NOISE OF THE PAST( THE CHOICE) CHAPTER 5

Helllo everyone…this chp is a bit long but d next one will be damn short..like really short….it would just be n intro to what’s coming up….so sorry in advance…nd plz comment…silent readers…there can’t be any reason stopping u from commenting…so plz comment…
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Okay that’s it…now story time…here it is..

CHAPTER-5

After that day when he told me that Adi is thinking about talking to me, I started being hopeful about it. This was another reason due to which I sidelined his feelings for me. I was so engrossed in being happy and hopeful about Adi talking to me that I did not think about the man who supported me in all this.

When few days passed and we had started playing badminton together, one day he came to me looking very happy and his magical smile played on his lips. I asked him the reason and he said, ” Com’on, Adi wants to talk to you.” And I jumped like an idiot. ” Let’s go.” I said happily.
Adi was waiting for me already. We three started talking with me and Adi sorting out our problems and he being a witness to it. Then suddenly I don’t know what bit me and I said,” You know, right now I have my two admirers standing in front of me.” I was a stupid who at that time just wanted attention. I didn’t care about him or his feelings. All I cared about was how flattered I felt when I got so much attention. That time I didn’t even care about Adi ‘ feelings. That was a period when I was at my selfish most.
” Oh so you said it to her finally?” Adi asked him.
He scratched his head, grinned and said,” Yeah bro.”
” That’s good” Adi said.

After a year and a half or so, Adi started behaving strangely and so did his gang. Right now I am not in a mood to rewind that one and a half year gap which I skipped. It would be too much wouldn’t it be?
Okay, so I noticed that whenever his gang saw me and Adi together, they started giving us weird looks.
Something unusual happened with me. I grew suspicious. Ananya told me she would do the job for me.
And after a few days it was revealed to me that Adi still liked me, in fact loved me. I was nothing else but shocked. This went on for days, when he would chat and chat with Ananya about me. I knew about whatever he said to her because she would tell me every single thing. In fact I used to read their chats when I met her. I didn’t confront him. Ananya would tease me and she would do the same with him. She would motivate him in fact.
Then suddenly, one day Ananya came to me and said,” He is going to propose you.” She grinned at me.
” What! When?” I asked. I didn’t expect that coming. “What will I reply to him. How will I tell him that I don’t love him. Will it be right to break his heart again?” I thought.
” On new year’s eve.” She elbowed me.
Adi didn’t know that I knew about all this all the time. So I let it be.
So then came the new year’s eve. I wore a sleeveless black dress. My hair was done in a side braid and overall I looked pretty good. I didn’t want to make it a bad beginning for him into a new year. Ananya went to him, I knew for what. Then she came back to me and said,” Get ready. By the way he gave this for you.” It was a chocolate and I swear I haven’t touched it till date. I took it then but did not eat it. I mean com’on, you break a person’s heart and you eat his chocolate. That sounded cruel to me.
I took out my phone and saw that he was calling me as I refused to meet him citing some reasons.
I tried avoiding the call also but he kept calling me. So at last I picked it up.
” Hello?” I said.
” Yeah hello.” He said.
” What’s so urgent that you can’t wait?” I pretended to not know about it.
” Actually I want to confess something.” He said and now I began shaking. I literally was shaking, maybe because of the cold or because of what was coming. Ananya had to side hug me.
” Yeah say.” I said
” I still love you.” He said.
I was silent for a moment. What should I reply. I can’t spoil his new year.
” Hey are you there?” He asked.
” Yeah.” I replied quietly.
” So?” He asked once again.
” So?” I questioned back.
” What is your reply?” He sounded excited and nervous.
“Now what should I reply to this?” I thought.
” I need time.” I said.
” Oh yeah. That’s perfectly fine. ” he said.
” Ok then bye.” I said.
” Bye.” I cut the phone.
I leaned over on Ananya. How long could I delay this for? I knew that the time is very near.
I fell sick very badly that night. Severe attack of nausea. I was really really sick.
I knew he was waiting for my answer. So the first thing I did when I was well was to meet him.
” Hey look, I don’t want to get into all this. My priorities are different right now. Hope you understand.” I said that straight to him and he smiled. But it was evident that he was upset.
” So all this is over right? Even from your side? ” I asked.
” Oh yeah of course.” He said.
But I knew that it wasn’t. Till today its not over.

It can never be over.

27 comments

  1. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    OMG dear its sooooooooo nice. Wonderful!!! The way u portrayed Sumo’s thoughts nd POV left me speechless. I wish I could comment longer so I really wanna say more but ummmmm….. I kinda broke my hand while playing badminton last night so can’t type much…just using my pinky finger. plz don’t mind. Nd yah I’m really not in the state of typing my ff so pls don’t wait tmrw. Sry for a small comment
    but I love u
    take care

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Aww Ariana… Plz be careful dear….!😒
      Get well soon…
      Nd its okay of u write a short comment…
      Love u too…
      P.S- PM me ur wattpad Id..if u r there..or inform me that u r not….!

  2. AnShIta

    |Registered Member

    Wow Niyati di!
    You seriously are the master of expressing emotions!
    Loved it like hell dude!
    The way you describes each and every thought of Suman’s was perfectπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ
    Despite knowing that the next update will be short, I’m yet so damn excited to read it!
    Please do post soon!
    Love ya!😘😘😘😘😘

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Oh my god anshu…
      Don’t flatter me so much…
      I will post soon…
      Luv u too..
      Plz msg me ur id if u r there on wattpad…or inform me if u rnt…!!
      πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰

      • AnShIta

        |Registered Member

        Honestly, I don’t think those words are anything compared to how much a appreciate your writings😬😬
        Well, I ain’t much aware of wattpad…have just heard of it a few times…cud lemme know what it is? And so of now, I don’t have an account on it..
        Waiting for your post!

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Wattpad is one of d biggest online writing sites…its huge…nd there r millions of users…nd a lot more stories… Anyone can write their stories…there r annual awards nd contests…etc..
      .plz let me know when make m account..its n amazing site to be on… πŸ˜‰

      • AnShIta

        |Registered Member

        Yeah! I’ll surely check it out post my exams!
        In case I get myself registered over there, I’ll definitely let you know!

  3. Balamirra

    |Registered Member

    was awesome as usual’
    loved the way u write,
    btw what should i call you?
    waiting for the next epi eagerly ‘
    love you loads,
    y.b

  4. sona

    Dear…
    It was really..an unexpected gift😍😍😍
    I didn’t know that u gonna reveal the actual truth here…😱😱😱
    This situation..of sumo…really..need to b titled as *THE CHOICE..*πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜…πŸ˜…
    Poor..sumo..😳😳😳😐😐😐😊

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Thank you laddoo..
      Love u too..
      Will post soon…
      Nd plz PM me abt ur wattpad id if u hve one…if u don’t..then also let me know..!
      πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰

  5. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Hey niyati !!!!
    Yar it was mind blowing .. sumo’s POV … Ahhhhhh !!!! u nailed it πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
    Nd yeah m on wattpad .. nd my name is same as here .. I will follow u 😊😊
    Post soon ..
    TAKE care .. πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‹

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Thank you Fatima…
      Hope now its not boring..though far more interesting things r up..
      Glad to know u r on wattpad…
      Love u loads..
      Will post soon..
      U too take care..
      πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰

  6. Zainab

    WOWWW… This was just so amazing. I loved it so much. The way you wrote her POV was just so perfect. Loved it.
    Post the next one soon please.
    Love you 😘😘

      • Zainab

        I don’t have one :p
        Btw is this page gonna close? All of you are talking about to make ids at other sites to stay in touch! Let me know then I’ll surely come on wattpad.

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      No dear..nothing like that…I just wanted to find out how many of my frnds from here r there on wattpad…coz soon I m going to write a story there…actually not soon…but yeah next year😁😁😁😐😐😐

      • Zainab

        Oh thank God. I read it somewhere (don’t remember where though) so thought to confirm it. Okayy.
        When are you posting the next episode of this ff?
        Wait what.. next year? That was a joke right?

  7. Prettypreeti

    |Registered Member

    Sorry sorry mai maffi mangti hoon I m late but one thing ur part was so beautiful I can’t describe
    The way u write pov is more thanthan excellent.
    Loved it.
    Post sson

  8. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    Niya di!
    Okay one thing, was this the past or the present?
    I’m sorry, I’m sick so my brain’s not functioning…
    Anyways, past or present, this episode was love..
    I loved the way how you described Sumo’s POV, specially, when she was confused.
    One thing, what as that Adi-Shravan convo about?
    And plus, I loved everything today..
    Suman was amazing, kinda what I expected from her, cause I saw this coming since the 1st episode, that Adi will propose her!
    Okay bye!
    Love you
    Take care
    -Nikita

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Hey Nikki..
      Thank you so much..
      This was past..
      Nd adi Shravan convo was that adi asked Shravan that did he finally propose Suman?..nd Shravan said yes..
      Btw hope u r better now..
      Love u too..
      Nd plz msg me if u hve a wattpad Id..
      Nd u take care…
      πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰

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