a new ff for udaan…fly high (Part 1)

Hiii guyzzz….im here with the 1st part of udaan…

Scene1
A girl is seen running very fastly with bare foot…..she reaches finishing point…
Girl takes a stop watch
Girl:good chakor…great timing….
Yes the girl is our sweet bubbly chakor. ..
A man of early 40s came there
Man:chakor…how is ur practice…
Chakor:arjun sir…see naa..I defeat my own record…
Arjun:I knw chakor…if u run as fast…still u should go on practice…because practice make a man perfect….and renember..u not compiting with children but with bhayya jii…only u can make him loss…save your village…
Chakor:I knw sir….and only I will win….and its my promise..I will remove babduana system frm my village….
She again starts to run….

Scene2
A village
Some boys are busy plucking the mangoes…
A boy:vivaan…get down fast….if any one sees…we are gone…
The boy jumbs frm the tree..
its our vivaan
Vivaan:no pain no game chottu….im suraj bhai’s brother…no one will turb against me….
Chottu:haa vivaan…leave it…have mango naa…its so tasty….
Vivaan remember small chakor….
Vivaan:chakor
Meetu:who chakor
Vivaan:meri dosthi….bt I’ve not seen her in these 10 years….she must be grown up by now….
Binu:come lets have….

“Vivaan”a sound come frm back….vivaan turns back…
Vivaan:what happened imli..
Imli:suraj ji is calling u…come fast….
Vivaan us scared and throws mangoes and runs frm there….
Imli:u r gone vivaan….u used to campare me and that chakor..My so called sister, who left me when I needed her the most….now lets see how u will save urself from suraj jii…
Imli smiles evily….

Precap:chokor reaches her village….Some one aims gun at her….

So guyz how was the first part….have u njoyed….im really sorry for the short update…and will try to make it much larger….

ALWAYS SMILE

Credit to: salluzz

1 comment

  1. Lifñâ ñàväZ

    wOow nyz… salluzz… !!!!!

    itz jst awzm… cantinue….
    hey Plz unite chakor & surajj… i lyk charaj…
    jzt my opinion…

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