It was not my fault (Twinj) Chapter 3

Link to the previous chapter,

Chapter 2

Kunj’s pov,
why don’t I forget her, when I hate her… She was my past and now I just have to focus on my career. Tomorrow is the conference and then I will be back to my house. I miss everyone and specially my mom. Just because of her!! I will never forgive her!

During dinner time,
Twinkle feels weak and uneasy so she orders her dinner in her room, Kunj comes and haves his dinner. Twinkle’s pov,

Flashback:
Twinkle takes out all her clothes from the cupboard and tries to decide what to wear for the dinner, she lays down everything and thinks. She wonders “why I am thinking so much, I can wear anything, I am not going for a date. But he told date, no no he then told its dinner”. She finally decides what to wear. Fb ends.

Twinkle tries to sleep but is unable to sleep because she feels uneasy. Next day the conference takes place Twinkle reaches before Kunj and takes her seat ahead whereas Kunj comes and sits behind, he is about to see Twinkle when Yuvraj comes in front of Twinkle and says “hi, Twinkle, why didn’t you come to have dinner yesterday?” “hi, actually I was not feeling well,” replies Twinkle. Yuvraj asks “why what happened you should have called me na.” “no I am fine now its ok and I didn’t have your number so how could I call you?” replies Twinkle.Yuvraj says “oh yes”.

And he sits beside her. The conference starts, Twinkle again feels uneasy so she asks to go to washroom. She stands up and Kunj feels something strange, Twinkle faints but Yuvraj holds her at the right time and he takes her out saying he will be back in sometime.The boss allows them to go out and asks Yuvraj to take care of her.Yuvraj assures him. Kunj feels very uneasy as if someone whom he loves a lot is not well. Yuvraj takes her to his room and sprinkles water on her. Twinkle wakes up and tries to get up, Yuvraj helps her. She drinks water and says “I am fine lets go”. Yuvraj asks “are you mad?” in an irritated tone. Twinkle glares him. Yuvraj says “I am sorry but how will you go in this condition?” “really I am ok!” assures Twinkle. Yuvraj nods and they leave but when they reach they realise that the conference had already ended. The boss comes near Twinkle and asks “are you okay?” Twinkle says “yes I am fine” The boss smiles “so you both are also invited for party tonight, Valentine party”. Twinkle and Yuvraj smile assuring him.

In the evening,
Kunj enters the hall with black coat pant. And some time later Twinkle enters the hall with Yuvraj. She looked stunning in white gown, with light make up and her hair tied in a bun letting out some strands of her hair. She was indeed looking gorgeous in her attire and every boy in the party was staring at her. Everyone were enjoying themselves in the party. Twinkle leaves for washroom as she was feeling uneasy.

Kunj’s pov, (Flashback)
Kunj waits for Twinkle in the hotel. Twinkle comes in red stunning gown. Kunj is mesmerised by her beauty. Twinkle comes inside and sees the whole room decorated just for both of them. As she enters the room flowers fall on her, she forwards both her hands and enjoys it. Kunj gets really happy seeing this. He goes close to her with a rose and kneels down and says “I love you Twinkle” and he forward his hand with the rose. Twinkle is surprised. Kunj continues “from the day you have entered my life I have been attracted towards you, I wanted to see you happy always and I wanted to be always with you and never leave you alone. I seriously love you Twinkle. Twinkle says “I didn’t expect this from you, I thought you always as my best friend, and you always made me feel special but I didn’t know this was the reason behind it.” Kunj remains heartbroken.

Fb ends as someone comes and clashes him. It’s a girl, her face is not shown, she says “I am so sorry.” Kunj turns back to see her and is shocked!!

So how was it? I hope it was upto your expectations. I’m really upset with the number of comments I received in the previous episode and trust me I’m really disappointed. Its your call today, if you want me to continue this ff then please do comment. Otherwise I’ll discontinue this ff.

Regards,
Maria

47 comments

  1. Ramya

    Ramya

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    Maria
    It’s superb tumhara yeh beech mai flashbacks dene ki idea is superb I loved it n I think girl is twinkle
    Plssss poat sooon dear

  2. Paavu

    Paavu

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    Hey naria dear its suspenseful awesome I ll try yo commnt always bt u knw na dat I m hospitalized as I told…………….. bt I ll try and ya rpi was awesome yeh twi ko kya hua and will u make me ur frnd?????

  3. Chiku

    Chiku

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    Hey maria
    Episode is lovely😘😘😘loved it. It soo cute.
    Finally twinj will meet in next episode 😘😘
    Maria dont get upset plzzz. Many ppl are having exams including me. Dont be disheartened yaar. I am trying my best to comment on every ff
    Plzzz do post soon
    Love u💜

    • Angel20

      Angel20

      |Author

      Hey Chiku,
      Thank you so much dear. I’m really glad you liked it. I’m not disappointed but naturally one feels sad without any support. But it’s ok I’m continuing with it.

      With Love💕

  4. Priya23

    Hey maria…the epi is very good…when twinj will meet?….and why twinkle always fill uneasy ? looks like shes pregnant….lol…just joking….he he he….
    Plzzzz post next epi soon…..will be waiting..
    And don’t disheartened because of less cmnt….and plzzz don’t end it…everyone will surely cmnt….
    Luv u..,,®,,Stay happy……..

  5. Zuha Fatima

    Zuha Fatima

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    Hey Maria,
    This was nice, though a bit shocking. The story is proceeding in a nice way and I can’t wait to read more out of it 🙂
    Well dear don’t get disappointed by the numbers of comments as I think comments don’t really matter as far as you are enjoying to write .. and moreover write for those who love to read your writings not for those who just ignore!!
    Anyways .. if you get time so please read my FF;
    http://www.tellyupdates.com/twinj-ki-tashan-e-shaadi-zuha-episode-11/
    Also take care … Loads of love and support ♡♡♡

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

    • Angel20

      Angel20

      |Author

      Hey Zuha,
      Thank you so much dear. I’m really glad you liked it. Yes comments don’t matter as far as I enjoy writing but still one needs encouragement. I have read the episode and it was really great.

      With Love💕

      • Zuha Fatima

        Zuha Fatima

        |Registered Member

        I totally agree with you and you are absolutely write at your place that one needs encouragement! But as I said WRITE FOR THOSE WHO LOVE TO READ YOUR WRITINGS NOT FOR THOSE WHO JUST IGNORE!! Take care sweetie and also I am grateful to you that you took out some time to read my FF!

        Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

  6. |Registered Member

    Superb……maria💓💟💝💘💕 really loved it……the girl will be twinkle…..I’m so eager to know about their past…..but it will be slowly revealed….I’m eagerly waiting for the next episode
    Love ❤❤❤

  7. Vipul

    Vipul

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    Hey Maria, sorry yar last time I commented very late but what to do yaar I’m not feeling well these days so cmnting very late…. sorryyyyyyyy

    Well episode was mindblowing n fantastic…. n your flashback idea is superb….I think girl is twinkle only but let in see next episode… please post next asap…
    Lots of love…

    “Shalini/Neha”

  8. Kritika14

    Kritika14

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    Hey Maria,
    Sorry for the late comment, I was a little busy with my work! Anyway, coming to the chapter, it was amazing! But you’ve stopped the chapter at suspense so please do write the next one soon! Badly waiting for it! Moreover, regarding to the number of comments .. don’t get disheartened! As we all know, it’s the time of exams for almost everyone so maybe they might be busy! But don’t you dare say again that you’ll discontinue your ff! Will be waiting for the next! Post soon! x

    Lovess! xx

  9. Manvi

    Hey Maria,
    It was brilliant…. ☺..
    I mean….. those flashbacks and that confession scene were just awesome..😍😍😍 i luv this ff😊😊
    Post next soon💟

  10. Ayu

    Ayu

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    Ohhh mah gad! Thats so captivating! Dipyong to know their reaction when they’ll come face to face! Post soon😘

  11. SidMin

    SidMin

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    Just Loved it 🙂 Awesome Feeling sad for Kunj … Twinkle rejected his proposal 🙂 Waiting for the next episode 🙂 Love you 🙂 Post soon 🙂

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  13. Baby

    Baby

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    ohhhhh god maria amazing 😀
    loved it sooo much jst hv a question will u b my friend n ur age o hehe
    funny right 😀
    bt mein hun hi aisi
    well d episode was tooo good dis uv huh hope nothing goes wrong
    love u lods♥♥♥

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