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Home»Fan Fiction»Nothing is immortal except my love for you…. Chapter 3
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Nothing is immortal except my love for you…. Chapter 3

rainaBy rainaFebruary 20, 201750 Comments12 Mins Read
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link to the previous chapter
Chapter 2
link to all the chapters
All Parts here
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~FIRST DANCE~
Ragini smiled at her sister who was sleeping on her lap. Finally! She slept! Don’t know for how many hours she was telling about how she spent the whole day with sanskar! ragini took her head from lap and made her lie on pillow, she went downstairs as light was still on. She saw her mother sitting on the sofa thinking something deeply. Ragini went near her, “maa?” sharmishta smiled and gestured her to sit, ragini sat beside her. “you know ragu? I feel swara likes sanskar! for the past one year, I am noticing the change in her but then I thought to not ask about it because she is growing up and I wanted her to have the strength to solve her problem herself! But today I felt….” She stopped to take a look at ragini who was just smiling at her. “you are not asking any question?” shomi asked shocked. “you think swara likes sanskar…. but I know swara loves sanskar!” sharmishta gets shocked hearing ragini and asked almost jerking, “what?” “yes maa! She loves him from childhood and she herself told me” ragini said convincing her. “what she told you?” ragini chuckled at her mother who asked her still shocked. “she told me that she loves sanskar!” ragini said. Sharmishta pressed her lips in a thin line and blinked her eyes and said confusingly, “she told you! But she never told me!” “sisters have many secrets!” ragini said only to earn a glare from her mother. “what about their age difference?” ragini smiled, this was the same question which arised in her mind too! But this age difference was nothing in front of her shona’s pure love for sanskar! “maa! Swara loves sanskar very much! She doesn’t care about these things! And maa, even I think they both would be perfect, they are friends from childhood, so they both will have understanding between each other!” sharmishta remained quiet for sometime thinking about ragini’s words and then smiled. She was indeed right! They both had been bestest friends since she came to this house before many years with her three kids! Maheshwari family was not only her neighbor but a part of her family! She would be glad to get her daughter married to such a family! Her smile was enough for ragini to understand that her mother was convinced! She immediately hugged her mother. “maa! You accepted right?” ragini asked breaking the hug to confirm and when her mother nodded, her smile grew wider. “accha maa! Don’t tell swara that you know about this! Ok? I will give her surprise!” ragini said, sharmishta smiled and said, “yeah! Even a mother and a daughter should have many secrets na?” they both then laughed. “good night maa!” ragini said, “good night” shomi said and they both went to their respective rooms happily thinking that their lovable and kiddish shona has grown up now to love someone…..love someone unconditionally…..
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NEXT MORNING
It was Saturday and the whole bose family was having the breakfast enjoying with each other, shomi admired her three daughters who were pulling each other’s legs. Sanskar entered that time, he directly came and hugged his shomi aunty. “sanskar! did you got call from her?” swara asked, sanskar became confused but then realized what she asked and nodded a yes! “are you going to come?” swara asked, “will she leave me alive if I didn’t come to her birthday party!” sanskar asked. “whom you are talking about?” ragini asked. “MICA!” swara and sanskar said together. “it’s her birthday party tomorrow and she invited me, I thought she would have invited sanskar! see! She HAS invited him!” “ok! I will leave now! Swara! We will go tomorrow evening!” saying this he starts to go, swara pouted and said, “sanskar! you just came to see maa? You didn’t even said a ‘hi’ to me!” sanskar smiled at her. “yes bhai! You forgot me also!” uttara said. Sanskar hugged her and then hugged swara and ran from there shouting ‘bye’. Swara slightly blushed, sharmishta and ragini noticed this and looked at other each smilingly…..
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NEXT DAY MORNING 4.00 AM
“sanskar!”……. “sanskar!” she whispered again. He opened his eyes irritated and looked annoyingly still half asleep at swara who was sitting next to him in his bed. “what is it?” sanskar asked angrily, she smiled sheepishly and said, “I am not getting sleep!” sanskar gritted his teeth and threw the pillow on her face, she caught it laughing. “close your eyes and count till 500. You will get sleep”. Saying this he closes his eyes. “sanskar! one doubt!” he opened his eyes irritated. “should I count from 1 or 0 or from any other number?” she asked innocently. “count from 1!” saying this he covered himself with the thick comforter. Swara giggled seeing him.
AFTER FEW MINUTES
“sanskar!”…… “sanskar! I finished counting!” she whispered, she can hear him mourning irritatingly, she took the bed sheet from his face smilingly. He opened his eyes half, but soon opened his eyes wide seeing her…….. close to him! Very close to him! She was almost lying on him, she was looking at him with a satisfied and teasing smile. Her eyes looked bigger today or he didn’t notice it these many years? She looked absolutely breath taking in a simple blue and white night dress. Her eyes expressing a lot of things which he had not noticed till date! It was almost two minutes and he was still staring at her deep eyes making himself drown in it completely. “good morning!” her sweet and teasing voice saved him from drowning and dyeing in her eyes. He immediately took the pillow and started beating her with it. She kept both her soft hands on her face as if they could save her! She laughed heartily while after sometime he stopped beating and said angrily, “I have kept you the perfect name! you devil!” he beat her one more time, she laughed loudly making him more angry. He let out a sigh and made himself fall on his bed, he could sense her coming near him, he raised his finger at her and said still closing his eyes, “don’t you dare wake me up!” swara grinned hearing him, “once open your eyes and see what I am doing”. He opened his eyes hearing her and saw her leaning towards him with his bed sheet, she covered him with that and said, “good night!” she messed his hair and got from the bed laughing. He closed his eyes and surprisingly he couldn’t sleep! Only those big and mesmerizing eyes of hers came in front of him, urgh! We are supposed to see nothing but darkness when we close our eyes….right? he opened his eyes irritated and saw her almost at the entrance of his room. “you spoiled my sleep!” she stopped listening him, smiled and turned towards him and saw him glaring at her. “close your eyes and count from 1 to 500, you will get sleep!” she said teasingly and went out of his room. Sanskar slapped his head and then closed his eyes in the hope of getting sleep…..
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EVENING
There was happiness everywhere with a noisy background after all it was a birthday party! Swara hugged Mica handing her a neatly wrapped gift. “you go with him, you with her and then…..” swara was confused at the way mica was instructing all their friends. “what are you doing?” swara asked, “I have a surprise for you!” mica said excitedly. Swara rolled her eyes and said, “it’s your birthday!” “yeah! It is! But I have a gift for you!” saying this mica went somewhere while swara was still confused to understand anything…

Everyone were asked to do a couple dance which was organized by the birthday girl Mica! Mostly there was pair for everyone, mica went towards swara and dragged her near sanskar, “sanskar! why are you not dancing?” mica asked sanskar. sanskar just smiled at her and said, “shall I dance alone? Because almost everyone are paired! The remaining girls are like…..” he showed an irritating face looking towards a group of girls who were still not paired. Mica looked at them and giggled, “arey! Remaining girls? That means you are also insulting my friend swara!” she said pointing towards swara standing next to her who looked at them confused. “she is my friend first! I will never tell her like that!” sanskar said keeping his immense gaze on swara that almost shivered her, a small curve appeared on her face listening him. “then tell me, did you even compliment her?” mica asked, sanskar looked at her confused, swara frowned. “did you even saw her?” mica asked, swara widened her eyes, this mica will definitely make him doubtful. Sanskar after listening her words turns his gaze towards swara and saw her, how the perfect and glittering purple gown suited her milky skin, her curly hair making her more beautiful. He smiled and said, “she looks gorgeous!” his words makes swara to stop her breathe for a second, she looked more beautiful now as her cheeks turned red. She smiled widely at him. “then you dance with her na?” mica asked sanskar teasingly. Swara gets nervous hearing her, while he smiled and nodded. Swara couldn’t control stop herself from smiling when sanskar forwaded his hand towards her. Swara shiveringly placed her hand in his hand as the mixture of nervousness and extreme happiness engulfed her. They went to the dance floor, she was still holding his hand looking at him dreamily while he was waiting for the song to play! After sometime ‘sanam re’ plays. Sanskar wrap his hands around her waist while her hands rest on his shoulders. “thank you!” she said. “for what?” he asked. “for giving me compliment!” she said as they moved lightly matching with the music of the lovely song! “tell me something! Did I irritate you so much this morning?” swara asked, sanskar smiled to her question, he answered her continuing to move slowly with the beats of music, “you do irritate me…..a lot! But no one can make me smile like you do!” swara still looked at him smilingly, she moved her hands from his shoulders and wrapped it around her neck, she moved closer to him almost joining her left cheek with his left ear, she closed her eyes to feel him and whispered the lines of the song in her melodious voice indirectly telling him her immense love….her unending love for him…
baadalon ki tarah hi to
tune mujhpe saaya kiya hai
baarishon ki tarah hi to
tune khushiyon se bhigaaya hai
aandhiyon ki tarah hi to
tune hosh ko uDaaya hai

(like clouds,
you have created a shade over me..
like rains,
you have drenched me in joys..
like storms,
you have blown away my senses..)
mera muqaddar sanwaara hai yoon
naya savera jo laaya hai tu
tere sang hi bitaane hain mujhko
mere saare janam re

(you have bettered my fate in such a way
that you have brought a new morning for me..
I have to pass with you only
all my lives..)
And suddenly she was no more on the ground, she was up in the air. Sanskar had lifted her by waist and was spinning her for the fast beats…
sanam re, sanam re
tu mera sanam hua re
karam re, karam re
tera mujhpe karam hua re

(O my beloved, my beloved,
you have become my love..
there is mercy,
your mercy on me..)
sanskar placed her on the ground carefully, the song continued to play while the magic of their closeness have intoxicated them a long ago and they both were staring each other…. He moves closer to her and they both joined their foreheads, the song ended beautifully for which they were not even aware. It was the loud sound of claps that brought them to this world. They both immediately got apart, sanskar smiled and the reason was unknown! He don’t know why he felt very happy, what just happened? A friend of sanskar came near him and dragged him somewhere, swara let out a sigh. Mica came near her and asked teasingly, “had fun?” swara glared at her, while she looked confused. Swara should be happy right now, but she was glaring at her. What was wrong? Swara smiled a little and immediately hugged her, “mica!! Thank you…. Thank you… thank you very much!” mica laughed hearing her. After that swara’s face was filled with a hearty smile during the whole party!…
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NIGHT 9.00 PM
“arey! What happened tell me first?” ragini asked laughing still gasping for breathe in the tight embrace of her sister. Swara released the hug and holded her hands, she spinned along with ragini who was completely clueless but still laughing because of the happiness of her sister. “didi! I and sanskar danced today!” swara said excitedly and sat on the bed, “my first ever dance with him! I can never forget this didi! As long as I live…no no! as long as this world exists! Umm… no!” ragini laughed more at her sister who looked very cute and innocent right now! “ok! As long as your love exists! Happy? Now come lets have dinner” ragini said and planted a quick kiss on her forehead, “come soon!” saying this ragini goes out of the room smiling for the happiness of her sister. Swara remembered ragini’s words, ‘As long as your love exists!’ she smiled, then this memory of dance will be forever and ever… because her love can never die…. It’s immortal!…

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Precap: ~Heartbroken~
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NOTE: It’s not Mica’s birthday today as far as i know! so mica! here is your surprise! will you talk with me now?
A/N- hey guys! hope you liked the chapter. so from next chapter, the actual story starts!
Thank you so much friends! Thanks to the silent readers too!
Love You All…

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raina

    I love music... the rescuer of my stress and boredom!... I make a wish and blow candles every year on 23rd of November an ardent swasan lover.. currently obsessed with riansh

    50 Comments

    1. Simin on February 20, 2017 11:52 pm

      Superb
      Only mica can do this haina micu???
      Post soon

      • mica on February 23, 2017 12:45 am

        hiks…. i’m too bossy na ?

      • raina on February 23, 2017 9:26 pm

        thank you so much simin! huh! micu became great now! never mind. next chapter is on the way dear

    2. Kakali on February 21, 2017 12:04 am

      Raina, u portrayed Mica in that way..it’s hard to believe..!! I’m ROFL serious..!! she was so calm kinda me.. :D..
      Gosh..!! Her B’Day.!! Mica’s Bday..!!! Micaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa urs B’day..!! again no #MENU:0 ;0 :0 :0 ..!! Ur B’day Mica..!! congo..!!*slip into swt drmz blabbering ur name..!!
      Thnk u Raina ..!! episode was soo lovely.!! but dunno why i have noticed something in ur ss now a days.. i mean ur chippies has become more smaller than other days..!! huh don’t mind coz i can’t get over reading this ss..!! update soon long long part..!! ;-*

      • mica on February 23, 2017 12:50 am

        shut up !!! you are too bhukhad huh! no more budget for catering

      • raina on February 23, 2017 9:32 pm

        you mean to say you are calm!!!! yeah i believed you!! yes kaku! you are indeed right! if you compare my previous short stories with this, it is very short. but the thing is i am getting a little busy nowadays. so sorry *holding ears* next chapter is on the way dear and sorry again because its not long!
        thank you

    3. Arunika on February 21, 2017 12:09 am

      Woohoooo….first comment!!!
      Amazing chappy….as always!!! I’m falling in love with ur ff as I do always!!!
      But the precap is again very exciting….Swara already has so many miseries & now she’ll be heartbroken….noooo 🙁
      Upload asap….waiting for it curiously!!!

      • raina on February 23, 2017 9:33 pm

        thank you very much arunika!!!! happy to know you are loving it!! next chapter is on the way

    4. Rachna on February 21, 2017 12:19 am

      Awsm… Update soon

      • raina on February 23, 2017 9:34 pm

        next chapter is coming soon rachna!
        thank you dear

    5. Sus on February 21, 2017 12:24 am

      Awesome

      • raina on February 23, 2017 9:35 pm

        thank you sus

    6. kumu on February 21, 2017 1:07 am

      awesome..tc..

      • raina on February 23, 2017 9:36 pm

        thanks kumu… you too take care dear

    7. vyshu10 on February 21, 2017 8:45 am

      awesome…micu so calm..8th wonder

      • raina on February 23, 2017 9:45 pm

        hi-five! vyshu! and i have made this 8th wonder… hehe… thank you dear

    8. Soujanya on February 21, 2017 8:46 am

      awesome

      • raina on February 23, 2017 9:46 pm

        thank you soujanya

    9. zelena81196 on February 21, 2017 8:49 am

      fabulous chapter……loved the morning scene…..continue soon……but no heartbreak please……

      • raina on February 23, 2017 9:48 pm

        thank you so much zelena!!!! very happy that you loved the morning scene!!!!! but sorry dear, the heartbreak is necessary!!!! sorry! sorry! very very sorry!

    10. aradhana on February 21, 2017 9:34 am

      Awesome Dr.. I loved it really

      • raina on February 23, 2017 9:48 pm

        aww!!!! thank you very much aaru di

    11. Anu Rathore on February 21, 2017 10:04 am

      Awesome…

      • raina on February 23, 2017 9:49 pm

        thanks anu

    12. Kaur Daljeet on February 21, 2017 10:21 am

      Awesome

      • raina on February 23, 2017 10:02 pm

        thanks kaur

    13. Simi on February 21, 2017 10:44 am

      Amazing.. ??

      • raina on February 23, 2017 10:02 pm

        thank you simi

    14. Stg on February 21, 2017 11:54 am

      Awesomeness overloaded?? read last 2 parts and they were also amazing..pls post next part soooon

      • raina on February 23, 2017 10:03 pm

        aww!!!!! thank you very much stg!!! next chapter is on the way dear

    15. Shibil on February 21, 2017 11:57 am

      Lovely ….scary abt precap ….

      • raina on February 23, 2017 10:04 pm

        thank you shibil!!!!!! precap is scary? hehe..

    16. Pramudi on February 21, 2017 12:04 pm

      Superb chapter raina.. Loved the morning scene. ?
      The dance was lovely.. Thanks to mica..?And dear thanks for the translation of that song.
      Waiting for the next part.

      • raina on February 23, 2017 10:05 pm

        thanks a lot dear. happy you loved the morning scene!! yeah yeah! thanks to mica!!!!!!!
        next chapter is on the way pramudi

    17. SNY on February 21, 2017 1:12 pm

      Amazing Raina…….!!!
      Solla vaarthaigale illai?????
      Nxt one soon….!!!!

      • raina on February 23, 2017 10:06 pm

        romba romba romba nandri sny!!!!! next chapter is coming soon

    18. anu on February 21, 2017 1:34 pm

      nyc

      • raina on February 23, 2017 10:06 pm

        thanks anu

    19. Arshaanya on February 21, 2017 3:43 pm

      Loved it…

      • raina on February 23, 2017 10:07 pm

        very happy you loved it arshaanya!!!!!
        thank you

    20. niku on February 22, 2017 8:20 pm

      Aamazing…

      • raina on February 23, 2017 10:07 pm

        thanks niku!!!! can’t believe! itna chota comment?

    21. Shifa96 on February 23, 2017 12:00 am

      Awesome

      • raina on February 23, 2017 10:08 pm

        thank you shifa

    22. mica on February 23, 2017 12:42 am

      Rainaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa… huh!!!!!! i talked you yesterday night naaaa!!!!!!
      gooosshhh,….woaah am i kinda that bossy ? huh!!!!
      pay mee.. pay meee !! you hired me in this FABULOUS FF !!!!
      but why too short ? huh! look na, your this episode too short as my skirt! god! s*xy me 😀 😀
      lloooveee it sooo much Rainaaa….

      • raina on February 23, 2017 10:10 pm

        i submitted this before you talked to me!!!!!! pay you? am sorry mica, i didn’t sign any contract with you to pay you any sort of money!!!!!!!!!!!!
        yeah very sorry!!!!!!!! that its short….. getting busy nowadays!!!!!!!!!!!!
        very very very happy that you loved it micu!!!!!!!!!!!!
        thank you dear

    23. MAHIRA on February 23, 2017 1:01 am

      what a beatiful dance…
      and ha!!!! shameless me, of course my favourite scene is the 4.00 morning wake up special Swara!
      shona???? ttttt….. don’t you know how are men in the early morning??? poor Sanskar!!! having her just laying on him :p ( and i’m absolutely nottalking about the angry men who don’t like being waken up…. it’s more biogical issue 😉

      • mica on February 23, 2017 9:39 pm

        gooosshhhhhh.. Mahira didii!!!!! what happen to men in morning ? omggg!!!!!

      • MAHIRA on February 23, 2017 10:07 pm

        ehem… ehem…
        how to say it ? it’s just that almost all boys/men are somehow very “tensed” in the morning… they wake up hard-ly…. so having a sweet beautiful girl laying on them completely is kinda difficult to handle!… more effects on the natural situation!
        this is what probably brought that soooo shocked expression on Sanskar’s face when he asked “Swara, what are you doing upon me?” when Swara was happily jumping!
        really?

      • raina on February 23, 2017 10:12 pm

        *bowing my head in front of you my dear shameless leader* very glad you loved it didi!!!!!!!! biological issue? what happen to men in morning??????????????? you made me very curious…..huuuu…. tell me tell me tell me!!!!!
        thank you very much didi!!!
        love you

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