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NOW THAT I FULFILL ALL PROMISES I MADE TO YOU, PRINCESS… I’LL PUNISH YOU! [SS-5]

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— PART FIVE —

Trying to escape Sanskar’s grip, Swara struggles fiercely against his imposing posture in vain, he just doesn’t let go of her. After closing the door behind him, he immediately pushes her to the wall immobilizing her in place with all his weight, his hand on her mouth stifling her cries, his other hand trying to trap her both hands pushing on his chest with all her forces.
His anger was drugging all his other senses but jealousy, teasing her about that boy who keeps being glued to her like a lost puppy was just the appearing top of the iceberg… his beautiful wife is too innocent to be aware of the effect she has on men surrounding her, how many heads she makes turning by her natural charm and delightful spirit. But tonight, pretending doing just her work as a wedding planner, she has crossed another limit to help his family…

When he catches her hands forcefully freeing her mouth, she yells at him fuming with rage:
“- HOW DARE YOU!? LET GO OF M…”
“- SHUT UP! SWARA… JUST SHUT UP!!!” he warns her narrowing his eyes, her wrists were pinned on the wall at her head sides.
“- you want me to talk about professional matters, hai na? so… tell me miss wedding planner, offering a sensual dance on the bride’s sagai is in the program of Sawaragini wedding planners’ affair? Tell me… how much does it cost? The money garland was enough or we’ll have a supplement charge? ANSWER ME DAMN IT!!!”
“- Sans… kar…”, her voice was trembling…

“- ha, mai Sanskar ho… »
Haunted by the image of that man who proposed her money while she was dancing, he’s unconscious of how much he’s hurting her, freeing one of her hands, he immobilizes her pressing on her throat to express his harsh words:
“- Sanskar who almost killed your sister when she insulted your honor”
Taking her other hand, he brings it to his temple pressing it and adds:
“- do you remember this mark?… you healed it…”
Showing her hand in front of her face, he explains:
“- with this hand…”
Swara shocked eyes don’t break contact with his almost mad look, he seems in trance when he continuous:
“- I had it when I fought with my brother defending your honor…”
Dragging her gripped hand to his back, he presses it which makes him bump in her erasing distance between them, at inches from her lips he whispers:
“- I wasn’t yet your husband, miss wedding planner!… ”

Detailing her face, he bends over her lips adding:
“- And now… now Mrs Swara Sanskar Maheshwari… now that your honor is MINE… you humiliate it for MY little sister… how can you be so cruel!?”
He was so close, forcing her arm surrounding his waist, she hasn’t been in his embrace since eternity and yet she can feel that alchemy between them finding its way in the middle of all that hater. Feeling his heart pounding against her chest, memories of their intimate moments submerge her as she closes her eyes, once upon time… they used to be happy… today, all she can see in his eyes is that consuming anger!
She remembers his shock seeing her dancing, Gayathri-ji words, garland, the guy who accosted her with money… opening her eyes, tears filling her husband’s eyes break her last defenses in front of him, she says with a trembling voice:
“- and mai Swara ho… cruel hai … dishonored hai… tumhara wife nahi…”
She burst out crying making him take off his hand abruptly, joining her hands under her chin, she prays him with a broken voice:
“- if there is… no relation between… between us…”
Not bearing to see her tears, neither hearing that statement again, Sanskar turns his back to her.
“- … humiliation… dishonor… mere hai… sirf mere hai… tumhara nahi…”
She slides along the wall supporting her to the ground, takes her face in her hands and lets go of all the pain and sorrow she’s hiding for months.

At this moment, Uttara’s engagements function… Gayathri-ji demands… Maheshwari’s blaming looks… Laksh’ still missing situation… Ragini’s pain… everything vanishes as she feels like falling endlessly in infinite darkness she’s avoiding since that moment when Sanskar announced his decision to her.
Suddenly, she feels his hands on hers, taking them off her face. Then cuddling it, he prints a tender kiss on her maang at the point which should be filled with sindoor making her open her eyes surprised. Seeing him kneeling face to her makes her cry more trying to turn away from him, but he doesn’t let go of her. Bending his face to her, he kisses the corner of her eyes one after the other brushing her tears away, her cheeks, her jaw, the corner of her salted tendered lips… when he possesses them finally, passion bursts from nowhere between them and soon the world disappears around them …
— END OF FLASHBACK —

Blushing under Sanskar’s burning gaze, Swara turns away embarrassed. Her hand hugging tightly her mangal sutra.
Both of them were recalling what happened after that… how Uttara’s dowry issue brought them brutally to the reality and how they caused the engagement’s annulations.
Swara closes her eyes remembering how he defended her in front of Gayathri-ji then assuring to everyone that she’s his wife, before assuring her sister that even when they’ll find Laksh, they’ll never be together again…
Sanskar looks to her turning her back to him… again… he could almost hear her words when she refused her sister’s concerned request about patching up. How he felt slapped again after what happened…
He smiles shaking his head in stupefaction about her stubbornness. Then putting his hands in his pants pockets, he goes to face her looking to her closed fist then to her face, her neck then her maang, he asks frowning:

“- kia hua princess?… the Mahan Swara never breaks her promises, hai na?… Laksh’ is back… why is your mangal sutra in your hand?… and why have I to bear seeing your bare maang yet?”
As she keeps quite, he makes a step toward her looking straight into her eyes and adds:
“- I know you’re better in breaking relations Mrs Maheshwari… but now that I fulfill my part of promise…”
“- mangal sutra and sindoor are for married woman… if I promised to put them on when Laksh’ will be back, all you are promising for the last months is punishment… so… Mr Maheshwari…”

She lifts her hand and opens it showing him the chain of their sacred relation… both of them remembers the moment each other said that their relation is over, but they recalls the moment they got married too… she asks him:
“- I’m fulfilling my promise of accepting your decision… Tell me Sanskar, what will you do?”
His smile widens taking the precious jewel from her palm, he seems about saying something, but stay silent then turns around her. She closes her eyes with apprehension feeling his eyes on her.
He passes his hands on her neck cuddling her sensible tenderly while taking her hair away to bare it, she stops breathing hearing him humming its perfume. After putting it aside on her shoulder, he finally spreads the sacred necklace a on her collar before knotting it making her shiver at his fingers’ contact.

He bends over her to whisper in her ear:
“- how can I punish a stranger woman… you have to be my wife again first… princess”.
TO BE CONTINUED…

35 Comments
  1. Chanu

    Awww..
    soo lvly…
    waiting 4 da punishment! 🙂 🙂 😉 😛
    keep writing dr
    be happy always

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much chanu, happy that you loved it… and yes our Sanskar is innovative :p
      hope you’ll like what coming next 🙂

  2. Simi

    Awsm..

    1. MAHIRA

      thank you dear simi 🙂

  3. AWESOME !!!!
    NXT PART PLS……………………………….

    1. MAHIRA

      thanks dear Raksha 🙂 i’m already writing next chapter 🙂

  4. Simin

    Oh my gosh soooo intense

    1. MAHIRA

      hi Simin, thank you so much, hope you’ll like what coming next 🙂

  5. Loved it loved it so much dear

    1. MAHIRA

      ohhh .. thank you so much dear Ria 🙂
      hope you’ll love next one too

  6. Kaynatk01

    oh wow awesome

    1. MAHIRA

      thank you so much Kaynatk , hope you’ll love next chapter too 🙂

    1. MAHIRA

      thank you dear^^

  7. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Marvelous chappy dear… I think punishment is very interesting😉😉😉.. Keep it up dear.. Waiting for nxt..
    Take care
    Keep smiling😊

    1. MAHIRA

      Uma dear, thank you sooo much, happy to see that you loved it … already writing 🙂
      ehem ehem… punishment… ehem…
      be happy 🙂

  8. Arshaanya

    Wow loved it…
    D way u write is amazing..
    I kbw both were at fault bt i feel swara lil bit more so i want her to suffer n rlze her mistakes… w8ng for punishmnt 😜

    1. MAHIRA

      OHH Arsh’ di!!! you’re more sadistic than me :p
      my poor Swara… but ehem… Sanskar know how to heal her wounds :p

  9. Shambhavi

    Dearest Mahira,
    I loved your fanfic so far and I’m looking forward to your updates.
    The intense emotions made me feel weary and I mean it in a good way. I was able to understand your characters and their pain and I somehow felt affected.
    Keep up the good work,
    With love,
    Sham. <3

    1. MAHIRA

      Dear Sham’ … your words brings tears to my eyes… so happy you love my work, it’s the first time i write a long FF in english, so sometimes i’m sure words are wrongly used… i try my best to keep upgrading my level in that language 🙂
      Hope you’ll like what coming next too and thank you again for your sweet words 🙂
      Lovely :3

    1. MAHIRA

      thank you so much for reading anu 🙂

  10. Raina

    i’m searching for words to apperciate. it was awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwesome

    1. MAHIRA

      Dear raina, sooooooooooooo happy you loved it…. hope you’ll like the next chapter too^^

  11. Amazing…

    1. MAHIRA

      thank you so much dear 🙂
      hope you’ll like the next part too ^^

  12. Mica

    waaaaa…. you are naughty Mahiraaaaaaaaaa
    it’s too good.. just too gooood….i’m blushing yet confusing….i can’t understand hindi part..huhuhuhu….
    and what is this ? “when he possesses them finally, passion bursts from nowhere between them and soon the world disappears around them”….
    so ? they took a break for their break up ? huh! naughty naughty them…*blushing again..
    aaarrgghh so much blushing…
    i wish i will blushing more in next episodee.. *shameless blushing meee

    1. MAHIRA

      me? naughty? *blinking innocently*
      no no mica didi, it’s them, not my faut if Sanskar seemed really confused after shutting the door (when Swara wanted to talk to Sujatta and Gayathri about dowry)… bot my faut if Swara was really startled, almost blushing when he looked back to her… like if they’re are wondering… uh? what was we going to do here? why was we fighting? lol
      not my fault if you named me the shameless fan leader too
      this break in their break up wasn’t programmed at all, they just became weak for an instant so their bod… ehem.. hearts took advantage on their minds…

    2. MAHIRA

      hindi part?
      – ha, mai Sanskar ho… »
      —-yes, i’m sanska
      “- and mai Swara ho… cruel hai … dishonored hai… tumhara wife nahi…”
      — and i’m Swara, cruel, dishonored, but not your wife
      – … humiliation… dishonor… mere hai… sirf mere hai… tumhara nahi…”
      —- humiliation, dishonor are for me, just for me, not yours
      sagai: engagement
      maang: front/head
      it’s that you didn’t understand??

      1. Mica

        yess yess,, thank you so much.. really i’m blind in hindi…
        naughty writer…

    3. MAHIRA

      i don’t really speak hindi lol… i just learned some important /repetitive words as i always prefered wathcing in VO (hindi drama are aired on arabic tv channel dubbed in arabic)
      VO is very instructive, i learned french from cartoons when i was a child 🙂 but hindi is more complicated and has so rich vocabular and we have no background at school at all^^

  13. Sweeta

    Waooooooo
    Soooo awesome. ….loved it ❤❤❤

    1. MAHIRA

      hi sweeta, thank you sooo much for dear 🙂

  14. Vyshu10

    awesome

    1. MAHIRA

      thank you so much Vyshu dear 🙂

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