“Not First Love, BUT Last Love” #ishqbaaz SS Shot-17 by #annie

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Hey this is annie signing up with the next part of “Not Fist Love but Last Love”
Thankyousomuch for the comments and votes ❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️ I love you all❣️❣️❣️…
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*Happy Reading*❣️❣️❣️
Part: 17
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Cottage
Evening
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Shivaay “I’m ready are you ready annika?” he walked up to her room and knocked on the door
Annika “yeah just a minute…” she was struggling to tie the dori (lace) of her blouse
Shivaay “annika you said minute and it’s been 5 minutes, will you come now or next birth?” he rolled his eyes losing patience
Annika “umm…shivaay I need some help but I don’t want you to look at me can you do this?” she was shooking her head behind the closed door
Shivaay “well I’m not a magician to help you closing my eyes…can you tell me the problem?” he joked
Annika “uhh- I’m not able to tie the lace of my blouse…I wore it after a long very long time” she was rolling her eyes…
Shivaay “okay open the door I’ll help with eyes away” he stood straight in-front of the door his face turned to back side…
Annika “yeah opening…” she opened it and chuckled seeing him
Shivaay “can I come in?” he rolled his eyes in disbelief…
Annika “yeah…”
He reached near the dressing table where she was standing…and she helped him getting the hold of lace…and shivaay looked at her
Annika “haww shivaay” she turned to him
Shivaay “haww annika… what’s there to hide? You’ve worn your clothes and the things you’re trying to hide is visible even after tying isn’t it?” he chuckled and she facepalmed
Annika “idiot I was gonna get ready completely and then wanted you to see me” she looked away and turned to mirror again
Shivaay moved near her and held the lace of her blouse and starting tying it…his hands were touching her bare back which was giving shivers to her and him also…he successfully hid it but she shut her eyes tightly and her lips parted seeing his effect on her he smiled and ran his cold fingers on her warm back and she clenched her pallu tightly…he was enjoying teasing her and she was enjoying his touch…soon his gaze fell on her jewelry she had placed on table and a smirk got plastered on his face…
Shivaay “annika it’s done” he made her sit on the stool
Annika opened her eyes and blushed little…
Annika “yeah…Thankyou”
Shivaay “what’s the hurry to thank me? I mean you girls take so much time in getting ready let me help you in getting ready…” he smirked hiding from her gaze but she was busy in blushing and just nodded
Soon shivaay picked up her earrings from the table and started wearing her that and touched her earlobes she shivered little and he then picked her pendant and leaned little from back to her shoulder and made her wear the pendant while lightly blowing on her neck his lips touched her neck as he leaned down “shivaay” she whispered out of proximity…on which he just smiled now he picked up the ‘Waist Belt’ and smirked looking at her and sat behind her slightly touched her bare waist and she shivered again and clenching her saree she parted her lips again “Annika” he whispered in her ear and she nodded and he smiled “You’re so Beautiful” he blew on her face and she just nodded “I don’t want to lose you never ever…” his hands touched her navel in the process of tying the belt and she moaned a little “Shivaay” he bit his tongue and moved back… “annika” he blew on her face again “yeah?” she smiled closing her eyes
Shivaay “You’re ready and we are late again…” he shouted and she jerked opening her eyes…
Annika “idiot I’m here only stop shouting…Go I’m coming” she breathed out
Shivaay “yeah…actually I wanted to say…I’ve a strong effect on you isn’t it?” he smirked while moving out
Annika “leave” she threw cushion on him and blushed
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Daksh “I don’t know about the person…I just want him beaten till death did you got it? Find and beat the hell outta that person” he ordered someone on call
POC “But how you’re so sure that someone manipulated her?”
Daksh “isn’t it obvious? Till yesterday evening she was fine and suddenly she changed…I may be busy and will not pick the call so do the work need not to update me of every minute…”
POC “okay we will…”
Daksh “Good money will be with you after the completion of work…”
And he disconnected the call…
Daksh “I’m 100% sure some enemy manipulated Mallika…let it be my man’s will take the revenge let’s now focus on annika and shivaay…shivaay let it be too… I can’t do anything to him I love him… but annika I need to do something…” he thought and drove off…
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~After Sometime~
Annika and shivaay both hands in hands walked inside a park where the party was held…Whole the park was beautifully decorated…party was held for the success of annika and shivaay was invited too with her and as a businessman too…
Hostess “Welcome miss Rathod and Mr. oberoi” she handed them flowers
Annika “thankyou”
And then they both walked toward the table which was reserved for them…sitting on their place they started chitchatting… a person entered the park in hoodie and walked to the table of shivika and sat on the side by table…
Annika “shivaay are you ready for the surprise?”
Shivaay “More than you can even think…” he winked and she smiled
Annika “I don’t know how to react now I mean I never thought this could ever happen…dreams are meant to be crushed …he used to say this” she smiled weakly
Shivaay “dreams are meant to be completed not crushed so forget about daksh and let’s focus on your party song” he smiled holding her hand
Annika “yeah I know why you’re so eager about song mr. Bagadh billa” she smirked and he smiled
Shivaay “why shouldn’t i? I mean first time you’re going to give me the surprise so why shouldn’t I be eager?” he winked
Annika “yeah in sometime I need to go to stage, so let me get fresh I need to go to washroom…” she rolled her eyes and stood up
Shivaay “wait, I’ll wait outside the washroom let me accompany you” he held her hand
Annika “umm it’ll look awkward but stay in a quite distance okay?” she pouted
Shivaay “okay” he followed her and the hoodie man also followed them…Annika went in and as decided shivaay stayed in a quite distance from the washroom…soon annika stepped out and hoodie man held her hand and dragged her away shivaay was shocked seeing this and followed them quietly as annika didn’t shouted so he thought it maybe someone whom she knows and the person took her at the backside of park where cars were parked…
Annika “daksh, what the hell is wrong with you? Why you dragged me like this?” she freed herself and he removed her hoodie while shivaay stood still in shock
Daksh “I wanted to have a talk so did this I’m sorry for this” he held her hand and she jerked it off
Annika “sorry? Well! You should be sorry for dragging Annika Rathod” she moved back and shivaay smiled seeing it
Daksh “stop being so angry bird annika…I know I’ve done a lot of mistakes in my life but that doesn’t mean I’m not a good guy annika… I was idiot to do that all” he moved near her and she stood still…while shivaay closed his fist
Annika “what you’re trying to say, say it clearly I really don’t like riddles…” she glanced shivaay passing a smile and looked at daksh again with serious face…
Daksh “okay” he held her by her shoulders “I love you annika…I want a chance please give me a chance everyone deserves it, why not i? please!” he hugged her and she didn’t reciprocate… shivaay started moving to him when annika signed him not to come as she’ll handle this…shivaay passed a smile and moved back when he got some call “Mallika” and showing her the mobile he walked away…
Annika “I love you hahaha really mr daksh Khurrana” she pushed him and he looked at her in shock…
Daksh “what is wrong with you annika…only you wanted this na? how could you push me?” he faked tears
Annika “why can’t i? and by the way who told you I want this?” she laughed
Daksh “fever of success has got on your head, you’re forgetting we were going to get married…and you are also forgetting we love eachother…” he pulled her toward himself…
Annika “really meri jaan? Love and with you?” she encircled her arms around his neck
Daksh “yeah, you love me” he encircled his arms around her waist…
Annika “okay! What is love?”
Daksh “love is life”
Annika “that’s for others, what it is for you? Did you forgot what you did with me? one night stand? Do you remember?” she trailed her fingers on his face
Daksh “I’m sorry but my love was true love can never be fake it’s love…” he was cut in mid
Annika “Libaas tan se utaar dena, kisi ko bahoon ka haar dena, phir uske jazobo ko maar dena…agar mohabbat yehi hai jaana tou maaf karna mujhe nahi hai {Removing dresses off from body, giving someone the garland of your embrace, the killing off their wishes…if love is this then forgive me I don’t love you}” she moved back and he shockingly looked onto her face

Daksh “what you’re saying annika!” he moved near her

Annika “Gunnah karne ka soch lena, haseen puriyan daboch lena, phir unki ankhein hi noch lena agar mohabbat yehi ha jaana tou maaf karna mujhe nahi hai {To thought of doing sin, catching the Beautiful angels and then pulling of their eyes is love then forgive me I don’t love you}” she pushed him
Daksh “listen to me” he held her hand

Annika “Kisi ko lafzoo ka jaal dena, kisi ko jazbon ki dhal dena phir uski izaat uchaal dena agar mohabbat yehi hai jaana tou maaf karna mujhe nahi hai {Trapping someone in the trap of your sweet talks, giving someone the shield of feelings then ruining their respect is love then forgive me I don’t love you}” she jerked off his hand

Daksh “annika it was just a mistake…” he smiled holding her hands
Annika “andheri nagrio mein chalte jana, haseen kaliyan masalte jana… aur apni fitrat par muskurana…agar mohabbat yehi hai jana tou maaf karna mujhe nahi hai {walking in the dark streets stomping the lovely petals and then smiling on yourself is love then forgive me I don’t love you}” she freed her hand again

Daksh “annika are you even listening me”
Annika “Saja raha Raha Hai Har EK Diwana, Khyal-e-husan-o -Jamal Jana, Khyal Kia Hain Hawas Ka Tana?” she walked away

Daksh “what do you think of yourself annika? I didn’t say anything it doesn’t mean I’ll not do anything…you insulted me rejected my proposal! See what I do now I will not let you love anyone” he walked away in anger thinking this…

~Parking Lot~
Shivaay was sitting in his car reading the reports of annika with tears rolling down his cheeks “Mallika is it true? Maybe some mistake?” he sniffed
Mallika “shivaay I double checked it and the results are same twice…Not a single % change…I’m sorry but it’s the truth only…” she said in low tone
Shivaay “bye Mallika!” he disconnected the call and stepped out of the car looking at his mobile…
Shivaay “annika how could you do this with me? why you hid such a big thing from me…I never thought you’ll hide this big truth from me…why?” he silently yelled walking lifelessly toward the party…
When suddenly someone hit a rod on his head from back and he fell down on floor…and then they started beating him with rod…he was laying in the pool of blood… and was losing his consciousness…he didn’t even fight back thinking of the reports but those heartless man’s still kept on beating him and again a rod hit on his head “Annika” he screamed…

Annika was standing on stage waiting for him holding a mic when she felt as if he called her “Shivaay” she screamed and tears rolled down her cheeks…

Khanna came to the area and found man’s beating shivaay…being shocked he immediately took out his gun and fired at them and they all fell on ground “Sir” he ran to him and picked him up blood was oozing out from many parts and he was un-conscious…Placing him on the back seat of car he was going to call annika but stopped “khanna you know even if I die one day I’ll be happy that annika reached highest peaks of success…each party is a step toward her success as a singer” shivaay’s words ringed in his mind which he just said few hours ago “no I can’t inform her right now” khanna drove off to hospital…

TO BE CONTINUED…
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This is it ishquies…Part 17 of this SS
Another step toward the end…
Q: do you guys want to see annika as the crazy lover just for some time? Who can do anything for her love SHIVAAY!
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~Annie signing off~
STAY SAFE
SEE YOU SOON~

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28 Comments
  1. Niriha

    Awesome…The way anika deal with daksh was👌👌.what is in the anika report?I hope shivay will be fine soon…yah I want to see anika as the crazy lover who can do anything for her shivay waiting for next part update soon

    1. Barbieannie

      Thankyousomuch niriha ❤❤❤❤❤ for all the comments you did till this chapter as j wasn’t able to reply before I’m thanking now in this reply I’m happy your loving the story and Something serious in reports😢 and shivaay is fine for now🙁 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  2. Gangu

    I would really love to see Anika as a crazy lover

    1. Barbieannie

      Thankyousomuch for the reply Gangu❤❤❤❤❤❤

  3. Superb ….
    Plz post next asap

    1. Barbieannie

      Thanks Veda
      Posted❤

  4. anika ne kya chupaya hai shivaay se i’m confused do lemme know and ya post the next soon

    1. Barbieannie

      Annika ne nearly sab kuch chupaya ha shivaay se well reports Secret is revealed as next is posted🤗🤗

  5. Amazing, fantastic but would love to see Anika as a crazy lover who can do anything for his Shivaay

    1. Barbieannie

      Thanks a lot, yeah i added Crazy Lover in her character sketch in my diary soon it’ll be seen too as she’s gonna do a lot for shivaay❤❤❤

  6. Alekhika20

    Superb update

    1. Barbieannie

      Thankyousomuch ❤

  7. Zainamariyam

    Want them to be crazy ness filled with love ,some khidkitod romance and i loved it

    1. Barbieannie

      Craziness is seprate for now we saw how crazy shivaay is for annika leaving her for her happiness now we’ll see her and their romance is Little away still khidkitod romance😉

  8. UF3355

    AWESOME EXCELLENT INTERESTING MIND BLOWING PERFECT SUPERB👌👌👌😘😘😘
    Dear Annie
    ShivIka Moment😍 Shivay Tease Anika😘 Anika Blushing😚 ShivIka Conv In Party 😘 Anika Daksh Conv😘 Anika Reply For Daksh😍 What Is In Anika Report😕 Khanna Remember Shivay Word😘 Anika Cry For Shivay😢 It’s Emotional Shot😍😍😘👏👏👏

    Take Care And Stay Safe😊

    1. Barbieannie

      Dear Uf thankyousomuch for all the comments you did till this chapter I’m thanking for all the comments now only sorry for bot replying on previous Parts Problem is solved now only thanks for the support😘😘😘😘❤❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤
      TC TOO STAY SAFE❤❤❤

  9. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome and emotional dear….

    1. Barbieannie

      Thankyousomuch Nikita❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  10. It’s clif hanging , please update soon

    1. Barbieannie

      Updated!🤗

  11. Banita

    Amazinggg update dr…. I like to see this Crazy lover side of Anika , But DON’T WANT TO SEE HER AS A LOOSER IN FRONT OF OTHERS….
    Eagerly waiting for next… Post soon….

    1. Barbieannie

      Thanks a lot for the Regular comments Banita❤ yeah I’ll make her strong and crazy lover too😘 next is posted 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  12. Hkaur

    Fabulous. The conversation between anika and daksh was amazing. How she replied was fab. I would really like to see anika as a crazy lover

    1. Barbieannie

      Thankyousomuch ❤❤❤❤❤❤ you’ll definitely see her crazy lover side in 18 and 19 shot❤

  13. Somya_17

    Hey..it was jus Amazinggg update…
    I liked it alott..I would like to see this Crazy lover side of Anika..eagerly waiting for nxt chapter..post nxt one asap..

    1. Barbieannie

      Not breaking the rule ignoring thanks!
      I love that you loved it 😘😘😘😘crazy side of her as a lover added Babes😘😘POSTED😉❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  14. Maryam_ishq

    Mind blowing chapter ! Strted off all romantic and ended up full on emotional 😟. Sry for the late reply 😁.
    Anika asking shivay to help her in tieing the dori and shivay cheated 😂… he was happy seeing the effect he had on her and thought to enjoy some more… he made her wear the jewellery and while makin her wear the kamarbandh… he also got turned on but controlled himself… he shouted in her ear and brought her back to the real world… while anika was blushing so hard… uffff their scene was just 😍😍😍. Both enter in the party holding hands 😍😍… and chitchatted… shivay eager for anika’s surprise. Shivay accompanied her near the bathroom… he didn’t wanna leave her alone anywhere 🤗. He was shocked seeing someone take her with him and followed her.
    Daksh understood tht someone manipulated mallika and he sent his three goons… am pretty sure they were the ones who had rap*d anika… he’s so merciless… just beat the crap out of the person until he dies or is battling with his life on the hospital bed. He says tht he loves shivay a lot but he sent those goons behind him only… though he didn’t knw tht shivay was the one behind it but still. He came to anika and told tht he loves her a lot and wants her back and asks for a second chance… second chance my foot u don’t deserve to even live in this world daksh 😡. Shivay angry seeing daksh goin close to anika but was happy tht anika was handling the situation and didn’t fall weak seeing him and she was answerin him really well. Shivay left frm there aftr gettin mallika’s call and he told anika before leaving.
    Anika’s wprds to daksh were just brilliant and u made it all the more better by writing it in hindi. Those lines were just soo good 👌👌👌. Daksh was shocked seeing anika answerin him…. he has only seen her as a weak person and not fighting for herself. His male ego was hurt a lot… anika crushed it under her feet.
    Shivay hurt seeing anika’s report and aftr hearin mallika’s words he became heartbroken 😭😭. He was hurt tht anika didn’t bother to tell him such a big truth and hid it frm him till now… he walked towards the venue lifelessly as he didn’t want anika to worry tht he wasn’t present there. Daksh’s goons come and attack shivay and tht poor guy was so engrossed with anika’s reports and mallika’s words ringing in his head tht he couldn’t bother abt anythin else 😭😭. And those goons bet him up mercilessly and would have continued if khanna had not come there… khanna was shocked seeing shivay in this state… and he took him to the hospital and didn’t inform anika as shivay never wanted to be a hurdle in anika’s dream.
    Anika could feel shivay callin her and she cried thinkin abt him and on not findin him in the venue. This time shivay got attacked caz of mallika… basically jab bhi shivay pe attack hua ya accident hua indirectly daksh is the reason for it.
    Wht strted off as a happy day turned into such a sad one 😭😭. Again anika’s surprise is left incomplete. I wanna see anika finding out daksh’s involvement in shivay’s accident and faces him and shouts on him for injuring her shivay… a crazy lover of shivay… beats him up for all the things he has done to her as well for shivay’s condition. Take care dear and love u loads ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤.

  15. Barbieannie

    Uhhh uhhh uhh i hate it when you says sorry for the late reply even when I’m not replying at all😭😭😭
    Thanks a ton for always commenting on my All FF’s even when i didn’t replied and always longest comments 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 I’ve not enough worda to thank You❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ Being the best You always supported me when None does😭😘😘😘😘😘😘 you’re the only reason I’m writing one after other FF you Boosts me a lot and your conclusions are perfect since the day we Are connected you never failed to Guess all right😎😎😎 as if you’re the writer my mind Twin😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 updating annika’s character and added Crazy lover in it😉
    Now daksh’s back count starts😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 and bOom you guessed the man’s right too😎😎😎One secret she’s gonna do more worse then this with daksh😃😂😂😂😂 she’ll rock and he’ll not be able to even regret😈
    You too Take Care dear and loads of love bacl to you that too infinite times Adding past loves too😉😉😉❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘😘❤😘❤❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘❤😘

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