NOISE OF THE PAST( THE CHOICE) CHAPTER 9

Hello people…I am posting on my scheduled time…thank you for all the love and patience..it really means a lot…well I know u feel that it is dragging….nd kinda getting boring..but bear wid me as u hve till now…I m seriously trying my best to make it interesting for u..next chp is quiet long..nd I will try to finish d flashback parts in 3-4 chps…!
Love u all..
Keep reading..
Nd silent readers plz comment..!

CHAPTER-9

He had feelings, he loved me. He really did. There’s no doubt in that. I always thought this and I respected him so much for the love he gave me. I know this comes out of nowhere but I have to say this. His face, was attractive, not in a way you think but it had that kind of power to just make heads turn over. His face was so much interesting. Really it was. I often observed him when he wouldn’t notice and I tried so hard to know what was going on inside that head of his. What was he thinking? Was he thinking about me?
There are happy memories too. There are always some, aren’t they?
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Time has drowned it all.
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One fine sunny day, we planned to go swimming. He didn’t know how to swim. He was afraid to go to the deeper part and the story behind his fear made me roll with laughter. Can you believe it, the tall, charming Mr. Malhotra was afraid to go the deeper part because he feared that sharks would come out of nowhere and eat him up!
God that was hilarious, like hilarious with six-‘a’s.
Hilaaaaaarious.

So anyway, we jumped in the pool. Oops,mistake! I jumped in the pool, he carefully stepped down the stairs leading to the blue cold water.
So once inside the pool, I decided to teach him how to swim. Actually I wanted to him to kick this silly fear out of his mind. So here is how it happened:
I knew that he already knew the movements so I just wanted him to stretch in water and start swimming. So I waited for him to start. He does.

And you have to really clap for the distance he covered. He covers barely one inch because he stretches and thinks to start but he is already ‘drowning’ according to him. So I just looked towards him with a bored look on my face as he moves his hand and legs frantically and well, kinda maniacally.
” Ahh save me! Save me! I am drowning. Somebody save me!’ He shouted and I couldn’t help but think how could a man as tall as him drown in a depth of merely four feet.
I was just lost in finding the logic only when he moved towards me with great force. I couldn’t defend myself and his bare torso touch my body and his hand held mine. He was still shouting.
I came back to my senses and hit him on the head. ” Stupid, how can you drown in four feet? I am standing and I know so can you.”

He didn’t listen to me and with great efforts managed to reach the boundary.
There was so much fun. No barriers of trust. No silly fights. No possessiveness or obsessiveness.

Just the real us. No pretending. No hiding. Just us as we wanted it.
I wish we could go back to being that way. Oblivious of the world and forming a world of our own where there would be no complications and no persuasion. Just the cool water and our calm selves. But time huh. This time has an old enmity with me. It just isn’t ready to allow me to jump into its depths and go back to the beautiful memories. Time has drowned it all.
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38 comments

  1. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Look who is commenting on time- ME!!!!
    Finally I managed it after ages….woho!!! Now u don’t have to desperately wait for my comment coz this time I’m commenting early.
    Rofl!!! U r a fairy with supernatural powers. Really whenever the evil boredom surrounds me, u spread ur light to chill me up. Today too I was nearly sleeping on the history class but look who posted the masterpiece!!!
    Thanks soooooooooooo much! I could survive for that big hour n 20 mins for this marvelous update.
    Goooossshh it was hella hilarious. I could imagine that lambu calling for help 😂😂😂
    U rock….I’m serious u rock harder than diamond. Stay blessed
    Now….dare u call this cool off chaps boring again 😠, I’ll punch u.
    How could u? its my favourite 😍. U mean my choices r boring?😱😭
    Not done!!
    My choices r brilliant 😏 deal with it

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Oh my god Ariana..!
      Now look who is buttering..!!😉
      Yeah..I totaly agree wid d fact that ur choices r brilliant.😉😂
      Thank you so so much..
      Nd yeah..u r first to comment..m so happy that saved me my waiting..!
      Love u loads .
      Take care..
      😊

  2. Ria

    Hii everyone i m new here and a silent reader to … O Ws u write so well i can’t explain i have no words u express so well . Actually i don’t what is happening but after edkv ended no one is responding what is happening please please please post nxt chap soon one more thing maine ye suna hai ki edkv season 2 aa raha hai is this news true guys please update chapters soon i m so happy to see ur update please please please post nxt chap soon thanx and sry for if i hurt anyone

  3. AnShIta

    |Registered Member

    Hey Niyati di!
    Firstly, I’m extremely sorry for my late comment! Had been at school and just cam back…
    Now, coming to the episode, it was soooooo damn amazing! Man, I loved each and every part of it! Aaaahhhh…the way you described everything was😍😍😍😍😍
    Please do try to post soon!
    Love ya!😘😘😘😘😘

  4. Nikita

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    Lookkk who’s backk :
    Imm here…….!!
    Niya di, amazinggg…
    Look at you, look at your writing, it’s so interesting, well I wont say it’s boring, but it feels dragged, but since you said that you’re gonna post it now, so yayyy!!
    AMAZING EPISODE..
    Oh I just love this Shravan!

  5. Ruhaani

    Yet another piece which is flawlessly amazing! Damn..hw do u even manage to mke the fiction so living….the more I read the more it mkes me go awe! <3
    Thankyou sooooo much fr posting it on the given tym. Welll.. I'm soo much dieing to know whtz going in shravan's mind.
    Will desperately wait fr the next chp
    Tke care
    Loadz of luv <3 <3

  6. Alina

    |Registered Member

    Hii Niyati..sorry I’m sooooo late..🙉🙉
    Episode was amazing, super duper ..how beautifully u relate the past that her good memories had drowned with time..
    U r excellent writer dear
    Waiting for ur next part
    Love you..n ur ff
    Bye take care

  7. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Ohk so I think infact why think I AM very late
    So sorry for that actually I don’t know why I am late kinda disturbed a lil and my exams are also coming yr
    Ok leave my things lets come to ur ff
    NIYATI I WANT A NOVEL A BEST SELLER IN MY HAND WITH THE NAME NIYATI WRITTEN ON THE COVER AS THE AUTHOR
    U get that???
    And I want that very very soon jaan
    Don’t just limit urself till ff darling u r something beyond that u got me ?? BEYOND THIS

    The way u write the things u write the plot u write the dialogues u write all are just magic darling just magic

    I am not requesting I am ordering u to publish a novel very soon and I hope i have the right to order u??😉😉😉

    I just loved the part and yeah mark my words
    IF AGAIN U SAID THAT I KNOW ITS BORING AND ALL THEN MUJHSE BURA KOI NHU HOGA

    U r stupid how can u call this peice which is pure class boring

    And this is ur ff I know but I just love it and I will not hear a word against it got it??

    Love u so much jaan and I am missing u so much yeah u r such a great writer and u r on time also its me only who is not punctual at all

    M so sorry guys for that
    I will post soon
    Love u niyu
    Love u so so much
    I hope u remember me😋😋😋
    Lots of love c u soon darling

    • Khushi

      |Registered Member

      Ohk so think I wrote a paragraph yr
      But Kya karun itne tym baad comment kar rhi hun ho jaata hai
      Love u yr love u so much

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Oh my god khushi..
      U always make up for not being there for quiet some time…!!
      I would love to publish a novel!! Its my dream…but I need time for that…
      I will definitely write one..when I get time..
      I can never ever forget u….!!!
      Love u too sweety…!
      Plz update ur ff soon..
      These exams huh!!
      They r there every Time..
      Anyway..
      Bye..take care..
      😊
      P.S- plz PM me if u hve a wattpad Id..msg ur Id.

  8. Sun_shine

    |Registered Member

    Okkk so hellooooo weirdsister aka niyati rite????

    Girl ur writing and imaginations are just loveeeeeeeeeeee…..

    Seriously u write simply amazing i hv enjoyed ur each and every piece of writing from ur first ff kahen teri khamoshiyan to this including ur five shots and two shots……… All are just amazingggggggggggg

    keep writing dear

    ps:i know i hvn,t comment till today but surely will cmnt on ur upcoming posts!!!!

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Hey sunshine..
      Thank you dear..
      Nd I would be really upset if u don’t comment on d upcoming chps..after all u have a lot to make up for…😉
      Once again thank you..
      😊

      • Sun_shine

        |Registered Member

        Hahahaha i heartily appologize for not cmnting from begining not to u only but to all writers……..

        But from now till i hv vacations i,ll not miss any update to cmnt… And would love to be frnds with u can we??????

  9. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    Di.. im not getting you PMs.. my notifs show that you PMed me, but when I click on it, I dont get any msgs.. Anything important di?

  10. Prettypreeti

    |Registered Member

    Weirdyyy my niyo yaar toooo good it was just tooo goods no doubt u r fab writer it was superb interesting I m curious toooooo gooodddd I loved ITT girl u r a very sweet writer.
    Loved it.
    Post soooonnnnnn.

  11. Zainab

    I’m way too much late. I’m so so sorry for that. 🙈
    This was so cute. Loved it. Reading every episode makes me even more anxious to read further. The way you explain everything is just so amazing.
    Post ASAP. Much love 😘 Take care 💕

  12. Angel_pari

    Sorryyyyyyyyy

    soooooo

    sorryyyyyyyyyyyyy i missed so many parts na plzzzzz forgive me life was too hectic and busy extremely sorry but coming to story i,m too curious to know what happend in past and where sharvan is plzzz reveal it soon i cant wait more

    but is sharvan reaally afraid of swimimg hehehe i was literally laughing on this u rocked it girl i,m in love with ur writing skills

    take care stay blesed

    ps : i,lost access to my previous TU account as well so gona register again soon okkk love u bye

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Hey angel..!!
      Thank you so much..
      M so sorry to make u wait..
      But d flashbacks will go on till d 12th chp..
      If ur exams r over..post ur ff’s next part soon..
      By the way how did they go?
      Register itself quickly..
      Love u loads..
      M posting d next chp now..!
      😊

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