To Be Or Not To Be : When Hurt Turns 2 Love: RUMYA,ISHKARA FF : Part 9[By Renima]

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To Be Or Not To Be : When Hurt Turns 2 Love: RUMYA,ISHKARA FF : Part 9 [By Renima] Hello Ishqies, Big sorry and Pls don’t get angry on me for updating it so lateee….. Thank god, as now I got a quality leisure time which means a valuable time for me 2 update this one….. guys I got sucked with some office work and as part of project am out of station now….My return ticket was confirmed on may 11 th and I was thinking that probably I will be able 2 update this one after that day only….. And ff writers, pls forgive me as am not getting time so that my comments will not be present on ur wonderful works….Big sorry for that, kindly send links via pm so that I will be able 2 check it when I get time…. Ok…if u missed any episodes, here are its link…..

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Scene – 23 {@ Oberoi Mansion}
Its almost around 10 pm night and rudy was sitting in the hall only… He was slowly falling asleep before his accountancy notes …..Sowmya arrives in oberoi mansion and stares rudra for a while…
Sowmya : I think rudra needs rest now…..Yesterday also he didn’t slept well because he was completing my assignments only…..he looks so tired…..[sumo moved near rudy and finds that he was trying hardly 2 open his eyes fully] Rudra…..
Rudra : [rudy rubbed his eyes and stoods up from sofa] Sumo…..Thank god u reached home….. I made paastah for u….Actually shivaay bhaiya is expert in cooking and am not like that…..So may be u fill not find it as tasty, but haa….I will try my level best 2 make delicious dishes for u, u just give me the menu only…..I…
Rudra continues his talk, and sowmya’s eyes were almost filled with tears only……She was staring rudy with wet eyes only…..
Sowmya : Thank u so much…..rudra…..
Rudra : Thanks…..why sumo, I didn’t get u ….
Sowmya : That parathas……U made it for me , right ?
Rudra : Oh!! I forgot 2 ask u, do u ate it ? I mean my official taster is O….Whenever I prepares something O will taste it first, no matter whether it’s gud or bad….But today O was not here and …….
Sowmya : Rudra…..U are too gud….
Rudra : Sumo…..That parathas were really gud ?
Sowmya : Haa…of course…..In fact I felt too much hunger and I emptied the tiffin box within few minutes….
Rudra : Really ? Then why u are crying ?
Sowmya : No….am not crying…..rudra……I think some thing sucked in my eyes only….[sumo wipe out her tears and pretends a smile…..rudy holds sumo’s hand and sumo stares rudy’s eyes…] Rudra : Sumo…I know that u are in tension…..And it’s clear in ur tears…..I can see it in ur face…
Sowmya : Tension!!! What ?? [sowmya stared rudy in confusion] Rudra : Mmm….I mean 2 say….U finds hard 2 manage job as well as classes, won’t u ?

Sowmya : U was saying this only……I thought some thing else…..[sowmya takes a breath in sign of relief] Rudra : What ?
Sowmya ; Wooh Actually….I…
Rudra : [interrupts] I know it…..
Sowmya : What !!! [shocked] Rudra : Sumo…I can understand it well as in hospital u said me that no one is able 2 understand ur problem and u finds difficult 2 share it with any one…..And u felt u are losing everything…..But sowmya ….I just want 2 tell u that I really can’t see u like these…..
Sowmya : What u mean ?
Rudra : I mean I want my sumo back…..That sumo which I know as the most care free girl, who is sweet and the naughty person who use 2 call me as cry baby and use 2 tease me for my stupidity and who use 2 stare me with her rounded eyes like an adamant kid, who use 2 taunt me and pull my legs and I…..[rudra literally cries] Sowmya : Rudra….please…….Don’t cry ….If u will cry, I will also cry…..[sowmya’s eyes are drenched with tears] Rudra : U know some thing sumo…..I can’t see u as sad…..
Sowmya : Why ??

Rudra : Because….U are Love Angel…..And love angel makes every one 2 feel happy and she suggests solution 2 every one’s problem….Now u are thinking as sowmya only, just think as love angel…..sumo…
Sowmya : So u think that love angel is capable of solving everything…..rudra….u know what….As a love angel I can suggest but when it comes 2 myself it’s really hard 2 sort out things…..It;s really hard…..
Rudra : May be….But whatever it be I can’t see u as a cry baby….. Sumo…..[rudy hols sowmya’s hand in his hand] I promise u, I am always with u sumo……because u are my love angel…..And I don’t want 2 lose u……
Sowmya : Rudra…..[sowmya gets mesmerized with rudy’s statement, she was unable 2 take her eyes from him, tears were continuously falling down through her cheeks only….] Rudra : No more tears…..on ur round eyes….It is not suiting u…..I mean it….[rudy holds her face with his hands and wipe out her tears …..She slowly opened her eyes and stares rudy’s eyes……They share an emotional eyelock…..

[BGM….” Ankhon ki hai yeh khwahishein…… Ki chehre se teri naa hatein…………..
Neendon mein meri bas tere….. khwabon ne li hai karwatein…..
Ki teri ore mujhko leke chale…… Ye duniya bhar ke sab rastein
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon…… Ye tu kabhi soch na sake…..” [song-tenu itna mein pyaar, film-airlift] plays……

Rudy takes his hands from her face and signs her 2 give a smile, while sowmya finds tears in his eyes also….She slowly wipe out his tears and stares him….Rudy smiles with wet eyes] Sowmya : I can’t see tears in ur eyes also, it will make this love angel 2 cry only……………
Okay??
Rudra : I will try, sumo…..but I have a habit of being a cry baby…..So it happens…[rudy waves his hair and shows his mr. cool andaaz] Sowmya : Cry baby……u are wonderful….[sowmya smiles with wet eyes] Rudra : Once more…..call me as cry baby…..I just love 2 hear it…..
Sowmya : Cry baby……
Rudra : Oh, that was too bad, I think u need my protein shake…..
Sowmya : Why ?
Rudra : Because u said it in low voice, and I miss my moti’s energy in it….
Sowmya : Moti!!! Cry Baby…..How dare u called me as Moti ??
Rudra : Ah!!! Now u came as sumo, which I like……[rudy hugs her and gives a cute smile] Sowmya simply smiles and close her eyes …..sowmya’s mind voice…..”I am feeling myself 2 be lucky in ur arms, rudra…..When u wipe out my tears, I felt that u are born for me…..The way u takes care of me and the way u calls me as sumo, I really want u 2 call me like that forever…. It makes me 2 feel that u are mine only……Rudra…..Am not able 2 tell u when I find ur eyes before me……But now am lying down in ur heart and if u can hear me then all I want 2 say that U lives in my heart only……[sowmya started crying again and this time her tears have drenched rudy’s chest only……Rudra slowly hold sumo’s face in his hands and stared her….Sowmya was unable 2 stare rudy’s eyes as her eyes were filled with tears only….Rudy slowly kisses on her two eyes and forehead respectively…..Sowmya and Rudra stare each other’s eyes…..] Rudra : This is not fair, sumo….how can u cry again ?
Sowmya : What 2 do ? I have a habit of being a cry baby….[sumo mimics rudy’s cry baby style ] Rudra : Sumo….[rumya hold each other’s hand and smile each other] Sowmya : Any ways …..rudra now am feeling much happy…..By the way I think really u have 2 sleep now …..Because yesterday also u have not slept well…..
Rudra : Even I wish I could sleep….But these accountancy paper…..Almost an hour am trying 2 solve a problem and I think this question is from out of syllabus….
Sowmya : Is it ? Let me see…
Rudra : No…..sumo……U are tired and u needs rest…..
Sowmya : Rudra….yesterday u helped me and today am helping u…..That’s all….[sumo sits in the sofa and she goes through the problem in a glance and solves it within 5 mnts] Its really simple….I have solved it….. Rudra….Do u remember our professor already explained its method ?
Rudra : Really,when ?? I think that day I was absent…..

Sowmya : No u might be busy in revealing ur body before ur so called girl friends only…. Won’t u ?
Rudra : I don’t remember any thing……sumo….And these accounting problems are disturbing me…..What will I do, sumo……[rudy shows cry baby style] Sowmya : Okay…..Don’t be a cry baby…..today I will explain the method and u just listen to it carefully……Next time onwards u have 2 concentrate in ur studies……is that clear ?
Rudra nods his head and stares sumo…..
Sowmya : Will u just stare me like these whole night ? Sit here and listen 2 me……
Rudra : Ok….Madam…..[rudy sits near sumo] Sowmya : Madam!!! Any ways…..Leave it…..So rudra…first u have 2 take find the mean of the numbers given for u…..[sowmya continues 2 explain, rudy just stares her….. Her eyes were brightening like crystals and her lips were so charming like red strawberries only…….Her cheeks were so smooth and some of her hair was falling on her cheek and she was trying 2 kept them behind her ears by entangling fingers….Rudy felt her fingers were so beautiful as if they are conveying so many things 2 him….rudy places his hand on his chin and he was unable 2 take his eyes from his love angel…….In the midst sumo raise her head and finds rudy’s dashing eyes before her…..A pretty smile comes on her face also…..they share a romantic eyelock….] BGM…..”Dil vil chahat vahat mein ….Milti hein Tension Full….

Acche khaase bande ki hote hai batti gul…..
Yeh shikwaah shak tumhaara bematlab hai bilkul……
Kabhi banke toh dekho tum kisi simran ke rahul…..
Yeh risk kyun mein loon bhallah….. Fande mein kyunn daalun galaa…..aah….”plays
[sorry, I don’t know the complete lyrics of this song…..rumya fans…..if u guys know the lyrics then pls post it…..]

Scene – 24 {@ Oberoi Guest House}
Omkara decides 2 follow tej 2 find truth….He arrives @ oberoi guest house and hides in a corner of tej’s office room…..He finds that tej was engaged in phone call…
Tej : I can’ t wait any more……She is not ready 2 give the proof……Though we have kidnapped her sister, she still repeat the same line….”I don’t know” only…. I think before that girl should expose us, we have 2 do some thing 2 her sister……So that she will get some brain and she will cry before me 2 leave her little sister …..I think I have 2 meet directly that little sister…..and has 2 tell her that her sister not loves her…..[tej cuts the phone and takes his car] Omkara finds something fishy with tej’s act…..He also takes his car and follows tej….

Scene shifts 2 a godown …..
Tej : I have 2 do this….[tej takes the key from his shirt’s pocket and stares it with wicked smile…. [Omkara watches it from a distance and gets shocked…..Mean while tej gets an urgent call and key fell down in the ground as tej left the spot in rush] Omkara : What happened 2 Mr. Oberoi ? Why he left in a hurry ? I think I must keep an eye on him….[Omkara is abt 2 leave ….But soon he hears some one screaming……”Help…..Don’t do this 2 me…..” Omkara gets shocked and rushed near the door….He finds the room is locked from outside…But soon his eyes went on the key which were fallen on ground…he took the key and opens the door…..He finds that everything was dark only….He switch on his mobile light and moves forward…..All of a sudden his leg got hit and he heard some one screaming …”Ah!!” …Omkara turned his phone’s light towards there and finds a girl whose age is around 13 or 14 only…..Her hands and legs were tied in iron chains only…..Her face was not visible as her scattered hair was fallen on her face only…..Omkara finds scars on her hands and legs also….He slowly moved near the girl to see her face….When almost the light was fallen on her face, the girl screamed in a high voice….
Girl : No…..no…Go away…..Go away……[shouts] Omkara : Listen…..Pls….[omkara slowly touched her hand] Girl : Leave me…..[the girl beats omkara’s hand with her hands and starts crying] Why are u doing this 2 me ? It’s better u would have killed me…….[the girl raised her head and stares omkara with teary eyes….She is shocked 2 see omkara] Omkara ; Pls listen 2 me…..Am not here 2 kill u…..
Girl : Omkara!!!!
Omkara : U…U know me !!!!
Girl : Yeah….Am Mona…..U remember ishana di ?? I am ….her sister….Mona……Pls save my didi….
Omkara : Sure….I will save ishana and u….Don;t worry…..[omkara places his hand on her cheek……he finds a rod besides her which was actually placed there 2 beat her brutally…Since keys for the chains were not available, he decides 2 use the rod for breaking chains…..]

Mean while an unknown person comes there and gets panic 2 see the door as open…..He gets in with his gun and finds omkara who was trying 2 break the iron chains of Mona….He points out his gun on omkara’s head from behind…..Mona gets scared 2 see this…..His attention was completely on omkara’s face only…..He asked omkara 2 move bedide and raise his hands….In the midst, Mona slowly picked the rod and throws it on the unknown person’s legs….He screams and gun fells down….Omkara picks the gun soon and points out the gun on the guy…..
Omkara ; Go and tell Mr. Tej Singh Oberoi that omkara has revealed his secret…..Ask him 2 hide wherever he want….But he can’t escape from omkara’s eyes……He challenged me that he is my father and a son is not able 2 won over his father…..Now it’s my turn…..Tell him 2 prepare well because soon he will be failed before his son…..[guys stares omkara with much fear] Just get lost….Other wise….i will kill u…..[omkara takes the gun and guy left the spot in rush] Mona….Now u don’t need 2 get scared any more……He has gone….Mona….
Omkara turns behind and gets shocked 2 see that Mona has fainted on the floor……He rushed near her and places her head on his lap…..
Omkara : Mona…..Mona….[she didn’ t reacts, omkara slowly takes his hand and finds that his hands were stained in blood only ….Omkara placed his hand on her back and shocked 2 see wounds on her body……..Her cloth was almost torn there as continuously she undergone beating only…..Omkara removed his coat and covered her body with it and took her in his arms and takes her 2 his car……]

Scene – 25 {@ Ishana’s House}
Ishana finds some one is knocking the door late night…..
Paapa : Ishu beta…..I think they are the same goons only…..
Ishana : Paapa……don’t worry……I will show them what I can do…..[ishana takes the knife which was placed on the table and moves towards the door] She opens the door and gets shocked 2 see omkara with Mona….Her hands started shivering…..
Omkara : Don’t worry…..Ishana…Am not going 2 threaten u……Ur sister…Mona…..
Paapa : Who is there, ishu beta…..
Ishana : Paapa…..Mona….has…..arrived…
Paapa : What ?? I want 2 see my bacchi….Mona…[emotional] Ishana : Mona….[ishana touches on mona’s hand] Omkara….How u saved her ? [ishana’s eyes are filled with tears] Omkara : That is not important…..She has been kept in the godown for almost ….
Ishana : 2 months…..Come…omkara…..pls come….
Omkara gets into ishana’s house and places Mona on bed…..Mean while ishana finds blood stains on omkara’s hands….
Ishana : What happened 2 ur hand ?
Omkara : Actually ur sister is injured….When I picked her…..blood was….[ishana stares mona and finds omkara’s coat on mona’s body]

Ishana burst into tears ……
Omkara : Ishana…Pls control urself…..pls….I don’t know that ur sister was there…..and she fainted….…….[emotional] Ishana : I can understand…. She nods her head and brings water…..he sprinkles some drops of water on Mona’s face…… Slowly Mona opened her eyes and was trying 2 smile…..
Mona : Di….U…[she was not able 2 tell anything as her body was paining only] Ishana : Am here only…..mona…….Am here only…..[ishu makes mona2 drink few drops of water and waves her hand through mona’s forehead, mona again closed her eyes and falls 2 a calm sleep] Ishana : Omkara….. How u came 2 know it ?
Omkara : Ishana….U said me that it is before my eyes and am unable 2 find it…..I just followed ur words only…..
Ishkara stare each other’s eyes for a while….
Paapa : Ishana…..beta….
Ishana : Wooh paapa…..I will be back …..
Omkara : Yeah….Ishana…My hands…..I just want 2 go wash room…..
Ishana : It’s there……[ishu points out her finger on a corner] [omkara shook his head with a smile , ishu goes inside] Paapa : Who is with mona ?
Ishana : Paapa….he is omkara…..Actually he saved our Mona……Paapa…..
Paapa : I want 2 see him….beta…tell him 2 come inside….
Ishana : Ji paapa….
[ishana goes 2 the hall and finds that omkara was leaving her home…..Ishana rushed behind him and finds that omkara has taken his car 2 the road only….. She screams…. ”omkara…omkara…. “ Omkara finds ishana through his car’s rear view mirror….He stops the car and moves besides her….
Ishana : Thanks omkara…….
Omkara : Pls ….Don;t say thanks…..My apology is not enough for what ur sister has undergone,…..But still I really feel guilty of myself for what all things ur sister has faced….Am really very sorry……
Ishana : Omkara…..My paapa wants 2 see u….Pls come….
Omkara : I will surely come and meet him…..But not now……I just rectified one of my mistake only…….But I have 2 find a lot, as u said u can’t tell me and today I understood that literally for u it’s a question of life and death only….
Ishana : U are right….But now I don’t feel fear……Because I trust u……
Omkara : What ?
Ishana : U heard it right….Omkara…..U have saved my sister…..Mona….And for me that’s enough ……… More than myself I have faith on you….Omkara……Whatever u want 2 know….I will try my level best 2 give answers…….Because I think destiny has given me one more chance 2 win ur trust ……Will u trust me , omkara ?[literally cries] Omkara : I trust u….ishana….And do u trust me ?[omkara holds ishana’s hands and gets emotional…] Ishana : Yes…..[emotional] ISHKARA SHARE AN EMOTIONAL EYE LOCK……BGM ….” Kya khoob rab ne kiya
Bin mange itna diyaa
Warna hai milta kahaan….Hum kaafiron ko khudah
Hasraten abb meri tumse hai jaa mili
Tum duaa abb meri aakhiri bann gaye ….Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami bann gaye……
Tum mere aasmaan…..
Meri zameen ban gaye” [film-hamari adhuri kahani] plays…

After a while ishkara release their hands from hold…..
Ishana : Thanks a lot…..Omkara…..What I need is bit time only…..I will certainly come and will give all answers…..
Omkara : I know….Ishana…..Am really feeling much relief from my heart that finally today I was able 2 rub one of the sin from my hand, thanks ishana…..By the way if u need any help just make a phone call…..This is my card….[omkara takes his card from his shirt’s pocket] Ishana : I don’t need it…..Because ur number is still in my phone……May be u would have deleted my number…….won’t u ?
Omkara : Yes….I have deleted bela from my life and her number from my phone……That was my past only…..And I don’t want 2 remember it any more….[ishana stares omkara’s eyes] But now I have met ishana and I really want ishana in my life and her number in my phone….[om stares ishu for a while and smiles] Ishana : Why ?
Omkara : Because we both are victims of pains….And now we are fighters….Why can’t we fight together ? I mean here we can name a new bond …..Hi, I am omkara…..just omkara….I am in search of truth…. ……[omkara extends his hand towards her and smiles with eyes] Ishana : And am Ishana…..Just ishana……a fighter…..who is struggling only….[ishana extends her hands 2 omkara and smiles with wet eyes] ISHKARA stare each other’s eyes……and shake each other’s hands….BGM…..
”Jo naa keha sake tum, jo naa keha sake hum……………kehane lagi donon se wooh….
khamoshiyaan………..oh saathiya……saathiya….saathiya…..saathiya….
Baadalon mein gul naa jaaye hein jo lamhe tehare-tehare
Do dilon mein jazb kar de…..saare jazbein gahre….gahre….
Kal kyaa pata….mile naa…..mile…nazdeekiyaan….oh saathiya……saathiya” plays…..
Ishana : Bye….omkara….[ishana release her hand from omkara’s hand] Omkara : Bye…..[omkara gets into the car and waves his hand towards ishana, ishana smiles and omkara leaves]

Scene – 26 [@ Oberoi mansion] Sowmya : Rudra……Do u have any idea that how long we have been sitting here only ??
Rudra : I think around 2 hrs……
Sowmya : Rudra…..I have solved the accountancy problems….I think u have got it…..
Rudra : Haa….I …..got it…
Sowmya : Are u sure ??
Rudra : Yeah…..sumo…..why you are asking like that ?
Sowmya : Wooh actually I felt u was just staring me only……
Rudra : Me….no sumo…I was just looking @ u….
Sowmya : Really, rudra…..That’s what I said now….what’s the difference ?
Rudra : See looking is a verb and staring is also a verb…..No…staring is adverb……No….look is noun and looking means…..
Sowmya : Rudra….have u lose ur brain’s screw ?
Rudra : Why are u kidding me like shivaay bhaiya ?
Sowmya : Seriously what’s wrong with you…verb, adverb, now u will start giving lectures about noun , pronoun also? Seems I am in a boring English grammar class only…..
Rudra : U asked it all of a sudden and i was just…..
Sowmya : Any ways leave it……I hope that u have understood it……
Rudra : Haa…And one more thing……Am not like that….
Sowmya : What ?
Rudra : Actually when u was sitting there I was not able 2 take my eyes from u…..I just [email protected] ur eyes, cheeks and hair only …..I swear….sumo….I don’t have any wrong intention……I swear…..
Sowmya : Rudra,……u know some thing…U are so innocent…..Like I could say u are the best….And that’s make u so special…..[sowmya smiles]

Rudra : That means am special……2 u….right??
Sowmya : Yeah….u are like a hero for love angel…….[ sowmya feels shy and she makes a cute smile] Rudra : Hero…..me…..[rudy waves his hand on his head like SRK and close his eyes by stretching both hands….rudy’s dream sequence plays.….Sowmya is in a bridal pretty lehanga and rudy is also in a gorgeous bridal sherwani and shall only… “tujhe dekha toh yeh jaana sanam….pyaar hota hein deewana sanam…”.[DDLJ]music plays and rudy is giving rose 2 sumo and sumo is extending her hand 2 receive the flower from rudy with a beautiful smile… Rudy has almost lost in his dream and was smiling only…..Sowmya slowly raised her head and smiles….She looks every where in a glance and stare rudy’s face ……Rudy was still dreaming with a cute smile only….Sowmya slowly kisses on rudra’s cheek and runs away…..Rudy’s dream sequence got break……He touches his on cheek and opens his eyes….He thinks for a while….”Yaar rudy….in dream there was no kiss-wiss….But why I felt that sumo has kissed me ? And where is sumo….She was here only……I think I am dreaming too much…….Sumo has went 2 room for sleeping only……Mr. Rudra Singh Oberoi…now it’s time for u 2 sleep…..Else O and Shivaay bhaiya will again tease u….” [rudy goes 2 omkara’s room]

Scene – 27 {@ Oberoi Guest House}
Tej : What happened swethlana ? Why called me so urgent?
Swethlana : Tej…..just see this…..[my puppy…..she is dead….] Tej : How is it possible ?
Swethlana : I don’t know Tej…..I just poured milk on it’s bowl and see now it’s dead…..
Tej : It’s a silly thing….I will bring another one for u…..
Swethlana : No Tej….It’s not a silly thing….Some one intentionally killed it…..
Tej : What u want 2 say ?
Swethlana ; Am telling the fact….only…..Tej….
Mean while the guy who troubled omkara and mona arrived there and screamed ….Sir….
Tej ; Are u mad ? Why are u shouting like this ?
Guy : Omkara…..I mean sir…ur son….he made mona 2 rescue from the godown…..
Tej : What !!!! [shocked] Guy : Haa sir….He took my gun from me and that girl mona beated on my leg……..and omkara took that girl with him only……He warned me that he is near 2 ur secret and soon he is going 2 find out it……
Tej : No…..this is not possible…..This is not possible @ all…..[tej breaks the glass which was placed in the table and gets extreme anger] Swethlana gets shocked….

PRECAP : Stood like a phoenix bird from ashes, as it will teach u that your life is worth because your life is not a ball which has 2 be kicked off……

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37 Comments
  1. It is awesome dii….

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lot

  2. Ruby_MarNy

    Woww!! Awesome.. tej such a creep tortured the poor soul,mona for two months.. what a horrible man?? In DBO too he is behaving like this..
    Loved rumya scene especially rudra ‘s dream sequence..
    Ishkara even though short but I loved it..they started fresh..Bela is out from Om’s life..now,only ishana..

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks ishana….tej….will get shock pe shock on my ff….wait for it…and depends on the story, some times it’s hard 2 focus on two couples on single episode….so ishkara was short….sorry for it…..next time i will try 2 make longer one….

  3. Nithu

    awsm diiiiiii

    1. Renimarenju

      Thank u nithu

  4. Aarti32

    It was great Renima!! Do I need to mention dat I luvd your precap..Aaj bhi!!

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lot…aarti

  5. Alekhika20

    Superb updt

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks dear

  6. Niriha

    Awesome

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks and ur dp is damn beautiful…i liked it……

  7. AMAZING EXCELENT OUT STANDING CUTE SWEET BEAUTIFULL MIND BLOWING????????????

    ALL BGM IS PERFECT AMAZING BEAUTIFULL

    RENIMA DI ShivIka ke liye vote kijiye wo log deserve karthe hai SPA AWARDS.i know aap IshKara ka fan hai but ab saare fans ko ek hokar ShivIka ko jithvana hai.so please vote for ShivIka.agar aap vote Kiya hai tho thank you.mere liye all couples are equal.i know main zyaada pasand IshKar aur RuMya ko kartha hu.but Hai tho all super na.ShivIka ho GauriKa ho all couples are awesome aur iss time saari fans ko milkar apna fans power dikhana chaahiye aur support karna chaahiye.so that way iam request
    please vote for ShivIka and GauriKa.

    RENIMA DI YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER.AAPKI TARIF KE LIYE MUJHE NAYA WORD SEARCH KARNA HOGA.

    KEEP IT UP TAKE CARE?????????

    1. Renimarenju

      I already voted for shivika , uff…,..yaad dilane ki koi zarurat nahi hai…..haa am ishkara fan, but iska matlab yeh nahi ki mein shivika se naaraz hun…..aisa kuch bhi nahin…..i like them a lott… but ib is actually a show of shivomru’s life and their love leads….that’s what made ib as special 2 us…..and inititally they maintained it well…but abb pinky ki drama aur negativism mujhe ib dekhne se rok rahi hein….pinky itni bhi buri nahi hain jaise show mein dikha rahe hein….kyunki starting episodes mein ek baar women empowerment mein pinky apni view batai…ki shivaay uska ek hi beta hai….woh zyada care karti hein…..isliye zyada pyaar bhi hein….woh possesive hein….lekin anika ke achai jaanne ke baad holi mein usne holi ke din accept bhi kiya thaa…uski complaints theek hein….kyunki sso zyada waqt anika ke saath hein and pinky ko space nahi de raha hein…ho toh woh sso ki maa .hai naa…sso ko yeh baat samajhna zaruri hein….par iss tarah apne hi bete ki khushi…yaani anika ke khilaaf wicked planning kare…..yeh toh mere liye acceptable thing nahi hein…tej show ke shuruwat se bura hai….om ko dard diya…jahnvi ko drunker banaya…bina kissi sharam se swethlana ke saath affair rakha…..par pinky….toh bura nahi…usne jhanvi ko hamesha support kiya and om ke taraf uski special care….hein…woh sirf do episodes mein mila…..jab om pinky ke gaalon ko touch karke bola…”choti maa aap bahut acchi hein” and pinky ne raksha bandhan mein rudy ke heroic andaz ki taaeef bhi ki…. prinku jab royi toh kaha ki….”aaj tumhari din hein…..teri har wishes puri hogi”……aise kitne moments dikhaye hein pinky ke dil ki achai ko portray karte huye show mein…..but abb toh ib completely badal gaya hein…ek aur baat hein sso kuch pata karta hein toh omru ke saath share karta hein…abb omru bhi nahi hein show….mein….haa rudy kabhi-kabhi aata hein…..mushkil se ek episode …i think….and show puri tarah shivikabaaz ban chuki hein, and rumya kahan hein……chalo omie ke liye dbo hein and bahut jald rikara scenes hoga, but yaar sumo kaa kya hua…and beech mein ranveer ko laakar cvs ne prinku ko high light bhi kiya thaa….abb uska kya hua, i mean ranveer accha nahi hein……phir bhi thoda scenes prinku ko mila toh thaa…joh show mein twist laaya thaa….uska kya huaa….waise show ki shuruwat mein prinku ek supporting role mein hi thi, kyunki uski koi lead yaa uski story pe focus nahi thi……toh we can understand that prinku ko role naa mile toh bhi show theek hein…but what about rumya and why shivay-omkara bond is not showing ? Dekho inn sab reasons ki wajah se mujhe ib accha nahi lag rahi hein …..and shivika ko hamesha pasand karti hun, but cv’s are biased and now total attention is 4 shivika only….that’s what make me 2 stop watching ib…… and sabse pehale maine shivika ko vote di….and gauri aur omkara ko bhi votes di hein….

      And uff….thanks for commenting…..and meri ff pein jin pairs ko screen space nahi milti hein…mein unnko high light karke likhti hun….yeh meri choice hein…..of course ff mein writers apne pasnad ko high light karke hi k=likhta hein….but show mein cv’s ko sabka dhyaan rakhna padta hein…..kyunki ib ke promo mein aisa tha…”ek kahani ke teen hisse…..shivay, omkara aur rudra….kaise hoga inn bhaiyon ke zindagi ” i still remember that promo…..but now they have forgot that concept……

      1. Thank you for voting.main bhi soch thi hu agar pinky ki ye stupid track dikhana tha tho holi ki dhin anika pinky ko ek Kiya kyu.patha hai Holi ki dhin pinky anika ki scene dekh kar main socha tha ab unki achi bonding dhikengi.anika ko ek maa ka pyaar milega.but un logone wo bhi karab kiya.patha hai isse tho mujhe jhanvi pe bhi barosa gaya hai.CVS jhanvi ko bhi bigadegi.shivay ko bhi maa wife ko equal imp dhena chaahiye.but yaha saari galthi CVS ki hai.jab DBO start hua tho main socha dho show main ShivOmRu scenes dhikeyengi.aur AniGauSau ka bond milenga.ShivOmRu tho dhoor ki baath AniGauSau ka bond aaj thak nahi mila.main bhi kabhi soch thi hu.IB Jo theen bhaiyon ki story bolke start hua wo ab ShivIka pe end hua.main ab ye soch tha hu.har week pe IB aur DBO main agar ye log Obro moment dikhaungi tho acha hoga har episode main nahi tho ek dho episode main o bro moment mile tho acha hai.RuMya ka mujhe kuch patha nahi.leenesh(rudra)ek interview main bola rudra ka story start hone wala hai.phir main RuMya ki twitter pe dekha Rudra ka story may last pe start hoga wo kisi actress ki saath mock test kar rahi chemistry check karne aisa kuch.soumya bhi hai.shayad love traingle ka chance hai.patha nahi ye true Hai ya nahi.main tho ye chatha hu ki RuMya ka story IshKara ki jaise na ho.IshKara ki baath alag tha.RuMya tho married hai so end karna nahi chaahiye.

        Mujhe aapki ye baath pasand hai ki aap unki story dhika thi hai jinko show pe imp na milthe.i think GK kabi bhi dho lead couple ki base main show banaya nahi.thabi tho DBO main RuMya ko jaga nahi miltha.three lead couple ki 1 hour show pe dhikana easy nahi I know but ab DBO banaya haina phir bhi ye RuMya ko imp nahi dhetha ye mere ko samajh nahi aatha.GK aur CVS bool gayi hai ek kahani ki theen kisse wala promo thabi hame obro moment nahi miltha.jo show three bhaiyon ki bonding bolke start hua wo ShivIka pe end hua dekh kar main bhi sad hu.iss liye jab thak o bro moment RuMya nahi miltha thab thak main show tv pe nahi dekhunga.
        Verna ki ek ff uss main wo IB aur DBO connect karke story likhthe hai.aur uss main o bro moment RuMya sab kuch milthe hai.uss FF ka naam”life has something to teach u so learn that lesson”aisa kuch.aap wo ff padegi tho aapko sab samajh aayega.
        Mujhe sad iss baath Hai ki aap sabhi ff writer ki story hame dekhna nahi miltha balki padna miltha hai.kaash ye sab show main bhi hotha saare scenes dekhne ka Jo maza miltha.

        Thank you for reply my comment.agar meri comment aapko heart Kiya Hai tho SORRY.

  8. Wow di!!!!!.:) It felt so nice reading your ff after such a long time…and i seriously never ever have the perfect words for each piece you write…because all of them are like the finest diamonds, whose beauty and brightness just keeps you tangled amd lost in it…i love, love, LOVED this track
    …. It’s just AMAZING!!!! Rumya​ story…wow!!!!!!!! Finally it’s like that rumya is still part of the show. I loved the beautiful chemistry pf this cutie couple described… And Ishkara…WOHOoooooo!!!!!!! ????????????????????? This os what i feel!!!! What a track, seriously what a track!!!? Om saving Ishu’s sister….Now that’s some heroics Omkara deserves…In DBO, they mever showed him as an actual Male lead. Rhey always try to overshadow the stupid dramas over his charming attractive, beautiful and the most unique personality ???????? And THIS is the way i want Omkara to go against Tej Singh Oberoi… Being the Real Hero….With his Ishana… And i particularly extra-loved(?) the moment when Om mentioned Knowing Ishana being honest, even if she was a congirl?… That was JUST MY DREAM… Thank you soooooi much for being back and i am eagerly eagerly Eagerly waiting for you to update next…. Love you di…missed you… Take care?

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lot kavya…..by the way i really liked ur os on ishkara….it was nice 2read…..and this ff was specially written for rumya fans as rumya is lacking screen space in show….and dbo is pathetic with its story line and from heart am not able 2 accept it….and omkara’s heroic form was necessary……actually omie changed 2 stone hearted man and he need a matured caring girl as a partner and for me ishana is unbeatable as she is able 2 convince him what is reality and om can show ishu that one should be try 2 honest towards his heart…..that’s what made them special and both are victims of pain and i created a special new bond among them and om has 2 realize ishu well because situations made her 2 do conning……and ishu also realize omkara;s heart….who already witnessed much pain in life and that’s why ishu changed herself here…she can’t be ideal…..but now she will not be able 2 lie before omkara’s eyes….because she is able 2 see om’s pain in his eyes….that’s why i write like that…and this is the way eveni wat ishu in show….but now we will not get in show….dbo is dramatic and am not watching it…ib is for shivika only…no omru…so stopped watching ib also…..glad that u liked this ff….thanks a lot 4 reading and commenting…….love u and i missed u too

  9. Shilpa

    Very well written Renima….
    Keep up the good work….

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lot….shilpa

  10. I am sorry di for not readings and comment on your ff but thank you so much for ishkara still I am not able to accept omri thank you very much

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lot…chetna…gud 2 see ur comments after a long gap…and no need of sorry ishqie….and yeah even am not happy with omri….and am not watching dbo…because the story sounds filmy and dramatic only

  11. Yashu

    It was fab…..waiting 4 nxt…

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lot …yashu dear

  12. Riddhima

    Renimaaaaa…… What a…. Loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggggggggggggggggggg epi ..

    It might have taken more the and energy … And you succeeded in it … Thanks for your effect ….????

    Awesome epi .. You brought Rudy and sowmya in front of our eyes … Your words once again did magic …. Hope this happens in ishqbaaz and dil bole oberai …

    Ishkara??? hopefully one of the secret is revealed. … And 2 more to go ….
    Best of luck for the new friendship of ishkara … Hope everything goes well…..
    Best of luck for there work to win tej and his stupid plans ….

    What swetlana crying for puppy …. Really what a difference from ib and ff … In dob she is killing everyone like psycho…. You made it renima … You really doing a great job … Keep going ….

    Love you renima ??????????????????????????????????????????? take care …. Have a great day …. ?????

    1. Riddhima

      Separate comment for the precap ….
      Really that precap means a lot …..actually how you are getting words and lines like that …. Impossible ….
      Loved a lot ???…
      Everyone’s life is precious like phoenix…
      That everyone should feel this my them self ….
      And your life is not a ball to be kicked off …and don’t let it …
      Your life doesnt belong to you … It belongs to your parents. . who gave you life …
      Before taking every decision in life …for a minute think about your parent’s that will help you to find whether your decision is right or wrong ….

      I thought of sharing it … If it is wrong sorry renima …

      1. Renimarenju

        And u share ur view only regarding life…..i liked it…that’s not wrong …..it’s ur thought which come from heart…..i respect for u this…..

    2. Renimarenju

      Renimaaaaaaaaaaaaa….That was also too long yaar…..any ways am glad that u liked episode which means a lot dear…..and yeah, i tried it 2 make long as i have 2 show some progress of story…..and omie will find more things …..wait for it….rumya….was written specially as we are lacking that cute pair from show…..am happy that u loved them…..swethlana worried for puppy….ok…..think like that…..i will reveal certian things in upcoming episode….keep reading and waiting for my ff…..and swethlana is not a vampire in my ff of course she is villain but she is not like a dracula or conjuring 2’s ghost whallack….u can have a relief on that…. and love u 2 dear….thanks a lot……

      1. Riddhima

        Thank you renima ??????

  13. Samm

    your songs are really nice. rudy and sumo were so cute with the parathas and studies and everything. ishana’s trust part was so emotional. and tej, i really wouldn’t mind if he died in an accident or some weird twist in the tale like that. makes me sound mean and wicked, i know, but that’s what i feel about his character. 😐
    post next soon renima 🙂

    1. Renimarenju

      Thank u samm…..don’t worry…tej will be punished for his sins…and glad that u liked rumya….which means a lottt…..i will try 2 post next one soon, but can’t assure when i will be able 2 post it……pls have patience…..dear and when u will post ur find me article without any delay kindly send it’s links via pm….am eagerly waiting 2 read that article….bye….love u dear…..

  14. Khushilovesroumya

    It is amazing.It looks easy to write but it is harder than it seems.The precap quote thing is really good.Is it hinting something?

    1. Renimarenju

      Thank u so much…khushi for taking time and reading this one…..Abt precap….all i can say…that’s nothing just my thought ….I mean whenever i ends my ff episode i use 2 put my thought or any sort of feeling as precap…..that’s all…glad that u liked it…abt hinting…. ok…. think it like that….as u can imagine according 2 ur perspective……And sorry , right now am not able 2 continue this one……as i need some time….hope u will wait for my ff….and i can’t assure u abt update also….thanks a lot for commenting…..

  15. B_isha

    3 days late me ,

    What should I say di , you got such amazing comments now let me add a feather to your amazing appreciation crown .

    I just thought one thing when I opened your episode ki beta shama thode popcorn lekar pad unke likhi koi bhi cheej kisi 3 hour blouckbuster entertainer ki tarah hi hoti hai Renima di ke jasabato se tarasha hua her katra dariya ki tarah dil ko chu ta hai .

    Behtareen bemisaal ho aap kamal
    Apne jasabato se logo ka karte ho bura haal
    Kabhi hasa ke toh kabhi rulake
    Ehsaaso ki duniya me le jakar
    Zindagi ki kuch paheliya bhujhke
    Apni pehchaan apni andaaz ki muhar laga ke dil se nikali baat alfazo me saja ke
    Aati hai aap , apni Baatein kehne aur dil Ki Baatein batane ab in sab me phas Jati hu main ……. kyuki na mujhe na batana aata hai aur na jatna ki aap kitnaaaaa Acha likh te ho….

    Renima di , emotions ki queen
    Dil se likhti hai aur humara dil hi le jaati hai …

    Poetry se bore kiya hoga na maine actually kya karu ? Mirakee per hoon poems quotes likhte likhte aa gaya hai

    Fan fiction ke baare me “No words” it takes me to some other world always

    Take care di kaam karu progress bhi karo but health ka bhi dhyaan rakhna
    And kabhi yeh mat kehna “hope you like it ” I always love it……….

    Love you di
    Thanks for links
    Always a pleasure to read your works.

    1. Renimarenju

      Bshama……thank u so much for such a lovely comment which directly flowed from ur heart and it definitely stolen my heart……I don’t know how should i express my gratitude to u for the lovely poetry and ur expectations regarding my ff as well as me …..Really am feeling myself very lucky 2 have friends and readers like u ……And emotions…..oh god….kyaa…karun…..ho jaati hein yaar…as u titled me as emotional queen and it happens in my ff episodes and i don’t know what 2 do for it as it comes from heart only……Am not able 2 do any thing with that,…..And 3 hr block bluster …..that’s really a big compliment ….which i don’t deserves….there are so many wonderful writers here and i think that compliment suits them well……but thanks for taking time and reading ff…..Ur comment always encouraged me ….And ur poetry hasn’t bored me , in fact i felt it as so touching and i don’t have words 2 express what am feeling now…. And right now due 2 certain professional and personal issues i am not able 2 continue it…so am taking a break ……sorry for that…..and i need some time 2 …and i won’t ask u 2 wait for me…as u will be there, which i know….thanks a lot….and love u dear…..

      1. B_isha

        Di well I can understand your issues so take a break and solve our those tangled Web .whereas good to know that u like my comments n poetry and I will surely say yes I have many friends who write blockbusters and ur too in that list n u surely deserve it ….well gratitude ka toh pata nahi but I am indeed lucky to have u as my sister seriously ur views are highly respected by me Idk but I feel ur my elder sister ….and sissos me no sorry …yes I will wait …..

        Love you di
        Don’t ado every situation n bad time has an end .
        Don’t stress ur self tc of health for sure

  16. Amazing update…

    1. Renimarenju

      Thank u so much ankita

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