To Be Or Not To Be : When Hurt Turns 2 Love: RUMYA,ISHKARA FF : Part 10 [By Renima]

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To Be Or Not To Be : When Hurt Turns 2 Love: RUMYA,ISHKARA FF : Part 10 [By Renima] Hello Ishqies, Bigggggg sorry 2 u all guys and lottttttttttt of thankssss for reading two shots for ishana and sowmya and commenting well…I will give a last part for that when I willget time… ….Seems now I am able 2 write ….I seriously don’t know whether I have came back or what am trying 2 give through this is right ….Like I use 2 say whenever I writes it just comes from my heart with my own thoughts and story only…..So I don’t know whether u guys will be satisfied with this one….i was damn confused 2 write…..or not…. So pls read it and tell ur views….If u had forgotten my ff then u can have a look on that…Here are links….
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Hurt+Turns+2+Love

Pls read all and drop ur views…….
Scene – 27 {@ Oberoi guest house , continuation from last part}
Tej : Get lost……[he shouts @ the guy, guy bows his head and leaves] Swethlana : Tej….Pls control urself….
Mean while tej gets a phone call from jahnvi….
Tej : Jhanvi….why she is calling me ?
Swethlana : Pick the call….listen…put it in speaker…
Tej : Yeah…
[Tej attends the call ] {Through phone….
Tej : Hello jhanvi…..
Jhanvi : How are you Mr.Tej Singh Oberoi ?

Swethlana : Have u lost ur brain like ur son omkara ? I think it’s better u check the time…. It’s 11 pm….
Jhanvi : Excuse me…..i didn’t asked u…Am taking 2 Mr.Tej….Only…..
Swethlana : You!!
Tej : Swethlana….I will handle it…..So jhanvi tell me why u called me late night ?
Jhanvi : Great…so u came straightly 2 the point….That’s better….By the way how is ur fiancee swethlana…..Has her face got scared or not ??
Swethlana gets shocked…Tej stares swethlana in confusion…
Tej : I didn’t get u….
Jhanvi : How was my shocking surprise, ask swethlana….u will get it …..
Swethlana : That means my puppy died because of u….See tej….i told u that some one intentionally did it…….
Jhanvi : Swethlana….That puppy died because of you only…. What u think abt urself ? U will send ur servant 2 steal chemical from my son’s art hub and I will not be aware of that…..
Tej : What , swethalana has stolen chemical…..
Jhanvi : U are not able 2 believe it right…the just check the video of footage which I have sent u now…..Her personal servant has tried 2 steal chemical, but khanna has caught him…..How can some one fool oberois so easily when every corner cctv cameras have been kept….
Swethlana : I agree jhanvi….I send my servant there…. But how did u mix the chemical in my milk ?

Jhanvi : Too bad…swethlana…. U have a cunning mind …Now I have 2 explain every thing 2 u….U throw a bundle of currency notes on one of my servant and made him as ur personal servant……Even I did the same only, I paid much more and he mixed that in ur milk….. But …..ur fate was gud….
Swethlana : Jhanvi…so u have started playing the game…..Now I will decide who will win it ?
Jhanvi : Time will tell it….swethlana….Tej…. Tell ur fiancee 2 use …..what’s that….Brain!!! ……. Because soon she will lose every thing…..This is my first step…..Soon u will get more shocking surprises only……
Tej : U are challenging me ….Jhanvi!!!
Jhanvi : No am just warning u 2 prepare urself 2 bear more and more surprises…..
Tej : Jhanvi!!! [shouts] Jhanvi : Now don’t burst out ur anger by shouting and screaming….Am fed up with these kind of things….Now it will not affect me……Gud night…mr tej singh oberoi…..[jhanvi cuts the call] Swethlana : Tej…this prblm is increasing day by day….We have 2 do some thing….
Tej : Just shut up……swethlana……I can’t believe this u will stole chemical from omkara’s art hub…..What’s wrong with u ? Your stupidity resulted in ur puppy’s death…..
Swethlana ; I am not bothered for it… U know what Dr. Malhotra himself told me that omkara has bought that dangerous chemical from him for a special purpose…..He told u and me 2 be alert…..And I guess probably he wants 2 murder either u or me…..i just want 2 know what’s the speciality of that chemical…..But ….
Tej : So now my son is ready 2 attack me….. Swethlaana….This time we have 2 be very cautious……Perhaps…..I have 2 stop ishana and her father…..Before omkara could find the truth from them, I have 2 do some thing……
Swethlana : Tej…..
Tej : What??
Swethlana : I need your credit card…..
Tej : [interrupts] If u are keen 2 do any plan, then let me tell u one thing….. Ur plans will not work out now …..So I will handle things….
Swethlana : But I was just trying 2 clear ur way…..

Tej : Tej Singh Oberoi knows how 2 make clear things……I didn’t need any one’s advice…..Is that clear ?
Swethlana feels much bad on Tej for his behavior…..But she didn’t express it in words… She stares tej with a fake smile…
Swethlana : Tej…..Come in…..[swethlana passes her fingers through his face] We will spend…
Tej : [interrupts] I am not interested……[tej removes swethlana’s hand and walks away] Swethlana feels extreme anger ….She stares him sharply…..
Swethlana’s view…..
This tej singh oberoi has showing his attitude towards me…..Earlier he was like a puppet in my hands and swethlana will never allow this puppet 2 go from her…..Jhanvi and Omkara has started their game ….Soon rudra and shivaay will also join with them……Then it will be really hard 2 fail them…..This tej is a dumb man, who simply knows 2 shout and order only… But he is the key for my desires and I can’t lose him…Once I get the treasure I will show him who am I….[swethlana shows a crooked smile] Scene – 28 {@ Oberoi mansion, omkara’s room}
Rudra : O…why u came so late ?Where were u ?
Omkara started searching some thing by opening table’s draw as well as shelf…
Rudra : O…..
Omkara : What happened ,rudra ?
Rudra : Exactly , that’s what am asking u…..what happened 2 u …..what are u doing ?
Omkara : Actually my…..
[om was not able 2 continue his words as some one knocked the door] Rudra opens the door and gets surprised 2 see pinky…..
Rudra : Choti maa….Aap…
Pinky : Omkara….rudra…come fasts….Wooh jethaniji….. She tells she wants 2 see u both…
Omkara : Is everything okay ?
Pinky : Oh My Maata!! I don’t know what happened 2 her… I feels scared….
Omkara : Don’t worry….choti maa….
Rudra : We are coming….Come O….

[pinky and omru goes 2 jhanvi’s room] Scene shifts 2 jhanvi’s room….
Omru finds that jahnvi was finishing bottles again and again only….. Omru rushed towards her and holds her… “Mom….Mom…”
Jhanvi : Om…..thanks a lot…..[jahnvi stares om with wet eyes] Omkara : Mom…..pls…U sit here……
Jhanvi : I am steady…..Don’t worry….Om…..Ur chemical helped me…
Omkara gets shocked……
Rudra : Chemical!!!
Jhanvi : U don’t know abt it, rudra….Om keeps chemical in art hub…..
Rudra : Mom…he brought it for his purpose….It will be useful in art…..
Jhanvi : Really…om…..U brought it for ur art, but it really helped me today….[smiles] Omkara stares jhanvi in tension….He was finding hard 2 give an explanation…
Pinky : Oh My Maata!!! Jethaniji…..Enoughs….I think now today u should not take more drinks…. Rudra…tells jethaniji 2 take rests….
Rudra : Ji choti maa…..O…pls ….
Omkara : Haa rudra….
Omru makes jahnvi 2 lie on the bed…..
Pinky : Jethaniji…..shall I leave now ?
Jhanvi : Yeah….my children are with me…..Now I don’t have any sort of worries…. [laughs] Omkara : Choti maa….we will stay with mom….U pls go and sleep….
Rudra : Yeah choti maa…we will be here…
Pinky : Okay….then…gud 8s…
Omru : Gudn8 choti maa…..[pinky leaves] Omkara : Rudra….Mom…..
Jhanvi : [interrupts] Rudra….where is rudra…..[half opened eyes] Rudra : Mom….am here only..[rudra sits near jahnvi and holds her hand] Jhanvi : Sorry…..rudra…..I am a worst mother….Am I ? [cries]

Rudra : Mom….why are u talking like these ….O….pls…
Omkara : Mom…..Pls don’t cry…..[om sits near and holds other hand of jahnvi] Jhanvi : I know u both have suffered much because of me……In my own complications, I never tried 2 find whether my children are happy or not….I am really bad ……
Rudra : Who told that u are bad, mom…..U are the best mom in this whole world……[emotional] Jhanvi : U know what rudra…..when u was a small child …. nearly 7 or 8 yrs old , u got a trophy from school for best dancer…… U rushed 2 this room for showing me……U wished that I should hug u, kiss u and will take u in my arms….. But instead of it I pushed u down…..Do u remember it ??
Rudra : Mom…..That’s over….
Jhanvi : No….U was weeping in tears only…U was holding my sari’s pallu and was looking @ me only…….I was not in my control because that day Tej brought swethlana to this room and I saw both of them in bed and…..[jahnvi burst into tears] Omkara : Mom…..pls…..don’t cry…..
Rudra : Pls mom……
Jhanvi hugs omru tightly……..Omru also gets emotional….[jhanvi release herself from hug and holds rudra’s face in her hands] Jhanvi : U know what…rudra…..that day my heart was started breaking…..What I find before my eyes was giving me immense pain and that day onwards I started suffering in pain……When rudra was before my eyes, I was not able 2 see my son’s heart because my anger was ruling over my heart and I was breaking things madly ………And when u came before me I rudely pushed u down and ur hand’s elbow got hit in the floor ….. You was not aware abt what was happening with me….. Omkara …who was standing @ the corner and witnessing his mad mother with fearful eyes rushed near u and picked u in his arms….u know why…..Because om will never allow u 2 fell down…..U was lying in om’s arms and was holding him tightly because u was much scared of me……isn’t it ? [emotional] Rudra : May be …mom…that time I was a kid only……but now I have grown up….And if u want 2 push me now then certainly I will be ready 2 bear it with a smile……I am able 2 realize ur pain….Mom….[rudy cries] Jhanvi : Rudra……[jhanvi hugs rudy and gets emotional] Omkara : My bhai has really grown up……now……[emotional] Rudra : O…..I am too late 2 realize mom’s pain….isn’t it ?
Omkara : No….rudra….U are not late…..In fact u are standing with mom in the right time….only…..
Jhanvi : Rudra….Omkara and shivaay has did ur upbringing more than me…..they never allowed u 2 fell down any where……
Omkara : I still remember that day when I was applying medicine on rudra’s elbow …He was screaming and was abt 2 run only….but shivaay hold his hand tightly and was standing beside him by staring rudra’s eyes…..

Rudra : O…u and shivaay bhaiya were like mom and dad only…..I mean u both are my best brothers and my best parents also…….I….I….[rudra literally cries] Omkara : Oye…rudra…….I can’t see tears in ur eyes…..[om wipe out rudy’s tears ] Rudra ; Even I can’t see tears in my best man’s eyes…..[rudy wipe out om’s tears] Omru : And now we can’t see tears in our mom’s eyes also…[they wipe out jhanvi’s tears and kisses on jhanvi’s cheeks respectively and hugs her ……Three of them smile each other and release themselves from hug…….] Rudra : Mom….I think now…..u have 2 sleep…..It’s already late….
Omkara : Mom…I need a promise from u…..
Jhanvi : Promise , what’s that ?
Omkara : From today onwards u will not consume alcohol…..won’t u ??[omkara stares jahnvi’s eyes] Jhanvi : Om….U can’t tolerate lies as it will hurt u….I am sorry I can’t make any promise but I will try to quit that habit soon…..
Omkara : I really wish u could stop this forever …….It will spoil ur health….
Jhanvi : If I will fell down also, then u , rudra and shivaay will save me ….Am not bothered abt my health and life…….
Rudra : But am worried for u…mom…….If u will continue this habit then I will also continue my habit 2 stay as cry baby…..[rudy bows his head and sits like an adamant kid] Jhankara smiles…..
Omkara : See mom……My bhai will remain as cry baby only….Do u want him as hero or cry baby ?
Jhanvi : I want my son as a hero…only….
Rudra : Then promise me that u will consume alcohol….
Jhanvi : Rudra…..I need some time…..
Rudra : O…..
Omkara : I think she is right…..Rudra….After all she is our mom…..She is the best mom……
Rudra : Haa…O……My mom is always no.1 …..I love u mom……
Jhanvi : I love u too beta……[rudy hugs jahnvi] Omkara smiles with wet eyes….
Scene – 29 { Next day morning @ rudy’s room}

Sowmya gets ready 2 attend classes as well as 2 go office…..She recollects the moments which she spend with rudra….She starts smiling by staring her face on the mirror….…..Mean while anika comes there and stares her….
Anika : Sowmya….why are u smiling ?
Sowmya : Me…..No bhabhi…..
Anika : Really, then what was u doing before the mirror ?
Sowmya : Wooh bhabhi I was brushing my hair only…..[sowmya picks the comb] “Brushing or blushing?”
Anika : Who said that ?
Sowmya : Bhabhi…who bade bhaiyaa…..
Anika : What ??
Sowmya : Bade bhaiya is standing behind u…..
Anika : Billu ji…..what are u doing here ??
Shivaay : I came here 2 meet my sister…sowmya…..
Sowmya : Haa bhaiya ……tell me….
Shivaay : So u was brushing ur hair……right…uh ….Actually I want 2 ask …mm…like…uh….
Sowmya : Bhaiya…..I am getting late…..Actually I have 2 go office also ….Pls if u tell it fast then it would be better……
Anika : I will tell u sowmya…..Billuji will never be able 2 tell it…..
Shivaay : Hey annika…what do u mean by I can’t tell it ……I will ask sowmya directly…. So tell me sowmya….what do u think abt saahil…..
Sowmya : Sorry….i didn’t get u bhaiya….[surprised] Anika : Mr. Bagad Billa…..What are u trying 2 say…..U have made raaita as khichdi only…..
Shivaay : Haa…I was just coming 2 the point…..but uh….
Sowmya : Bhabhi…..pls…..I have 2 leave…..Shall I?
Anika : Haa…..sowmya……u go 2 ur classes….We will talk abt this later….
Sowmya : YeahBye bhaiya…bye bhabhi…

Shivika : Bye…sowmya…..…..[sowmya picks her bag and leaves] Shivaay : U know what….this is because of u only…..U won’t have shown saahil so many hindi movies ….that’s why he …..
Anika : Oh hello…..I am not showing him that big spider, big lizard and all…..
Shivaay : Ok…..let’s stop it and think what we have 2 do next……
Anika : That;s better….
Scene shifts 2 hall of oberoi mansion…
Sowmya finds saahil and rudra together….
Sowmya : Hai…[smiles] Rudy and Saahil : Hi Sowmya…..[they stare each other] Saahil : Excuse me Mr. RSO, sowmya told hi 2 me…..
Rudy : No…beta…she told hi 2 me……
Saahil : No…no …no….sowmya said hi 2 me ….
Rudy : Beta…u are mistaken….sumo said hi 2 me…..only..
Saahil : No… I will ask sowmya itself…..sowmya u told hi 2 me….
Sowmya : Haa..but…
Saahil : See..mr.rso….i told u that she told hi 2 me….only…..
Sowmya : No saahil….I told u both….and u both replied me….
Rudra : Is it ? But I thought….
Sowmya : Rudra….[rumya stare each other’s eyes for a while and smiles] Saahil : Sowmya…..
Sowmya : Yeah saahil….
Saahil : This is for u…..[saahil handovers a chocolate 2 sumo] Sowmya : Really, thank u …. U are so sweet…..[sowmya kisses on saahil’s cheek] Saahil : Thank u ……sowmya….[saahil smiles and stares sumo] Rudra : Sumo…..we have 2 go college……Come fast……[rudy stares saahil sharply as saahil was smiling only….] Sowmya : Rudra…lets go…

Rudra : Yeah……
Scene shifts near the entrance of oberoi mansion…..
Sowmya : Rudra….he is so cutee….right?
Rudra : Who ?
Sowmya : Saahil……
Rudra : Not that much cute…..I mean he is gud looking guy……But…
Sowmya : Oh so u feel jealous ….
Rudra : Me…..jealous…no way….why rudy will feel jealous on a kid ?
Sowmya : Because he is smart…. And he is charming ….also….
Rudra : So what about me ?
Sowmya : U felt bad….
Rudra : No….U told that am your ….tell me sumo what u feel for me ??
Sowmya [ surprised] : U….u are my…my….my….
Rudra : Tell it sumo….pls…..tell it…..[rudy gets excited] Sowmya : U are my…my…my….Amar…I mean Amar Prem…..[sumo starts running] Rudra : What, amar prem …sumo….Stop there…. sumo…
Rudy also starts running behind sumo and finally he was able 2 caught her….Rudy touches her hand….Rumya stare each other;s eyes…..
Sowmya : Rudra….[sowmya’s heart starts beating fast] Rudra : So am ur amar prem , right ?? [rudy take his hand from her hand] Sowmya : Wooh…..[rudy cames more close 2 her …..] Rudra : So …..love angel……[Sowmya tries 2 move backward, but her leg slips and rudy holds her waist…..They share a romantic eyelock] BGM…..” Aise Bhole Ban Kar Hain Baithe
Jaise Koi Baat Nahin
Sabh Kuch Nazar Aa Raha Hai
Din Hai Yeh Raat Nahin
Kya Hai Kuch Bhi Nahin Hai Agar
Hoton Pe Hai Khamoshi Magar
Baateen Kar Rahin Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke
Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain…… Magar Chupke Chupke”…plays [film-pardes]

Sowmya : Rudra…classes….we have 2 go classes ……[breaks eyelock] Rudra : Yeah…..U are right….[rumya release themselves from hold and stare each other for a while] Sowmya : So shall we go….
Rudra : Yeah….[rumya leaves] Scene shifts 2 jhanvi’s room…..
Omkara : Mom….u called me , why ?
Jhanvi : Om…yesterday I asked u one thing…..But u didn’t give me the proper answer…..
Omkara : I know….Mom..u are talking abt that chemical…..only ?
Jhanvi : It’s there….[jhanvi points out her finger on the shelf] Why u brought it om ? Who is ur target ??
Omkara : Mom!!! [shocked] Jhanvi : U know what swethlana’s servant tried 2 grab this chemical from ur art hub……
Omkara : What ? How is it possible ? This matter was strictly confidential between me and Mr. Malhotra….
Jhanvi : Om…..beta…..what are u trying 2 do ?
Omkara : Don’t worry mom….I won’t murder any one….If that was my intention then I would not have brought it’s antigen and resisting medicines also…..
Jhanvi : Pls tell me in detail what’s going on ur mind….I am getting tensed…om…..
[mean while omkara gets a phone call……] Omkara : Mom….I will talk 2 u later….I have 2 leave now….
Jhanvi : But om….
Omkara : Mom…..Don’t worry…I am ur son….If ur blessings are with me then I will not do any thing wrong……
Jhanvi : Take care…om….
Omkara : U too mom…[om leaves] Scene – 30 {@ Park }

Ishana was sitting in the chair and was eagerly waiting for omkara’s arrival…..Om comes behind her and says ..”Hi..ishana” with a smile….
Ishana turned her eyes towards omkara…She find that omkara’s eyes were brightening more than usual and his eyes were not flaming in fire but it were conveying his world of colors only….Ishana felt she has met omkara singh oberoi as omkara only whom she knows from heart……Her eyes were fully focusing on omkara’s magnificient eyes only….
Omkara : Ishana…..ishana…..
Ishana : [regains her lost mind] Haa…omkara….
Omkara : Hi…
Ishana ; Hi….[smiles] Omkara : So what u want 2 tell me……
Ishana : Perhaps I have brought this file…..It will help you….[ishu shows a file] Omkara : What’s that ?
Ishana : Omkara….actually these are some papers regarding alliance with mehtas and oberois….
Omkara : Mehtas!!!
Ishana : Yeah…..My father….Naresh Mehta…..and am….
Omkara : Ishana Mehta…..
Ishana : Yes…..Go through it….pls….
Omkara : Sure…. It will really help me…
Ishana : Omkara….One more thing…..Ur father’s spy always follows me…..So it was really hard for me 2 bring this one….And I can’t explain u all of a sudden….Even there are some more details which is out of my knowledge also……
Omkara : It’s ok….Ishana….U give this 2 me in lot of risk….I really want 2 thank u for this…..
Ishana : Pls….omkara…u saved my sister and father….And before that this is nothing……[emotional] Any ways I have 2 leave now…..
Omkara : I will drop u…..
Ishana : No….I will go…..
Omkara : Ishana we started a new bond and u said that u trust me also….At that bond am asking u…..Shall I drop u ??
Ishana gets mesmerized with omkara’s statement…..
Ishana : Wooh…omkara….I don’t want u should take any risk for me…..
Omkara : If u are ready 2 take risk for me in finding truth then why can’t I take risk for u ?
Ishana : But still….if ur father gets 2 know that …..i was with u…..he will blame u for favoring his enemy…..
Omkara : I don’t consider him as my father…..And is u are his enemy then I am feeling happy 2 be with u, because I hate him…..[ishana gets shocked ]Anyways….leave it…..U just get into the car…..Pls….
Ishana : Yeah…..[ishkara gets into the car and om starts driving ] Ishana’s view

I can’t believe this ….I never met a man who is really true from heart…..For truth he blames his own blood , he hates his own father…..And what I did 2 him is big betrayal only….I hurt his true heart with my lies, I give him the biggest pain only……[ishana’s eyes are drenched with tears] Omkara : Take this ….[omkara stops the car …..and shows tissue 2 ishana] Ishana : Omkara……[ishu stares him with wet eyes] Omkara : Ishana…..That bela has gone and now u are ishana only…..
Ishana : How…..omkara …..U came 2 know that I was thinking abt that only ?
Omkara : Ur tears told me….ur pain. …..And Ishana…Now…I trust u because my heart says u are true…..
Ishana : I….Iam…..really ……[ishu literally cries] Omkara : Ishana…..pls ….That part has ended…..Now u are ishana only…..I don’t have any prblm with u….
Ishana : I know…..But still …..When I see ur eyes before me it will tells ur inner pain and I feel myself guilty for that……[ishu was still weeping in tears only] Omkara : Ishana….ishana … …..[omkara moves near her and holds her face in his hands….ishu stared omkara’s eyes…..] Ishu hugs omkara tightly and burst into tears….omkara waved his hand through her back…..Her tears affected omkara deeply…..His eyes went redish….. Bgm…” Jab Na Dil Ke Bahelne Ki Surat Lage…..
Jab Koi Zindagi Ki Zarurat Lage

Aur Jeena Bhi Dushwar Hone Lage
Bol Do Agar Tumhe Pyaar Hone Lage

Hone Lage, Hone Lage.
Jab Kisi Ki Taraf Dil Jhukne Lage

Baat Aa Kar Zubaan Tak Rukne Lage
Aankhon Aankhon Mein Iqrar Hone Lage
Bol Do Agar Tumhe Pyaar Hone Lage
Hone Lage, Pyaar Hone Lage…..” [film- pyaar toh hona hi thaa] plays……

PRECAP : WHEN LIFE BECOMES A PATH OF THRONES AND EYES WILL GET THE BIGGEST SHOCK THEN WHO WILL SHOW ME LIGHT ??is

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28 Comments
  1. Riddhima

    Renima …hai ..??? how are you .???
    A big thanks for a long epi ….. ???
    Today you brought almost everyone in
    Shivay – anika
    Om- ishana
    Rudra – sowmya -sahil
    Jhanvi- pinky
    Tej- swetlana ….
    Claps for that ???????????????????????

    Tej and swetlana shocked ?????
    Jhanvi rocked today ????

    Shivika ishkara and romya scenes were fantastic …?????

    Sahil as usual stole the show ..with his cuteness …????

    Jhanvi … Renima stop Jhanvi from consuming alcohol … She must be strong right … I hope she won’t consume it hereafter …

    And fb old om and rudra convo caring were portrayed beautifully … ????

    Ishakara scenes were treat to me … Loving there trust for each other …. ????

    Precap …. I really don’t know that who will show the light but I deeply feel that someone will surely come at some point to be the light forever … Keep clam cool and patient …. ????

    Thanks for ff … Keep going … ???

    By your precap lover …Renima love you ????

    1. Renimarenju

      Hai my precap lover…..i don’t know what 2 say abt ur first question……Mm…life is going like that…..ok…that’s my answer….
      And secondly no need of thanks as i have 2 thank u for keeping patience and waiting for my ff which means a lot….dear…And i tried 2 make a long update because after a gap am writing and i have 2 show some quality scenes in ff and i tried 2 make that only…..And i am trying 2 bring that feel of old IB which i enjoyed a lot through ff….Glad that this episode brought some sort of success and u guys were able 2 enjoy everything which means a lot…Abt jhanvi…. yaar… it will take time….not like cv’s ki…..for some time they will make swethlana vanish from tejvi’s life and will not show any issues and allof sudden makes her re-entry and tej will start going behind her again…..and giving 3rd degree tortures on jhanvi and jahnvi is not able 2 take any step….i agree jhanvi consumes alcohol is bit bad ….but haa…..she will quit that…just like omie quitted drugs slowly….it will take some time for her 2 quit that habit….but she is strong in myff and omru will stand with her….and u will get all those in upcoming episodes….pls wait for that….saahil…i am missing him….and rumya…scenes with saahil…. i tried 2 bring a light entertainement through that ….that’s all….and ishkara….i don’t know how long am able 2 portray them well…but yeah i love 2 write for them..more and more….thanks a lot dear….. and precap….ok….u wil just wait…..light will come….bye..thank u so much for commenting first

  2. EMOTIONAL BEAUTIFULL CUTE AWESOME MIND BLOWING SUPERB??????

    RENIMA DI agar aapko Meri comment karne ka style bore lagraha hai tho bathana please…main try karunga comment ache se karne ka.main har ff pe aise comment karthe ho like NICE,AWESOME exc so that way iam asking agar bore lag raha Hai tho bathana please…..

    1. Renimarenju

      first of all thank u so much for giving big compliments…secondly what u tells through ur comments …that’s ur way and trust me i never felt bad for that…..And boring….i can’t imagine that in dream also because whenever u appreciates my work i felt my work has satisfied u , that’s what i need also…..U know what….am not a professional writer and not a literature related person also…But what i writes it just the way i pour my feelings only….And uf ..apko pata hai…mujhe aapki comments bahut pasand hein…matlab aap har ff mein aapki joh raay hein usse express karne mein zara bhi der nahi lagati hein….joh words aap deti hein woh chote hi sahi lekin woh aapke dil ki feelings ko dikhati hein and aaj aapne emotional, beautiful joh bhi diyaa hein mein toh khush hun ki mein ek episode mein kai saare feelings ko dikha paayi….tabhi toh aap yeh sab kuch express ki…..And mujhe ek baat batao…aapko har baaar aisa kyun lagta hein…mein aapki comment se bore huyi yaa phir kabhi aap likhte hein maine aapko hurt ki toh sorry wagera ……wagera….Arrey ….mujhe kabhi bhi aisi kuch feel nahi huyi hein…..mein joh dil mein aati hein wahi likhti hun and baat bhi aisi hi karti hun…..that’s what makes me as renima….and aage se kabhi yeh naa kehna ki di….aapko mera comment boring laga ..so and so…aap aisi hi comments detei rahiye…aur hum ache se likhne ki koshish karte rahenge…..bye….love u

  3. Amazing update…Waiting for the next…. plz post soon..

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks dear….i will try my level best 2 post next one soon

  4. Ruby_MarNy

    Awesome chapter.. you always made me become speechless with the updates.. I need to find new words for praising your ff.. for now, I’m following SSO word ‘haww’..

    1. Renimarenju

      Awwww….that was so cuteee…..ishana….I am feeling much glad 2 see ur comment again in my ff…thanks a lot for reading…..it…..thank u so much

  5. Khushilovesroumya

    Ummm how to and where to start it was amazing as always.The way you portray characters are amazing.Your updates bring happiness for me.???????❤❤❤❤

    1. Renimarenju

      Hey thanks a lot yaaar…..,,,,,And am feeling much glad that my ff is able 2 make u happy which means a lotttt dearrr…..thanks a lot for reading and commenting…..

  6. Yashu

    Awesome……it was really nyc…..esp rudra Janvi n om’s scene…..but di pls reveal abt that chemical asap…..i eagerly wanna know why om brought it……waiting 4 nxt……n tysm for link……

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lotttt yashu…..and soon i will reveal it dear….bye….thanks for readimng

  7. Aarti32

    It was brilliant Renima..
    I loved Ishkara conversation..?
    Rumya r bae?
    Sahiiiiilllll..I want to pinch his cheeks?
    I rilli like d song..Pyaar hone lage..

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lottt yaar…am missing saahil….a lottt….and thought 2 add some sort of entertainment….glad that u liked it…..and that song is actually so beautiful…..and it well suits our ishkara …..

  8. Niriha

    Awesome update…waiting for next update soon

    1. Renimarenju

      Thank u niriha…oh so u changed ur dp….any ways this is also gud

  9. Nikita_jai29

    It is nice one dii… Aapke updates padh k main itna jaan gyi hu aapke bare m ki aap mentally or emotionally bahut strong ho…
    Aapke apne update m characters k through jo mental strength or pain ko describe krte ho… It is awesome dii… Hats off to your writing skills dii…
    Take care and lots of love dii…

    1. Renimarenju

      Hey nikita…..and for me life is like a game or what 2 say it is the platform which offers u so many things ……So first we have 2 take lessons from life…but certain times we are also humans and pain will rise ….but still we have 2 go ahead…that’s what in my ff also…i write my feelings, my way of story and u guys comments on that which makes me 2 write more on it….thank u so much

  10. Nithu

    awsm……di………loved it

    1. Renimarenju

      Thank u so much dear nithu…

  11. B_isha

    So sorry di , I got ur message but my damn net is troubling me to heights but still I must apologise for being late and Yaa Mrunal said due to my busy schedule I am missing the fun the Renima ff.

    Now talking about the episode frankly I am now haunting for words it was something more then magical or emotionally it was just phenomenal all scenes were so intense that I am about to weep……

    I can’t pin point one scene each and every scene was delivering a message

    Just mind blowing ……well crafted. …terrific ……out of my knowledge. …just magical ……

    Di , please come up with more such ideas in future….I mean please try to …..

    Kash yeh aada Hume bhi hoti utni hi
    Jitni khuda ne aapko bakshe
    Aap shayad janti nahi hai khudko
    Agar koi Hume pooche maante kyon hai hum aapko …..

    Apka her alfaz ,
    Kuch iss kadar dil ko chu jaaye
    Mann ko sukoon puhachaye
    Labhon per muskurahat ya Aankho ka aansu ban jaye
    Joh kuch aacha karne ki umeed ban jaye

    Uss Khushi ko koi kyon na sir aaye

    Thanks for all the laughter and tears di
    Love you more than u know
    Thanks for inspirating me yet again

    Phir mileage comment box me
    Do write n send me the links but please ….. mat bolna. ..and also…. hope you like it….

    Firstly I always love it Becoz I know it comes from heart n reaches hearts secondly please nahi order do ki shama maine likha hai n ur cmt should be there !!

    Hak jatayena di. …..tab bhi toh lage ga aapne mujhe apna mana

    1. Renimarenju

      Bshama….seriously what 2 say…now…..and u liked it dear…And pls convey my regards 2 mrunal …..i am also missing her works, and her comments….
      And poetry…….yaar are u a writer in hindi ? Seriously the words u are using is quite amazing and it is really magnetic that it touches heart directlly…..Mein kyaa kahungi….aage….mein hasati hun, rulati hun….aur kar bhi kyaa sakti hun yaar ??? And abt pls….ok i will try it… and order kare…..behan ko mein pyar kar sakti hun. order nahi…… hak jatane ki baat…..uhh…. kaise….i will try for it….that; s what i can say…and apnapan hein dil mein, nahi toh mein padne ke liye links kabhi nahi bhejti…..love u…angry young bird

      1. B_isha

        Your angry young bird is back

        Ok boss I will convey ur message her , and sometimes I doubt if I am writing also ? But if all say I agree when it comes to hindi thank you for compliment I write what I feel ….and when this happens lafzon khud hi saje hai …glad that you liked my poetry ka almost murder. ..Aww I know you love ur sissies ….and if u don’t feel to order don’t do it as I love you for what you are di ; and point noted that I am URS …..

        Love you how much you and me can’t measure it that much. …

        Di destiny ka paata nahi but I am glad I got a moment with u n u made me feel like I am so special

      2. Renimarenju

        Murder….i could say it is ur ” karaamaat” only…..which is really outstanding ….. And i love my sister…..so order nahi kar sakti baaba….and haa…abhi mein nikli hun office ke liye and bus mein baithi hun…..tabhi yeh reply padhi…toh destiny kaa toh kisi ko bhi pata nahi…lekin haa woh moment accha thaa……and it was special for us….. love u dear…have a nice day…

  12. Alekhika20

    Amazing updt

    1. Renimarenju

      Thank u so much alekhika

  13. Kehkasha

    I am soooooooo happy after reading this di…
    Hello di….
    I am so happy….that I can’t express…. This was an epic update…..trust me….best no bestest part till date…
    U didn’t left even a single thing or person….hatts off to u for that….
    And as usual di u rocked…
    And especially sahil rocked…his sweetness is soooooooooo sweet…
    U r so sweet di..
    I am felling in love with your stories…..
    Thank you so much for this wonderful story…..

    And obviously….
    Chalo baharon se bahaar chrayien….
    Gulshan se gul do char le aayein…
    Un gulon ka ek taaj banayein…
    Uss taj se iss duniya Ko sajayein….

    Well woh taaj hain aapke articles…
    Luv u di…

    1. Renimarenju

      Oh My God!!! Seriously……u guys are giving me more and more compliments and i felt whether i deserves it or not …..Really….thanks a lot……I want ur views and u guys always gives 2 much tareesfs and all , which really matters a lottt……And taaj….baap re…..yaar…..it’s not a crown , what i writes its nothing just a depiction of life with certain stuffs and imagination only…… And u guys like my work…and never fails 2 comment…that’s really amazzinggg…thanks a lottt

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