New Beginning….new life epi 5

Hello Everyone!!!……..My ff is moving towards a new track……Hope u all like it…………
Epi5
ONE year LEAP
A dark Background……….. JAIL
Two constable outside are conversing
1st constable-Bhaiji, I have observed this young man for one year……….From the time he was sent to jail……….no one has come to meet him……………
2nd constable-Hmm…….even I have noticed that……….He always remains quite………neither talks to anyone himself nor answers to anyone’s question……….

Both constables are called by Senior Inspector ……..so they leave……

In Jail
………Mani shown with gray shawl around ………..beard all grown ……..in black and white outfits………..
Mani[to himself]-You were right Raman ………….
We shouldn’t have done Ishu’s operation…………I deserve to be here………

Mani closes his eyes and goes into flashback…………
FLASHBACK
HOSPITAL
All Family members try to convince Raman for Ishita’s operation………
Mr.Bhalla-I know raman puttar, there is risk of ishita’s life in the operation but it is important………..Ishita cant be in coma for lifetime……
Raman throws the consent form……….
Raman-I will not sign and that’s final………………..
Mani-[breaking his bond of patience]-Enough Raman,……..Where was this concern…….when you asked her to get out of your life 7 years back……….Ishu tried to commit suicide……….[now having an eye to eye contact with raman…..]After that incident you don’t have any right on her life………..[A lawyer comes just then….]
Lawyer-Abhimanyu sir,the papers are ready………
Simi-What papers???…….
Lawyer-In these papers….Mr.Abhimanyu has taken the responsibility of Mrs.Ishita Bhalla’s operation to be done by Dr.Verma…… failing which he is ready to take any legal penalty………
Raman-‘failing which’ what do you mean……..The failure of operation can cost Ishita’s life….what will be the use of penalty……
Lawyer-Sir this is just an undertaking………..so these lines need to be written………….
Raman-but…
Amma-I don’t want to hear anything Raman……..I cannot see Ishu in ICU anymore…………If you are not signing the consent form……then what else can anyone do than making these legal papers………..Now I don’t think we should delay the operation any more……………..
(Raman leaves from there………)
All the family members move towards Dr,Verma’s cabin to ask him to start the operation…….
Flashback ends……..

Mani opens his eyes and looks towards a small window……….
He then hears a female voice from behind………
“what happened after the operation??”
Mani looked towards that direction……….A lady with in white saree with a back coat hanging in hand and holding some files in other hand……..came forward and her face is shown…………(this is none other than Pallavi …chadda lawyer’s wife…….hope u all remember her)
Pallavi-I am your new lawyer……….I have studied ur case……and I need to now what exactly happened after your operation??
Mani turns his head away……
The 2 constables come from behind……..
1st constable-We told you before ma’am…….He will not speak…..
2nd constable-But I don’t understand why did you take this case??…….The very powerful business tycoon Raman Bhalla had sent him to jail……….From past One year all lawyers are scared to take his case……….
1st constable-Exactly, aren’t you scared…….and after all this is your first case……..why you want to start with this………..
Pallavi-hm…….becoz 8 yrs back……….Ishita did a lot of favour on me………somewhere I am responsible for all this happening…………I want to do this for Ishita……[looking towards Mani]……pls will you tell me what happened after operation…….
Mani looks towards her…..
Mani-If you have taken Ishita’s name then…….
1st constable[shocked]-Whats in this name ……….that the person who remains quite ……….starts talking??
Pallavi-I want to talk to my client alone……
Both the constables leave with confused face………
Pallavi turns towards mani
Mani-The operation took 3hours………then……………………………………………
x————-x——————-x———————-x——————-

Screen shifts to An open Ground
Everyone wearing white coloured clothes
Raman is seen putting fire to a heap of wood……….and performing the last rites………..

After this Raman gets up………..and moves to where his family members are standing…………..

Mr.Bhalla-What was the need of all this Raman………….
Raman- I wanted to make sure by my hands that she is dead……………How much ever she troubled me in this one year was more than the limit I could ever bear………….
Mihir-She troubled you becoz you gave her a reason………
Pandit comes to them……….
Pandit-I need to write the details of that woman in my register………..
Raman-
Name-Nimrit Chopra
Australian citizen
Died 2 days ago in a car accident……….
Do you want any other information pandit……….
Pandit noting it down………..says…..
Pandit-How are you related to her……….I mean why did you perform her last rites………..
Raman-She is my biggest mistake that I brought in my life………….So just came here to correct it…………..
Saying this ………..Raman takes out his sunglasses, wears it with a style and leaves……….

Precap-
In a shopping Mall
Pallavi sees Ishita and calls her out……
Ishita turns back to see her……….Ishita is in western outfit and a modern look……….
Pallavi-Hi Ishita
Ishita[a little confused]-Umm…….I am sorry I din’t recognise you
Pallavi-Don’t you remember me…….eight years back……[ishita interrupts]
Ishita-Oh …..I think you were my patient ………..ah …….I know I was a dentist but I am sorry I cannot help you……..Actually I had an accident a year before……so…
Pallavi-So??
Ishita-…..so,…. I don’t remember my past …….um……I neither remember my studies nor my patients……….So I am really sorry….
Pallavi-Haven’t your family told you anything about your past….. about your friends??
Ishita looks on………..

18 comments

  1. guru

    I’m new commentar….but I’m continued reading your first part…very interesting.. Just amazing of every part

  2. Shalu

    |Registered Member

    Nice track………really superb and fantastic………pls dont stop to ever……pls for me……….do update regularly……….😍😍😇😇

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