No matter what I do it’s never good enough because I always end up hurting u (A devakshi ff) Part 1

H guys, Rithika here
Hope u all don’t have short term memory loss because I was the writer of Krpkab (I’ll love u forever) I am back with a ff here is the first part read it soon

Let’s start…….
A girl is sitting by the window crying
Asha : Beta ur crying thinking about him 5 years have passed since he left u please don’t hurt urself again and again please beta
That girl is none other than Sona
Sona : Ma he left me I didn’t. I hate him for that I’ll never forgive him for what he did
Asha : Then y r u crying remembering him
Sona is speechless
Sona : Ma I’m getting late I’ll leave
Asha : Beta it’s sunday today is holiday
Sona : Ma for people it’s holiday I run a hospital so people do not take holiday from getting sick do they
She reaches the hospital employees see her and get shocked
Employee : Y did she come on Sunday
Employee 2 : God knows she is only workaholic only works 24/7 is she a robot?
Employee : Maybe
They both laugh some patient comes to her
Sona : U’ll have to take these medicines and this diet
Patient : Thanks doctor
After the patient leaves Mr. Bhandari come
Sona : Welcome Mr. Bhandari
Mr. Bhandari : Yes thanks to ur diet I’m fit so I’ve kept a party for my colleagues so I’ve come to invite u to
Sona : Surely
Mr. Bhandari : Yes it will be in Hotel tulip
Sona gets shocked (y u’ll find out later)
Sona : Sure will come
Mr. Bhandari leaves from there
Sona : I have to go there where he was there our favourite place anyway 5 years have passed he must have forgotten me
even I have to forget him

While in a office
Employee : Sir please sign these papers
Boss : Y was there a delay anyway this shouldn’t happen again
Employee : Ok sir
The boss was none other than Dev. Just then Mr. Bhandari came
Mr. Bhandari : Good morning Dev
Dev : Good morning Mr. Bhandari. I see u have become more fit
Mr. Bhandari : Yes it’s all because of Dr. Sonakshi
Dev gets shocked a small droplet of tear comes out of his eye
Mr. Bhandari : So Dev I came here to invite u to a party it will be with my colleagues and business partners so u’ll come right
Dev : Yes sure
Mr. Bhandari : It will be in Hotel tulip
Dev is again shocked how couldn’t he be because it was their favourite hotel
Dev : I will surely be there

After Mr. Bhandari leaves Dev takes out a photo
Dev : Sorry for leaving u it was my biggest mistake, please come back to me. It was my biggest mistake for not trusting u I’m sorry I still didn’t forget u hope u didn’t
Sona reaches home
Sona : Ma I need to go to a party tomorrow
Asha : Where is it
Sona : In Tulip hotel
Asha : R u sure u want to go because…..
Sona : Ma I know but still it’s for my work not for meeting him so I need to go
Asha : It’s ur wish beta
Sona goes to her room
Elena : Sona u came ur going to a party right in the Tulip…
Sona : Ele leave it I need to go so please don’t start
In Dev’s house
Ishwari : U came beta come eat food
Dev : Ok ma and ya tomorrow don’t wait for me because there is a party in tulip hotel
Ishwari : R u sure of it beta
Dev : I know ma but it’s a colleague party so going it’s important
Ishwari : Fine go
Dev : Ok ma I’ll sleep now good night ma
Ishwari : Good night beta…….What’s going to happen hey bhagwan mere bete ki khushi vapas aa jaye

Next night
Asha : R u sure of going beta
Sona : Yes ma. Now I’m getting late bye ma
She leaves
Thanks for reading
Hope u like it
Drop ur comments and like please


  1. AnShIta


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    Hey Rithika di!
    Welcome back!
    Trust me, that was one fabulous comeback made by you!
    The title itself suggests that there’s a lot that’d happened 5 years back. What is it! I wonderπŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€” But as it is, I’ll only get to know as time passes…
    It was great! I’m so excited to see Dev and Sonakshi’s reaction as they meet yet again after 5 years. Gawd! 5 years and they weren’t in touch😱😱😱😱😡😡
    But, I believe, that a moment beautifully spent together will compensate for all the time!
    Post really soon! I’m so damn eager to learn about their past!
    Loads of love!😘😘😘😘😘😘

  2. Angel20


    |Registered Member

    Hi rithika…
    I’m so happy that you are back…
    This was awesome! Loved it very much😘😘
    Post the next part soon!!

  3. |Registered Member

    amazing and superb……πŸ’•πŸ’‹πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ’–β€πŸ’ŸπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’—πŸ’žπŸ’–πŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ˜πŸ‘πŸ’ŸπŸ˜˜……welcome back dear…….πŸ’“πŸ’‹πŸ’—β€πŸ’•πŸ’–πŸ‘πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ‘β€πŸ’—

  4. Rockzzzzzz


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    Hey rithika..i don’t mean to hurt u but i just cant resist saying this…it is somewhat similar to my ff…I STILL MISS YOU….sona hates dev,they r gonna meet in ahotel,dev’s mistake….quite similar….sorry if i hurt u but i just wanted to say the truth…i hope u understand.

    • Rj12



      I know rockzzzzz but u see when I first read ur ft I actually got a story out of it so hope u don’t mind but the first few episodes just might be same

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