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NiVay: Iss Interruption Ko Kya Naam Doon By Fenu (Pearl-01)

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Hello Cuties and Handsome !! Jaan pehchan toh pehle se hi hain woh bhi ghehriwali๐Ÿ˜‰ hai na ?
Medha sis your wish my command..you asked for OS i m writing few pearls.
Happy Reading !!
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Early morning rays of the sun streamed through the slight cracks between the heavy silk draperies. Millions of tiny dust particles were suspended in mid air highlighting the path of light as it hit the white marble floor before traveling to reflect the pearl white walls. Cracks of sunrays rushed to brighten the room’s lush interior decor. A huge king size bed perched on an intricately carved bed stand was set in the centre while two small similar looking side tables stood on each side of the bed. Elaborately designed chaise was diagonally positioned near the sliding doors that led to balcony. A huge dressing table mirror stood directly facing the bed housing all different types of cosmetics as well as a variety of colognes and perfumes were neatly lined on the dressing table. Life-size canvas marriage photo of a couple hung high above the bed stand covered the major chunk of wall. Both man and wife stood dressed heavily in their marriage attire while posing for the photo. The serene smile emanating from him not only warmed onlooker’s heart but also brightened up the room. On the other hand her dimpled smile gave a whole new meaning to definition of beauty.

Faint music of birds chirping away, happily singing songs of joy hit her ears. She stirred slightly clutching her quilt only to snuggle further deep into her pillow. A small smile played on her lips while her eyes remained shut. “Main kal aajaunga Chandani.” Her smile widened while she recalled him saying last night as she sat amongst many pillows and cushions with her mobile glued to her ear. Finally! She thought with a deep sigh before turning to lay on her back. Shielding her eyes from sudden bright morning light, she fluttered her eyes open. “Advay aaj aajayenge!” she exclaimed to herself gleefully before turning around to look at his photo by the bed side-table. She pushed away her blanket and hopped out of the bed grabbing a sharpie marker on the table end. She came to stand in front of a calendar hung on the wall and cross-marked the last available square in it. Giggling like a schoolgirl, she replaced the cap and ran to the bathroom to freshen up.

“Ayiye Chandani madam, ek call karti main aapke liye bed coffee leke aati.” Chandani heard a lady’s sarcastic remark as she walked down the stairs before entering the kitchen.

“Main call karti magar there is a correction darling, main chai peeti hoon coffee nahi,” Chandani replied coolly folding her hands on her chest.

“Shuru ho gayi dono,” another woman standing beside the first lady said shaking her head. “Kyun uss bechari ko tang kar rahi ho Hina?”

“Haan Hina didi aap kyun mujhe tang kar rahi ho?” Chandani asked stressing on ‘didi’ while giving her a challenging look.

“Naina di,” Hina whined slumping her shoulders in defeat.

“You called for it darling,” Naina said shrugging her shoulders before resuming to stir the contents of the stockpot.

“Chandani ki bacchi. Tujhe na main dekh lungi. Let Advay come back babe,” she threatened pointing the knife she was using to cut red pepper.

“Voh bechara karega kya? One look from Chandani and he runs behind her like a hypnotized puppy,”Naina giggled looking up to wink at Chandani.

“Haan di. Pata nahi yeh Chandani ne kya chaal chalayi hai, humara chota bhai bechara phas gaya,” Hina added shaking her head ruefully.

Chandani’s eyes widened in embarrassment at Naina’s comment and she hurriedly looked away to escape from her teasing gaze. Before she could completely recover she heard Hina’s disapproval bringing her back to her fiery mode. Stomping her foot in anger she dashed across the kitchen to catch hold of Hina.
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To Be Continue…
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I m writing directly in submission box via cell so getting problem so bear with small update. May be next will be today only.

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Keep Loving ChanduDev/Nivay !!๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š

16 Comments
  1. AditiB

    Bhai……appan log Insta m AdNi bolte h….aap log NiVay bolte ho…..but jo bhi h…..bahut jhagde kiye h bhai insta m sab SaRun fans se……..bechaari Gul Mumma ko kitta dimaag kharaab krna pada…..lekin aapka ff as usual masttttttt๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ haiiiii…..keep writing….

    1. Fenil

      yeah we call ChanduDev and NiVay more…i m also SaRun fan.yaa i heard a lot about fight on insta and Twitter.
      well Thank you so much sis i m surprised to find u here.
      glad that you liked it.

  2. Medha

    Thank you so much Fenil Bhaiya For writing Os on my insist……….
    Superb story and nice cover picture. I love this scene.

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much for reading.
      Glad that you loved it.
      i too love childhood ChanduDev more.

  3. Sangitasridhar

    Love the intro and description! Could visualize the scene! And new characters Hina, Naina?!!! Advay’s sisters? Okay!! Waiting to read the update!
    ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Chotu!

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Kaki.
      Glad that you loved it.
      keep reading.

  4. UF3355

    AWESOME BEAUTIFUL EXCELLENT INTERESTING MIND BLOWING PERFECT SUPERB๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜
    Dear Fenil
    Story Starting๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ‘ You Beautifully Written Starting๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜š Chandni Naina Hina Conv And Hina Tease Chandni๐Ÿ˜˜ It’s Awesome Part๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
    Thank You For Making This Story On NiVay๐Ÿ˜˜

    Take Care And Stay Safe๐Ÿ˜Š

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much for reading.
      Glad that you loved it.
      Keep reading…

  5. Nivika

    Nice introduction and waiting for asr’s entry

  6. P_lata

    Gud story start and nice characters, just carry on………..

  7. Riana

    Awesome start ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜…Loved it…Late latif wala sorry ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Riana.
      ๐Ÿ˜„ No needed.

  8. ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ..very nice start

    1. Fenil

      Thanks Manuu.

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