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No matter what I do it’s never good enough because I always end up hurting u (A devakshi ff) Part 1

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H guys, Rithika here
Hope u all don’t have short term memory loss because I was the writer of Krpkab (I’ll love u forever) I am back with a ff here is the first part read it soon

Let’s start…….
A girl is sitting by the window crying
Asha : Beta ur crying thinking about him 5 years have passed since he left u please don’t hurt urself again and again please beta
That girl is none other than Sona
Sona : Ma he left me I didn’t. I hate him for that I’ll never forgive him for what he did
Asha : Then y r u crying remembering him
Sona is speechless
Sona : Ma I’m getting late I’ll leave
Asha : Beta it’s sunday today is holiday
Sona : Ma for people it’s holiday I run a hospital so people do not take holiday from getting sick do they
She reaches the hospital employees see her and get shocked
Employee : Y did she come on Sunday
Employee 2 : God knows she is only workaholic only works 24/7 is she a robot?
Employee : Maybe
They both laugh some patient comes to her
Sona : U’ll have to take these medicines and this diet
Patient : Thanks doctor
After the patient leaves Mr. Bhandari come
Sona : Welcome Mr. Bhandari
Mr. Bhandari : Yes thanks to ur diet I’m fit so I’ve kept a party for my colleagues so I’ve come to invite u to
Sona : Surely
Mr. Bhandari : Yes it will be in Hotel tulip
Sona gets shocked (y u’ll find out later)
Sona : Sure will come
Mr. Bhandari leaves from there
Sona : I have to go there where he was there our favourite place anyway 5 years have passed he must have forgotten me
even I have to forget him

While in a office
Employee : Sir please sign these papers
Boss : Y was there a delay anyway this shouldn’t happen again
Employee : Ok sir
The boss was none other than Dev. Just then Mr. Bhandari came
Mr. Bhandari : Good morning Dev
Dev : Good morning Mr. Bhandari. I see u have become more fit
Mr. Bhandari : Yes it’s all because of Dr. Sonakshi
Dev gets shocked a small droplet of tear comes out of his eye
Mr. Bhandari : So Dev I came here to invite u to a party it will be with my colleagues and business partners so u’ll come right
Dev : Yes sure
Mr. Bhandari : It will be in Hotel tulip
Dev is again shocked how couldn’t he be because it was their favourite hotel
Dev : I will surely be there

After Mr. Bhandari leaves Dev takes out a photo
Dev : Sorry for leaving u it was my biggest mistake, please come back to me. It was my biggest mistake for not trusting u I’m sorry I still didn’t forget u hope u didn’t
Sona reaches home
Sona : Ma I need to go to a party tomorrow
Asha : Where is it
Sona : In Tulip hotel
Asha : R u sure u want to go because…..
Sona : Ma I know but still it’s for my work not for meeting him so I need to go
Asha : It’s ur wish beta
Sona goes to her room
Elena : Sona u came ur going to a party right in the Tulip…
Sona : Ele leave it I need to go so please don’t start
In Dev’s house
Ishwari : U came beta come eat food
Dev : Ok ma and ya tomorrow don’t wait for me because there is a party in tulip hotel
Ishwari : R u sure of it beta
Dev : I know ma but it’s a colleague party so going it’s important
Ishwari : Fine go
Dev : Ok ma I’ll sleep now good night ma
Ishwari : Good night beta…….What’s going to happen hey bhagwan mere bete ki khushi vapas aa jaye

Next night
Asha : R u sure of going beta
Sona : Yes ma. Now I’m getting late bye ma
She leaves
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30 Comments
  1. Manya

    Awesomeeeeeeeeee❀️❀️❀️❀️
    Post soonπŸ’•
    Love loveπŸ’˜

    1. Rj12

      Thanks ayushi will post soon

  2. Nice episode.. sounds interesting. Post next episode soon

    1. Rj12

      Thanks richa

  3. AnShIta

    Hey Rithika di!
    Welcome back!
    Trust me, that was one fabulous comeback made by you!
    The title itself suggests that there’s a lot that’d happened 5 years back. What is it! I wonderπŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€” But as it is, I’ll only get to know as time passes…
    It was great! I’m so excited to see Dev and Sonakshi’s reaction as they meet yet again after 5 years. Gawd! 5 years and they weren’t in touch😱😱😱😱😡😡
    But, I believe, that a moment beautifully spent together will compensate for all the time!
    Post really soon! I’m so damn eager to learn about their past!
    Loads of love!😘😘😘😘😘😘

    1. Rj12

      Thanks for the welcome anshita ull find out soon what happened in the last 5 years soonπŸ‘

  4. Post soon

    1. Rj12

      Will surely post soon akshita

  5. Ali

    awesome

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Ali

  6. Aaru

    Nice start..it’s vry thrillinggggggg..

    1. Rj12

      Thanks aaru

  7. Angel20

    Hi rithika…
    I’m so happy that you are back…
    This was awesome! Loved it very much😘😘
    Post the next part soon!!

    1. Rj12

      Hi Maria I’m glad to be back to will post soon

  8. amazing and superb……πŸ’•πŸ’‹πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ’–β€πŸ’ŸπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’—πŸ’žπŸ’–πŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ˜πŸ‘πŸ’ŸπŸ˜˜……welcome back dear…….πŸ’“πŸ’‹πŸ’—β€πŸ’•πŸ’–πŸ‘πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ‘β€πŸ’—

    1. Rj12

      Thanks maleeha

  9. 😎 cool. Loved it. Post soon 😊😊

    1. Rj12

      Thanks dolly will post soon

  10. Bhoomi

    Superb start…
    Post soon..πŸ˜‰

    1. Rj12

      Thanks bhoomi

  11. Awesome episodes but short episode.

    1. Rj12

      Thanks princess

  12. Rockzzzzzz

    Hey rithika..i don’t mean to hurt u but i just cant resist saying this…it is somewhat similar to my ff…I STILL MISS YOU….sona hates dev,they r gonna meet in ahotel,dev’s mistake….quite similar….sorry if i hurt u but i just wanted to say the truth…i hope u understand.

    1. Rj12

      I know rockzzzzz but u see when I first read ur ft I actually got a story out of it so hope u don’t mind but the first few episodes just might be same

  13. hey
    sorry for commenting late
    but ur ff was awesome fantastic
    post next part soon
    sermistha

    1. Rj12

      It’s ok Sami but glad you liked It

  14. Rockzzzzzz

    Ya no problem just hoping that it wont exactly be the same😊

    1. Rj12

      No it won’t be exactly the same

  15. Bharti123456

    Amazing rithika post soon and sorry for the late comment

    1. Rj12

      thanks bharti it really doesn’t matter if u commented late

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