YOU ARE NOT PURE [WAS MY DECISION RIGHT ] part 3

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HII GUYS ANNIYA BACK WITH NEW PART OF ‘DOES MY DECISION WAS RIGHT’. THANKS FOR LOVING THIS OS .A BIG SRY TO U JWALA DI. CAN U I CALL U DI. TOMORROW REALLY I BECOME SO FURSTED, I STARTED WRITING THAT PART IN MY LAPPY. I ALMOST COMPLETED IT BUT NICK OF TIME MY STUPID LAPPY HANG. IN FUR STATION I CLOSE IT. WHEN I AGAIN OPEN IT I SAW HALF PART IS NOT SAVED. THAT TIME I FELT TO THROW IT SOMEWHERE, AGAIN I MANAGED MYSELF. I STARTED WRITING THEN DIFF PROBLEM COME. MY SIS FRNDS COME THEY WANTED TO USE MY LAPPY FOR FILLING SOME FORM. I GAVE THEM MISTAKENLY THEY DELETED WHOLE PART. THAT TIME I FELT LIKE KILLING ALL OF THEM. AFTER SOME TIME SOMEHOW I MANAGED TO COMPLETE . WHEN TIME COME TO UPLOAD WIFI CONNECTION START TO CREATE PROBLEM. AFTER FACING SO MUCH PROBLEM , I SUBMITTED IT. SO I THOUGHT IF TODAY SILENT READER NOT COMMENT MY ALL HANDWORK GO IN VAIN. SO I SAID THAT I WILL NOT UPDATE NEXT PART. SRY TO EVERYONE.
THANKS FOR COMMENTING ON PREVIOUS PART. NOW I AM STOPPING BAK BAK.
COMING TO LAST PART

at cofee shop…
present…
SWARA POV..
this coffee shop play great importance my life. i am still lost in myself until some giggling sound seek my attention. i turned in that direction from which sound is coming. by seeing that i really become shock. it again shake me i mummer ed ” ADITI ”.
aditi is sitting in someone lap, but this time that someone is not sanskar. he is one of bushiness rival of sanskar. i thought to not poke my nose in this matter. i still thinking about aditi character. someone tap my shoulder from behind. he asked me ” does r u miss mitra who has come from delhi regarding some divorce case.” from his voice i quickly come to know who is that man. still praying myself my assumption should wrong. it’s not like that i am fearing from facing my past. but i hate him. if he again come infront of me, i may loose my control. somehow i managed myself i turn my gaze in his direction. my assumption is totally correct. he is sanskar maheswari. destiny is again going to play game with me but this time i am strong. i am ready face all things. i could easily see same shock in his face. i offer him seat.
i replied him yes i miss mitra who has come from delhi to ur divorce case. he is still in shock like he had got 100 volt current. i shake him to seek his attention. i again replied him same.

” Hii swara, how r u. it feel good to know u became successful.” sanskar managed to ask her
before he completed his sentence swara cut him in middle…

”i am not here to answer ur question. nor receiving ur greeting. ur pa ask me to come here . first i denied him, but he somehow managed to convice me . most important i am here for some business deal. if i felt u r correct then only i will take ur case. now tell me reason of divorce. one more thing i totally keep personal life and professional life apart.” swara

” okay sorry, i want divorce because my wife has cheated on me ” sanskar managed to tell him with pain in his eyes.

” i want to know all things how ur marriage life going on, how u come to know she is cheating. every small details i want. if u r not comfortable with me. then u can hire other lawyer because without knowing everything i don’t take any case in my hand so choice is ur. one more thing if i felt u r really victim then only i will take ur case otherwise clearly no. ” swara said him with professional attitude.

again both are silent. this time also swara break it.

” i think u r not in comfort. then sry i can’t help u.” swara
she began go from there, sanskar shouted her name ..
” swara………… i am ready. ”
swara comeback seated in front of him .

sanky [start conversation with some hesitation ]; after divorce from my first wife . i was in guilt. so for someday i don’t went office to clam my self. after one week i able to comeout from guilt. i decided to join office again that time i am so lonely. aditi used to cheer me. she always use to managed my mood. we both continue our relation ffor nearly one year. one day i decided to propose her. i proposed her for marriage she also said yes . that time i felt myself most luckiest man….
his voice become choked…
swara give him water and ask him continue
after one month we both marry each other. that night we both are so happy, we celebrate our first night. days are passing like this. after one year just 10 days before our anniversary, i found someone from my company is selling details to my rival ” rajat gupta ”. i began to search culprit. i also discussed these things to my wife. she advice me to leave this thing on her. she will find culprit. i nodded with her. after 10 days our marriage anniversary come. i decided to surprise her. i reach home early . I don’t know i am going to receive my life biggest shock. i entered in my house with using some spare keys. i heard some sound from my room . i thought there must be some thief . i began to panic thinking about aditi. with some courage i managed to enter in room. after seeing that scenario i shattered.
now tears are started flowing from his eyes. swara understand what must he had seen. still she ask him continue.
i saw aditi is in intimate position with my business rival rajat. i don’t spoke anything. after some time both come to sense and notice me. instead of feeling guilty my wife told me baby wait we both have to enjoy some more time. after that we both will also enjoy.
Her answer give me another shock. without saying anything i rush to hall. i seated there lifelessly. nearly after one hour rajat canme out. i rushes to him, i hold his collar but for my another my slapped me. ask me leave rajat , rajat went from there i decided to confront her. i asked her what is that ? she replied me that is ” love “. i asked her give me divorce she denied me.
after that i began to search for lawyer but no one want to take my case due to first divorce. i also don’t had any proof to prove adit’s crime. one lawyer took my case , in court she prove me characterless she also told judge still she want to give me one chance. judge agree with her. judge give me order to stay in marriage. daily infront of me my wife use to make love with rajat. i don’t able to do anything. i began to search other lawyers, when i share my problem with atul, my paa. he suggest me ur name. i ask him to contact u. in starting u also denied to come kolkata for my case. somehow atul managed to convince you.
now tell me u will take my case or not. if ur answer is no i don’t have any gut feeling u r free to take ur decision.

”i want sometime to study case. after checking from my resources i will give my answer to atul . as i already told u if i felt u r right i will fight for u.” swara

Both went in different direction…
sanky is walking on road. he began to think his last five year…
sanky pov…
in these five year i had lost my everything. first swara due to my mistake, when i found aditi in intimate position that day i reliase swara pain. i want to ask her forgiveness. i went her home. her dadi replied she is dead for them. after inquiring i found that swara had said no to second marriage.so her dadi made her leave house. now no one knows where is she ?. my company is also in loss, i don’t able to manage it. it seem to destiny is playing same game. that day swara had come to surprise me on our anniversary , she received her biggest shock. on same day i also receive biggest shock . i lost everything soon i am going to loose my company someone is coming from delhi to takeover on it.
pov end…..

three days later…
atul inform sanskar swara want to meet him at coffee shop.
sanky pov..
coffee shop is always turning point in my and swara life. this is same coffee shop at which i agree to marry her, same coffee shop where she ask me divorce, same coffee shop where i again meet her after five long years. that day i completely in shock to see her. she turn more beautiful. after seeing her all guilt came in my mind how i cheated on her. for sometime i am completely loss in her thoughts. when she touch me i felt current passing through my body. that i never i felt. this is not first time she is touching but this time i felt some sensation in my body. i reached at coffee shop, again i mesmerized to see her. i began fall for her. she notice me i am somewhere lost. she shouted my name, i come in my senses. i take sit in front of her. her answer give me shock. i thought she will deny me for my case. but she say yes i will….
pov end.
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swara pov…..
after listening his story i don’t feel any pain. only pity for him, destiny has played same game with him. that once destiny had played with me. i said him i need time for thinking about his case. after searching alot i found aditi trap him with rajat. after knowing truth i become confuse , what should i do ? i closed my eyes to know answer, my heart rply me yes u should. justice is most important. i call atul to fix my meeting with him.
now i here…
after telling him my decision, we decided to appeal in court.we receive hearing date after two weeks.
pov end…

after two weeks…
sanskar pov…
today is first hearing. in these two weeks i completely fall for her . i decided to propose her after getting divorce. we entered in court, opposition lawyer accuse my character that i had cheated my both wives. somehow swara proof my innocence . finally i got divorce. now i am free, i can propose swara, i will ask forgiveness. i know my crime is big but her heart is also big. she will surely accept me. first i have to go office for deal.
i reaches office i find a lady is in my cabin. i become happy seeing her. she is my swara , my love. but………. atul also come inside my cabin…. another shock is waiting for me. he told me swara for collaboration.n. With heavy heart i sign deal. without anything saying she went from there. i decided to ask for coffee date as treat. first she denied after many insistence she finally agreed.

swara pov…
i am now in sanskar cabin, the same cabin which once shattered me. this time i am here for deal. after signing deal . sanskar asked me for coffee. after his so many insistence i noodled yes.

at coffee shop..
sanky pov..
i decided to propose her this place. this place is very imp in our life. she came here at 7 pm. after co fee i settle on knee she seem to confuse i simply ask for forgiveness. she reply me i forgive u long back. i become happy, later i propose her. she made stand on my feet. ask same question which she had ask long back. ” does i able to give her wife rights ” . this time i without delay i said yes but,,,,, her rply make me shock.She come close to me and whisper………

swara; sanskar whenever u will come close to me i will always remember. u are not pure. i will not able to give u husband rights. sry…

i am still in shock. she is going far away from me. i didn’t have courage to stop her. somehow i managed my self i go behind her , i plead her plz comeback but nothing work. she simply go away….

swara pov..
he proposed me for marriage but my decision is final. now i am again going to start a new journey without sanskar or any other man……….. with same unanswered question” DOES MY DECISION WAS RIGHT ”

end…
coffee shop had played very imp. role in my ts and Delhi also. both is turning point in their.only due to ur support i able to write it. i also don’t know how i able to write this much.this os become a ts due to u………so thanks….
i think this is perfect ending. plz share ur views. and do u like swara rply……..
do u like sanky punishment…
tomorrow i will going to post prologue of new os.it will love story. plz read that…
to know more about my new os. stay tuned with anniya….
bye, take care and love u all.

66 comments

  1. Paru

    Superb yaar….loved a lot…the most beautiful os that I ever read…..πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„i loved the brilliant line…I can’t give u husband’s right u r not pure…..wow
    This is masterpiece dear…..must say…try to publish this story and cpy rite

  2. Madhu

    Superb ending dr….i am , was and will swasan fan. But nice ending dr….. waiting 4 next ff….

  3. Jwala

    |Registered Member

    love you anniya.. you are so sweet.. you can call me di.. I loved it more than anything. . this is the best ts I ever read.. It gives me goosebumps. . If swara forgive sanskar I could not digest it.. but now it is perfect. . love you so much for this.. sanskar didn’t deserve swara. he insulted her and cheated her.. no forgiveness for him.. awesome, amazing.. marvellous. . fantastic , wonderful no words for this dear.. I’m so happy by reading this os. pain is not only deserved for girls.. love you girl.. write more. love you always

    • Anniya

      |Author

      Glad Di u like it. Whenever I read any story in which swara forgive sanky.I felt like it’s wrong. Moreover if in this story he don’t deserve any chance. It’s not only his mistake but crime…
      No forgiveness for crime….

  4. Radhika

    awesome part i read 2 and 3 part today itself and i am very happy as my wish is fulfilled and i love swara character as she play various roles in this ts her honesty, thinking, telling the truth, fight with society because only few people in society fight with the society for themselves and she is one of them, her successfull career, being a lawyer her justice and her behaviour and doing justice there are many shades of swara shown in this ts ur writting skills are awesome and really good to describe her every character loved it but sanky heartbroken is right or wrong i don’t know because it is right at many places and also wrong on a few but this now nothing matter for sanky as he got his punishment and he know the difference between coal and gem so the at the end i am also blank about the last question does her decision was right but really a great job as i really loved it every emotion and character and different shades of characters love them and what to say about ur writting and thinking skils its awesome

    i know i bore u so much and sorry for that but what to do i am like this only and once again sorry for keeping u bore

    • Anniya

      |Author

      U don’t bore me intact I am very happy that u love swara character. About sanky punishment I know it’s too much. But I want too show same pain which swara had face. So it’s.

      • Radhika

        thats my pleasure that i make u happy and yup may be it is the ending that the story needs that sanky have to bear the same pain which swara goes through but anyhow its a fab story

  5. Chanu

    Wow… Superb…. Fantastic… Lv this os vry much…
    This is called perfect ending.. swaras decision ws alwys right.. &2dy her decision made me soo hpy.. I lv swara in this os…
    & the last reply for sanskar is the best part.. It ws rly mindblowing. Write more os.. Ill surely read them.. Im waiting 4 ur lvs story..
    Keep writing dr
    Be hpy alwys.. πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

  6. Pramudi

    Superb anniya..
    Best ending for your ts.. Loved it.
    I agree with swara’s decision. She took the best decision in her life. Proud of her.
    Very hppy cause u have given the bestbest ending. Great work dear. You r a great writer. πŸ‘
    Do write more.

  7. amy

    i m speechless dear..no words to describe…it is one of the best ff i read..by readng 1st part i little bit felt dat incomplete.but now u give a perfect endng..u give justice to swara’s charctr…i loved the reply of swara..dat was outstandng..hats off u dear..u r a brilliant writer..thnk u for giving such a wndrfull os..plz write more os dear..truly i m really imptessed by d reply of swara..

    • Anniya

      |Author

      Thanks…
      Don’t say me thanks as writer , when I read some comments ending should be diff. Only due to ur views, I able to write it.
      So thanks to u….
      For giving ur honest views..
      All of u deserve appericiation not me…

  8. Vidhi

    I just loved swara’s answer…. N the chapter was amazing…. Loved it😘😘😘😍😘😍

  9. Riya

    Its sssssssuuuuupppppeeerrrbbbb… Just loved it.. 😍😍 u nailed it..😎..β€πŸ‘Œ

  10. little princess

    Outstanding ts…this part especially swara’s reply is mind blowing..just loved the way she faced him n replied him in his own way… Never expected such reply from her…feeling too much respect for ur this swara’s character… This is one of the best n beautiful shot that i have ever read that has a powerful n a good meaningful message for mankind…great job…could see ur sincerity n dedication in this story line…let me tell u that today u proved that u r a good writer as well as a genuine person…this story is really a light towards new path for many of them who suffered n taunted by the cruel society to hell….this story conveys such helpless people who wants justice n reason to live to come out of their dark past n hellish life and to explore the light of happiness,success justice,self respect n all that each n every human deserves…let them also live like others…even they r human beings that r created by almighty…its not their fault that they faced such evils..its all bcoz of their fate..so we cant blame them…moreover we dont have the right to blame them…anyone could be at their place..bcoz we cant predict that whats gonna happen with us in future…so consider them also as one among us n support them to come out of their past n help them to move on in their life…

    really respect u for ur wonderful thought n the way u depicted it…hats off….

    Keep on writing amazing shots…eagerly waiting for ur upcoming works…good bless u….take care

    • Anniya

      |Author

      Thanks for such wonderful comment. U said well we don’t have any right to give some pain who knows what is fate going to play

  11. Deeksha

    |Registered Member

    Wow dear… Loved the ending…….. Continue writing dear… Lots of love 😘😘😘😘😘

  12. Divyanshri

    |Registered Member

    Awsome….. Anniya…..what a story πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
    ..loved it….. love u …….
    swara’s did right….. πŸ˜€

  13. SHAN

    |Registered Member

    Awesome anniya superb ending…. U gave the ending as i expected…… Fabulous dr….. But one small request dont write sad stories dr…. My heart cant accept sad ending or hero heroine dint get united…. Even i dont watch that kind of movies….. So pls give us happy wala os…. But this os is outstanding dr

    • Anniya

      |Author

      Thanks …
      Same 4 me whenever I read sad ending. My heart pains. Don’t worry next os will have happy ending…….

  14. Sumeeta

    |Registered Member

    Superb part.swara to sanskar,”u r not pure.i am not able to give u husband right”.i liked this convo very.this line is so rebellious line for me.truly we girl specially marrid girl have no right to tell this statement to husaband.par mujhe sanky k lie bhi bura laga.
    Aur rahi frustaion ki baat to kabhi kabhi dunia ki har cheez hame irretate karn ki koshis karte hain.to chill maro yaar.aisa hota hai kabhi kabhi.so bee cool.aur hame aisa suparb dhamak wala story dete raho

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