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Home»Fan Fiction»Oberoi family moments (Episode 1)
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Oberoi family moments (Episode 1)

AmayaaBy AmayaaApril 15, 201789 Comments6 Mins Read
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Some major turns – Shivay confessed his love 2 her wiffey Anika after her come back from her short term comma. Anika too confessed.
Pinky doesn’t accept Anika as her bahu but as her daughter.
She came back 2 Oberoi Mansion
ALL BECOME WELL ???

FEW DAYS LATER
IN SHIVIKA ‘S ROOM

Shivay : Anika , aaj mai busy hu to direct dinner me aaunga so no kitchen time
Aaj hotel se dishes mangua lena as u know well
Nowadays I don’t like maid’s food .
Anika : Uski koi zarrorat ni h Shivay aaj dinner mai bana rahi hu
Shivay : Really ????? Anika r u serious
Anika : Ha to isme itni khirkitor smile dene ki kya baat h
Aapko kya lagta h mai khana ni bana sakti ??
Shivay : isme lagne vali konso baat h Anika
I know about it very well
Anika : Mai bana sakti hu aur mai banaungi aurwo bhi aapse accha
Aap khud khub maje se khaenge
No ni ni aap to tab khaenge na jab aapko mileage aapko ko mangvana h mangva lijea kyoki mai aapko iska taste bhi ni dene vali ???
Shivay : Thank God ???
Anika : Omru kaha ho tum dono

Just then Omru enter

Rudra : Gud morning bhaiya bhabhi
Om : gud morning both of u
Shivay : morning omru ☺☺☺
Anika : kahe ki Gud morning meri to morning hi buri hui
Rudra : Kya hua bhabhi
Om : Shivay tune hi kuch kiya hoga tum dono ki larai hui
Rudra : Bhabhi aap bolokya hua ???
Shivay : Ooooohhhhhh hllo u both tell me 1 thing tum dono mere Bhai ho ya Anika ke
Dekh raha hu mai aajkal tum dono Anika ki kuch zaada hi side le rahe ho
Not fair ha ???
Rudra : O, kahi se jalne ki smell as rahi h na
Om nd Anika laughed loudly ???
Shivay : Shut up Rudra
Anika : Om Rudra tum dono ko ask mai apne haato se dinner bana ke khilaungi
Rudra : Really bhabhi yes yes yes aap na duniya ki best bhabhi ho ??? U r de best my superbhabhi
Om : Wow !!!!! Anika seriously I m really very excited
Anika : Awwwww !!!!!!
Mere devars kitne cute h
Rudra : Bhabhi, O ka to ni pata but u r right I m literally very cute

Om patted on his head
Rudra : U know what bhabhi mai wo boring continental dishes se bore ho chuka hu
Shivay : Tu to gaya Rudra ???nikal ja mere room se warna

Anika comes in front of Rudra 2 save him from his angry young bro
Anika : Warna kya Billu ji
Anika walks forward
Anika : Aap shayad bhul rahe h par Ab ye sirf Aapka ni mera bhi kamra h
Aur Rudra mujhse Milne aaya h so usse dur hi rahiye to accha h
Samjhe ???
Shivay What de f**k !!!!!!!
Rudra : When my sweet nd cute bhabhi is here then y 2 fear ???
Luv u bhabhi ???

Om : Ok ok an mai chalta hu
MERI art galary ka remodelling chal raha h so mai chalta hu
Bye every 1 ?
Rudra : BYE O
Shivay : Tujhe to mai baad me dekhunga bhabhi ke chamche
Meri important meeting h mai bhi chalta hu
Anika : Ha to jana h to jaiye na roke kisne rakha h
Shivay : best of luck Anika ???

Anika : bare aaye best of luck bolne wale ???

Om nd Shivay went from there
Rudra : Bhabhi mai bhi chalta hu mujhe bhi Jim jana h
Don’t be nervous bhabhi wo SSO h to aap bhi ASSO h. ………..
Anika Shivay Singh Oberoi
Anika : Ha Rudra, tum Sahi kah rahe ho
Rudra; Always ???

Rudra also went from there
Now only Anika was present there

Anika : Maine kah to diya par Mai bhi Janti hu ki mai kitni great cook hu
Mujhe to Sahi se kuch bhi banane ni aate h
Par Ab to mujhe banana hi padega
Ab mai kya karu

Sometimes later
In Shivay ‘s car
Shivay phone rings
He picked de call nd answered

Shivay : Hllo
Another side (AS) : ________________
Shivay : What de f**k! !!!!!!!!
Meeting cancelled suddenly
How is it possible? ???
What happened? ???
AS : ___________________
Shivay : nd u r informing me now
AS : __________________
Shivay : What sorry? ???
Listen from now onwards mujhe turant inform karoge
Understand

Shivay cut de call nd instructed de driver 2 move back 2 Oberoi mansion
Driver back de car

In de kitchen
Anika nd Chulbul r present
Anika : Chulbul maine challenge accept to kar liya h but ab kya karu mujhse ni ho payega
Chulbul (Cb) : Anika bhabhi kossis kariye kossis kariye
kossis se San ho jata h
Kahte h na wo
Kossis karne walo ki kabhi hat ni hoti
Anika : Mujhe pata h chulbul lekin w/o bagad billa na ???
CB : Dekhiye ga bhabhi ji

Khanna itna accha banega ki bare bhaiya ungliya chat chat kar khaenge
Anika : Thank u Chulbul ???
CB : Man me shanka lag gai Lanka ???
Anika : Kya hua tumhe
CB : bhabhi mai to gai
Wo omkara ji ne hame unke gallery aane ko kaha tha aur hum abhi tak yahi h
Anika : Ooooh !!!!!!! Chulbul tum jao jaldi
CB : Par aap akele ho jayengi
Anika : koi baat ni chulbul mai manage kar lungi tum jao jaldi
CB : To mai chalti hu
Anika : ?????hmmmm !!!!!!!!!!??

Precap : Anika’s special dishes
Shivika nok – jhok
Shivika Shivika nd only Shivika ?????

A big thank u 2 my dr ishqies because of which I inspired much
Nd able 2 write my own ff
No matter it is good or bad but u all de reason of my inspiration
Especially AASHTA DI, VERNA DI , MAHA DI, NILASH DI, VHM DI
nd u all too but a bit little than them CHANDINI , AHAANA DI, GANGU DI,
JENNY, JERRY, ANAH

sorry if I miss any name please mention in de comments if I m
As my memory is very weak nd poor in this aspect
UR ff really inspired me………..

Nd a tight nd warm hug nd thank u 2 all my dr ishqies
I know this is too large if u don’t like it please comment about it also
All comments nd suggestions r welcome whole heartedly
Luv u ishqies ???????

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    89 Comments

    1. Lilly on April 15, 2017 7:29 am

      Nice epi…

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 10:40 am

        Congo lily
        U r first 2 read nd comment my 1st ever ff
        Thank u for liking this ………..

    2. Nilash on April 15, 2017 8:12 am

      Amayaa yeeeeeeeeeeeee I was willing to read your ff though I never mentioned it thank God you listened to my secret wish… ya ek aur baat shivika ka confession wala scene please likho na flashback me padhne me maza ayega….
      Hey Amayaa what about some chulkaaraa moment in next to next episode with Rudy’s interference
      Amayaa it’s up to you I will respect every decision of your’s
      Dekho tumhari bimari abb mujhe ho gayi itna bara comment please sorry agar zyada bara ho gaya ho to…

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 10:30 am

        Nilash di
        I don’t like short comments from my dr ones but a long long 1 like ur comment
        YA di u r right
        I learn ur secret wish secretly nd wrote this ff
        OKKK di I’ll definitely show this in precap in a new way in de next part
        ND Chulkara moments with Rudy interference
        Amazing idea di
        I’ll surely add this

      • Nilash on April 15, 2017 12:08 pm

        awww… my dr amayaa ak baat kahun wayse to mere dimaag se idea hardly nikalta hai but it’s you dr a very close friend of mine and ha mai bhi ye question puchne waali thi jo Ahaana ne pucha mai to bakwaas likhti rahti hu jo dimaag me aata hai wo likhti hu to tum ye mat kahna ki maine inspire kiya hai haan i secretly wished to read you ff and it happened… amayaa dr shivika mamoent ke liye mujhse aur wait nahi hota please jaldi post karo na next part…. pata hai subha se mai atleast 10-12 times tumhara first episode padh chuki hu.. ab please post the next one pleaseee…

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 1:16 pm

        Hmmmm NILASH DI
        U r absolutely wrong
        Ur ff gave me inspiration dr
        Who said this 2 u that it ffis bakwaa
        It is not
        U r really crazy di
        I m also a big big fan of Shivika so I understand ur eagerness
        But di i m sorry but this is a weekend gift for all of u
        That’s why
        I’ll post de next part next week
        I m very glad that u like my ff so much
        But dr u have 2 wait UPTIL next week

      • Nilash on April 15, 2017 8:57 pm

        Amayaa kameeni jis gun se Anika ko shoot ki tum mujhe ussse goli maar do nhi to Shivika k chaaku se stab kar do par please ye mat karo please.????????

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 9:27 pm

        Nilash di
        Y r u saying like this
        I can’t understand
        Please do clear 2 me
        Nd don’t say like this again
        Is pagal pan ke liye mai hi kaafi hu di aap aise mat bolo na

      • Nilash on April 15, 2017 11:28 pm

        Amayaa dr dying to read the next part and you will post it next week??? but it’s ok Sabra ka fal meetha hota hai oh nhi sabra ka fal Shivika romance hota hai… hehehehehe dr will be waiting for it eagerly and this part of your post inspired me a lot for my ff… ???? love you loads dr ???

      • Amayaa on April 16, 2017 8:03 am

        Ooooh Nilash di so this is de reason
        U r right
        Sabra ka phal meetha hota h
        What r u saying
        I I I inspired u
        Like really
        Please don’t say like this
        Mai pahle hi jam pagal no hu
        Ab to Mar hi jaungi

      • Nilash on April 16, 2017 10:07 am

        Ohhh my darlo please mar mat jaana Shivika ke confession scene k pahle or else you’ll be missing the most awaited event of your life??? just kidding…. well I’m waiting for your next part and ha usse iss part se bhi long banana it’s my humble request dear???????

      • Amayaa on April 16, 2017 11:34 am

        Nilash di
        Now I m thinking 2 post de next part tomorrow only instead of next Saturday
        As i got such a beautiful responses
        WHAT SAY ??????????

      • Nilash on April 16, 2017 12:21 pm

        Yessss yessss yippee…… ????? ???? mere to aankho se khushi ke aansu nikal aaye loooovvveeee you…. you are so sweet..

    3. Arya? on April 15, 2017 8:58 am

      Woww nyc1??? plz next update soon I’m waiting… Seriously supb yr

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 10:37 am

        Awwwww
        Really arya I m so glad that u like my ff so much

    4. Anaya on April 15, 2017 9:41 am

      Awesome

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 10:38 am

        Thanxxx anaya

    5. Astha_Reddy on April 15, 2017 9:42 am

      Amayaa…I saw the craziness of you here with Shivaay.. a naughty one…
      and for Annika bhabhi…koshish karne walon ki kabhi haar nahi hoti… bass beijjati ho jati hai…hope bhabhi ki saath aisa na ho…and bhaiyya should help her in learning cooking in a romantic way….
      Rudra toh Annika bhabhi ka mantra jap raha hai….
      Waiting for the next crazy part….from my crazy sweety Amaya…
      Love you…..

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 10:34 am

        YA di i m really crazy for Shivay ……….
        Wait wait wait as a sis only
        Really di u r amazing
        Please don’t say further
        Warna mere next part ka pura summary hi pata chal jaega
        Luv u di ???

      • Astha_Reddy on April 15, 2017 1:39 pm

        Ha ha… Amayaa… main toh anjane mein teri ff ka Oh my maatha karne chali thi….I will keep guessing like this…for your next parts also… but I love you… just remember the three magical words from Astha Reddy….lolz…

    6. shab khan on April 15, 2017 10:25 am

      wow amayaa wow
      it was very awsome and kitchen nok jhok was really good but please han make anika’s dishwes good kyun ki she is asso so i want her to win the challenge

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 11:42 am

        I m so sorry SHAB but I can’t fulfil ur wish now
        I also want Anika bhabhi 2 win
        But I can’t
        Well dr
        Wait for de next part that 1 be really khirkitor

    7. Ahaana on April 15, 2017 11:12 am

      Amaaya when did i inspired u …. aisemat kr yarr itna pyara sa cute sa likha hai aur upr keh ri h maine inspire kiya .. dusro.ka toh pata ni but maine kab kiya …. aur vaise itna cute saa writer hoga toh uske cutness uske writing mai dikhegi hi ??..
      but i don’t know why j included my name but still may be u might hav found inspiration from me then a very big thanks from my side for including me in ur thanksgiving. .
      luv uhh

    8. Bhavana on April 15, 2017 11:41 am

      Hey amayaa!..Well i definitely know u from ur long,long,looonnnngggg cmmnts…
      Nd i was literally shocked as how could someone talk sooooo much…
      Well i am really happy that u finally posted ur first ever ff…congratulations…nd its marvellous…fantastically written…eagerly waiting for the nxt…update asap!

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 12:17 pm

        YA bhavna
        U assume right dr
        I become de most talkative girl when i come 2 de TU PAGE
        Nd thank u dr for liking my ff so much

    9. Amayaa on April 15, 2017 11:49 am

      YA Ahaana di u r right
      Ur ff is so good which inspired me extremely ……………
      Hmmmm I m really very happy that u like my ff so much
      My happiness is beyond my reach ???

    10. preetha on April 15, 2017 1:04 pm

      Hey plz post it in English plzzzzzz bcoz I don’t know any other language. ..but nice episode yaar. ..

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 2:33 pm

        Ooooh ho
        That’s de problem
        But dr de words r suits in Hindi only
        That’s why

    11. annanyaabitha on April 15, 2017 1:12 pm

      If u don’t mind , I have small request, if u can post ur FF in English I don’t know Hindi pls……….

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 2:37 pm

        Annanyaa dr
        I don’t mind it nd i also want 2 post in English
        That is easy for me also
        But de dialogues r suit in Hindi only

    12. nikitajai on April 15, 2017 1:40 pm

      It is nice crazy…. Lovely update dear…. Waiting for the next update…

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 2:39 pm

        Thank u dr
        de next part will updated on next week

    13. Arpita on April 15, 2017 2:33 pm

      Amaaya dear,astha baby ke long lost sis.it is sooooo sweet. Keep it up.

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 3:06 pm

        Just 1 word 2 say ARPU
        “Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww”

    14. Archisha on April 15, 2017 3:14 pm

      That was nice.

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 5:59 pm

        A big big thanks to u Archisha

    15. Sofiya. S. on April 15, 2017 3:16 pm

      Awesome update ?. Loved it totally ? Eagerly waiting for the next one. Post soon dear ? ? ? ? ?… ..

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 6:02 pm

        Thank u Sofia…….

    16. aryaraju on April 15, 2017 3:31 pm

      Nice one?

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 6:03 pm

        Thanku thanku arya
        I mean thank u dr

    17. diyas?☺ on April 15, 2017 3:42 pm

      Super yaar…I loved ur ff the dialogues very super yaarrr…..

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 6:05 pm

        Thank u diya
        Dialogues the na ekdum khirkitor ???

    18. shuklarashi on April 15, 2017 4:22 pm

      Awesome

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 6:06 pm

        Thank u rashi ???

    19. Jerry_36 on April 15, 2017 4:51 pm

      Hey Amaaya you are such a wonderful writer. So good yaar. Loved your work. Shivika moments were too awesome. Great going yaar !! Keep us entertaining. I am eagerly looking forward to your updates. And thank you so much for mentioning my name. I will also try to give you wonderful updates. Do post soon. Thus one was fabulous☺

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 6:14 pm

        Awwww really Jerry
        I m a good writer
        Thank u dr
        I can’t believe it …………
        Nd this is just a reflection of ur creativity nd skillllll
        Thank u ONCE AGAIN Jerry
        The next part will updated next week ??

      • Amayaa on April 16, 2017 12:45 pm

        Jerry
        Now I decided 2 post de next part tomorrow only

        Is it a good idea or bad? ??????

      • Jerry_36 on April 16, 2017 1:17 pm

        Yeah !! You should. No need to ask☺

    20. Archiya on April 15, 2017 5:29 pm

      Hi Amayaa
      Kaha se shuru Karu..ok will start from the devars n bhabhi moment, actually I miss them a lot, I used to enjoy aniru convo,which they don’t show anymore.. Tat made your ff unique.

      Coming to shivika, I loved their convo,more than their romance, I love their nok jhok

      I liked it tat u kept proper pacing between the lines, made it easier to read.

      All in all I really loved ur ff.. Keep writing an pls post the link of the next part on the IB TU page..

      • Archiya on April 15, 2017 5:31 pm

        Hoping that my an other comments bring a lovely smile on ur face?:) As u had said tat if I don’t read ur ff, u r gonna ? ?

      • Archiya on April 15, 2017 5:31 pm

        Sorry wrong smiley.. Just wanted to put this ☺ ☺

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 6:26 pm

        YA Archiya
        I too liked de Bhabhi Devar convo de most
        Hmmmm Shivika ‘s nok jhok nd care for each other is more good than romance between them. ……..
        But dr u r de member of blushing club right
        Not only de member but also the head
        Then how it is possible? ?????

        Well dr thank u very much for loving this nd for giving ur precious time 2 my ff
        I’ll surely post de link on ishqbaaz usual page
        But for this U have 2 wait for a week
        As i post de next part next week ???
        YA archiya dr
        Ur comment bring a khirkitor smile on my face
        Thank u once again ???

      • Archiya on April 15, 2017 7:00 pm

        Amayaa
        If u give me blush an nok jhok in the same episode.. Than of course I will chose the blush part ??? being a member of the blush club

      • Amayaa on April 16, 2017 7:59 am

        Hmmmm Archiya
        Then wait for de next part
        There ur wish definitely got completed
        Nd u got both of them

      • Archiya on April 16, 2017 9:19 am

        Amayaa
        Eagerly waiting both for iB as well as ur ff ?

      • Amayaa on April 16, 2017 12:51 pm

        Archiya
        Now u don’t need 2 wait more
        Ishqbaaz nd Oberoi family moments both come soon
        I mean tomorrow only

    21. Firdose on April 15, 2017 6:18 pm

      Amayaa its amazing dear devar bhabhi convo was good i liked that very much

      • Amayaa on April 15, 2017 9:16 pm

        Thank u firdose for liking my ff so much
        A wide smile appeared on my face

    22. Ayeshashk on April 15, 2017 7:49 pm

      Amazing amaaya dear….loved your ff…the obro moment with anika was supurb….

      • Amayaa on April 16, 2017 7:21 am

        Ooooh thank u so much dr for loving my ff
        I m flying in air now

    23. gayathri.visu on April 15, 2017 8:24 pm

      Amayaa u r just crazy… Aniru convo is amazing. They r the bestest bhabhi-devar! Coming to Shivika’s nok-jhok sooo cute… U know what I really loves Shivika’s nok-jhok more than romantic scenes! And the kitchen scenes r very nice dr…
      But I want ask u 1question, why u will post next part next week??

      • Amayaa on April 16, 2017 7:28 am

        Awwwww
        Thank u di
        YA ur AMAYAA is really a crazy girl
        I too luv their nok jhok nd aniomru moment de most
        Wo di actually
        I wanted 2 give a weekend gift as a refreshment for all of u

        De next part is ready
        But u have 2 wait for a week
        Oooh so sorry for this di

      • Amayaa on April 16, 2017 12:48 pm

        Heyyyyy visu di
        Now I decided 2 post it tomorrow only
        What’s ur opinion about this ??????

    24. alekhika20 on April 15, 2017 8:26 pm

      Asum

      • Amayaa on April 16, 2017 7:34 am

        Thanxxxxx Alekhika

    25. preethi on April 15, 2017 9:44 pm

      pls write in english

      • Amayaa on April 16, 2017 7:36 am

        Preethi
        From next part
        I’ll surely post in English too

    26. zaveesha on April 15, 2017 10:06 pm

      Nyc one dear…waiting for next part…

      • Amayaa on April 16, 2017 7:36 am

        Oooh thank u dr

    27. Chandini on April 15, 2017 10:54 pm

      Amaaya omg….seriously you rocked with the first epi itself???anika and rudra?I love them they are some rare pagal combo….caring and loving shivaay??
      And one more question how and when did i inspire you

      • Amayaa on April 16, 2017 7:42 am

        Agree Chandu
        They r real pagal
        Aur hum bhi to kam ni h
        Mental ishqies (especially me)
        Hmmmmmm why all of u talking like this
        Chandu u didn’t inspire me but actually ur ff inspired me extremely
        Uske Samne ye kuch bhi ni

    28. Banita on April 16, 2017 1:12 am

      Amayaa it was awesome dear!!!!! ek dum khidki tod starting….. Shivika nokjhok was superb….. can’t wait more post asap…..

      • Amayaa on April 16, 2017 7:44 am

        Yes banita
        Ekdum khirkitor
        Anika bhabhi wale style me
        Ha ha ha
        Thank u thank u so much banita

    29. Surbhi Sharma on April 16, 2017 1:42 am

      Amaaya .
      Huhh , mai kya bolu . Tum hi bata do yr . Speechless chor diya.
      Especially ani ru convo . Vo toh tumhara ff ko aur mast bana diya .
      Ab jaldi post kar na . Plzz ha .

      • Amayaa on April 16, 2017 7:49 am

        Surbhi Surbhi Surbhi
        U made my day dr
        Such a beautiful comment
        I m dancing like mad
        Thank u very much
        Hmmmmmmm so sorry dr but de next part will come on next week
        But believe me
        That 1 will also khirkitor

    30. VHM on April 16, 2017 6:10 am

      Amaayaa…the way you are chirpy …your FF is reflecting the same……..i am really in awe with the crazy Oberoi moments which we miss in the original serial…this is such a fresh breeze , a refreshment from routine …go lady go… i will just say you have a long way to go….and one day when you become a successful writer do remember us………if your first shot is so awesome then i can imagine how will the upcoming ones be……….kudos dear…way to go………..

      • Amayaa on April 16, 2017 7:55 am

        After reading ur beautiful comment
        I m too enjoying an awwww moment
        Thank u for appreciating me so lovingly
        But wait di
        ” Go lady go ” ni “go girl go”
        I m in 10th standard only
        A big big big THANK U 2 u di
        YA I’ll try my best 2 make de next part a khirkitor 1

      • VHM on April 16, 2017 12:42 pm

        Then i must actually write Go baby go….

    31. Verna on April 16, 2017 2:15 pm

      Wow my dr.. u r such a good writer.. u didn’t even tell me.. really amazing FF.. superb and I know u r mad for shivika.. u r slaying it by ur work.. devar bhabi moments was fantastic.. and thanks for getting Om and Chulbul in this.. I loved those parts too..

      And u mentioned my name.. love u to sky.. but I don’t deserve this much big appreciation.. How u got inspired by my work I don’t know.. but u r really amazing writer dr.. keep writing and I’m ur fan for this FF.. Good luck my dr.. love u 🙂 🙂

      and sorry just now I found this link in maha’s FF.. so ly replied late dr..

      • Amayaa on April 16, 2017 2:58 pm

        Awwwwwww
        Thank u very much Verna di
        I was desperately waiting for ur comments
        But its okkkkk
        No need 2 say sorry

        Di I thought 2 inform u as well on ur 1 of ff
        But I remembered that Hindi is difficult 2 understand 2 u
        I posted it in hindi only
        As anika’s words nd other dialogues suits in hindi only
        That’s why

        I m very glad that u like my ff so much
        Heyyyyyyy u r not but I m ur fan

      • Verna on April 16, 2017 4:09 pm

        U r my darling regular reader.. how can I leave like that.. also I’m really happy tat u were waiting for my comment.. I should thank God for making me notice ur link..

        And yes, I had difficulties in understanding Hindi but I’m trying to learn this language now.. it’ll good practice for me when I article in Hindi.. so don’t hesitate dr..

        Thank u again for mentioning me in ur very first FF

    32. anah on April 16, 2017 2:34 pm

      hey dr…..
      i also wanna be part of ur drs list……but maybe i can’t (haha)
      bcoz u don’t like short comments from ur drs….
      simply spellbound….

      • Amayaa on April 16, 2017 3:02 pm

        U r already my dr 1 anah
        See I gave u credit too
        Ur ff is amazing which inspired me much

        Hmmmm really I don’t like short comments from my dr ones
        But I have a way
        U too give long long comments
        ???

    33. b.k.maha on April 16, 2017 4:22 pm

      Its really awesome dr… And thank u so much for mentioned my name… I don’t know i really capable for this… But u are more than me dr… U are a awesome writer… And sry for this my late… Keep going dr…waiting for ur next episode egarly… Take care and love u my dr choty…

      • Amayaa on April 16, 2017 4:50 pm

        Thank u as well as welcome MAHA DI
        Nd no need 2 say sorry

        Heyyyyyy Maha di u r really capable for it
        Nd lastly
        Thank u for calling me choti
        Now I feel myself much closure 2 u
        No need 2 wait more
        I’ll post de next part tomorrow only

    34. Maahi on April 16, 2017 7:39 pm

      Awesome @amaaya dear…. anika in her full khidkitod avatar…. waiting for next episode…. and sry for commenting late….

      • Amayaa on April 16, 2017 10:44 pm

        Thank u di
        The next part will updated soon
        It’s happens no need 2 say sorry

    35. savera on April 18, 2017 6:23 pm

      Amayaa loved ur ff very much loved shivika cute fight ,omru were too good in supporting their bhabhi just loved it yr post soon

      • Amayaa on April 18, 2017 7:50 pm

        Thank u dr
        But now no need 2 wait for it as 2nd part is not coming
        I m sorry but now I can’t type more

        2 times starting se likh ke post kar chuki
        Ab mujhse aur ni hoga

        TU PAGE is gr8 like CVS
        It rejected my ff 2 times
        The 1st 1 is due to in Hindi
        Nd de 2nd 1 is not posted nd whole article vanished

        That 1 is too long
        Now I m not in state 2 type more
        So bye dr

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