Hi ? guys. Well I am back with the next part. I am glad to receive such a great support from all of you. THANK YOU GUYS ?

@LEAF 36

@6:00 p.m.
@ROOM 1,2,3&4
Four solid iron chambers are shown with strong and broad iron gates.
Inside the chambers have huge space with a small notebook sized window on it’s extreme top left which is perfectly sealed by iron rods. The chamber has an earthen pot filled with water, two benches kept at some distance, few equipments and a machine is attached to the side of the chambers door, it’s a machine on which password has to be put and only then the huge, unbreakable gate will open.

@8:00 p.m.
The huge empty room isn’t empty anymore, as someone is there now.
The scree shifts towards two people lying on the floor, well they don’t seem to be dead but their faces are really pale and has lost it’s charm completely.
The camera zooms on the face of first person and he is revealed to be KARAN SINGHANIYA and the other person is PRIYANKA SINGH OBEROI.

@8:00 p.m.
The screen zooms on a person who is lying on the floor and even in this unconscious state his famous and most irritating frown ? has not left his face and definitely he is none other than SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI.
A girl is lying near by with her hair in a completely messy state covering half of her face, but by seeing one half of her face it can be easily guessed that she is ANIKA SINGHANIYA.

@8:00 p.m.
A boy is seated in unconscious state with his face giving a really tired look, his long shiny hair seem to have lost their charm in this dark room and he is reviled to be OMKARA SINGH OBEROI.
A beautiful girl in her mid twenties is lying at certain distance from Om although her face is pale but the most relished slight smile that always plays across her lips seems to be there even now maybe not that beautiful but yet enough relieving. She is an extravagant piece and who else she could be than ISHAANA SINGHANIYA.

@8:00 p.m.
One person is lying with his face towards the ground and on his back a girl is lying.
From the big biceps and way of styling it seems that the person is none other than RUDRA SINGH OBEROI & the girl on his back is SOUMYA SINGHANIYA.
It seems that Soumya has been thrown upon Rudra. Both are lying unconscious.

@8:10 p.m.
Karan gains conscious, he holds his head and taking support of the floor underneath begins to get up. He sits supporting his back on the wall holding his head firmly as in if he leaves his head it may blast open any moment. He relaxes his head on his arms which are already resting on his well assembled legs.
After stabilising himself about five minutes later he examines his surroundings carefully and it then when he realises that he is in an unknown place. While examining the barren room he tries to recall that how he came there and it’s then when he sees Priyanka lying at few centimetres from him, seeing her pale face he gets panicked and some how helps his trembling legs to meet the floor as soon as he reaches near Priyanka he shakes her hardly in hope that she would get up, but that seemed to be difficult. He looked around and saw the earthen pot and rushed to it with as much as speed his legs could. Filling the glass with water he takes it towards Prinku and very carefully sprinkles some water on her face. Priyanka gains conscious and holding her head and with Karan’s support she manages to sit along the wall.
Priyanka looks at Karan when she is remembered of something and the tired face of her changes to worried.
Prinku in a worried tone, taking hold of Karan’s hand says
Prinku: Karan are you okay?
Karan being confused ?: Ya, why what will happen to me?
Prinku: Somebody called me and informed that you met with an accident so I just…..
She couldn’t complete as she was sobbing hard by now, Karan slowly cared her hair and tried to calm her down.
Karan: Relax it’s ok.
Prinku calms down a bit just to be panicked again as soon as she realises her surroundings she again becomes hyper.
Prinku: Karan Karan where are we.
Karan: I don’t know.
Prinku get’s really worried and hugs Karan in sitting position. Karan gets shocked initially but reciprocates the hug, understanding her state of mind.
Prinku finds peace and comfort in his arms.
After few minutes Prinku realises her act and their position so she parts away. Karan begins to look here and there to avoid awkwardness.
Prinku: But how did you come here.
Karan: Actually I was going to meet a client when my car’s tier got punctured and when I came out to check that, someone hit me hard on my head.
(He does it showing the action by hand.)
Prinku worriedly: Is it hurting alot.
Karan nods in no.
Prinku: Wait let me see.
Saying so she gets up and checks his wound.
Both get a bit uncomfortable with the close proximity although some where down the heart they are feeling really good.

@8:10 p.m.
Anika gains conscious, holding her head and adjusts her messy hair in order to have a clear view of her surroundings. She gets confused looking here and there.
Then her gaze moves towards Shivaay and seeing him unconscious Anika walks towards him. Anika pats his cheeks.
Anika: Shivaay, Shivaay get up.
As she doesn’t gets any response so she looks here and there and spots the earthen pot and takes a glass of water from it and goes towards Shivaay again.


Anika throws the water on Shivaay and feeling the wetness Shivaay begins to gain conscious and as soon as he comes to his senses he examines the situation and tries to interpret that what happened with him a while ago and seeing Anika with a glass he realises that, it was she who had brought the flood in his life.
Shivaay with great difficulty gets up and
Shivaay: Are you mad Anika what are you trying to do.
Anika: Oh hello! Mr. Bagaad Billa I am perfectly alright. It you who has some problem in the upper compartment.(she says pointing towards head.)
Shivaay being irritated: Please Anika stop it, you are ever ready to fight with me.
Anika gets angry ? hearing this: Oh I have much more work than fighting with you and trust me they are even more important than wasting time on you.
Shivaay: Why the you pour water on him.
Anika: To bring you back to your conscious.
Shivaay being confused: Conscious???
Anika: Yes Mr. Look around.
It’s then when Shivaay realises that they are looked in an iron chamber.
Shivaay: What the hell are we doing here?
Anika: We came here for Picnic.
Shivaay: Oh really.
Anika gets irritated and shouts: Seriously
Shivaay are you really so dumb or just acting to be one.
Shivaay: Ok calm down Anika, but the point is how did we reach here, we were going to get medicine for dadi na.
Anika: Yes and then suddenly your baba adam ka zaamana Ki car stopped. ( Yes and then suddenly your antique car stopped.)
Shivaay: Pls don’t call it antique, it’s an Audi Q8.
Anika: Phir shuru hogaya Mr. Tadibaaz Singh Oberoi. Aachar dalon Mai aapki Audi ka, jab dekho aapki gaadi ruk jati hai, aap ek kam kun nahi karti ussa baaich kar ek cycle la lo, kam Sa kam zaroorat padna par rukagi toh nahi.
(You can started Mr. Show off. What should I do of your Audi, shall I make it’s pickle or what. Listen you do one thing sell that car and buy a cycle, at least it won’t stop time to time.)
Shivaay gets highly irked by her nonsense and shouts.
Shivaay: Will you please shut your mouth Anika, I asked you that how we came here and you started with your nuances.
Anika: You are asking as if I have kidnaped you and looked you here, even I was also unconscious.
Shivaay: What ever. (he mummers) Jab hoosh ma hoti Ho tab konsa tumha koi hoosh hota hai. (You are not in your senses even when you are in your conscious.)
Anika: What did you say.
Shivaay: Nothing.
Shivaay and Anika are going when their car suddenly stops as someone has planted nails on the road.
Then a person releases some gas and under it’s effect, both fall unconscious.
Anika: Now what should we do.
Shivaay: Lets try opening that door.
They both try opening it and even knock on it repeatedly but no response is heard.
They both give it a last try and hit the door hard but that was useless. Rather both fell on the floor. Anika is above Shivaay and both are looking into each others eyes ?.
Anika is drowning in Shivaay’s deep bluish-green eyes, that seem to change their colour every now and then just like a chameleon.
While Shivaay is lost in Anika’s deep black eyes that are showing a lot of emotions to him. Slowly Shivaay’s hand travels towards her hair and he tucks the hair strand disturbing her face, behind her ears.
Soon both come out of their fantasy world and get up.

As most of you asked me to write some romantic scenes between the couples, I have tried my level best and trust me while writing that part I was having a michmichi feeling. I don’t know how it turned out to be but pls I can’t write more.

Well Sara you asked me weather I am fan of CID yes dear I like it alot and moreover I love action, thrillers and suspense more than anything and I am totally an anti romantic person. Criminology is my first true love. I just go Waaka over suspense and thrillers. That’s why there is so much of suspense. Moreover I read suspense filled novels and watch movies also of same type. ?????

So that’s all for the day.
A big THANK YOU ? to all my fellow readers ?.

Take care ?
Keep smiling ?
Stay happy ? always
For now signing off

We recommend
  1. Nithu


  2. Oh…. God. All get caught. Who will rescue them now? Only Abeer left. Will he rescue them? Waiting for it.

  3. Zoya

    wow shivika i too love action nd update is nice i like this ff i think ds is the first time i’m cmntng go on nd all d best fr ur xms

  4. Nice…cute shivika moment 🙂

  5. Chandini

    Wow sweety it’s awesome????karan and prinku were fantabulous….oh god I laughed while reading Shivaay and anika part….they are sooo cute❤❤❤
    How ishkara and rumya came there….is the only question that’s running in my mind….update the next part asap because I am dying out of suspense ?
    Who told that you are not gud in romance…you are doing a wonderful job…
    Keep rocking?
    Lov you?

  6. Seriously yaar there is smthng in ur writing making it different from others ff plz it doesn’t meant to hurt other writers feelings. I just told what i felt. Even in my exm days am impatiently waiting for ur ff. Charging my phn under a great pressure ..reading ur ff facing a huge risk in hostel…. Wat to say u r amazing yaar ..iam becoming a fan of ur ff really u knw the pulse of readers plz make I more longggggggg yar ..wonderful twists? nothing more to say yaar but 1 more thng plzzz upload fast yaar am sure there r many readers both silent &violent ?waiting for ur ff ………….keeeep rockngggg dudddddeeee?? ……..same silent reader ?


    haye ada hai WO adao ki WO shokhiyon ki pyali hai WO sabse naveli hai WO sabse nirali hai dil leke udi jadoo ki pudi karke aankhein do char she is a rockstar kuchh bhi kaho badi mast yaar kuchh bhi kaho she’s a rockstar ?????? kya mast movie thi suspense badhita jaa raha hai ab to kya secret hai iske peechhe ye soch ke mere pet me titliyan ud rahi hai ?????? aur aur aur baba adham ke zamaney ki car, nahi wo Audi Q8 hai ?????? achar daloon Teri Audi ka isey bech ke cycle le le kam se kam kaam padne par kaam to jayegi ??????????? you nailed it seriously

  8. Priyali

    Super Awesome spendaboulsly fantastic!!!!loved the shivika moments!!

  9. Puvi

    ur impossible shivika its awesome dear and by the way me to anti romantic and i also like watching cid and i too read novels with suspense and thrill and movies also i love to create suspense and i love full suspense only go on dear it will be so enjoyable to read it especially for me

  10. Hey Hie I am a silent reader here. But then the episode is fantastic that I could not stop myself from commenting .:-)

  11. Anah

    what an episode sweety…
    hats off ur talent….
    such a unique post waiting for next one eagerly…

  12. Ab itne aache comments Milne ke baad main kya bolu apni tooti fruity ??thillerholic toh main bhi hoon per tumhare jeetni nahi I mean films cid tak thik hai books kabhi kabhi not always …

    Samjhana mushkil hai aapko ki aapki kimat hai kya zamane me joh bejhkimati ho ussne der nahi hota jasbat baya kar jaane me … Bus ek hi musibat hai aapki ki aap kehti hai mohabbat alfaz ne naata nahi hai mera per hum kahete hai aapke nashe se uttrna aata nahi … Alfazo me paata nahi kya bhati hoon tum ki tumhare alfazo ko bhula paana aasa nahi…

    Pakau sharayi thi paata nahi kya thi kyu thi per joh bhi thi humesha ki tarah dil se nikli baat thi…. Aur ha bonus me tumhe milegi jadoo ki jhapi …
    Galat mat samjhna ??????

    Wese new promo launched of IB in which SSO says taadi kyon mar rahi ho
    Anika: what’s this language..
    SSO: oh u mean what’s with the language..
    Anika: ha wohi..
    SSO: raita mat phelao…
    Anika: shocked
    Tia: main shivaay ke baache ki maa bane wali hoon ???

    1. Oh this auto correction will kill me
      Second sentence: meri tooti fruity
      In shayari: beshkimati and use ,alfaz se naata…oh thank god itni hi mistakes thi

  13. Akansha

    Loved it shivika… Sorry I couldn’t comment on d last ff.. Waiting fr ishkara n rumya reaction.. So curios to knw wat hppnd… Waiting fr d nxt

  14. Lalitha

    Wow…its amazing… Pls post the next part asap…

  15. Hi shivika ? it was supperrrr se bhi uparrrr waala episode!! ? Full of suspense.
    Eagerly waiting for the next one.

  16. ye update short thi ya mjhe lgi.. ??
    shuru hote hi khatam hogai.. ? (just kidding han)
    wese shivi sxh main it was so good.. ??
    today shivika were fab..
    nd priran were also awesome..
    this suspense is killing me yr.. ??
    or aj to epi main romance ka trka b lg gaya.. ??
    u know what i m also like u only i also love suspense mysteries thrillers nd all..
    nd CID this is to my all tym favorite..
    but haven’t watched it from many days as indian channels r banned here na.. ??
    or ab bs jldi jldi next update post kr dena cant wait to see k ishkara or raumya kese yahan phnche..
    or ye b k ab aage kya hone wala hai in qaidion k sth..?
    wese is vamp ne aik kaam axha kya jo couples ko separate nh kia.. ???

  17. Amazing episode… Waiting for the next update….

  18. Manasvi

    Shivu dii.. You are fabulous..
    What an writer..
    I dont know how can people write romantic scenes.. I m the worst in that!!
    Btw loved this epi..

  19. Mrunal

    i can’t believe it… that u r anti romantic…
    u done a great job in both romantic scenes….
    I’m waiting for more romantic scenes in between shivika….??

    i am eager to know about rumya & ishkara….

    i know u must have posted the next epi.. bcoz as usual i am late in reading…
    so I’ll read all ff’s fast for ur next epi..

    love u dea??

Comments are closed.

Yes No