swara (cries) ; but still …now who will teach me whenever I need ….?

She cries …Sanskar hugs her

Sanskar : swara come on …do u need your Sanskar to cry while leaving the school ..huh !

Swara nods NO

Sanskar : then come on , smile …give me the million dollar smile …now

Swara smiles …Sanskar also smiles

Sanskar : that’s my girl …OK now it’s time …let me leave now …tomorrow we will meet at park at 5 OK ..

Swara nods ….

Sanskar again hugs her and bids bye to her …swara also waves bye …

Saying this he leaves in car ….swara stands there till he vanishes from her eyes …

Swara turns and looks at the school remembering their days and moments !

From that day …everything changed even though they meet everyday ….they weren’t satisfied …

They needed each other very badly …soon by this the time flew’s away swara comes to 12th

One fine day ,

Swara was sitting and chatting with her gang

Kavya : hmm swara not spending time with us huh !

Swara : it’s not like that ….I am just focused on studies ..

Rajat : oh oh madam ji ….when did u change huh

Swara : u know na my di….she is pressureizing me yaar

Kavitha : it’s OK yaar leave it….next year we r going to collage na …it’s gonna be very exciting

Swara smiles now she can with Sanskar whole day …but destiny had its own plan…

Later that day

Swasan meets in park

Sanskar (smiling) : swara tomorrow is valentine’s day …

Swara (smiling) ; ya .

Sanskar (blushing) : swara I thought to propose

Swara also blushes …

Sanskar (blushing) ; propose Tina (his gf) and make her officially mine …

Swara was shocked ….her eyes gets wet due to tears …..but she controls it from flowing

Swara (controlling tear’s & smiles) : oh …I ….am ..really happy for u ….and her …..very big day na tomorrow

Sanskar (smiling) : ya swara …I am going propose her in front of everyone in valentine’s party …that’s organised in moonlight hotel

Swara : oh …very good …Sanskar I have some work…can I leave to school in have to pack ..because tomorrow school finishe’s na

Sanskar : oh OK ..shall I drop u

Swara : no no …no thanks….

Sanskar smiles ……swara leaves hurriedly crying

That night

Swara was crying lying on Kavya’s lap .

Swara ; that’s it Kavya tomorrow he will propose her and she will be his …. (crying)

Kavya couldn’t find words to control her …

Swara : that’s it …everything over …the friendship …the love of mine for 5 years all over rna ….

Kavya : swara plz …control ….swara …if he is your life …plz plz ….go and confess your feeling’s to him …I am sure he will accept u …swara .

Swara wipes her tears ..

Swara : will he ..

Kavya : yes swara…he will ….

Swara smiles ……and hugs Kavya ….

But destiny isn’t always fair with good people / bad people…..

It was the big day for both of them (swasan)

Swara was in red and black lehenga with diamond necklace ….made her hair free with diamond earning’s making her look more beautiful….

Swara : I need to confess Sanskar ….because it’s my life time dream .

Saying this she leaves in car to the hotel

Not only her all her school members were present and we’re cheering for Sanskar …

Sanskar was busy talking with everyone …swara enters ..Sanskar looks at her and goes toward her

Sanskar hugs her …

Sanskar (smiles) ; thanks for coming swara

Swara : welcome sanskar …

Sanskar : you look very beautiful in traditional (smiling)

Swara blushes : thanks.

Swara (nervous) : sanskar …I …..I …lo….

Before she could say …his gf comes

Gf : sanskar it’s time …make me yours officially.

Sanskar smiles : we will talk later swara …

Saying this he leaves with her …to stage …everyone cheers for them

That’s it swara hope was gone ….everything was over …

She leaves from there crying …Kavya follows her ..

Swara goes to the exit but the bg (bodyguards) doesn’t allow her …

Bg : sorry ma’am …u are not allowed to go ..

Swara (cries) : what the hell…..leave me

Kavya from behind smiles …

Speaker : they won’t allow u my lady love

Swara was shocked …

Speaker : if u go from here then whom will I propose ….

Swara was stunned and startled …she turns and finds many people standing

With bouquets of different flowers ….they make way for her …

Some girls come catches either side of her hands ….two behind holds her lehenga from falling ….

The boys who are making way for her throws flowers on her …

Swara was not even blinking her eyes ….they lead her to hall …

Everyone claps for her …they shower the flowers

One by one girls comes and gives her one rose ..she collects all ..

They make her go to the stage ….swara eyes were searching for sanskar ..

Speaker : ahem ..ahem….

Swara looks down …Sanskar comes wearing a black tuxedo ..with a bunch of red flowers in his hand ….

Swara eyes were filled with tears ..

Sanskar : hmm….I am sanskar …sanskar maheshwari ..I was a very studious boy bit after seeing u …I have changed ad

A bad boy …a flirter …a lover boy …

Sorry for makinh u cry ahh…otherwise these decorations ..these shocks would have not been good ….

(swara smiles with tears)

Sorry for making u wait for 5 years …I wanted to know whether I have my effect on you or not

Now let’s forget the past …it’s time will u lock u to me …in my hands forever for a fresh future

Swara nods and comes running towards him…sanskar opens his arms …swara throws herself on him …

She hugs him very tightly ..

Everyone claps and cheers …..she kisses all over his face …..sanskar also kisses her forehead

He carries her in arms ….and goes to stage

Everyone showers flowers on them blessing them to stay forever locked in each other’s soul

Swasan both look at each other and smile’s

Precap : last part of flashback …continue with the present track .

Hope u all like it …comment if u like

Thanks for reading

20 comments

  1. priya

    Amazing… I hope this was swasan ff. But if they are this much in love then what happened that they ended up with each other’s bro and sis. And most imp ques…? Is sanky really a rapist in present track or thr is a story behind it?

  2. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Wow di,you became regular ha,good girl*pulling your cheeks…Now coming to the chappy,it’s excellent..Their friendship is beyond awsm..They look cute together😘😘..Aww,they promised to each other that they will be together forever.. But esa destiny main likka hain??. Well,that’s the big question..I hope their friendly bond stays forever(in present also)…The proposal part is best.. Keep going dear di.. Waiting for nxt..
    Take care
    Keep smiling😀

  3. Mariya

    Woww OMG loving swasan. Now my heart change dear . I want this as swasan ff dear plzz *pout* . don’t want broken swasan in present. Plzzzzzzz if possible make it as swasan , I will be veryyyyy Glad to U. Awesome swasan part…….bye……tc.

  4. Anurta

    |Registered Member

    Aammaazziinngg…………part
    Loved it to the core……😘😘😘
    The way sanskar proposed was really romantic yet sweet and cute loved the part especially very much…….😀😀😀
    Post next part soon Waiting for it……
    I know u r a regular writer but I can’t wait even more than an hour to read ur story…….
    I’m sry for not commenting in previous parts a big sssooooooorrryyy……………🙅🙅🙅🙅
    But from now I’ll be commenting regularly
    Post next part soon…….
    Take care……

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