Oberoi family moments (Episode 1)

Some major turns – Shivay confessed his love 2 her wiffey Anika after her come back from her short term comma. Anika too confessed.
Pinky doesn’t accept Anika as her bahu but as her daughter.
She came back 2 Oberoi Mansion
ALL BECOME WELL ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

FEW DAYS LATER
IN SHIVIKA ‘S ROOM

Shivay : Anika , aaj mai busy hu to direct dinner me aaunga so no kitchen time
Aaj hotel se dishes mangua lena as u know well
Nowadays I don’t like maid’s food .
Anika : Uski koi zarrorat ni h Shivay aaj dinner mai bana rahi hu
Shivay : Really ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€ Anika r u serious
Anika : Ha to isme itni khirkitor smile dene ki kya baat h
Aapko kya lagta h mai khana ni bana sakti ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Shivay : isme lagne vali konso baat h Anika
I know about it very well
Anika : Mai bana sakti hu aur mai banaungi aurwo bhi aapse accha
Aap khud khub maje se khaenge
No ni ni aap to tab khaenge na jab aapko mileage aapko ko mangvana h mangva lijea kyoki mai aapko iska taste bhi ni dene vali ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
Shivay : Thank God ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
Anika : Omru kaha ho tum dono

Just then Omru enter

Rudra : Gud morning bhaiya bhabhi
Om : gud morning both of u
Shivay : morning omru โ˜บโ˜บโ˜บ
Anika : kahe ki Gud morning meri to morning hi buri hui
Rudra : Kya hua bhabhi
Om : Shivay tune hi kuch kiya hoga tum dono ki larai hui
Rudra : Bhabhi aap bolokya hua ???
Shivay : Ooooohhhhhh hllo u both tell me 1 thing tum dono mere Bhai ho ya Anika ke
Dekh raha hu mai aajkal tum dono Anika ki kuch zaada hi side le rahe ho
Not fair ha ๐Ÿ˜ฃ๐Ÿ˜ฃ๐Ÿ˜ฃ
Rudra : O, kahi se jalne ki smell as rahi h na
Om nd Anika laughed loudly ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
Shivay : Shut up Rudra
Anika : Om Rudra tum dono ko ask mai apne haato se dinner bana ke khilaungi
Rudra : Really bhabhi yes yes yes aap na duniya ki best bhabhi ho ๐Ÿ‘’๐Ÿ‘’๐Ÿ‘’ U r de best my superbhabhi
Om : Wow !!!!! Anika seriously I m really very excited
Anika : Awwwww !!!!!!
Mere devars kitne cute h
Rudra : Bhabhi, O ka to ni pata but u r right I m literally very cute

Om patted on his head
Rudra : U know what bhabhi mai wo boring continental dishes se bore ho chuka hu
Shivay : Tu to gaya Rudra ๐Ÿ”ซ๐Ÿ”ซ๐Ÿ”ซnikal ja mere room se warna

Anika comes in front of Rudra 2 save him from his angry young bro
Anika : Warna kya Billu ji
Anika walks forward
Anika : Aap shayad bhul rahe h par Ab ye sirf Aapka ni mera bhi kamra h
Aur Rudra mujhse Milne aaya h so usse dur hi rahiye to accha h
Samjhe ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Shivay What de f**k !!!!!!!
Rudra : When my sweet nd cute bhabhi is here then y 2 fear ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Luv u bhabhi ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

Om : Ok ok an mai chalta hu
MERI art galary ka remodelling chal raha h so mai chalta hu
Bye every 1 ๐Ÿ™‹
Rudra : BYE O
Shivay : Tujhe to mai baad me dekhunga bhabhi ke chamche
Meri important meeting h mai bhi chalta hu
Anika : Ha to jana h to jaiye na roke kisne rakha h
Shivay : best of luck Anika ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Anika : bare aaye best of luck bolne wale ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

Om nd Shivay went from there
Rudra : Bhabhi mai bhi chalta hu mujhe bhi Jim jana h
Don’t be nervous bhabhi wo SSO h to aap bhi ASSO h. ………..
Anika Shivay Singh Oberoi
Anika : Ha Rudra, tum Sahi kah rahe ho
Rudra; Always ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜Œ

Rudra also went from there
Now only Anika was present there

Anika : Maine kah to diya par Mai bhi Janti hu ki mai kitni great cook hu
Mujhe to Sahi se kuch bhi banane ni aate h
Par Ab to mujhe banana hi padega
Ab mai kya karu

Sometimes later
In Shivay ‘s car
Shivay phone rings
He picked de call nd answered

Shivay : Hllo
Another side (AS) : ________________
Shivay : What de f**k! !!!!!!!!
Meeting cancelled suddenly
How is it possible? ???
What happened? ???
AS : ___________________
Shivay : nd u r informing me now
AS : __________________
Shivay : What sorry? ???
Listen from now onwards mujhe turant inform karoge
Understand

Shivay cut de call nd instructed de driver 2 move back 2 Oberoi mansion
Driver back de car

In de kitchen
Anika nd Chulbul r present
Anika : Chulbul maine challenge accept to kar liya h but ab kya karu mujhse ni ho payega
Chulbul (Cb) : Anika bhabhi kossis kariye kossis kariye
kossis se San ho jata h
Kahte h na wo
Kossis karne walo ki kabhi hat ni hoti
Anika : Mujhe pata h chulbul lekin w/o bagad billa na ๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜ž
CB : Dekhiye ga bhabhi ji

Khanna itna accha banega ki bare bhaiya ungliya chat chat kar khaenge
Anika : Thank u Chulbul ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
CB : Man me shanka lag gai Lanka ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
Anika : Kya hua tumhe
CB : bhabhi mai to gai
Wo omkara ji ne hame unke gallery aane ko kaha tha aur hum abhi tak yahi h
Anika : Ooooh !!!!!!! Chulbul tum jao jaldi
CB : Par aap akele ho jayengi
Anika : koi baat ni chulbul mai manage kar lungi tum jao jaldi
CB : To mai chalti hu
Anika : ๐Ÿ˜ต๐Ÿ˜ต๐Ÿ˜ต๐Ÿ˜ต๐Ÿ˜ตhmmmm !!!!!!!!!!??

Precap : Anika’s special dishes
Shivika nok – jhok
Shivika Shivika nd only Shivika ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

A big thank u 2 my dr ishqies because of which I inspired much
Nd able 2 write my own ff
No matter it is good or bad but u all de reason of my inspiration
Especially AASHTA DI, VERNA DI , MAHA DI, NILASH DI, VHM DI
nd u all too but a bit little than them CHANDINI , AHAANA DI, GANGU DI,
JENNY, JERRY, ANAH

sorry if I miss any name please mention in de comments if I m
As my memory is very weak nd poor in this aspect
UR ff really inspired me………..

Nd a tight nd warm hug nd thank u 2 all my dr ishqies
I know this is too large if u don’t like it please comment about it also
All comments nd suggestions r welcome whole heartedly
Luv u ishqies ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

89 comments

  1. Nilash

    Nilash

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    Amayaa yeeeeeeeeeeeee I was willing to read your ff though I never mentioned it thank God you listened to my secret wish… ya ek aur baat shivika ka confession wala scene please likho na flashback me padhne me maza ayega….
    Hey Amayaa what about some chulkaaraa moment in next to next episode with Rudy’s interference
    Amayaa it’s up to you I will respect every decision of your’s
    Dekho tumhari bimari abb mujhe ho gayi itna bara comment please sorry agar zyada bara ho gaya ho to…

    • Amayaa

      Amayaa

      |Author

      Nilash di
      I don’t like short comments from my dr ones but a long long 1 like ur comment
      YA di u r right
      I learn ur secret wish secretly nd wrote this ff
      OKKK di I’ll definitely show this in precap in a new way in de next part
      ND Chulkara moments with Rudy interference
      Amazing idea di
      I’ll surely add this

      • Nilash

        Nilash

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        awww… my dr amayaa ak baat kahun wayse to mere dimaag se idea hardly nikalta hai but it’s you dr a very close friend of mine and ha mai bhi ye question puchne waali thi jo Ahaana ne pucha mai to bakwaas likhti rahti hu jo dimaag me aata hai wo likhti hu to tum ye mat kahna ki maine inspire kiya hai haan i secretly wished to read you ff and it happened… amayaa dr shivika mamoent ke liye mujhse aur wait nahi hota please jaldi post karo na next part…. pata hai subha se mai atleast 10-12 times tumhara first episode padh chuki hu.. ab please post the next one pleaseee…

    • Amayaa

      Amayaa

      |Author

      Hmmmm NILASH DI
      U r absolutely wrong
      Ur ff gave me inspiration dr
      Who said this 2 u that it ffis bakwaa
      It is not
      U r really crazy di
      I m also a big big fan of Shivika so I understand ur eagerness
      But di i m sorry but this is a weekend gift for all of u
      That’s why
      I’ll post de next part next week
      I m very glad that u like my ff so much
      But dr u have 2 wait UPTIL next week

      • Nilash

        Nilash

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        Amayaa kameeni jis gun se Anika ko shoot ki tum mujhe ussse goli maar do nhi to Shivika k chaaku se stab kar do par please ye mat karo please.๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”

    • Amayaa

      Amayaa

      |Author

      Nilash di
      Y r u saying like this
      I can’t understand
      Please do clear 2 me
      Nd don’t say like this again
      Is pagal pan ke liye mai hi kaafi hu di aap aise mat bolo na

      • Nilash

        Nilash

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        Amayaa dr dying to read the next part and you will post it next week๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜ž but it’s ok Sabra ka fal meetha hota hai oh nhi sabra ka fal Shivika romance hota hai… hehehehehe dr will be waiting for it eagerly and this part of your post inspired me a lot for my ff… ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ love you loads dr ๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—

    • Amayaa

      Amayaa

      |Author

      Ooooh Nilash di so this is de reason
      U r right
      Sabra ka phal meetha hota h
      What r u saying
      I I I inspired u
      Like really
      Please don’t say like this
      Mai pahle hi jam pagal no hu
      Ab to Mar hi jaungi

      • Nilash

        Nilash

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        Ohhh my darlo please mar mat jaana Shivika ke confession scene k pahle or else you’ll be missing the most awaited event of your life๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ just kidding…. well I’m waiting for your next part and ha usse iss part se bhi long banana it’s my humble request dear๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

    • Amayaa

      Amayaa

      |Author

      Nilash di
      Now I m thinking 2 post de next part tomorrow only instead of next Saturday
      As i got such a beautiful responses
      WHAT SAY ??????????

      • Nilash

        Nilash

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        Yessss yessss yippee…… ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ mere to aankho se khushi ke aansu nikal aaye loooovvveeee you…. you are so sweet..

  2. Arya๐Ÿ˜˜

    Woww nyc1๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ™Œ plz next update soon I’m waiting… Seriously supb yr

  3. Aastha_Reddy

    Aastha_Reddy

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    Amayaa…I saw the craziness of you here with Shivaay.. a naughty one…
    and for Annika bhabhi…koshish karne walon ki kabhi haar nahi hoti… bass beijjati ho jati hai…hope bhabhi ki saath aisa na ho…and bhaiyya should help her in learning cooking in a romantic way….
    Rudra toh Annika bhabhi ka mantra jap raha hai….
    Waiting for the next crazy part….from my crazy sweety Amaya…
    Love you…..

    • Amayaa

      Amayaa

      |Author

      YA di i m really crazy for Shivay ……….
      Wait wait wait as a sis only
      Really di u r amazing
      Please don’t say further
      Warna mere next part ka pura summary hi pata chal jaega
      Luv u di ๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™

      • Aastha_Reddy

        Aastha_Reddy

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        Ha ha… Amayaa… main toh anjane mein teri ff ka Oh my maatha karne chali thi….I will keep guessing like this…for your next parts also… but I love you… just remember the three magical words from Astha Reddy….lolz…

  4. shab khan

    wow amayaa wow
    it was very awsome and kitchen nok jhok was really good but please han make anika’s dishwes good kyun ki she is asso so i want her to win the challenge

    • Amayaa

      Amayaa

      |Author

      I m so sorry SHAB but I can’t fulfil ur wish now
      I also want Anika bhabhi 2 win
      But I can’t
      Well dr
      Wait for de next part that 1 be really khirkitor

  5. Ahaana

    Ahaana

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    Amaaya when did i inspired u …. aisemat kr yarr itna pyara sa cute sa likha hai aur upr keh ri h maine inspire kiya .. dusro.ka toh pata ni but maine kab kiya …. aur vaise itna cute saa writer hoga toh uske cutness uske writing mai dikhegi hi ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜..
    but i don’t know why j included my name but still may be u might hav found inspiration from me then a very big thanks from my side for including me in ur thanksgiving. .
    luv uhh

  6. Bhavana

    Hey amayaa!..Well i definitely know u from ur long,long,looonnnngggg cmmnts…
    Nd i was literally shocked as how could someone talk sooooo much…
    Well i am really happy that u finally posted ur first ever ff…congratulations…nd its marvellous…fantastically written…eagerly waiting for the nxt…update asap!

    • Amayaa

      Amayaa

      |Author

      YA bhavna
      U assume right dr
      I become de most talkative girl when i come 2 de TU PAGE
      Nd thank u dr for liking my ff so much

  7. Amayaa

    Amayaa

    |Author

    YA Ahaana di u r right
    Ur ff is so good which inspired me extremely ……………
    Hmmmm I m really very happy that u like my ff so much
    My happiness is beyond my reach ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

  8. preetha

    Hey plz post it in English plzzzzzz bcoz I don’t know any other language. ..but nice episode yaar. ..

  9. annanyaabitha

    If u don’t mind , I have small request, if u can post ur FF in English I don’t know Hindi pls……….

    • Amayaa

      Amayaa

      |Author

      Annanyaa dr
      I don’t mind it nd i also want 2 post in English
      That is easy for me also
      But de dialogues r suit in Hindi only

  10. Sofiya. S.

    Awesome update ๐Ÿ‘. Loved it totally ๐Ÿ˜Š Eagerly waiting for the next one. Post soon dear ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š… ..

  11. Jerry_36

    Jerry_36

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    Hey Amaaya you are such a wonderful writer. So good yaar. Loved your work. Shivika moments were too awesome. Great going yaar !! Keep us entertaining. I am eagerly looking forward to your updates. And thank you so much for mentioning my name. I will also try to give you wonderful updates. Do post soon. Thus one was fabulousโ˜บ

    • Amayaa

      Amayaa

      |Author

      Awwww really Jerry
      I m a good writer
      Thank u dr
      I can’t believe it …………
      Nd this is just a reflection of ur creativity nd skillllll
      Thank u ONCE AGAIN Jerry
      The next part will updated next week ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

  12. Archiya

    Archiya

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    Hi Amayaa
    Kaha se shuru Karu..ok will start from the devars n bhabhi moment, actually I miss them a lot, I used to enjoy aniru convo,which they don’t show anymore.. Tat made your ff unique.

    Coming to shivika, I loved their convo,more than their romance, I love their nok jhok

    I liked it tat u kept proper pacing between the lines, made it easier to read.

    All in all I really loved ur ff.. Keep writing an pls post the link of the next part on the IB TU page..

    • Archiya

      Archiya

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      Hoping that my an other comments bring a lovely smile on ur face๐Ÿ˜‚:) As u had said tat if I don’t read ur ff, u r gonna ๐Ÿ˜ข ๐Ÿ˜ข

    • Amayaa

      Amayaa

      |Author

      YA Archiya
      I too liked de Bhabhi Devar convo de most
      Hmmmm Shivika ‘s nok jhok nd care for each other is more good than romance between them. ……..
      But dr u r de member of blushing club right
      Not only de member but also the head
      Then how it is possible? ?????

      Well dr thank u very much for loving this nd for giving ur precious time 2 my ff
      I’ll surely post de link on ishqbaaz usual page
      But for this U have 2 wait for a week
      As i post de next part next week ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
      YA archiya dr
      Ur comment bring a khirkitor smile on my face
      Thank u once again ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

      • Archiya

        Archiya

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        Amayaa
        If u give me blush an nok jhok in the same episode.. Than of course I will chose the blush part ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š being a member of the blush club

  13. Gayathri.visu

    Gayathri.visu

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    Amayaa u r just crazy… Aniru convo is amazing. They r the bestest bhabhi-devar! Coming to Shivika’s nok-jhok sooo cute… U know what I really loves Shivika’s nok-jhok more than romantic scenes! And the kitchen scenes r very nice dr…
    But I want ask u 1question, why u will post next part next week??

    • Amayaa

      Amayaa

      |Author

      Awwwww
      Thank u di
      YA ur AMAYAA is really a crazy girl
      I too luv their nok jhok nd aniomru moment de most
      Wo di actually
      I wanted 2 give a weekend gift as a refreshment for all of u

      De next part is ready
      But u have 2 wait for a week
      Oooh so sorry for this di

  14. Chandini

    Amaaya omg….seriously you rocked with the first epi itself๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™anika and rudra๐Ÿ˜‚I love them they are some rare pagal combo….caring and loving shivaay๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
    And one more question how and when did i inspire you

    • Amayaa

      Amayaa

      |Author

      Agree Chandu
      They r real pagal
      Aur hum bhi to kam ni h
      Mental ishqies (especially me)
      Hmmmmmm why all of u talking like this
      Chandu u didn’t inspire me but actually ur ff inspired me extremely
      Uske Samne ye kuch bhi ni

  15. Banita

    Amayaa it was awesome dear!!!!! ek dum khidki tod starting….. Shivika nokjhok was superb….. can’t wait more post asap…..

  16. Surbhi Sharma

    Amaaya .
    Huhh , mai kya bolu . Tum hi bata do yr . Speechless chor diya.
    Especially ani ru convo . Vo toh tumhara ff ko aur mast bana diya .
    Ab jaldi post kar na . Plzz ha .

    • Amayaa

      Amayaa

      |Author

      Surbhi Surbhi Surbhi
      U made my day dr
      Such a beautiful comment
      I m dancing like mad
      Thank u very much
      Hmmmmmmm so sorry dr but de next part will come on next week
      But believe me
      That 1 will also khirkitor

  17. VHM

    VHM

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    Amaayaa…the way you are chirpy …your FF is reflecting the same……..i am really in awe with the crazy Oberoi moments which we miss in the original serial…this is such a fresh breeze , a refreshment from routine …go lady go… i will just say you have a long way to go….and one day when you become a successful writer do remember us………if your first shot is so awesome then i can imagine how will the upcoming ones be……….kudos dear…way to go………..

    • Amayaa

      Amayaa

      |Author

      After reading ur beautiful comment
      I m too enjoying an awwww moment
      Thank u for appreciating me so lovingly
      But wait di
      ” Go lady go ” ni “go girl go”
      I m in 10th standard only
      A big big big THANK U 2 u di
      YA I’ll try my best 2 make de next part a khirkitor 1

  18. Verna

    Verna

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    Wow my dr.. u r such a good writer.. u didn’t even tell me.. really amazing FF.. superb and I know u r mad for shivika.. u r slaying it by ur work.. devar bhabi moments was fantastic.. and thanks for getting Om and Chulbul in this.. I loved those parts too..

    And u mentioned my name.. love u to sky.. but I don’t deserve this much big appreciation.. How u got inspired by my work I don’t know.. but u r really amazing writer dr.. keep writing and I’m ur fan for this FF.. Good luck my dr.. love u ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

    and sorry just now I found this link in maha’s FF.. so ly replied late dr..

    • Amayaa

      Amayaa

      |Author

      Awwwwwww
      Thank u very much Verna di
      I was desperately waiting for ur comments
      But its okkkkk
      No need 2 say sorry

      Di I thought 2 inform u as well on ur 1 of ff
      But I remembered that Hindi is difficult 2 understand 2 u
      I posted it in hindi only
      As anika’s words nd other dialogues suits in hindi only
      That’s why

      I m very glad that u like my ff so much
      Heyyyyyyy u r not but I m ur fan

      • Verna

        Verna

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        U r my darling regular reader.. how can I leave like that.. also I’m really happy tat u were waiting for my comment.. I should thank God for making me notice ur link..

        And yes, I had difficulties in understanding Hindi but I’m trying to learn this language now.. it’ll good practice for me when I article in Hindi.. so don’t hesitate dr..

        Thank u again for mentioning me in ur very first FF

  19. Anah

    Anah

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    hey dr…..
    i also wanna be part of ur drs list……but maybe i can’t (haha)
    bcoz u don’t like short comments from ur drs….
    simply spellbound….

    • Amayaa

      Amayaa

      |Author

      U r already my dr 1 anah
      See I gave u credit too
      Ur ff is amazing which inspired me much

      Hmmmm really I don’t like short comments from my dr ones
      But I have a way
      U too give long long comments
      ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

  20. B.k.maha

    B.k.maha

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    Its really awesome dr… And thank u so much for mentioned my name… I don’t know i really capable for this… But u are more than me dr… U are a awesome writer… And sry for this my late… Keep going dr…waiting for ur next episode egarly… Take care and love u my dr choty…

    • Amayaa

      Amayaa

      |Author

      Thank u as well as welcome MAHA DI
      Nd no need 2 say sorry

      Heyyyyyy Maha di u r really capable for it
      Nd lastly
      Thank u for calling me choti
      Now I feel myself much closure 2 u
      No need 2 wait more
      I’ll post de next part tomorrow only

  21. Maahi

    Awesome @amaaya dear…. anika in her full khidkitod avatar…. waiting for next episode…. and sry for commenting late….

  22. Savera

    Savera

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    Amayaa loved ur ff very much loved shivika cute fight ,omru were too good in supporting their bhabhi just loved it yr post soon

    • Amayaa

      Amayaa

      |Author

      Thank u dr
      But now no need 2 wait for it as 2nd part is not coming
      I m sorry but now I can’t type more

      2 times starting se likh ke post kar chuki
      Ab mujhse aur ni hoga

      TU PAGE is gr8 like CVS
      It rejected my ff 2 times
      The 1st 1 is due to in Hindi
      Nd de 2nd 1 is not posted nd whole article vanished

      That 1 is too long
      Now I m not in state 2 type more
      So bye dr

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