New Beginning….new life epi 9

Really very sorry for late post……………Heres a small recap…..

Recap-Ishita realised that she is suffering from amnesia,( a disease In which person recalls his memory for only short period of time and then forgets all )(amir khan’s disease in ghajini)…………….Its been four months since her meet with mani at airport………
Raman served morning coffee to Ishita…………..
Here goes the next one……………

Epi9
After four months……….
Raman standing alone in the balcony with his coffee mug…………
Ishita comes from behind with the cup of coffee that raman served before……………..
Ishita- coffee is really good!
Raman-ah!!…..just tried…….

Ishita(with a regreting tone)-It must be difficult for you to handle someone who loses her memory again and again…….
Raman-Its nothing like that and afterall I had promised Mani……..How can I break that…….
Ishita(tears roll down ishita’s eye when she hears Mani’s name)
FLASHBACK
Two months ago
Marriage preparation is going on……
Raman is looking after the arrangements……………
Mr.Bhalla-Raman, How much will you work?

Raman-oh…..Its nothing papa……It’s the marriage of someone who is really close to me………So I just don’t want any mistakes…………
Mr.Bhalla(with serious tone)-Raman, the whole marriage depends on your decision ……….Are you sure of this……??
Raman-Yes…..papa……If I will not think about both of them then who will think………
Mr.Bhalla pats raman’s back………
All the family members greet the guests……………

The groom comes on horse wearing a white coloured shervani………….all the baratis are dancing…………..
Mrs.Bhalla tries to smile but wasn’t able to………Simi notices it…………
Simi-Mummy……pls don’t look sad ………..what will others think??
Mrs.Bhalla-What should I do simi……..I just cannot digest……. how can someone take my child’s place…………
Simi-Mummy you have to be strong……..(just then mrs.bhalla and simi are called for rituals)
The bride walks down in a beautiful orange lehanga and move towards the mandap……….
The Rituals begin………

Both groom and bride shy seeing each other………………
[They are none other than…………..Mihir and pallavi!!!!!!] (Mrs.bhalla was talking about her child Rinki)(raman had fixed the alliance thinking both of them should move on together)
Ishita stands beside the bride wearing a blue coloured Saree……….Raman smiles seeing her………
As the marriage rituals are going on Ishita’s eyes keep looking here and there searching someone………………
Atlast she smiles seeing Mani entering with bouquet.………….

But Mani was trying to avoid ishita’s attention………
He gave the bouquet to the couple and stood in a corner…………..
Ishita noticed this and went up to him…….
Ishita(clearing her throat )-Wats up??…. Don’t think that I don’t remember anything………I do suffer amnesia but have written every minute of life in my diary……….which I read daily………….
Mani-Your memory has become more sharp than before ah!!(saying this he tries to make ishita laugh)
Ishita-I am serious mani……..there is something that you are hiding…………From few days you are trying to hide something…………

Mani-No ishu………its nothing………..Don’t take any stress its not good for your health……….
Ishita-But….(Just then pihu calls ishita and therefore she leaves)
Mani(to himself)-Its very difficult to hide anything from you ishu……….

As the vidai completes……everyone hug mihir and pallavi and congratulate them for beautiful life ahead……..

Soon the marriage celebration comes too an end and all the guests leave…………….
Amma-Santoshi, now we will also take a leave……..
Raman-Wait a minute, I want to talk to all the family members right now………..
Mr.Bhalla-What is it Raman??
Raman-I have decided………(He moves towards Mani with heavy steps)…..(now raising his head he continues)…….Mr.Abhimanyu Raghav…I know you love Ishita, I even know that you cannot love her more than I do……….But I have realised that she will always stay happy with you ………SO….will you marry Ishita?

(everyone is shocked)(Ishita looks towards both of them with unknown feelings…..feelings which even she failed to realise)
Mani(after a deep breath)(Now with a stern voice)-I am SORRY raman……But this can’t happen…………I cannot marry Ishu at any cost…………

(Now everyone is hell shocked)(Ishita felt hurt on hearing mani’s words………NOW SHE REALISED HER FEELING…………….)
[Many things were going in Ishita’s head……..Raman’s sudden proposal to mani……….Her realisation of feelings for Mani………….And the biggest shock was mani’s words]
Alliya-Appa, What are you saying??
Mani(changing topic)-Come alliya, we need to leave………..
(Mani turns to go……..)
Flashback Ends
Ishita is standing in front of a big photo hung on the wall………..Photo having garlands……….
Photo is of Mani
Raman’s comes from behind……….

Raman-You can share anything with me, if you want….
Ishita leans her head on raman’s shoulder…….Her eyes are watery……
Ishita-Raman, ………First time tears are coming out of my eyes which are neither of sadness nor of happiness …..Its actually of anger………..I am very angry with God!…..What does God want from me……..I just don’t understand………..
Raman-Ishita, ……Sometimes……somethings are not in our hand………
Ishita(wiping her tears………)(Raises her head and looks towards Raman)-But today……in this time, everything is in your hand………
[Raman lowers his head]
Ishita-Raman, …….Look towards me ……….When you told that you cannot break Mani’s promise……….. then ……………why are you breaking the last promise he asked from you??
Both go into FLASHBLACK

Mani’s Home
All family members are in mani’s room………
Medical equipments are all around…….. with pipes and different machines……….Doctor and nurse are preparing medicine……..
Mani is on bed and taking short breaths……..Mani’s health condition is very bad …………..
Ishita who is sitting besides him……. holding his hand……….
Ishita-Doctor please do something…..

Mani(He tries speaking with much difficulty)-Ra…Raman….Ram………
Raman who was standing behind Ishita comes forward………..

Raman-Mani……tell me…..do you need something……Water?……or anything else ……..tell me…
Mani-Pro….promise
Raman-promise??????
Mani-Hmm……promise me….that…you..u…will……always be with Ish…Ishu…….
Raman-Mani nothing will happen to you……Don’t take stress…
Mani(Breaths difficultly)-Promise me Ra…Raman

Raman(seeing mani’s condition)-yes….Promise……
Mani-One….. more promise………..You will hide Ish…Ishu’s diary………do..don’t let her remember past………Just….just move on with her………
(all the family members are shocked…………)
Alliya(crying)-Appa why are you talking like this………..You will be alright……
Mani-Ram….Raman, I don’t have time……….Promise me…..
Raman(looking at worsening condition of Mani)-ya ……okay………But ……. Now you take rest………
Mani smiles as raman agreed…………He looks towards Ishita ……………Wipes her tears with by moving his hand with much difficulty………
Doctor looks at lowering heart beat………….and presses Mani’s chest to increase his heart beat but no use….
Mani breaths his last………..

Ishita(bursts out crying)-Mani……..No……….Pls…………
Alliya-Appa……….No………you can’t leave me………Appa……..
Doctor-I am sorry………
Everyone start crying……….

Flash Back ends

Raman(to ishita)-I cannot fulfil Mani’s last promise……….I don’t want to remove his memories from your mind…………..I think……We can move on……….Keeping mani’s memories with us………
………..raman forwards his hand…………
Ishita first looks towards the photo, then tries to smile a little and then …….Keeps her hand on raman’s hand….

Precap-(something special…….)
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I hope you all liked this sequence of my fanfiction…………..For better imagination…….you all can relate this track with that of movie-“kal Ho Na Ho”……….where srk made preeti zenta marry saif ali khan……becoz he was going to dye….

Now, a little bad news….(May be good one for some who don’t like my ff)………..My holidays are over……….So I cannot continue long………..I have 2 options………..as……either I end my ff in next episode or continue but won’t be able to post regularly…………

This will all depend on your comments about the new track of my ff……..So …….silent readers……Do comment………..and………… even critic views are also welcomed………..

22 comments

  1. Sarayumane

    |Registered Member

    End it soon dear, I also did the same, you know my ff, reverse YHM right, I ended it as I couldn’t upload it daily, my school also started

    • Purna

      |Author

      Hi sarayumane!!….Like you even i am finding difficulty in uploading daily ………I am thinking what to do next………..thanks for suggestion

  2. Shalu

    |Registered Member

    I was waiting for the next part of ur ff…….but ur giving me this shocking news………pls do continue…….and coming to today’s episode……it was nice…….very emotional and touching……. Pls do continue……. 😨😨😭😭

    • Purna

      |Author

      Hi Shalu!!!……..Tanq 🙂 ………Even I was waiting for ur comment from a long time!!………I will try to continue ………But still not decicded…..

  3. guru

    Episode was awesome if u post regularly plz continue else give the happy ending of this story…… But today part was apart from imagined….

  4. RUSHI

    |Registered Member

    Hii I was waiting since many days it was amazing I wd like to read more dear
    one midway solution if possible for u please make it weekly ff as in post during weekends only
    I would like u to continue
    rest as u wish dear
    all the best

    • Purna

      |Author

      Hi Rushi!!!………….Glad to know you liked it……..Really thanks for your advice………..I think the midway solution that you suggested will really work…………Thanks dear

  5. Niharika

    As usual nice episode (y) I think you should end your ff rather than being irregular. Lots of people post ff in this page. So irregularity sometimes create confusion. I think it’s better to end a story on a good note 🙂

  6. Radhikaji

    |Registered Member

    You can always continue …..see like giving an episode on alternate days. .or when posting just add a note when to expect the next one. …so that readers will know when exactly is next episode. …updating only on weakened is a long wait. …can give a gap of 2 days. ….

    • Purna

      |Author

      Hello Radhikaji!!!…………….Really thanks for ur advice…….I think ur advice will work……..still in thinking process…………..AND……..
      One more thing ………really sorry ………..Due to uncertainty of my continuity I cannot post the next episode back to back as promised…….My next episode was ready but becoz i am not sure about continuing ……….so after deciding will have to do some moderations and then only I can post……..I hope you forgive me……………..

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