Objection My Lord ! Ragsan (Few shots) (Introductory shot)

Hey it’s me Zuha Fatima, I am currently writing 3 FFs, one for Swaragini and 2 for Qubool hai…..So firstly let me introduce myself…Hi I am Zuha Fatima, And I hail from Pakistan, and yeah I am here to drive you into my storyland 😉
Anyways, I am starting a new FF based on Ragsan, and altough I am a big Raglak fan but I thought of a change and decided to write a few shots on Ragsan, it will be like 5 to 8 shots or maybe 10 but not a long story…but I will be posting it on weekends as I said busy with other FFs…well this FF is based on Ragsan as I told before, staring Ragini potrayed by Tejaswi Prakash and Sanskaar potrayed by Varun Kapoor…and a question for you guys do you want Swara (Helly Shah) and Laksh (Namish Taneja) to be a part of his FF…do tell me via comments…Now let’s begin…

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It was a bright, sunny day in Kolkata, a girl was walking on the road wearing a beautiful pink dress, with her dupatta pinned on her shoulder…As she was walking a car slide pass her making the mud fall over her…The girl fell down…A young gentleman stepped down the car…He bend down towards the girl…The boy asked, “Are you okay?”

The girl turned towards him and glared him, “Am I looking okay? You splashed the mud all over me and later made me fall down and then asking me are you okay!”
The boy was lost in the girl’s beauty and what she said, he indeed didn’t hear her as he was mesmerized in the beauty of the lady!

Tujhe dekha to ye jaana sanam plays in the BG

Tujhe dekha to yeh jaana sanam
(When I saw you I came to know sweet heart)
Pyaar hota hai deewana sanam
(That love is mad sweet heart)
Ab yahan se kahan jaaye hum
(Now where should we go from here)
Teri baahon mar jaaye hum
(We will die in your embrace)

The boy was interverned by the girl.

The girl yelled, “Now will you apologize or not?”
The boy said, “Yeah…no…I mean yes! I am sorry Miss…”
The girl replied, “Miss.Ragini Gadodia!”
The boy continued, “So I am sorry Ms. Ragini Gadodia!”
Ragini said, “Mister..”
The boy replied, “Sanskaar Maheshwari!”
Ragini continued, “Now Mr.Maheshwari, my clothes are already dirty because of you..”
Before Ragini could reply Sanskaar started, “What do you mean by me? You were walking near the mud pool so it is your fault! And for your kind information I have apologized Ms.Gadodia!”
Ragini yelled, “Wah ji Wah! It is a good way of blaming others for your mistake!”
Sanskaar yelled back, “My mistake? Now here is a mud pool so what is my mistake?”
Ragini said, “It is useless to talk to you!”
Sanskaar replied, “Same here!”

They both apart their ways…Screen freezes on the faces of Ragsan…

Precap: Sanskaar and Ragini come face to face again…Both are lawyers and are opponents for a case…Courtroom drama awaits your attention!!

So here it ends, kmow this one was a short one but next time a longer one, if I get a good response ….

70 comments

  1. Sonya

    |Registered Member

    awesome intro dear
    ragsan first meet n fight
    now got it y did u keep the name as objection lord
    bcs both r lawyer lol

    sanskaar is mesmerize by ragini
    but how will he react after seeing her in course
    as his opponents too

    update soon dear

  2. xyz

    You idiot! you are stupid just like ur cheap writings, disgusting, I dont understand how TU accepts such cheap stories, u are stupid that I know but don’t take ur readers stupid, U have copied this idea from Dehleez that I know very well, you ba***rd!
    Go to hell with your stories??

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Look dear, I didn’t copied it frm some where, and yeah if you think that it is a copy of dehleez, then u are mistaken dear, I dont even watch that serial!

      • Arshi

        |Registered Member

        and s.z.fz. … its really interesting dear… i usually dont read many ffs…but the theme impressed me a lot… eagerly waiting for next part… and dont give attention to those who s just sitting to give criticism…

      • Zuha Fatima

        |Author

        Thanks dear Arshi,by the way my name is Zuha, those are my initials 😛 and yeah I don’t mind such comments…so let it be 🙂
        And thanks for the love and support!
        Love u dear ♥♥♥
        Zuha fatima.

    • Arshi

      |Registered Member

      hold ur tongue u… **** watever…. how telly update publish such comments…. its her choice of writing..wat the hell is ur problem…. first write one fanfic and then dare to comment like this in another wall… disgusting people

    • Halima

      |Registered Member

      What the hell XYZ… How can you say this to Zuha? She is original and not fake like you… So mind your tongue okay? She doesn’t steal anything, how can you say this? This is not stolen from Dehleez, if you watch Dehleez properly then you would now… Adarsh was an IAS officer and Swadheenta was a lawyer and in here both are lawyers, so if you don’t know anything then don’t say… Sorry if I sound rude but it’s similar to me saying you stole the XYZ from the alphabet… ?

      • Zuha Fatima

        |Author

        Hey Halima api, I am perfectly fine, I don’t care for such comments!
        And thanks for supporting!
        And yeah I don’t know much about Dehleez coz I have not watch any episode of it as it does not air at Pakistan!
        Love u!

    • Sunehri

      |Registered Member

      So rude ! I better write ff .. then u will come to know ? and by the way how can u use such a cheap word bastard !!! As halima said she didn’t copy ! And I’m really surprised as u r bashing her in this ff and praising her in her other ff !!!! Sorry if I hurt u but I have to mind your tounge. … and yeah if u watch dehleez properly then u will understand ???? zuha my dear don’t care about such stupid comments … myself nus halima Sarah kriya sanju heena we all are with u ?

      • Zuha Fatima

        |Author

        Thanks dear Sunehri, you did a lot for me! You are the main reason coz of which I am writing! LOVE u dear ♥♥
        And this bashing is nothing in front of the ♥/ support of my friends!
        LOVE U♥♥

    • Kashfia

      Hey don’t u dare say anything to my sister, and mind your tongue, if you don’t like it then show your dislike she will not mind, but using bad lang. is very pathetic! You know she takes time out for you guys in her hectic schedule and sometimes she feel as she can’t write, but writing is her passion, and one more thing for your information maybe Apia (Zuha) will not like it but she wants to study law, and that is why she wrote something different, apart from typical love stories, and yeah lastly but not the least, you blabbered a lot against her but she did not use bad or abusive language and mentioned you as dear!!

      Apia you have to go a long way, so do not take such silly comments seriously, and I know you will not?

    • Kashfia

      Hey don’t u dare say anything to my sister, and mind your tongue, if you don’t like it then show your dislike she will not mind, but using bad lang. is very pathetic! You know she takes time out for you guys in her hectic schedule and sometimes she feel as she can’t write, but writing is her passion, and one more thing for your information maybe Apia (Zuha) will not like it but she wants to study law, and that is why she wrote something different, apart from typical love stories, and yeah lastly but not the least, you blabbered a lot against her but she did not use bad or abusive language and mentioned you as dear!!

      Apia you have to go a long way, so do not take such silly comments seriously, and I know you will not?

      And thanks to all who supported my sissy?

    • Nusz Khan

      |Registered Member

      You need to shut the hell up, if I find be you I will teach you a lesson ?? Are you some sort of superhero??? Wait no I watched the very few episodes of dahleez it was nothing compared to this you idiot!!! So get your facts right and get the hell out of here. xx enjoy your day.

      ~Nusz

      • Zuha Fatima

        |Author

        Relax babes…I don’t care for such comments….and thanks a lot for it….You guys are true friends , seriously! LOVE U!
        Your darling,
        Zuha.

    • kriya

      Awsm zuha u continue it…….n u xyz how can u say such word to zuha……if any writer writes smthng its her imagination n if u know how to write anything like ff,few shots n os then u write ur own dont bash others…..n abt dehleez serial i hv watched few epi n i think u hvnt watched dehleez serial properly……before judging others first judge urself how u r……i agree with halima n sunu u dont hv rights to bash anyone……

      • Zuha Fatima

        |Author

        Hey kriya! Thanks for supporting me! And leave it! It is not a big deal! And love you dear! Grateful to u for the support!

        _Zuha Fatima.

    • Sanju

      What The hell XYZ???Praising her in her qh ff n bashing her here??She has not copied from anywhere understood?U better mind your language??How dare you use the word bastard huh!! U dont understand huh how TU accepts ur so called ✌Cheap✌stories rite…i dont understand how TU accepts such BAD words like these??Sorry if im rude..but this is really wrong. And i never knew that Adarsh is a lawyer huh!!N u say that its copied from Dehleez??Veryy Funny huh!

    • Sanju

      And Please..later do not give lame excuses that somebody else wuz using ur device n commentes etc etc etc….?

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  4. Halima

    |Registered Member

    Awesome Zuha…. You rocked it, it’s a lovely storyline, can’t wait, love you?❤️ Fee Amanallah ?

    (SuNusZuRahLima❤️)

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      I am happy you enjoyed and appreciated the storyline!
      I am grateful of the love and support you have given!
      I love you soooooooooo much!!!
      Fee Amanallah!

      _Zuha Fatima

      (SUNUSZURAHLIMA ROCKS > 3)

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Thanks a ton dear…or much more 😉
      Seriously grateful of you guys the way you supported me…Thanks a lot!!

      Love you 2!

      _Zuha Fatima

      (SUNUSZURAHLIMA ROCKS > 3)

  5. Sanju

    N Zuha dear..this is wonderful!!Pleasee continue alright??N dont mind those bashers like XYZ?
    Take care??

  6. Fatarajo

    |Registered Member

    hey xyz first of all from which angle it seems like copy of dehleez n btw in dehleez it was the female lead vs her saas not the male lead as i m watching dehleex from day 1 and its not at all copy of dehleez just that ragsan r lawyers doesnt mean it becomes dehleez, so many shows have lawyers, so please think twice and u have no rights to bash writers u dont have any idea how much effore they put in so please dont hurt them with offensive comments its a request

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