It was not my fault (Twinj) Chapter 10 ~ Last Chapter

In case you missed the previous chapter,

Chapter 9

So here we come to the last part of the fb:

Some days pass by, everyone treats Twinkle in a good way except Usha. She always used to taunt her because she belonged to a middle class family. Kunj used to support Twinkle every time but one day… Twinkle had ordered rat poison to kill rats in the house. And she was preparing tea for Usha as for the first time she had asked for it. Kunj calls her and she goes out leaving the tea on the gas. After some time she comes back and serves the tea to Usha. And After few minutes she faints. Everyone thinks that the tea had poison because poison was kept in the kitchen which was ordered by Twinkle. The rat poison was kept just beside the vessel in which tea was made. Everyone thought that she died because of poison. And everyone thinks it was added by Twinkle except Raj. They knew why Usha had died but they didn’t tell the reason because Usha had warned them to tell it to Kunj.

Raj were standing still but Kunj who believed that as Usha always insulted Twinkle so she would have purposely done that. Raj stood silent not telling a word. Raj secretly went inside the kitchen and added some poison in the vessel in which tea was made so that it is proved correct. He didn’t want Twinkle to be punished but he was helpless. When police came they insisted that Twinkle should be arrested. Kunj who was in dilemma said not to arrest her! In all these things Twinkle was shocked and didn’t tell a word but when she saw Kunj telling not to arrest her, she said “I knew Kunj will always believe me, I didn’t do anything.” Kunj sends the police saying “she is my wife and I don’t want my family name to be ruined because of her.. Please go.” The police leaves. Twinkle looks on and thinks “why did Kunj say that didn’t he trust me?” Kunj says “I knew mom didn’t like you but you did this to her I hate you get lost from here! Never come back in my life” Twinkle said “but… but
It was not my fault!”
And she breaks down into tears. Kunj pushes her out of his house. Twinkle is stunned by his action. Everything is shattered. Flashback finally ends.

Now let’s see the actual story what Raj told Kunj. Actually Usha was suffering from blood cancer!! And the doctors had given up. Still she lived for a long time but she fainted frequently because of this. She was weak, her body could not take it more! Usha did not want Kunj to know about this because she thought he would be very unhappy hearing this, she wanted him to continue with his studies and her health should not create any barrier to his studies so she didn’t want him to know. But Raj thought that it was high time so he told everything to Kunj and showed her reports also. He also told that it was him who had poisoned the tea vessel. Kunj was shocked!
He had blamed his own Twinkle…
He rushed to Mumbai to get her back!!

Present:
Kunj is in the hospital struggling for his life. Twinkle is thinking “why did Kunj say it was his fault?”
Twinkle is standing outside the ICU. The doctor comes out and says your prayers have done this miracle, he is alive and all right! Twinkle smiles and asks “can I meet him?” Doctor says “yes you can but we have to wait till he wakes up.” Twinkle rushes inside and holds Kunj’s hands tightly and forgets all her sorrows seeing him fine. She kisses his hands and says “are you mad? Don’t you know how much I was worried? I am very angry!” Kunj slowly opens his eyes and sees her and gives a sigh of relief. He tries to get up, Twinkle helps him get up. Both share an eye lock. Twinkle hugs him tightly and cries. Kunj asks her to stop crying. Twinkle still cries… Kunj consoles her and says “I am sorry Twinkle!I am really very sorry for not trusting you.. Please forgive me.” He tells the entire story to Twinkle. She is shocked to hear it. She says “it’s OK I am no more angry with you.” Kunj smiles but still feels guilty. Twinkle says “I told Na stop feeling guilty now! I love you the same way I used to do before.” Kunj kisses her and they share a tight hug.

The End.

I hope it was not bad. Please share your views. Even the silent readers, if any, please break your silence. And I want to tell you all that I’m really very disappointed with the number of comments I received in the previous episode which irritated me a lot. Finally I’m done with both my writings. And yes this was my last writing on this page and also on this site because I really don’t find time to write stories and if I write also there are very less comments I receive. And I don’t think that I write so bad. And also next year is my 12th so I better concentrate on my studies rather than wasting time on this. So bye! I’ll try commenting on the articles if I get time.

Regards,
Maria

27 comments

  1. Aamna_2690

    Aamna_2690

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    Maria dear
    It was fabulous but why u ended it so soon…. yaar plz comeback with another ff…. I am seriously gonna miss u…. plz don’t leave the page….
    From;
    Aamna

  2. Adya

    Adya

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    Di that’s not fair !
    Ok I know studies are more important but pls don’t stop writing.. you are a good writer and this less comments happens with almost everyone.. so pls don’t mind ! Ok??? Pls keep Posting and all the best for your 12th..

    Now this one as actually superb.. I live it.. it was amazing.. I’ll miss your writing.. if you stop then we won’t feel good … We like your writing so much

    Hope to see you soon with another piece..
    Loads of love!

  3. RUTU.....

    RUTU.....

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    Maria it’s the best ff I really loved it and I don’t want it to end but its OK you write really nice keep writing your ideas and yaa all the best for your studies and 12th love you 😘😘😍😍😘😘

  4. Cutei pie

    I read all the parts as a silent reader…wowwwww what an amazing story!!! Sorry fr nt cmmntng on previous ones luvv u plzz do write more luv u

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    Super Mario,
    U should know this that u write really well……And no. Of comments ki baat hai tou….. I agree with adya…. It happens with everyone…. I won’t say that don’t consider no. Of comments….so it will be wrong bcoz we writers….give at least 4-5 hours for writing a episode and if an OS is written it takes more time….. So after giving this much time…..we surely need appreciation for our work……bcoz it boost us to write more and more……as someone is reading it…. This ff like ur other writings was superb and marvellous…..
    Best of luck for ur future
    Lots of love,
    ❤❤❤

  6. Sushmitha

    I love ur writing Maria y did you discontinue yar I’m feeling sad pls continue writing at least write os love you

  7. Anayaali

    Awesome 🙆 Maria sorry for not commenting in previous epi and end was superb 👌 luvd it ❤💖😍 and plzzzzzz don’t leave tu I can understand studies are important but plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 i think that much plzzz is enough ur at least write some os,ss,fs,Ts yr plzzz something but don’t leave tu every one is bzy in studies may be that’s why they r not commenting… Try to post something on tu… Luv u 😊❤💖😍👄

  8. Asna

    Sorry maria… i cant comment on all of ur episodes… but ur whole story was very nice… u describe Very well about each n every part…

  9. Kritika14

    Kritika14

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    Hey Maria,
    This story was so amazing! From the beginning till the end! I’m pretty shocked after knowing the past but its alright! Glad Twinkle and Kunj are back together! Although, I understand that studies are really vital but I’ll really be glad if you don’t stop writing! But its completely your choice so do whatever you feel is the best for you! In case, I don’t see you (which is very sad), all the best for your future endeavors!

    Lovess! xx

  10. SidMinTwiNj

    SidMinTwiNj

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    Hey Maria
    From the first to last epi its just beyond amazing… I thoroughly enjoyed it… Wish u would have continued it till silver or golden jubilee… Dear don’t be disappointed coz of less comments… Not only on ur ffs but on all ffs comments are very less… U write so good and no doubt in it… I know studies are very important but still I’m telling if u get time do come up with new ff… All the best for ur future…

    Love you💖

  11. Chiku

    Chiku

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    Hey maria
    U r an amazing writer ❤️❤️❤️One of my fav though. I loved it to the core ❤️❤️😀 Itss just amazing. Lovely. I was spellbound. 😉😉😍😍😍

    Plzz dont get disheartened with less comments. Do come up with other stories
    Loads if love❤️

  12. Ria

    Ria

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    I thought someone just told me: ‘Ignore those who don’t comment’. I thought it was you. How mean Maria!! You’re stopping to write because of less comments; are you legit kidding me? C’mon you know you write well. If people don’t read or comment, it’s their problem. Why do you want to be a loser, huh?

    Well, well, this story was absolutely marvellous!! I loved the concept very much. Hope we can look forwards to more of your works. In case if we don’t, which is surely going to be very sad, all the best for your 12th.

    Love,
    Ria.

  13. Zuha Fatima

    Zuha Fatima

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    Hey Maria,
    I’ve always said that you should know you’re a good writer and write for your own self and for encouraging your all TU friends are here. But still, if you think your decision is right then I’ll support you and all my hearty wishes for your future. Rick over your studies as well!

    Coming to the story, this was definitely mind blowing. I knew it was Usha (the trouble maker) since the beginning. Also I hate Raj for adding poison and ultimately blaming Twinkle. But all’s well which ends well 🙂 Happy for Twinj’s reunion 🙂
    Bye for now…But I really wish you don’t stop writing but all’s up to you 🙁

    Loads of Love and Support!
    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

  14. SidMin

    SidMin

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    Loved it 🙂
    You are an awesome writer I loved all your stories on this page 🙂
    I won’t force you to write because I myself is suffering from the same problem I too can’t continue writing … 12 hai next year 🙂
    Love you 🙂
    Say happy 🙂
    Keep smiling 🙂

  15. SidMin

    SidMin

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    Loved it 🙂
    You are an awesome writer I loved all your stories on this page 🙂
    I won’t force you to write because I myself is suffering from the same problem I too can’t continue writing … 12 hai next year 🙂
    Love you 🙂
    Stay happy 🙂
    Keep smiling 🙂

  16. Simiyy

    Simiyy

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    Hey Maria
    I loved your FF so much.
    it was truly amazing.
    Please try to write OS if possible
    Best of luck for your studies
    loads of love

  17. Ramya

    Ramya

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    Hey
    Maria
    I love ur ff sooooooooi muuuucvhhhh
    It’s just I didn’t get time so I have commented late I’m sry but it’s just superb
    N u have ended it so early dear
    It’s aint fair
    I hope ull come back n plsss don’t leave
    Loads of love keep smiling

  18. Baby

    Baby

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    ohhhh lord………………….. 😀
    maria srsly luvd it sooooo mch
    dis stry was too blissful n adorable to read
    luvd it………very cute end 😀
    luv u lods♥♥♥

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