New swasan fanfic (Prologue 2) (Suggestions required)

Link to my previous prologue

New swasan fanfic (Prologue)

@Mumbai
Its 5am, the sun has just risen and the busy streets of Mumbai are quiet for the time being. Swara liked this time of the day where she was sitting peacefully in her balcony overlooking the Marines and writing her dairy.
Swaraโ€™s POV
5 years 8 months and 20 days are over and still you keep lingering in my mind Sanskar Maheshwari. For the world I am Swara Gadodia the young and successful CEO, the powerful and confident lady but nobody knows the lonely Swara hidden behind that mask.
Swara closed her eyes and relived the moment where she lost all her happiness
Flashback
Swara- Sanskar I think we should call it quits, I donโ€™t think this relationship can work anymore.
Sanskar โ€“ No Swara listen to me please . I am sorry Swara but please we can still work out.
Swara- Sanskar please go its over. And Sanskar from now onwards I will never cross your path again. This is not easy for me too please donโ€™t contact me ever again. Good Byee.

So guys how was it? Thank You for your comments on my previous prologue. Hope after this part the story becomes a little more clear. Guys I still have not thought so please please suggest a name for this story, I really need your help. So guys please comment your views and your suggestions.

Credit to: Aniya

16 comments

  1. PANU

    Reallyy nice…and yes….now its completely clear that what the story is abt……quite interesting ?…..loved it?……

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